Fiction: Mark's Babysitting Adventure - Page 6

William · 01-27-2010, 04:09 AM

I wonder Whats going to happen inhope it's good this is a real good story been waiting for ages for this part!

jambalaya · 01-27-2010, 04:37 AM

Thank you for the update. I was waiting for this in decades... lol Keep up the good work.

Demon Thief · 01-27-2010, 10:47 AM

Expect the next update later tonight.

Joke · 01-31-2010, 11:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Demon Thief

Expect the next update later tonight.

Still waiting for the update

maxim · 01-31-2010, 12:24 PM

I agree with joke you had amazing potential and great cliff hanger you do not continue then I will abusletley insist one somebody finishing it.

evilmime13 · 01-31-2010, 04:16 PM

Great story. I hope you update it soon.

Spoiler:

He probably not update it soon

Demon Thief · 01-31-2010, 11:54 PM

Just for that, evil, I'm updating it now.

Part 16

"So who goes first?" Mark asked.
"How about Greg, since he came here last," suggested Zack.
"Fine," Greg sighed. Mark could tell by the expression on Greg's face that he really didn't want to play this. Mark guessed that Greg was being forced to play this, and adding this to the information he had found out earlier, he knew enough about Alex's little secret.
"Well, Greg, are you going to start us off, or not?" Alex asked.
"I guess," he said. "Umm, Zack, truth or dare?"
"Dare," Zack automatically responded. Greg thought for a moment and said, "I dare you to give Alex an atomic wedgie."
Zack got up and went behind Alex, who bent over. Zack pulled up Alex's boxers up as far as they could go, which was halfway up Alex's back.
"I'll get you back for that, Greg," Alex said. "Zack, it's your turn."
"Okay, Mark, truth or dare?" Zack asked.
"Truth," Mark answered.
"Did you enjoy sleeping with Steven last night?" Zach then asked.
"Not really, no," Mark answered. "Alex, truth or dare?"
"Dare," he replied.
"I dare you to skip your next two turns. You can't ask anyone truth or dare, but you can still be asked," Mark said.
"Okay fine," Alex said. "Greg, I guess it's your turn."
"Zack, truth or dare?" Greg asked.
"Truth," he answered. Greg asked, "What is the most embarrassing thing you've ever done?"
"I went skinny-dipping into my neighbor's pool once, and I almost got caught doing it, too," Zack said. "Mark, truth or dare?"
"Dare," Mark answered.
"I dare you to pull down Greg's pants, and Greg, you can't pull them up until your turn."
"Alright, I'll do it," Mark said.
He and Greg both stood up and faced each other. Then Greg turned around and Mark quickly yanked down Greg's pants, revealing white briefs.
"Remember, you can't pull them up until your turn," Zack said.
"Alex. truth or dare?" Mark asked.
"Dare," Alex replied.
"I dare you to take off your pants and leave them off until the game is over," Mark said.
"Fine," Alex said. He took off his shoes, then stood up and pulled his pants down. He was wearing a blue pair of boxers.
"I'll get you back as well, Mark," he said. "When it's my turn, I'll get you both back."
"I'd like to see you try," Mark said.

iTunes · 02-01-2010, 01:18 AM

Amazing story so far! Keep it ip! This was a great addition

jambalaya · 02-01-2010, 02:21 AM

I'll never really grow tired of reading this. I'm hooked to this story. Keep Going please! and if possible longer updates

gagemeaker · 02-01-2010, 08:32 PM

reading your story makes my day. please keep going

seth18 · 02-03-2010, 10:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Demon Thief

Just for that, evil, I'm updating it now.

He won't update..

Spoiler:

UPDATE! LOL!

The_Optimist · 02-04-2010, 03:30 PM

OH MY GOD!!! This is brilliant. Please continue

mr0zip0 · 02-04-2010, 08:54 PM

best story I've ever read... UPDATE!!!

Demon Thief · 02-05-2010, 11:48 PM

Sorry for the incovenience. I've been running low on ideas lately.
And if anyone has any great truth or dare ideas, feel free to PM me.

Part 17

"Oh I will," Alex said. "Just you wait."
It was now Greg's turn, and Alex was now back in the game. Greg asked, "Zack, truth or dare?"
"Dare."
"I dare you to take off everything but your underwear and stay like that for the rest of the game," Greg said.
"Fine," Zack said. He pulled of his socks and shoes, then stood up and removed his shirt and pants. He was wearing red boxer-briefs. He sat down again and said, "Mark, truth or dare?"
"Dare," Mark said.
Zack thought for a moment and said, "I dare you to take off everything but your underwear and go downstairs and watch TV with Steven for fifteen minutes. Oh, and the game continues while you're away."
"I'll do it," Mark said, "but only if one of you two stays out of the game until I come back."
"Okay," Zack said. "Um, I'll stay out, I guess."
Mark quickly reoved his own clothes, until he stood wearing only the white briefs that Zack had given him last night. He left the room and went downstairs to where Steven was still watching TV.
"Dare?" Steven asked.
"Yeah," Mark replied.
"My brother makes me play that stupid truth or dare game whenever we're home alone," Steven said. "One time, he dared me to get naked, and then he took soe pictures of me. He said he'll show everyone at school unless I do whatever he wants."
"You know, he did the same thing to me, but I snuck into hs room and deleted all his embarrassing photos of us," Mark said.
"Really?" Steven asked.
"Yeah, and I need your help. Do you want to get back at your brother?"
"Yes."
"Here, I'll tell you my plan." Mark looked at the stairs, then leaned in close to Steven and started whispering in his ear. When he stopped, he asked, "Understand?"
"Yeah," Steven replied.
Mark then crept up the stairs and into Steven's bedroom. He grabbed an object from th bedside table, and hurried back downstairs. He fiddled with the object for a moment, then handed it to Steven.
"Will this work?" Steven asked.
"I hope," Mark replied. "Ssshh! Someone's coming!"
Foosteps came down the stairs. Steven hid the object under the couch as Zack steped into the living room.
"You came come back up," he said. Mark followed him upstairs and back to Alex's room. But what was awaiting him in there?

Mr Very Daring · 02-06-2010, 04:57 PM

the suspense, mystery an cliff-hangers at the chapter ends are brilliant.
Great dare and story ideas. nice mix of tord and story
great story

01-27-2010, 10:47 AM	#78
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,011	Expect the next update later tonight. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

01-31-2010, 12:24 PM	#80
maxim Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: UNITED STATES Posts: 1,121 Blog Entries: 33	I agree with joke you had amazing potential and great cliff hanger you do not continue then I will abusletley insist one somebody finishing it. __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

01-31-2010, 04:16 PM	#81
evilmime13 Junior Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 15	Great story. I hope you update it soon. Spoiler: He probably not update it soon Last edited by evilmime13; 01-31-2010 at 04:18 PM.

01-31-2010, 11:54 PM	#82
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,011	Just for that, evil, I'm updating it now. Part 16 "So who goes first?" Mark asked. "How about Greg, since he came here last," suggested Zack. "Fine," Greg sighed. Mark could tell by the expression on Greg's face that he really didn't want to play this. Mark guessed that Greg was being forced to play this, and adding this to the information he had found out earlier, he knew enough about Alex's little secret. "Well, Greg, are you going to start us off, or not?" Alex asked. "I guess," he said. "Umm, Zack, truth or dare?" "Dare," Zack automatically responded. Greg thought for a moment and said, "I dare you to give Alex an atomic wedgie." Zack got up and went behind Alex, who bent over. Zack pulled up Alex's boxers up as far as they could go, which was halfway up Alex's back. "I'll get you back for that, Greg," Alex said. "Zack, it's your turn." "Okay, Mark, truth or dare?" Zack asked. "Truth," Mark answered. "Did you enjoy sleeping with Steven last night?" Zach then asked. "Not really, no," Mark answered. "Alex, truth or dare?" "Dare," he replied. "I dare you to skip your next two turns. You can't ask anyone truth or dare, but you can still be asked," Mark said. "Okay fine," Alex said. "Greg, I guess it's your turn." "Zack, truth or dare?" Greg asked. "Truth," he answered. Greg asked, "What is the most embarrassing thing you've ever done?" "I went skinny-dipping into my neighbor's pool once, and I almost got caught doing it, too," Zack said. "Mark, truth or dare?" "Dare," Mark answered. "I dare you to pull down Greg's pants, and Greg, you can't pull them up until your turn." "Alright, I'll do it," Mark said. He and Greg both stood up and faced each other. Then Greg turned around and Mark quickly yanked down Greg's pants, revealing white briefs. "Remember, you can't pull them up until your turn," Zack said. "Alex. truth or dare?" Mark asked. "Dare," Alex replied. "I dare you to take off your pants and leave them off until the game is over," Mark said. "Fine," Alex said. He took off his shoes, then stood up and pulled his pants down. He was wearing a blue pair of boxers. "I'll get you back as well, Mark," he said. "When it's my turn, I'll get you both back." "I'd like to see you try," Mark said. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

02-01-2010, 08:32 PM	#85
gagemeaker Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Michigan Posts: 89	reading your story makes my day. please keep going __________________ 17/bi/michigan If it's zero degrees outside today and it's supposed to be twice as cold tomorrow, how cold is it going to be? Loves - Ice, uncomfyness, masturbation, feet, messy, pee Likes - Wedgies, A bit of pain No Do - Lots of pain, Public, family

01-27-2010, 04:09 AM	#76
William Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 6	I wonder Whats going to happen inhope it's good this is a real good story been waiting for ages for this part!

01-27-2010, 04:37 AM	#77
jambalaya Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 22	Thank you for the update. I was waiting for this in decades... lol Keep up the good work.

02-01-2010, 01:18 AM	#83
iTunes Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 17	Amazing story so far! Keep it ip! This was a great addition

02-01-2010, 02:21 AM	#84
jambalaya Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 22	I'll never really grow tired of reading this. I'm hooked to this story. Keep Going please! and if possible longer updates

02-04-2010, 03:30 PM	#87
The_Optimist Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 5	OH MY GOD!!! This is brilliant. Please continue __________________ I don't think you lead by pessimism and cynicism. I think you lead by optimism and enthusiasm and energy.

02-04-2010, 08:54 PM	#88
mr0zip0 Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Germany Posts: 2	best story I've ever read... UPDATE!!!

02-05-2010, 11:48 PM	#89
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,011	Sorry for the incovenience. I've been running low on ideas lately. And if anyone has any great truth or dare ideas, feel free to PM me. Part 17 "Oh I will," Alex said. "Just you wait." It was now Greg's turn, and Alex was now back in the game. Greg asked, "Zack, truth or dare?" "Dare." "I dare you to take off everything but your underwear and stay like that for the rest of the game," Greg said. "Fine," Zack said. He pulled of his socks and shoes, then stood up and removed his shirt and pants. He was wearing red boxer-briefs. He sat down again and said, "Mark, truth or dare?" "Dare," Mark said. Zack thought for a moment and said, "I dare you to take off everything but your underwear and go downstairs and watch TV with Steven for fifteen minutes. Oh, and the game continues while you're away." "I'll do it," Mark said, "but only if one of you two stays out of the game until I come back." "Okay," Zack said. "Um, I'll stay out, I guess." Mark quickly reoved his own clothes, until he stood wearing only the white briefs that Zack had given him last night. He left the room and went downstairs to where Steven was still watching TV. "Dare?" Steven asked. "Yeah," Mark replied. "My brother makes me play that stupid truth or dare game whenever we're home alone," Steven said. "One time, he dared me to get naked, and then he took soe pictures of me. He said he'll show everyone at school unless I do whatever he wants." "You know, he did the same thing to me, but I snuck into hs room and deleted all his embarrassing photos of us," Mark said. "Really?" Steven asked. "Yeah, and I need your help. Do you want to get back at your brother?" "Yes." "Here, I'll tell you my plan." Mark looked at the stairs, then leaned in close to Steven and started whispering in his ear. When he stopped, he asked, "Understand?" "Yeah," Steven replied. Mark then crept up the stairs and into Steven's bedroom. He grabbed an object from th bedside table, and hurried back downstairs. He fiddled with the object for a moment, then handed it to Steven. "Will this work?" Steven asked. "I hope," Mark replied. "Ssshh! Someone's coming!" Foosteps came down the stairs. Steven hid the object under the couch as Zack steped into the living room. "You came come back up," he said. Mark followed him upstairs and back to Alex's room. But what was awaiting him in there? __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

02-06-2010, 04:57 PM	#90
Mr Very Daring getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 255	the suspense, mystery an cliff-hangers at the chapter ends are brilliant. Great dare and story ideas. nice mix of tord and story great story