Fiction: Immoral Teaching - Page 14

PerfectlyImperfect · 04-23-2012, 08:43 PM

Read all thirteen pages and however many chapters that was, It was Divine. Sitting quietly for more.

kmacroxs · 04-24-2012, 03:04 PM

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Originally Posted by PerfectlyImperfect

Read all thirteen pages and however many chapters that was, It was Divine. Sitting quietly for more.

There are only 5 pages, and 44 chapters.

SubT · 04-24-2012, 05:43 PM

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Originally Posted by kmacroxs

There are only 5 pages, and 44 chapters.

Who are you kidding there are now 14 pages!!! AHHHH Just read the whole thing; you have no clue how much I wanted to post when you were saying that you wanted more feedback. BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I <3 U

PerfectlyImperfect · 04-25-2012, 08:52 AM

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Originally Posted by kmacroxs

There are only 5 pages, and 44 chapters.

I am talking about this thread. the story is one thing but your comments are so damn funny. there's thirteen pages in this thread. well was.

dounowhoiam · 04-26-2012, 03:27 AM

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Originally Posted by kmacroxs

There are only 5 pages, and 44 chapters.

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Originally Posted by SubT

Who are you kidding there are now 14 pages!!! AHHHH Just read the whole thing; you have no clue how much I wanted to post when you were saying that you wanted more feedback. BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I <3 U

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Originally Posted by PerfectlyImperfect

I am talking about this thread. the story is one thing but your comments are so damn funny. there's thirteen pages in this thread. well was.

The amount of pages you have depends on how you set up your settings for viewing threads.

Anyway, I am absolutely loving this story, it is unique and full of surprises - OP please keep up the great work :-D.

kmacroxs · 04-26-2012, 05:56 AM

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Originally Posted by dounowhoiam

The amount of pages you have depends on how you set up your settings for viewing threads.

Anyway, I am absolutely loving this story, it is unique and full of surprises - OP please keep up the great work :-D.

Yeah, I set mine to view the max posts per page.

fullofsecrets · 04-29-2012, 02:23 PM

Jack got Heather to the hospital within fifteen minutes, but by that time she had lost too much blood. He rushed her in and they took her to the emergency room. Security had to restrain Jack as he tried to push his way past to follow her in. They got him calmed down and set him in a chair out in the waiting room. He sobbed in his hands for a long while.

Several hours past and it was now three minutes to midnight. A doctor came into the waiting room and the receptionist pointed him over to Jack. Jack stood as the doctor came told him. He tried to read his expressions, but was unable to perceive what was going on.

The doctor looked down at his clipboard. "Jack, right? You brought in...... Miss Heather Aimes?"

"Yes.. Yes that's me. What's going on? Is she okay? Can I see her? Is she awake?" Jack was trying to speak clearly, but was talking so quickly just as his mind was wondering.

"Okay. Okay. Slow down. She's..... alive. But right now it doesn't look so good. She's into a coma due to a massive amount of blood lost. We have her hooked up to a machine to monitor her breathing and heart beat. Do you know of any family we can contact to notify about her well being?"

Jack looked at the floor and shook his head. "Her mother's dead... and her father wouldn't care, not that I know his contact information anyway...... There's nothing you can do for her?"

"Well we have her on a blood IV to get her blood levels back to normal and that usually causes patients in this type of a coma to wake up. So, just give her some time. You can see her though. Room six-fifteen," the doctor said, then nodded and walked away.

Jack made his way to her room and looked in through the hallway. Through the room door window he could see her laying there in the hospital bed, sound asleep, looking like a beaten mess. He walked in.

After a moment he went to the bathroom and wet a rag and came back to her side. He slowly and gently dabbed the cheeks of her face, washing away the dirt, sweat, and bloody stains that were left there.

"He'll pay for this, Baby. I promise. I wont let this go un-noticed."

SubT · 05-05-2012, 04:01 PM

KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please

rchard2scout · 05-06-2012, 05:16 PM

Wow. Just wow. I just read the entire story in the last hour. Amazing. Is this the end, or is there going to be more?
Also, this is the first time I logged in on getDare since 4-2-2011. Damn, I've been away too long.

frogman91234 · 05-06-2012, 05:19 PM

I am officially addicted... This is amazing!

kmacroxs · 05-06-2012, 08:06 PM

Please let Jack murder that bastard.

daredevil2 · 05-07-2012, 12:20 AM

please keep on writing

fullofsecrets · 05-10-2012, 01:43 PM

Hello, readers. I am very sorry for the delay. I have had lots of work today lately. I promise to have a very worth-the-wait part coming to you this weekend.

fullofsecrets · 05-13-2012, 09:36 AM

He paced about the room. Crying one minute, face blaring red the next, and then sobbing within the following. His body was shaking and his eyes were flooded with tears to the point that the whole hospital room could only be seen as a blurred mess of opaque colors. He wanted to sit down and think to himself that this was all just a bad dream and he wanted to believe that none of this had ever taken place. To himself, for just a moment, he even thought that he wished he had never known her the way he did and that they would just be back at school, oblivious of each other.

There was a knock on her room door and the doctor who had been examining her walked in. To his surprise Jack quickly walked over to him and have screamed. "Why isn't she awake yet!?"

"Calm down, I'm only trying to do my job. She.."

"You job is to bring her back to health, to get her to wake up, to make her open her eyes and see me waiting here!" Jack shouted, interrupting the doctor.

The doctor put his hand on Jack's shoulder. "It's alright, now if you'd listen to me now I'll answer your question." Jack nodded reluctantly. "She hasn't awakened yet for the simple fact that her body is exhausted. Going through such a traumatic thing as going into a coma and staying in it for a little while can take a toll on someone’s body. She is still asleep because she simply wants to be asleep. I can promise you right now she will awaken."

Jack takes a deep breath. "Alright, thank you doctor."

The doctor left the room and Jack went back to his purposeless pacing. After watching Heather sleep for nearly 48 hours now he was restless. He walked over, kissed her forehead, and left the hospital. The drive back to his uncle's house was stressful, but once he was there all of his angry rushed to his head.

He walked in the house through the garage door, his right hand clenching the gun holstered in his back pocket. There was music playing in the office at the back of the house where Henry managed his finances. Jack made his way slowly through the house. Each room looked untouched since he left with Heather and even the carpet had not been ruffled by someone's footsteps. Once in front of the office door he could hear his uncle moving around inside the room. He pulled the gun from his pocket and held it with both hands in front of him. It came quite clear that now was the time to make a drastic decision and with that mental motion Jack began to open the door.

wedgiesarah · 05-15-2012, 05:21 PM

really great story! cant wait for the next chapter!

04-23-2012, 08:43 PM	#196
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04-29-2012, 02:23 PM	#202
fullofsecrets Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: USA Posts: 206	Immoral Teaching Part Forty Five Jack got Heather to the hospital within fifteen minutes, but by that time she had lost too much blood. He rushed her in and they took her to the emergency room. Security had to restrain Jack as he tried to push his way past to follow her in. They got him calmed down and set him in a chair out in the waiting room. He sobbed in his hands for a long while. Several hours past and it was now three minutes to midnight. A doctor came into the waiting room and the receptionist pointed him over to Jack. Jack stood as the doctor came told him. He tried to read his expressions, but was unable to perceive what was going on. The doctor looked down at his clipboard. "Jack, right? You brought in...... Miss Heather Aimes?" "Yes.. Yes that's me. What's going on? Is she okay? Can I see her? Is she awake?" Jack was trying to speak clearly, but was talking so quickly just as his mind was wondering. "Okay. Okay. Slow down. She's..... alive. But right now it doesn't look so good. She's into a coma due to a massive amount of blood lost. We have her hooked up to a machine to monitor her breathing and heart beat. Do you know of any family we can contact to notify about her well being?" Jack looked at the floor and shook his head. "Her mother's dead... and her father wouldn't care, not that I know his contact information anyway...... There's nothing you can do for her?" "Well we have her on a blood IV to get her blood levels back to normal and that usually causes patients in this type of a coma to wake up. So, just give her some time. You can see her though. Room six-fifteen," the doctor said, then nodded and walked away. Jack made his way to her room and looked in through the hallway. Through the room door window he could see her laying there in the hospital bed, sound asleep, looking like a beaten mess. He walked in. After a moment he went to the bathroom and wet a rag and came back to her side. He slowly and gently dabbed the cheeks of her face, washing away the dirt, sweat, and bloody stains that were left there. "He'll pay for this, Baby. I promise. I wont let this go un-noticed." __________________ I am the author of "A Hidden Voice" and "Immoral Teaching". Thank you for everyone's comments on my writing. And my stories do not continue without comments. That means no new parts till there are new comments

05-06-2012, 05:19 PM	#205
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05-06-2012, 08:06 PM	#206
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05-10-2012, 01:43 PM	#208
fullofsecrets Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: USA Posts: 206	Note to Readers. Hello, readers. I am very sorry for the delay. I have had lots of work today lately. I promise to have a very worth-the-wait part coming to you this weekend. __________________ I am the author of "A Hidden Voice" and "Immoral Teaching". Thank you for everyone's comments on my writing. And my stories do not continue without comments. That means no new parts till there are new comments

05-05-2012, 04:01 PM	#203
SubT Member Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Az Posts: 53	KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please

05-06-2012, 05:16 PM	#204
rchard2scout Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 12	Wow. Just wow. I just read the entire story in the last hour. Amazing. Is this the end, or is there going to be more? Also, this is the first time I logged in on getDare since 4-2-2011. Damn, I've been away too long.

05-07-2012, 12:20 AM	#207
daredevil2 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 388	please keep on writing

05-13-2012, 09:36 AM	#209
fullofsecrets Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: USA Posts: 206	Immoral Teaching Part Forty Six He paced about the room. Crying one minute, face blaring red the next, and then sobbing within the following. His body was shaking and his eyes were flooded with tears to the point that the whole hospital room could only be seen as a blurred mess of opaque colors. He wanted to sit down and think to himself that this was all just a bad dream and he wanted to believe that none of this had ever taken place. To himself, for just a moment, he even thought that he wished he had never known her the way he did and that they would just be back at school, oblivious of each other. There was a knock on her room door and the doctor who had been examining her walked in. To his surprise Jack quickly walked over to him and have screamed. "Why isn't she awake yet!?" "Calm down, I'm only trying to do my job. She.." "You job is to bring her back to health, to get her to wake up, to make her open her eyes and see me waiting here!" Jack shouted, interrupting the doctor. The doctor put his hand on Jack's shoulder. "It's alright, now if you'd listen to me now I'll answer your question." Jack nodded reluctantly. "She hasn't awakened yet for the simple fact that her body is exhausted. Going through such a traumatic thing as going into a coma and staying in it for a little while can take a toll on someone’s body. She is still asleep because she simply wants to be asleep. I can promise you right now she will awaken." Jack takes a deep breath. "Alright, thank you doctor." The doctor left the room and Jack went back to his purposeless pacing. After watching Heather sleep for nearly 48 hours now he was restless. He walked over, kissed her forehead, and left the hospital. The drive back to his uncle's house was stressful, but once he was there all of his angry rushed to his head. He walked in the house through the garage door, his right hand clenching the gun holstered in his back pocket. There was music playing in the office at the back of the house where Henry managed his finances. Jack made his way slowly through the house. Each room looked untouched since he left with Heather and even the carpet had not been ruffled by someone's footsteps. Once in front of the office door he could hear his uncle moving around inside the room. He pulled the gun from his pocket and held it with both hands in front of him. It came quite clear that now was the time to make a drastic decision and with that mental motion Jack began to open the door. __________________ I am the author of "A Hidden Voice" and "Immoral Teaching". Thank you for everyone's comments on my writing. And my stories do not continue without comments. That means no new parts till there are new comments

05-15-2012, 05:21 PM	#210
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