Fiction: Hikaru + Kaoru = Brotherly Love

Abbz · 06-24-2011, 08:09 AM

CHARACTERS: Hikaru: 16, male, golden eyes, orange hair, 5'10
Kaoru: 16, male, golden eyes, orange hair, 5'10 the younger of the twins.

This story is fiction but based on a fiction show these are little pieces of there brotherly love

"....And then he had this nightmare that made him bolt up right out of bed." Hikaru said giggling. "Hikaru! I asked you not to tell anyone that! Why are you so mean to me?" Kaoru told his brother as tears formed at his eyes.

"I'm sorry Kaoru" Hikaru apoligized sorry, "You were just so cute when it happened I just had to tell them." Hikaru held his brothers face in his hands and stared lovingly into his eyes. "I never want any harm to come to you" Hikaru said as he gently grazed his cheek with his hand.

Thats the "Brotherly Love" from episode one!

willing_girl · 06-24-2011, 09:08 AM

i dont know you but i have to love you right now because of this

Abbz · 06-24-2011, 04:49 PM

"..... are you saying you've never been to Covent Gardens?" "All of our Victorian pieces are from there" *Kaoru knocks over teacup and burns finger* "AAHH!" *sucks on Kaoru's finger* "honestly Kaoru you need to start paying more attention to me and not anything else"

Abbz · 06-24-2011, 09:33 PM

"Hitachiin brothers please disrobe behind this curtain" asked a physicaal exam nurse. "doesnt matter to me" claimed Hikaru. "yeah we're not shy who needs a curtain?" said Kaoru.

"Its not fair i wont let those doctors touch you Kaoru!" "What are you talking about! When we're at home playing doctor I cant get you to stop tickling me and toying inexhaustivly with my body" said Kaoru shirtless along with his twin,

shogan977 · 06-25-2011, 04:58 PM

amazing story hope you keep it up xD

daremaster 1 · 06-26-2011, 07:10 PM

I could read more, good job.

MarisaLaugh · 06-26-2011, 09:26 PM

Is it bad that I actually watch that show?
'Cause I do XD

Abbz · 06-27-2011, 02:12 PM

sorry for no update but i need to rewatch the shows :P i have the whole season on DVD

willing_girl · 06-27-2011, 02:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarisaLaugh

Is it bad that I actually watch that show?
'Cause I do XD

no its not bad because the show is amazing and the best thing ever made in the whole universe

MarisaLaugh · 06-27-2011, 04:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by willing_girl

no its not bad because the show is amazing and the best thing ever made in the whole universe

'Tis true.
XD
I've watched all of 'dem episodes [:

Dylan xX · 06-28-2011, 09:46 PM

I'll really miss Abbz, she seemed like quite the coolbean

shogan977 · 06-28-2011, 10:27 PM

Omfg banned wtf i was gettin into this story 2 and wat it even a good reason???????

Abby9 · 06-29-2011, 09:17 AM

I really love this show! maybe i could continue this for Abbz? Anyone think i could?

willing_girl · 06-29-2011, 10:41 AM

if you have a netflix or even if you go on youtube you can watch the actual show

Abby9 · 06-29-2011, 11:04 AM

i have the season should i conyinue for people who wanna read them?

06-24-2011, 08:09 AM	#1
Abbz Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Atlantis Posts: 7	Hikaru + Kaoru = Brotherly Love CHARACTERS: Hikaru: 16, male, golden eyes, orange hair, 5'10 Kaoru: 16, male, golden eyes, orange hair, 5'10 the younger of the twins. This story is fiction but based on a fiction show these are little pieces of there brotherly love "....And then he had this nightmare that made him bolt up right out of bed." Hikaru said giggling. "Hikaru! I asked you not to tell anyone that! Why are you so mean to me?" Kaoru told his brother as tears formed at his eyes. "I'm sorry Kaoru" Hikaru apoligized sorry, "You were just so cute when it happened I just had to tell them." Hikaru held his brothers face in his hands and stared lovingly into his eyes. "I never want any harm to come to you" Hikaru said as he gently grazed his cheek with his hand. Thats the "Brotherly Love" from episode one!

06-24-2011, 09:08 AM	#2
willing_girl Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 29	i dont know you but i have to love you right now because of this __________________ http://curiosity-killed-myinnocence.tumblr.com/

06-24-2011, 04:49 PM	#3
Abbz Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Atlantis Posts: 7	Episode 3 "..... are you saying you've never been to Covent Gardens?" "All of our Victorian pieces are from there" Kaoru knocks over teacup and burns finger "AAHH!" sucks on Kaoru's finger "honestly Kaoru you need to start paying more attention to me and not anything else"

06-24-2011, 09:33 PM	#4
Abbz Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Atlantis Posts: 7	Episode 3 (part 2) "Hitachiin brothers please disrobe behind this curtain" asked a physicaal exam nurse. "doesnt matter to me" claimed Hikaru. "yeah we're not shy who needs a curtain?" said Kaoru. "Its not fair i wont let those doctors touch you Kaoru!" "What are you talking about! When we're at home playing doctor I cant get you to stop tickling me and toying inexhaustivly with my body" said Kaoru shirtless along with his twin,

06-26-2011, 09:26 PM	#7
MarisaLaugh Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 161	Is it bad that I actually watch that show? 'Cause I do XD __________________ 19 <> Female <> USA <> (insert sexuality here) Likes: humiliation, clothing control, bladder control, anal Dislikes: Pet play, really big messes, and getting arrested

06-25-2011, 04:58 PM	#5
shogan977 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Not where you think! Posts: 128	amazing story hope you keep it up xD

06-26-2011, 07:10 PM	#6
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	I could read more, good job.

06-27-2011, 02:12 PM	#8
Abbz Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Atlantis Posts: 7	sorry for no update but i need to rewatch the shows :P i have the whole season on DVD

06-28-2011, 09:46 PM	#11
Dylan xX Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: U.S.A Posts: 934 Blog Entries: 7	I'll really miss Abbz, she seemed like quite the coolbean __________________ Gone

06-28-2011, 10:27 PM	#12
shogan977 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Not where you think! Posts: 128	Omfg banned wtf i was gettin into this story 2 and wat it even a good reason???????

06-29-2011, 09:17 AM	#13
Abby9 Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: In AbbyLand! Posts: 70	Hmmmm... I really love this show! maybe i could continue this for Abbz? Anyone think i could? __________________ Thanks to all of the users in my Host Club!: zyxwxyz/J.M.N=Haruhi, MarisaLaugh=Tamaki,puppysean/Connor xX/WoWaddict=Kyoya,xeldin=Hikaru,Abby9=Kaoru,Almighty Elemental=Mori and Dylan xX=Honey HELLO! My Special People xeldin, WaterMoonNinjas18/F/USA <3

06-29-2011, 10:41 AM	#14
willing_girl Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 29	if you have a netflix or even if you go on youtube you can watch the actual show __________________ http://curiosity-killed-myinnocence.tumblr.com/

06-29-2011, 11:04 AM	#15
Abby9 Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: In AbbyLand! Posts: 70	i have the season should i conyinue for people who wanna read them? __________________ Thanks to all of the users in my Host Club!: zyxwxyz/J.M.N=Haruhi, MarisaLaugh=Tamaki,puppysean/Connor xX/WoWaddict=Kyoya,xeldin=Hikaru,Abby9=Kaoru,Almighty Elemental=Mori and Dylan xX=Honey HELLO! My Special People xeldin, WaterMoonNinjas18/F/USA <3