Fiction: The time of my life

liltdoggy · 08-04-2010, 09:38 AM

OK. This is my first story so DON'T hate... It's not nice. In the book, Rory is telling it. We all are 16. Rory and Kate are girls, and Sam and Corbin are boys.

The Beginning:

It's the day school ends for spring break and I need something to do when my parents are gone.

Rory: Hey everyone! You guys want to come over during spring break? My parents are going on a one week cruise!

Sam: Cool! We could do an all-nighter or something!

Kate: Well, that sounds fun!

Corbin: I'd love too!!!

Rory: Ok come over tomorrow and we can start!

The next day, I woke up and cleaned a bit.

At 1:00 P.M. Kate came. She told me that this was going to be awesome.

Corbin and Sam: We're here!

So we all went up stairs.

Corbin: So what should we do??

Kate: We could play Truth or dare...

And those words, started the best moments of my life.

I know this chapter was short but who cares?? After I get at least one comment I will write another chapter.

Memories for Life · 08-04-2010, 01:49 PM

one comment: Could you expound on the ages and general appearances of your characters? Secondly, as your story progresses, please provide some insight in the background of each character and how they all became good friends who enjoy the situations I'm sure you'll be developing as your story continues!

FetishSolver · 08-04-2010, 05:05 PM

oh nice start

has alot of potential for a nice t or d story. And im guessing your character is about...16? Because any younger and I doubt parents would leave you alone for a week.

liltdoggy · 08-04-2010, 09:22 PM

Everyone: YES!!

Sam: Truth or dare Rory

Rory: Truth

Sam: You are SO boring. What is the worst thing you have ever done on a dare?

rory: easy. I ran across a road naked at 11:00

Rory: Corbin, Truth or dare

Corbin: Dare

Rory: I dare you to take off your shirt

Corbin: ok

Everyone stares at him. He has a 6 pack.

Corbin: Truth or dare Kate?

Kate: Dare

Corbin: I dare you to lap dance Sam

Kate: What happens if I don't

Corbin: You take off one peice of clothing

Kate: Ummmm I would rather lapdance sam

Kate lapdances Sam

Kate: Nice tent.

Sam looks down and notices in his shorts there was a small but noticable bump

Kate: Truth or dare sammy

Sam: ummmm.... Dare

Kate: go outside and scream I WANT TO DO YOU!!!!

Sam: ...... ummmm I think i will just take my shirt off

Sam: truth or dare, Rory?

Rory: Dare.

Sam: I dare you to trade bras with kate

Rory: fine by me, but you ain't seeing anything

Sam: How?

Rory: i can take it off under my shirt

Rory had a pink one and Kate had a black lace one

Rory: T or D corbin

Corbin: truth

Rory: If you had to have sex with one of us which would it be?

Corbin: Well, considering I do NOT want to have sex with sam.... It would be.... you. sorry kate.

Rory: O-K.... well that wasnt what I was thinking but fine by me....

Rory secretly likes Corbin.... (shhhh dont tell :P)

Corbin: truth or dare kate

Kate: dare

Corbin: hmmmm

Corbin: Since you have a skirt on, and i feel mean... I dare you too take off your underware.

Kate: uh.. ok

When she pulled them down we noticed that katy (the goody goody girl) had on a THONG

Kate: Sam... what do you choose

Sam: dare. Definitly

Kate: Make-out with Rory

Sam: Ok

Sam had a crush on Rory. (editers note: notice the love in the air)

Sam and Rory kissed and sam was really into it, but Rory pulled away

Sam: Truth or dare

Rory: Dare. and give me a bad one

Sorry... Rory and Sam are 17, and Corbin and Kate are 16
Also you find more about them as you go along....

liltdoggy · 08-05-2010, 11:17 AM

Sam: I dare you to take off all your clothes

Rory: ok I have nothing wrong with my body

Rory took off her clothes, one by one. She slowly slid down her panties. Everyone stared at her

Rory: Stop Starring!! Pervs!

Sam: Huh?? Oh, what? Ok *he continues staring*

Rory: Truth or dare corbin

Corbin: Dare

Rory: I dare you to take your pants off

Corbin: Easy *he drops his shorts*

Rory: Looks like someone is excited

Corbin blushes

Corbin: Truth or dare Kate

Kate: dare me

Corbin: lap dance me

Kate looks unsure...

Kate: Nope. I will just take off my shirt

Corbin: Well, this is just as good

Kate took of her shirt. So she is only wearing a skirt and a bra

Kate: T or D Sam

Sam: I am a dare MASTER... Give me your best shot

Kate: Ok... Strip. Just like Rory

Sam: *gulps* ok

Sam pulls down everything except his boxers. Then, he slowly, inch-by-inch pulls his boxers down. Then a HUGE boner pops up.

Sam: *blushes* I have nothing to hide

Sam: Truth or dare Rory

Rory: Well.... Dare

Sam: I dare you to give me a lapdance

Rory: O-K....

Sam gets an even BIGGER boner while she was lapdancing him.

Rory: Ok corbin

Corbin: Umm... I will be safe... Truth

Rory: Have you ever done somthing gay?

Corbin: Well, my friend from camp and I were comparing willies, and we gave eachother handjobs....

08-04-2010, 09:38 AM	#1
liltdoggy Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Houston Posts: 5	The time of my life OK. This is my first story so DON'T hate... It's not nice. In the book, Rory is telling it. We all are 16. Rory and Kate are girls, and Sam and Corbin are boys. The Beginning: It's the day school ends for spring break and I need something to do when my parents are gone. Rory: Hey everyone! You guys want to come over during spring break? My parents are going on a one week cruise! Sam: Cool! We could do an all-nighter or something! Kate: Well, that sounds fun! Corbin: I'd love too!!! Rory: Ok come over tomorrow and we can start! The next day, I woke up and cleaned a bit. At 1:00 P.M. Kate came. She told me that this was going to be awesome. Corbin and Sam: We're here! So we all went up stairs. Corbin: So what should we do?? Kate: We could play Truth or dare... And those words, started the best moments of my life. I know this chapter was short but who cares?? After I get at least one comment I will write another chapter. __________________ The time of my life-http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=53277 YES.... I LIKE DARES. Likes: Humiliation, No risk (sometimes), Semi public(sometimes), and cold ok: little pain, semi-nudity hates: pain, public, family, risk of getting caught, pee No i do not take pics. PM me with dares or truths. -liltdoggy-

08-04-2010, 05:05 PM	#3
FetishSolver Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 71	oh nice start has alot of potential for a nice t or d story. And im guessing your character is about...16? Because any younger and I doubt parents would leave you alone for a week. __________________ Likes: Most things you can throw at me. Dislikes: ...er...Public stuff? That's about it. Im also bi-curious, if that will help for any dares you throw my way.

08-04-2010, 09:22 PM	#4
liltdoggy Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Houston Posts: 5	Chapter 1: THe start Everyone: YES!! Sam: Truth or dare Rory Rory: Truth Sam: You are SO boring. What is the worst thing you have ever done on a dare? rory: easy. I ran across a road naked at 11:00 Rory: Corbin, Truth or dare Corbin: Dare Rory: I dare you to take off your shirt Corbin: ok Everyone stares at him. He has a 6 pack. Corbin: Truth or dare Kate? Kate: Dare Corbin: I dare you to lap dance Sam Kate: What happens if I don't Corbin: You take off one peice of clothing Kate: Ummmm I would rather lapdance sam Kate lapdances Sam Kate: Nice tent. Sam looks down and notices in his shorts there was a small but noticable bump Kate: Truth or dare sammy Sam: ummmm.... Dare Kate: go outside and scream I WANT TO DO YOU!!!! Sam: ...... ummmm I think i will just take my shirt off Sam: truth or dare, Rory? Rory: Dare. Sam: I dare you to trade bras with kate Rory: fine by me, but you ain't seeing anything Sam: How? Rory: i can take it off under my shirt Rory had a pink one and Kate had a black lace one Rory: T or D corbin Corbin: truth Rory: If you had to have sex with one of us which would it be? Corbin: Well, considering I do NOT want to have sex with sam.... It would be.... you. sorry kate. Rory: O-K.... well that wasnt what I was thinking but fine by me.... Rory secretly likes Corbin.... (shhhh dont tell :P) Corbin: truth or dare kate Kate: dare Corbin: hmmmm Corbin: Since you have a skirt on, and i feel mean... I dare you too take off your underware. Kate: uh.. ok When she pulled them down we noticed that katy (the goody goody girl) had on a THONG Kate: Sam... what do you choose Sam: dare. Definitly Kate: Make-out with Rory Sam: Ok Sam had a crush on Rory. (editers note: notice the love in the air) Sam and Rory kissed and sam was really into it, but Rory pulled away Sam: Truth or dare Rory: Dare. and give me a bad one Sorry... Rory and Sam are 17, and Corbin and Kate are 16 Also you find more about them as you go along.... __________________ The time of my life-http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=53277 YES.... I LIKE DARES. Likes: Humiliation, No risk (sometimes), Semi public(sometimes), and cold ok: little pain, semi-nudity hates: pain, public, family, risk of getting caught, pee No i do not take pics. PM me with dares or truths. -liltdoggy-

08-05-2010, 11:17 AM	#5
liltdoggy Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Houston Posts: 5	Chapter 2: One bad dare Sam: I dare you to take off all your clothes Rory: ok I have nothing wrong with my body Rory took off her clothes, one by one. She slowly slid down her panties. Everyone stared at her Rory: Stop Starring!! Pervs! Sam: Huh?? Oh, what? Ok he continues staring Rory: Truth or dare corbin Corbin: Dare Rory: I dare you to take your pants off Corbin: Easy he drops his shorts Rory: Looks like someone is excited Corbin blushes Corbin: Truth or dare Kate Kate: dare me Corbin: lap dance me Kate looks unsure... Kate: Nope. I will just take off my shirt Corbin: Well, this is just as good Kate took of her shirt. So she is only wearing a skirt and a bra Kate: T or D Sam Sam: I am a dare MASTER... Give me your best shot Kate: Ok... Strip. Just like Rory Sam: gulps ok Sam pulls down everything except his boxers. Then, he slowly, inch-by-inch pulls his boxers down. Then a HUGE boner pops up. Sam: blushes I have nothing to hide Sam: Truth or dare Rory Rory: Well.... Dare Sam: I dare you to give me a lapdance Rory: O-K.... Sam gets an even BIGGER boner while she was lapdancing him. Rory: Ok corbin Corbin: Umm... I will be safe... Truth Rory: Have you ever done somthing gay? Corbin: Well, my friend from camp and I were comparing willies, and we gave eachother handjobs.... __________________ The time of my life-http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=53277 YES.... I LIKE DARES. Likes: Humiliation, No risk (sometimes), Semi public(sometimes), and cold ok: little pain, semi-nudity hates: pain, public, family, risk of getting caught, pee No i do not take pics. PM me with dares or truths. -liltdoggy-

08-04-2010, 01:49 PM	#2
Memories for Life getDare Devil Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Jacksonville, FL Posts: 1,012	one comment: Could you expound on the ages and general appearances of your characters? Secondly, as your story progresses, please provide some insight in the background of each character and how they all became good friends who enjoy the situations I'm sure you'll be developing as your story continues!