The Invisible Boy [FICTION]

admireu4ever · 11-25-2007, 06:30 PM

Part One:The Fall

Mike was only fifteen, he was an average looking young man. He had his fair share of fantasies, but what normal minded fifteen yearold didn't? It was a normal school day, he had been walking down the street on his way to his first morning class. As he arrived on the scene of school he had tripped, as he fell he had hit his head, blood went gushing out. He felt faint and then saw man walk up to him. Mike closed his eyes as then he woke up.
As he opened his eyes, he felt his bed and looked around to see his room. "Oh, it was only a dream he said. As he stepped out of bed." the clock had been buzzing for a few minutes now. He turned it off then walked to the shower. He took his clothes off, without looking at himself he just did it with thinking everything was as it normally was. As he walked past the mirror he was greeted by a strange reflection, he saw nothing.
"Holy Crap!" he said as he attempted to look at his body, but he found nothing. Mike took a deep breath and put his clothes back on, it would appear that only he was invisble and if he was wearing clothes then he would be seen. He was home alone for the week, his parents had gone on trips to various parts of the nation. Mike tried thinking..."Well, it might just be like a one day thing. Maybe I could have some fun." he also thought "Well, maybe I should tell my parents, but they will never belive me until they see me..or...not see me..." His mind had been made, he'd spend the day as a invisible boy. Or maybe the week. Or maybe...his entire life.

admireu4ever · 11-25-2007, 06:46 PM

Part Two:School

Mike had stripped down to nothing, and nobody could see him. He walked out into the cold winter night. He had walked to his school like he normally did. When he arrived outside of the school he had found a group of his friends.
"So, somebody told me Mike is gay. Isn't that crazy?" one of the guys Mike didn't like so much said. Mike had been offended by this comment and he had walked up to the boy and took his foot and kicked him in the balls. The boy fell to the ground crying in pain. Two of the others boys went to help him, the other three started laughing.
The boys walk into school and Mike follows, he arrives in his morning class and he takes his seat like normal. "Good Morning Class, today we are going to be learning about the magical world of math." the teacher said in his boring and dull voice. Mike stands up and walks towards the teacher. He undo's the teachers belt and pulls down his pants. He then pulls down the teachers underwear aswell. The entire class stares as the teachers penis is shown to the entire class. It is super hard at this point and the entire class is laughing. The teacher pulls his boxers back up and sends around ten children to detention.
The teacher finishes his class then the students walk out. Mike walks into the Girl's Lockeroom and watches as the 9th graders undress. He walks over to one female named Samantha who is one of the hottest girls in school. He reaches his hands to her shirt. He tears it right off and then undoes her bra. At this point she is scared. Mike grabs her mouth and begins to play with her breast he sucks them and fianlly lets her go. She gasps for air and everyone looks at her and her hard nipples.

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I hope you enjoy it so far...I got alot more ideas coming.

HSsportsstar 1 · 11-25-2007, 06:52 PM

keep writing i always wondered what it would be liek to be invisible. Is there any chance that u can add a little more detail to the parts and make them longer. it would make the story a 100 times better

DareByrd · 11-25-2007, 06:53 PM

yea it would be better if just a little more detail was added sportsstar...but other than that its a pretty good story

JMOB · 11-25-2007, 06:54 PM

ah, another one of my fantasies. GO FOR IT MAN

molten man · 11-25-2007, 09:15 PM

Lovely story!! Excellent

admireu4ever · 11-25-2007, 10:35 PM

I should have another part tonight...

Love,
Me

abgroups · 12-08-2007, 02:16 PM

what would i go if i was invisible?

it boggles the mind

11-25-2007, 06:30 PM	#1
admireu4ever Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 152 Blog Entries: 1	The Invisible Boy [FICTION] Part One:The Fall Mike was only fifteen, he was an average looking young man. He had his fair share of fantasies, but what normal minded fifteen yearold didn't? It was a normal school day, he had been walking down the street on his way to his first morning class. As he arrived on the scene of school he had tripped, as he fell he had hit his head, blood went gushing out. He felt faint and then saw man walk up to him. Mike closed his eyes as then he woke up. As he opened his eyes, he felt his bed and looked around to see his room. "Oh, it was only a dream he said. As he stepped out of bed." the clock had been buzzing for a few minutes now. He turned it off then walked to the shower. He took his clothes off, without looking at himself he just did it with thinking everything was as it normally was. As he walked past the mirror he was greeted by a strange reflection, he saw nothing. "Holy Crap!" he said as he attempted to look at his body, but he found nothing. Mike took a deep breath and put his clothes back on, it would appear that only he was invisble and if he was wearing clothes then he would be seen. He was home alone for the week, his parents had gone on trips to various parts of the nation. Mike tried thinking..."Well, it might just be like a one day thing. Maybe I could have some fun." he also thought "Well, maybe I should tell my parents, but they will never belive me until they see me..or...not see me..." His mind had been made, he'd spend the day as a invisible boy. Or maybe the week. Or maybe...his entire life.

11-25-2007, 06:46 PM	#2
admireu4ever Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 152 Blog Entries: 1	Part Two:School Part Two:School Mike had stripped down to nothing, and nobody could see him. He walked out into the cold winter night. He had walked to his school like he normally did. When he arrived outside of the school he had found a group of his friends. "So, somebody told me Mike is gay. Isn't that crazy?" one of the guys Mike didn't like so much said. Mike had been offended by this comment and he had walked up to the boy and took his foot and kicked him in the balls. The boy fell to the ground crying in pain. Two of the others boys went to help him, the other three started laughing. The boys walk into school and Mike follows, he arrives in his morning class and he takes his seat like normal. "Good Morning Class, today we are going to be learning about the magical world of math." the teacher said in his boring and dull voice. Mike stands up and walks towards the teacher. He undo's the teachers belt and pulls down his pants. He then pulls down the teachers underwear aswell. The entire class stares as the teachers penis is shown to the entire class. It is super hard at this point and the entire class is laughing. The teacher pulls his boxers back up and sends around ten children to detention. The teacher finishes his class then the students walk out. Mike walks into the Girl's Lockeroom and watches as the 9th graders undress. He walks over to one female named Samantha who is one of the hottest girls in school. He reaches his hands to her shirt. He tears it right off and then undoes her bra. At this point she is scared. Mike grabs her mouth and begins to play with her breast he sucks them and fianlly lets her go. She gasps for air and everyone looks at her and her hard nipples. ----------- I hope you enjoy it so far...I got alot more ideas coming.

11-25-2007, 06:53 PM	#4
DareByrd getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 341	yea it would be better if just a little more detail was added sportsstar...but other than that its a pretty good story __________________ 26/m/sub Gay Kik me at dkb1992 Likes: orgasm denial, hypno, rules, dares, games of chance, occasionally chastity. Very open minded otherwise Limits: public, friends and family, blackmail, feminization, illegal, permanent damage, messy, scat

11-25-2007, 09:15 PM	#6
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Lovely story!! Excellent __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

11-25-2007, 06:52 PM	#3
HSsportsstar 1 Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: in my house Posts: 115	keep writing i always wondered what it would be liek to be invisible. Is there any chance that u can add a little more detail to the parts and make them longer. it would make the story a 100 times better

11-25-2007, 06:54 PM	#5
JMOB Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: up your bum Posts: 48	ah, another one of my fantasies. GO FOR IT MAN

11-25-2007, 10:35 PM	#7
admireu4ever Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 152 Blog Entries: 1	I should have another part tonight... Love, Me

12-08-2007, 02:16 PM	#8
abgroups Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 11	what would i go if i was invisible? it boggles the mind