Fiction: Hidden Right In Front Of Me

tarheel boy · 03-16-2012, 05:58 PM

You MUST continue this. Very well done.

kmacroxs · 03-16-2012, 09:56 PM

Please continue this wonderful story.

Username87654 · 03-17-2012, 08:56 AM

I'll try to have part 2 out ASAP.

Saphir · 03-22-2012, 06:23 PM

oookay this prologue sounds kind of weird (as in content) but that actually might make it quite a fun story

I like it, I'm not really active tho, but I'll try to check it again when I come by next time, would be nice to read more.

The title seems well chosen, it makes me want to know more about the story

Would be great if you carry on!

Best regards.

P.s. Take your time, slow it down, describe stuff detailed to get as much gratifaction as possible out of it for the reader.

Username87654 · 04-26-2012, 04:01 PM

PART 2

The first day of camp was pretty normal. We did normal camp activities such as fishing, swimming, canoeing and we ended the day with a campfire by the lake. Being naked the whole time was a little strange at first but took no time to get used to. Just in the time I had gotten here, I had seen so many different body types that I had never seen. I had seen boys and girls of all ages and colors. Nobody seemed to stare and nobody seemed to make anything awkward. It was simple a lifestyle we were living.

After the campfire, Abby approached me. "If I tell you a little secret, you gotta swear not to tell anybody." she said. I held out my pinky and promised her I wouldn't tell anybody her secret.
"Lots of us from last year formed a club, we sneak out late at night and meet"
"Cool." I said, not knowing where this was going.
"Well, we're meeting tonight and wanted to know if you wanted to join." she said.
"Umm..." I replied. "Sure. What is this club?"
"I'm not really supposed to explain it to new members but I guess I will. I don't really know how to say this so I'll just come out and say it. We do... You know... Like... Ummmm..." she studdered.
"Go on." I said.
"We do like... Sexual stuff. I guess..." she said.
We both turned red, saying nothing. I had no idea what to say! I had always been taught nudity was a lifestyle and sex was for reproduction only. I didn't want to turn her down, Abby was my only friend here so far and she was great! I just stood there.
"Well I guess I'll see you tonight. Meet at 10:30, after lights out, in the game room." she walked away, leaving me speechless.

As 10:30 got closer, I got more and more nervous. Should I go? Should I make up an excuse? Should I just skip it? Was Abby even telling the truth? A million questions rushed through my brain. I brushed my teeth, got a shower, and layers still in bed. At around 10:25, when all the counclers were already asleep, I saw a silhouette walked past my bed.
"Come on." it whispers, as it revealed Abby as its identity. I got up from my bottom bunk and followed her. She had a few others following her too. We left through the back door and made out way to the game room.

When we arrived, the lights were already on. I shock in nervousness as well as cold from the night wid. We walked into the game room to see 4 guys.
"Hey Abby." one of the boys said.
"Hi." she said. "I brought a new member. Everybody meet Alana."
Everybody waved.
"You can call me Lana." I managed to say.
"Did you tell her about the new member induction requirements?"
"No." Abby said, shaking her head.
"Well, she's already here so she better be fine with them." the boy said.
Abby turned to me. "Mind if we ask you a few questions?" she said.
I shock my head no.
"Okay, are you a virgin?"
I nodded my head, yes.
"Okay. Have you ever mastubated?" she asked.
"Whats that?" I asked.
Everybody looked shocked. It must have surprised them how niave I was.
"Okay, we'll we have one final task for you." Abby said. "Sit down."
I did as told, sitting on a brown bench against the wall.
"Now spread your legs." one of the boys said. I looked to Abby who nodded yes.
"I don't want to get pregnant." was all I could manage to say out of nervousness.
"You don't have to worry about that." Abby said as I spread my legs as far as they would go.
Everybody got down to get a better view of in between my legs.

"Good job." Abby said. "We will let you in our club." as if it was some huge honor. The group all together 4 boys and 3 girls.
"Now let the second annual all night truth or dare game begin!" Abby said as the group cheered.

orangegongman · 04-26-2012, 07:06 PM

pretty good, but id rather u continue ur other 1

Username87654 · 04-26-2012, 07:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by orangegongman

pretty good, but id rather u continue ur other 1

I ran out of ideas for that but just came up with an idea today. I'll try and write it ASAP.

03-16-2012, 05:58 PM	#1
tarheel boy Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 179	You MUST continue this. Very well done. __________________ 18/m likes:nudity, semi-public, humiliation, mild bondage and crossdressing limits: anal, family, friends, pictures, permanent and more than mild pain you wont see my mienshao until it's too late... DRAIN PUNCH!!!! "...How about her?" "Yeah I'd do her." "What would you do?" "I'd take her out to a nice dinner, I'd walk her home afterwords, and when we get there, I'd shake the fuck out of her father's hand." "...lolwut?"

03-16-2012, 09:56 PM	#2
kmacroxs Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: USA Posts: 625	Please continue this wonderful story. __________________ "I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death" - Patrick Henry - March 23, 1775 Justin Bieber sucks (not what I really wanted to say). Spoiler: Justin Bieber's voice -> my ears get raped Spoiler: me: "make it stop, make it stop, please make it stop"

04-26-2012, 04:01 PM	#5
Username87654 Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 147	PART 2 The first day of camp was pretty normal. We did normal camp activities such as fishing, swimming, canoeing and we ended the day with a campfire by the lake. Being naked the whole time was a little strange at first but took no time to get used to. Just in the time I had gotten here, I had seen so many different body types that I had never seen. I had seen boys and girls of all ages and colors. Nobody seemed to stare and nobody seemed to make anything awkward. It was simple a lifestyle we were living. After the campfire, Abby approached me. "If I tell you a little secret, you gotta swear not to tell anybody." she said. I held out my pinky and promised her I wouldn't tell anybody her secret. "Lots of us from last year formed a club, we sneak out late at night and meet" "Cool." I said, not knowing where this was going. "Well, we're meeting tonight and wanted to know if you wanted to join." she said. "Umm..." I replied. "Sure. What is this club?" "I'm not really supposed to explain it to new members but I guess I will. I don't really know how to say this so I'll just come out and say it. We do... You know... Like... Ummmm..." she studdered. "Go on." I said. "We do like... Sexual stuff. I guess..." she said. We both turned red, saying nothing. I had no idea what to say! I had always been taught nudity was a lifestyle and sex was for reproduction only. I didn't want to turn her down, Abby was my only friend here so far and she was great! I just stood there. "Well I guess I'll see you tonight. Meet at 10:30, after lights out, in the game room." she walked away, leaving me speechless. As 10:30 got closer, I got more and more nervous. Should I go? Should I make up an excuse? Should I just skip it? Was Abby even telling the truth? A million questions rushed through my brain. I brushed my teeth, got a shower, and layers still in bed. At around 10:25, when all the counclers were already asleep, I saw a silhouette walked past my bed. "Come on." it whispers, as it revealed Abby as its identity. I got up from my bottom bunk and followed her. She had a few others following her too. We left through the back door and made out way to the game room. When we arrived, the lights were already on. I shock in nervousness as well as cold from the night wid. We walked into the game room to see 4 guys. "Hey Abby." one of the boys said. "Hi." she said. "I brought a new member. Everybody meet Alana." Everybody waved. "You can call me Lana." I managed to say. "Did you tell her about the new member induction requirements?" "No." Abby said, shaking her head. "Well, she's already here so she better be fine with them." the boy said. Abby turned to me. "Mind if we ask you a few questions?" she said. I shock my head no. "Okay, are you a virgin?" I nodded my head, yes. "Okay. Have you ever mastubated?" she asked. "Whats that?" I asked. Everybody looked shocked. It must have surprised them how niave I was. "Okay, we'll we have one final task for you." Abby said. "Sit down." I did as told, sitting on a brown bench against the wall. "Now spread your legs." one of the boys said. I looked to Abby who nodded yes. "I don't want to get pregnant." was all I could manage to say out of nervousness. "You don't have to worry about that." Abby said as I spread my legs as far as they would go. Everybody got down to get a better view of in between my legs. "Good job." Abby said. "We will let you in our club." as if it was some huge honor. The group all together 4 boys and 3 girls. "Now let the second annual all night truth or dare game begin!" Abby said as the group cheered. Last edited by Username87654; 04-26-2012 at 06:01 PM.

04-26-2012, 07:06 PM	#6
orangegongman Member Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Somewhere YOU aren't!!! (hopefully) ;) Posts: 67	pretty good, but id rather u continue ur other 1 __________________ Check this out if you want funny clean dares from my childhood: www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=108626 I hold my allegiance to the king groen and those who serve him. My jobs in my kingdom are veteran warrior and performer, and my lord is the mighty warrior and trainer of warriors Conall, whom I serve under as assistant exercise trainer and personal guard. limits: scat, public, gay

03-17-2012, 08:56 AM	#3
Username87654 Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Posts: 147	I'll try to have part 2 out ASAP.

03-22-2012, 06:23 PM	#4
Saphir getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 425	oookay this prologue sounds kind of weird (as in content) but that actually might make it quite a fun story I like it, I'm not really active tho, but I'll try to check it again when I come by next time, would be nice to read more. The title seems well chosen, it makes me want to know more about the story Would be great if you carry on! Best regards. P.s. Take your time, slow it down, describe stuff detailed to get as much gratifaction as possible out of it for the reader.