Brian's Gift [The ability to control time] [Fiction]

Tony12 · 09-02-2010, 04:49 PM

It has been a long time since I have been active on getdare, apart from occasionally scimming the forums. I am writing this story as it is a particular fantasy of mine; one which I can’t seem to find many stories of on the internet so I hope you enjoy this, if it is a fantasy of yours too. While starting this story I make no guarantee that I will continue and/or finish it. If I get significant feedback/ or interest in the story I may continue on behalf of the community on getdare.
Also I did make another story along the lines of this fantasy though I do not wish to continue it as I currently do not Like the ideas.

Meet Brian: A teenage boy with brown hair, boyish features. Brian is an average teen who lives with his mum and sister; he doesn’t have a dad. Brian, on a scale, would probably be average when it comes to popularity; in fact you could probably say he is average in general. Unfortunately for him the one aspect he’s not average in is, “Girls”, if you could possibly say that’s a measureable thing... However, his older sister, Taylor, differs from him this particular aspect; you could say she’s over achiever. Popular, straight A student, a body to die for. Brown Hair, C cup boobs, and gorgeous legs. You could definitely say that she won the gene pool lottery. It probably won’t surprise you if I tell you they don’t get on. Maybe Brian’s a little jealous of his sister, or, maybe, she’s just a bitch to him. On to his mother, Carla, to sum her up: a small woman, blonde hair, D cup boobs, and a well aged body. Another possible reason why Brian and his sister may not get on: his mother favours Taylor over him, always takes her side and generally is biased on her behalf. Although, don’t get me wrong, Brian and his Mother do love each other.
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Brian was having another one of “those days” as he liked to refer to them. By that, Brian meant a bad day. He had a bone to pick with his sister; the bitch. That morning his sister had spent an hour in the shower, using all of the hot water for herself. That had put Brian’s day off to a bad start; he didn’t manage to get a shower before he had to go to school. Then, as usual, when he approached his mum to tell her about it, his mother took her side. On this particular day this had made Brian even angrier. This time Brian wasn’t going to let it slip, he was going to approach her. As Brian walked down the corridor with insults buzzing through his mind he thought of what he might say. While lost in thought Brian stopped, right in front of his sister and her clique. With this Brian realized he didn’t know what to say and all he could blurt out with was: “You’re such a bitch”. To this his sister retorted, laughing: “You smell a little Brian, haven’t you showered today?”. Brian grit his teeth together, and, losing his nerve a little, pushed his sister hard into the locker. Then thump. Brian blacked out.
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Brian slowly opened his eyes to see the school nurse. She smiled a little at him and asked if he was ok. Brian shook his head dizzily and then put his hand on his head, saying nothing. The nurse walked over to a desk writing down details of his injury and the incident. Brian, being a bit of a pervert, couldn’t help but stare at her ass. When the nurse turned round Brian looked up and asked: “What happened”. The nurse shook her head slightly and simply said: “You’re in a lot of trouble”. Brian’s gaze then wandered down to the busty nurse’s chest. She must have caught him looking but she simply “Tsked” murmuring to herself “Boys will be boys”. Brian stood up, ready to leave, and winced his head. With this he then looked to the nurse and asked her: “Can I go now”. To his suprise the nurse did not reply to his query. In fact, she wasn’t moving at all. She had stopped in a walking motion. Brian then walked around her to her face. Her expression was sealed and she wasn’t blinking. Brian waved his hand along her face gently trying to catch her attention. To no avail, the nurse did not move. Brian then looked up to the clock, ready to leave, seeing which class he had next. To his surprise the clock had ceased to move. Brian must have been confused unable to comprehend why: the nurse was frozen on the spot, and why the clock had suddenly stopped working. After sitting for a minute it dawned upon him that time might have stopped. To test his theory he went and tapped the nurses back in a hard prodding motion. After doing this, Brian felt a little more daring and lifted her skirt up gently. He looked up to see if she moved or reacted. She didn’t. With this he looked down and gazed at her underwear. She was wearing a blue thong. The slut, Brian was thinking. Brian spanked her ass a few times before moving back from her. Brian thought about how to start time again. By sheer coincidence, un-noticed by Brian, he winced while thinking and time started again. The nurse turned round with a strange stinging pain in her bum and told him: “You can go to class now”. With that Brian ran out of the nurses office wondering what the hell had just happened.

A slow start and i have another post planned for tommorow.
Thanks for reading.
Please leave your thoughts, comments and suggestions.

09-02-2010, 04:49 PM	#1
Tony12 Senior Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Why do you care :S? Posts: 154 Blog Entries: 1	Brian's Gift [The ability to control time] [Fiction] It has been a long time since I have been active on getdare, apart from occasionally scimming the forums. I am writing this story as it is a particular fantasy of mine; one which I can’t seem to find many stories of on the internet so I hope you enjoy this, if it is a fantasy of yours too. While starting this story I make no guarantee that I will continue and/or finish it. If I get significant feedback/ or interest in the story I may continue on behalf of the community on getdare. Also I did make another story along the lines of this fantasy though I do not wish to continue it as I currently do not Like the ideas. Meet Brian: A teenage boy with brown hair, boyish features. Brian is an average teen who lives with his mum and sister; he doesn’t have a dad. Brian, on a scale, would probably be average when it comes to popularity; in fact you could probably say he is average in general. Unfortunately for him the one aspect he’s not average in is, “Girls”, if you could possibly say that’s a measureable thing... However, his older sister, Taylor, differs from him this particular aspect; you could say she’s over achiever. Popular, straight A student, a body to die for. Brown Hair, C cup boobs, and gorgeous legs. You could definitely say that she won the gene pool lottery. It probably won’t surprise you if I tell you they don’t get on. Maybe Brian’s a little jealous of his sister, or, maybe, she’s just a bitch to him. On to his mother, Carla, to sum her up: a small woman, blonde hair, D cup boobs, and a well aged body. Another possible reason why Brian and his sister may not get on: his mother favours Taylor over him, always takes her side and generally is biased on her behalf. Although, don’t get me wrong, Brian and his Mother do love each other. * Brian was having another one of “those days” as he liked to refer to them. By that, Brian meant a bad day. He had a bone to pick with his sister; the bitch. That morning his sister had spent an hour in the shower, using all of the hot water for herself. That had put Brian’s day off to a bad start; he didn’t manage to get a shower before he had to go to school. Then, as usual, when he approached his mum to tell her about it, his mother took her side. On this particular day this had made Brian even angrier. This time Brian wasn’t going to let it slip, he was going to approach her. As Brian walked down the corridor with insults buzzing through his mind he thought of what he might say. While lost in thought Brian stopped, right in front of his sister and her clique. With this Brian realized he didn’t know what to say and all he could blurt out with was: “You’re such a bitch”. To this his sister retorted, laughing: “You smell a little Brian, haven’t you showered today?”. Brian grit his teeth together, and, losing his nerve a little, pushed his sister hard into the locker. Then thump. Brian blacked out. * Brian slowly opened his eyes to see the school nurse. She smiled a little at him and asked if he was ok. Brian shook his head dizzily and then put his hand on his head, saying nothing. The nurse walked over to a desk writing down details of his injury and the incident. Brian, being a bit of a pervert, couldn’t help but stare at her ass. When the nurse turned round Brian looked up and asked: “What happened”. The nurse shook her head slightly and simply said: “You’re in a lot of trouble”. Brian’s gaze then wandered down to the busty nurse’s chest. She must have caught him looking but she simply “Tsked” murmuring to herself “Boys will be boys”. Brian stood up, ready to leave, and winced his head. With this he then looked to the nurse and asked her: “Can I go now”. To his suprise the nurse did not reply to his query. In fact, she wasn’t moving at all. She had stopped in a walking motion. Brian then walked around her to her face. Her expression was sealed and she wasn’t blinking. Brian waved his hand along her face gently trying to catch her attention. To no avail, the nurse did not move. Brian then looked up to the clock, ready to leave, seeing which class he had next. To his surprise the clock had ceased to move. Brian must have been confused unable to comprehend why: the nurse was frozen on the spot, and why the clock had suddenly stopped working. After sitting for a minute it dawned upon him that time might have stopped. To test his theory he went and tapped the nurses back in a hard prodding motion. After doing this, Brian felt a little more daring and lifted her skirt up gently. He looked up to see if she moved or reacted. She didn’t. With this he looked down and gazed at her underwear. She was wearing a blue thong. The slut, Brian was thinking. Brian spanked her ass a few times before moving back from her. Brian thought about how to start time again. By sheer coincidence, un-noticed by Brian, he winced while thinking and time started again. The nurse turned round with a strange stinging pain in her bum and told him: “You can go to class now”. With that Brian ran out of the nurses office wondering what the hell had just happened. A slow start and i have another post planned for tommorow. Thanks for reading. Please leave your thoughts, comments and suggestions. __________________ It is far more difficult to be simple than to be complicated.