Fiction: The Thanksgiving Game

iceman713 · 11-26-2009, 09:57 AM

My name is Matt (not real name) and my friends Carl and David. They were over for thanksgiving and were going to stay while my parents and little sister were going to the black friday sales so they are with me all day long. So we had a great thanksgiving meal and then after that we went to my room and played halo 3 for a while. About midnight comes around and matt says "We should have more fun tonight haha, why don't we play truth or dare just for fun. but more like master and slave. The winner of the next match of Halo3 will be the master and the two losers will be the slaves. Rules: Anything goes and we keep this between us. If you don't listen to the master gets punished. Do we all agree."

They all said yes.

We played for a while, it was 30 minute game. I finally won with 50 pts david got second with 30 pts and Carl got 29 pts.

"So i guess i win. So we start in the morning haha you have a great night sleep. "

nuditydudity · 11-26-2009, 06:11 PM

Well it's a good start. Good job on characterization and setting stuff. You don't really see that very often. Looking forward to more. Soon?

Mr. Green · 11-26-2009, 06:52 PM

Great start please make your entrys longer

11-26-2009, 09:57 AM	#1
iceman713 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 262	The Thanksgiving Game My name is Matt (not real name) and my friends Carl and David. They were over for thanksgiving and were going to stay while my parents and little sister were going to the black friday sales so they are with me all day long. So we had a great thanksgiving meal and then after that we went to my room and played halo 3 for a while. About midnight comes around and matt says "We should have more fun tonight haha, why don't we play truth or dare just for fun. but more like master and slave. The winner of the next match of Halo3 will be the master and the two losers will be the slaves. Rules: Anything goes and we keep this between us. If you don't listen to the master gets punished. Do we all agree." They all said yes. We played for a while, it was 30 minute game. I finally won with 50 pts david got second with 30 pts and Carl got 29 pts. "So i guess i win. So we start in the morning haha you have a great night sleep. "

11-26-2009, 06:11 PM	#2
nuditydudity Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: USA Posts: 573	Well it's a good start. Good job on characterization and setting stuff. You don't really see that very often. Looking forward to more. Soon? __________________ 9 Years on getDare!! Sing like you know the lyrics Dance like no one is watching Live like you were dying Love like you've never been hurt before

11-26-2009, 06:52 PM	#3
Mr. Green Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Canada B.C. Posts: 24	Great start please make your entrys longer