Fiction: It All Started With An E-mail - Page 6

slutpup · 08-12-2012, 11:47 AM

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Originally Posted by wedgiegirl290

More! This is a great story

More will be here soon. Working on it now.

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Originally Posted by Tiden

Great story! I can't wait to read more.

Thanks! More will be here soon!

Puffy32998 · 08-13-2012, 09:58 AM

Cant wait for more. Its very good

slutpup · 08-13-2012, 03:42 PM

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Originally Posted by Puffy32998

Cant wait for more. Its very good

Thanks!

I'm working on the next part now.

canonball-747 · 08-14-2012, 06:15 PM

Pretty much pounding my refresh button

slutpup · 08-14-2012, 06:20 PM

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Originally Posted by canonball-747

Pretty much pounding my refresh button

Haha. It will be up later tonight/early tomorrow. I promise! Expect a PM when it's up!

slutpup · 08-14-2012, 07:29 PM

Sent part 7 to my editor. Will post it as soon as he respondes back to me!!

zac · 08-15-2012, 02:58 PM

wow I love it! can't wait till the next edition

slutpup · 08-15-2012, 05:15 PM

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Originally Posted by zac

wow I love it! can't wait till the next edition

Great! Got the corrections back but I had a few questions so it's not ready to post but it will be up soon!

slutpup · 08-15-2012, 07:15 PM

Special thanks to Komodo Jones for doing all the corrections!

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Thanks Hollyann, takashi, canonball-747, wedgiegirl290, Tiden, Puffy32998, and zac for the feedback on part 6!

It All Started With An E-mail
Part 7: Sarah Gets The Pictures

"It's Tommy again," Tommy told her.

"Come in," Sarah said to him, while she wondered what he wanted.

"Sarah, Emily added me on Facebook and I'm too afraid to talk to her. Help? Please?" Tommy asked her, afraid.

"Tommy, just say 'Hi' and be yourself. I know she'll like you. Just don't rush into the whole relationship thing right away, okay?" Sarah told him.

"Okay, Sarah, I won't," Tommy said. As he was about to leave, Sarah called him back.

"Tommy, wait!" Sarah yelled to him.

"What?" Tommy asked.

"This is kind of embarrassing but I kind of need three pictures of you," Sarah told him, embarrassed.

"Why?" Tommy asked her, confused.

"I can't tell you, it's a secret. I just need three pictures of you naked showing your face and dick. Please Tommy, help a sister out. Please!" Sarah begged her brother.

"What's in it for me?" Tommy asked, pondering the request.

"Whatever you want, I just need the pictures. Please Tommy, I'll do anything," Sarah said, realizing that she may have made a mistake by saying that.

"Anything you say? Okay then. The only way you will get the pictures is if you be my slave!" Tommy told her, getting excited.

"Oh no," Sarah thought to herself. She knew that this would happen. "No. I won't. If it was anything else, I would. I'm sorry Tommy," Sarah told him.

"Fine, then I won't do it. Bye," Tommy said as he walked out the door.

"Wait! Tommy! Okay, I'll do it," Sarah said as she regretted asking for the pictures.

"Hmmmmmm, I don't believe you. How do I know you will?" Tommy asked her, teasing her.

"I'll do anything, just please give me the pictures!" Sarah begged her brother.

"Okay. I'll believe you, but on one condition," Tommy teased her sister.

"What is it?" Sarah asked not knowing what she would have to do.

"You have to suck my dick and swallow all my cum. Then I'll know that you will be my obedient little slave," Tommy laughed as he said that.

"W-Wh-What? I c-can't do that. You're my brother for goodness sake!" Sarah told him.

"It doesn't matter. It's not like we're having sex or anything," Tommy told her, annoyed.

"Ummmm, we're having oral SEX. But I guess you're right. Fine, but I'm only doing this because I HAVE to," Sarah told him, shocked at what she said.

"How did I know you were going to say that?" Tommy asked her while he walked over to the door and shut and locked it. He knew that nobody needed to go in there because Sarah had a room to herself. He then walked in front of her and unzipped his pants. "Take them off for me, would you?" Tommy told her. Sarah took off Tommy's pants and underwear. She revealed his seven inch long dick and just looked at it. “Well, what are you waiting for? Start sucking!" Tommy told her. Sarah slowly put his dick in her mouth. Sarah had never sucked a dick before and was just getting used to it. She was good at it because her brother complimented her, calling her an “expert cock sucker” and questioning if she had ever sucked a dick before. Sarah started to suck faster and faster. Then she felt Tommy's hands as he pushed her head making his dick go farther into her mouth. He shot two loads into her mouth and she struggled to get it all down, but she did.

"Okay...that's done...now let's get the pictures..." Sarah said, gasping for air.

"Okay, okay. By the way, that was amazing!" Tommy told her. He took off his shirt leaving him standing there naked. Sarah went and grabbed her camera.

"Okay, I need to take three pictures of you and I need you to hold your dick up and show your face," Sarah told him as he did it. Sarah took the pictures and threw his clothes at him and told him to get dressed.

"Now I don't think that's how you want to treat your Master, is it? You don't want to get a spanking, do you?" Tommy teased her.

"No. I don't want to. Now will you please leave?" Sarah told him.

"Now is that how you talk to your Master? I think it's time for a spanking!" Tommy told her as he sat on her bed. "Lay down across my lap. Now," Tommy commanded. Sarah laid across his lap and Tommy pulled up her dress and saw that she was not wearing any panties. "It looks like somebody's been a naughty girl," Tommy teased her. Then he hit her ass as hard as possible, making Sarah flinch. "Now, you're going to get ten spankings and you will count them out. Anytime you miss one, we'll start over," Tommy told her.

*Slap* "One," Sarah counted.

*Slap* "Two," Sarah counted, trying not to cry because of the pain. *Slap* "Three," *Slap* "Four," *Slap* "Five," *Slap* "Six," *Slap* "Seven," *Slap* "Eight," *Slap* "Nine," *Slap* "T-ten," Sarah counted, crying because of the pain.

"Now that's a good little slave. Good job," Tommy said as he pulled her dress down and lifted her off his lap. He got dressed and left.

"OWWWWW!" Sarah screamed as soon as he was gone. Sarah was about to go to bed when she remembered the lines. She got the paper and slowly started to write out, "I will not tell anyone about my relationship with Master," and writing her e-mail with a note saying, "E-mail me for some fun," on the top of each page.

TO BE CONTINUED................
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Will Sarah finish her lines?
Will Sarah remember the e-mail?
Keep reading 'It All Started With An E-mail' to find out!

Puffy32998 · 08-15-2012, 07:37 PM

Looks great cant wait for next part

knightgunner13 · 08-15-2012, 09:19 PM

keep going!!!!!!

Hollyann · 08-15-2012, 09:54 PM

Two words simply amazing this is by far my favorite story on get dare

takashi · 08-16-2012, 08:56 PM

did not expect her brother to ask for her to be his slave

wedgiegirl290 · 08-16-2012, 09:30 PM

Another amazing part!

AYZo_O · 08-20-2012, 03:50 AM

Pleade continue its just so awesome

08-13-2012, 09:58 AM	#77
Puffy32998 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 116	Cant wait for more. Its very good __________________ Loves: cbt Likes: everything but limits. Limits: pee poop and public and anal messy, and crossdressing I need a mistress If your interested pm me i willl do all dares me as long as in my limits i will send pics to all the dares i can I will write the name of any person on my penis and send proof just pm me

08-14-2012, 07:29 PM	#81
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	Sent part 7 to my editor. Will post it as soon as he respondes back to me!! __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.

08-15-2012, 07:15 PM	#84
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	Part 7 Special thanks to Komodo Jones for doing all the corrections! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thanks Hollyann, takashi, canonball-747, wedgiegirl290, Tiden, Puffy32998, and zac for the feedback on part 6! It All Started With An E-mail Part 7: Sarah Gets The Pictures "It's Tommy again," Tommy told her. "Come in," Sarah said to him, while she wondered what he wanted. "Sarah, Emily added me on Facebook and I'm too afraid to talk to her. Help? Please?" Tommy asked her, afraid. "Tommy, just say 'Hi' and be yourself. I know she'll like you. Just don't rush into the whole relationship thing right away, okay?" Sarah told him. "Okay, Sarah, I won't," Tommy said. As he was about to leave, Sarah called him back. "Tommy, wait!" Sarah yelled to him. "What?" Tommy asked. "This is kind of embarrassing but I kind of need three pictures of you," Sarah told him, embarrassed. "Why?" Tommy asked her, confused. "I can't tell you, it's a secret. I just need three pictures of you naked showing your face and dick. Please Tommy, help a sister out. Please!" Sarah begged her brother. "What's in it for me?" Tommy asked, pondering the request. "Whatever you want, I just need the pictures. Please Tommy, I'll do anything," Sarah said, realizing that she may have made a mistake by saying that. "Anything you say? Okay then. The only way you will get the pictures is if you be my slave!" Tommy told her, getting excited. "Oh no," Sarah thought to herself. She knew that this would happen. "No. I won't. If it was anything else, I would. I'm sorry Tommy," Sarah told him. "Fine, then I won't do it. Bye," Tommy said as he walked out the door. "Wait! Tommy! Okay, I'll do it," Sarah said as she regretted asking for the pictures. "Hmmmmmm, I don't believe you. How do I know you will?" Tommy asked her, teasing her. "I'll do anything, just please give me the pictures!" Sarah begged her brother. "Okay. I'll believe you, but on one condition," Tommy teased her sister. "What is it?" Sarah asked not knowing what she would have to do. "You have to suck my dick and swallow all my cum. Then I'll know that you will be my obedient little slave," Tommy laughed as he said that. "W-Wh-What? I c-can't do that. You're my brother for goodness sake!" Sarah told him. "It doesn't matter. It's not like we're having sex or anything," Tommy told her, annoyed. "Ummmm, we're having oral SEX. But I guess you're right. Fine, but I'm only doing this because I HAVE to," Sarah told him, shocked at what she said. "How did I know you were going to say that?" Tommy asked her while he walked over to the door and shut and locked it. He knew that nobody needed to go in there because Sarah had a room to herself. He then walked in front of her and unzipped his pants. "Take them off for me, would you?" Tommy told her. Sarah took off Tommy's pants and underwear. She revealed his seven inch long dick and just looked at it. “Well, what are you waiting for? Start sucking!" Tommy told her. Sarah slowly put his dick in her mouth. Sarah had never sucked a dick before and was just getting used to it. She was good at it because her brother complimented her, calling her an “expert cock sucker” and questioning if she had ever sucked a dick before. Sarah started to suck faster and faster. Then she felt Tommy's hands as he pushed her head making his dick go farther into her mouth. He shot two loads into her mouth and she struggled to get it all down, but she did. "Okay...that's done...now let's get the pictures..." Sarah said, gasping for air. "Okay, okay. By the way, that was amazing!" Tommy told her. He took off his shirt leaving him standing there naked. Sarah went and grabbed her camera. "Okay, I need to take three pictures of you and I need you to hold your dick up and show your face," Sarah told him as he did it. Sarah took the pictures and threw his clothes at him and told him to get dressed. "Now I don't think that's how you want to treat your Master, is it? You don't want to get a spanking, do you?" Tommy teased her. "No. I don't want to. Now will you please leave?" Sarah told him. "Now is that how you talk to your Master? I think it's time for a spanking!" Tommy told her as he sat on her bed. "Lay down across my lap. Now," Tommy commanded. Sarah laid across his lap and Tommy pulled up her dress and saw that she was not wearing any panties. "It looks like somebody's been a naughty girl," Tommy teased her. Then he hit her ass as hard as possible, making Sarah flinch. "Now, you're going to get ten spankings and you will count them out. Anytime you miss one, we'll start over," Tommy told her. Slap "One," Sarah counted. Slap "Two," Sarah counted, trying not to cry because of the pain. Slap "Three," Slap "Four," Slap "Five," Slap "Six," Slap "Seven," Slap "Eight," Slap "Nine," Slap "T-ten," Sarah counted, crying because of the pain. "Now that's a good little slave. Good job," Tommy said as he pulled her dress down and lifted her off his lap. He got dressed and left. "OWWWWW!" Sarah screamed as soon as he was gone. Sarah was about to go to bed when she remembered the lines. She got the paper and slowly started to write out, "I will not tell anyone about my relationship with Master," and writing her e-mail with a note saying, "E-mail me for some fun," on the top of each page. TO BE CONTINUED................ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Will Sarah finish her lines? Will Sarah remember the e-mail? Keep reading 'It All Started With An E-mail' to find out! __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me. Last edited by slutpup; 08-18-2012 at 07:34 PM.

08-15-2012, 07:37 PM	#85
Puffy32998 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 116	Looks great cant wait for next part __________________ Loves: cbt Likes: everything but limits. Limits: pee poop and public and anal messy, and crossdressing I need a mistress If your interested pm me i willl do all dares me as long as in my limits i will send pics to all the dares i can I will write the name of any person on my penis and send proof just pm me

08-15-2012, 09:54 PM	#87
Hollyann Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: USA Posts: 838 Blog Entries: 3	Two words simply amazing this is by far my favorite story on get dare __________________ 26/f/les. Switch. Add me on kik hollynn1213 Looking for a female slave Likes- nipple torture, humiliation, insertions, anal, semi public, risk of getting caught, pain. Dislikes (or maybe what I really like the most) big insertions, a lot of pain, high chance of getting caught. Limits- family, friends, blatant public, too much pain, to large insertion, pics (unless we're friends).

08-14-2012, 06:15 PM	#79
canonball-747 Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 99	Pretty much pounding my refresh button

08-15-2012, 02:58 PM	#82
zac getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: under your bed. Posts: 265	wow I love it! can't wait till the next edition

08-15-2012, 09:19 PM	#86
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08-16-2012, 08:56 PM	#88
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08-16-2012, 09:30 PM	#89
wedgiegirl290 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 307	Another amazing part!

08-20-2012, 03:50 AM	#90
AYZo_O Baby Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 1	Pleade continue its just so awesome