07-29-2010, 11:15 AM | #1 |
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Sam and Corey's Crazy Games! (written as a play)
This story is written as a play so that you the reader can act it out if you want to!!
Characters: Sam Jackson Blue Eyes Brown Hair 5'7" Six Pack Abs 15 years old Corey Smith Blue Eyes Blonde Hair 5'10" Six Pack Abs 15 years old Setting the Scene This story is about two 15 year old boys who are close friends. One night Sam is staying over Corey's house and they start to play some games. These games start to expose who they really are. In the beginning of the story the scene is staged at their school and then later on in the story at Corey's house. Please stay tuned for the first chapter coming soon!!!
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07-29-2010, 05:38 PM | #2 |
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Chapter 1
Chapter 1(Here we find two boys in the 9th grade hallway at school)
Scene 1 Corey: Hey man, so what are you doing this weekend? Sam: Nothing I am just hanging out. What about you? Corey: Well I have nothing planned. Do you want to come over my house on Friday and you can stay the night? Sam: Yeah that sounds great. Corey: Ok cool sounds like a plan! (the bell rings and they both go to class) (later on that day the boys are at lunch eating together) Sam: Corey what did you get for lunch? Corey: A hotdog with french fries. Why? Sam: (laughs) You would get a hot dog you queer. Corey: (blushing) Dude just because I got a hotdog doesn't make me gay. Sam: Alright man what ever you say but those skinny jeans aren't helping your case. Corey: Whatever I don't care anymore. (Gets up and leaves the table) Sam: Corey I was just kidding. Come back. END OF SCENE Scene 2 (Friday Afternoon. Corey and Sam are talking in the hall at the end of the day) Sam: So do I have to bring anything to your house tonight? Corey: Umm no I can't think of anything. Sam: Ok cool. So what are we doing tonight? Corey: Well I have a few things planned. But I can't tell you it's a surprise! Sam: Aww come on man please!! Corey: No, but I will give you a hint. Sam: Ok, what is it? Corey: Well, turns out I do need you to bring stuff. Sam: Ok. What? Corey: We are going to need a deck of cards, some lotion, and what ever spandex clothes you have! Sam: Huh? I don't get it. Corey: Well I guess you will just have to wait and find out! END SCENE Let me know wut you guys think!
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07-30-2010, 07:45 AM | #3 |
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keep going, possibly make the scenes longer like it acctually is a script. If its good enough, I may get you to put it in a document and I might produce it. If you could make the games and forfeits believable as well when it comes to it
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07-30-2010, 11:25 AM | #4 |
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Looking good. I like how it is written as a play. Original. Looking forward to what happens next!
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07-30-2010, 11:50 AM | #5 |
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I like the way you end the story right where it gets exciting and it keeps my mind thinking what would happen next!
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07-30-2010, 01:26 PM | #6 |
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hey thanks guys for the comments!! I will try and get the next part up by tonight!
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07-31-2010, 11:56 AM | #7 |
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hey sorry for delay. Next Chapter will be up in about 3 hours!!!
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07-31-2010, 01:11 PM | #8 |
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Hmmm...
Not bad, not bad at all. Even though it's written as a play, you have to attempt to make the cha-....scenes* longer. I think the whole style of this story is pretty creative however, and I urge you to keep writing. Hahaa, I love talking like that :3
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08-05-2010, 08:59 AM | #9 |
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Anything happening here has this story just failed. I was looking forward to this as well
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Reasons To Go To Work Naked... 1. Your boss is always yelling, "I wanna see your ass in here by 8:00!" 2. "I'd love to chip in, but I left my wallet in my pants." 3. You want to see if it's like the dream. 4. People stop stealing your pens after they've seen where you keep them. 5. Diverts attention from the fact that you also came to work drunk. 6. Gives "bad hair day" a whole new meaning. 7. No one steals your chair. Stories posted by me: Snapchat - MySlaveBoys KIK - TommyPDaddy www . into dare . com / chats |
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