Fiction: Femdom ♥ - Page 3

Azz123 · 09-04-2012, 06:17 AM

Ive not been following your story from the beginning, but now I wish I had been so I could have delved into this sooner because it's amazing ;D I've just read from the start to this final chapter and it's great! A great, simple plot with brilliant characters.
I'd love to give you constructive criticism to improve your work but I can't see anything wrong with this!

The paragraphing is enticing; short little bites of information that are the perfect size and make you hungry for more of the story. You portray the main female character very well. The first person writing gives it a very sexy feel. And wow that last chapter was incredible! Definitely the best addition to the story so far ;D I can't wait for you to post more!

dareman 1 · 09-04-2012, 06:47 AM

Wow great story Looking forward to more

Kitten · 09-04-2012, 11:36 AM

Thanks for the response guys!
I love hearing that people have read my story and I'm glad you enjoyed.

CollaredBlondie · 09-05-2012, 11:57 AM

I still love this. More please! <3

~ Blondie x

Kitten · 09-07-2012, 02:04 PM

Thanks Blondie!

And thanks to all that have been reading and/or leaving comments!
I'll try to update a bit quicker, for those that wanna read the next chapter.

Azz123 · 09-07-2012, 02:12 PM

Yay please do ;D I appreciate it, your story is amazing!

Slut020 · 03-16-2013, 01:51 PM

I love your story if I have a pm list add me to it

Rascal. · 12-04-2013, 06:32 AM

Please can you update this story further!? It's magnificently well written and one of the best stories that i have read. You're such a talented writer it would be a shame to see it die xx

Philippxyz · 12-04-2013, 06:03 PM

Oh, I now started to read it and I totally agree with the others. Please continue writing this story. It's amazing!

Asiangurls=hot · 12-14-2013, 07:59 PM

This is a very well written story it is sad to see it left.

09-04-2012, 06:17 AM	#31
Azz123 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 258	Ive not been following your story from the beginning, but now I wish I had been so I could have delved into this sooner because it's amazing ;D I've just read from the start to this final chapter and it's great! A great, simple plot with brilliant characters. I'd love to give you constructive criticism to improve your work but I can't see anything wrong with this! The paragraphing is enticing; short little bites of information that are the perfect size and make you hungry for more of the story. You portray the main female character very well. The first person writing gives it a very sexy feel. And wow that last chapter was incredible! Definitely the best addition to the story so far ;D I can't wait for you to post more! __________________ 22 Male UK. Haven't used this site in maybe 5 years. See if you can't convince me to come back. Likes: Femdom, Tease and Denial, Pain, Mild CBT, Mild Anal, Orgasm Control/ Denial, Breath-play, Bondage, Control, Forced Exercise, Ruined Orgasms, Choking.

09-04-2012, 06:47 AM	#32
dareman 1 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: England Posts: 310	Wow great story Looking forward to more __________________ Likes: Public Humiliation, Light Bondage, Pictures, Public Nudity Limits: pain, poo, pee, permanent, family + friends, extreme public, webcam, cross dressing, long dares and illegal Will do any dare Pm to me that is not in my limits

09-07-2012, 02:12 PM	#36
Azz123 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 258	Yay please do ;D I appreciate it, your story is amazing! __________________ 22 Male UK. Haven't used this site in maybe 5 years. See if you can't convince me to come back. Likes: Femdom, Tease and Denial, Pain, Mild CBT, Mild Anal, Orgasm Control/ Denial, Breath-play, Bondage, Control, Forced Exercise, Ruined Orgasms, Choking.

12-04-2013, 06:32 AM	#38
Rascal. Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2011 Posts: 202 Blog Entries: 3	Please can you update this story further!? It's magnificently well written and one of the best stories that i have read. You're such a talented writer it would be a shame to see it die xx Last edited by Rascal.; 12-04-2013 at 06:33 AM. Reason: phone had a brain fart lol

12-04-2013, 06:03 PM	#39
Philippxyz Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 12	Oh, I now started to read it and I totally agree with the others. Please continue writing this story. It's amazing! __________________ Likes: Challenges, Online Public, Humiliation, Normal Pain, Edging, Ruined Orgasms, Blackmailing "Love-hates": Denial, Control, Post-Orgasm Torture, Hard Pain Dislikes: Corner Time, Writing Lines "Dislikes-Limits": Diapers, Messy Limits: Illegal, Unhealthy, Social Suicide, Family & Friends, Poo, Public Curious about: Hypnosis

09-04-2012, 11:36 AM	#33
Kitten The One & Only Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Gehenna Posts: 1,215 Blog Entries: 2	Thanks for the response guys! I love hearing that people have read my story and I'm glad you enjoyed.

09-07-2012, 02:04 PM	#35
Kitten The One & Only Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Gehenna Posts: 1,215 Blog Entries: 2	Thanks Blondie! And thanks to all that have been reading and/or leaving comments! I'll try to update a bit quicker, for those that wanna read the next chapter.

03-16-2013, 01:51 PM	#37
Slut020 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 13	I love your story if I have a pm list add me to it

12-14-2013, 07:59 PM	#40
Asiangurls=hot Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: USA Posts: 23	This is a very well written story it is sad to see it left.