Fiction: My Sister's Friends - Page 10

molten man · 01-17-2014, 02:53 PM

One of the best stories i have read.. Keep it going..

anythin4u · 01-17-2014, 11:43 PM

keep going I love it

FLCL · 01-26-2014, 03:32 PM

Chapter 27

"Come on, let me in! Let me in!" I whispered through the door.

"Hey! I already told you: Dogs can't talk!" Brittany shouted back.

I knelt there naked on the patio, staring in at the five girls. They were looking back at me with wide eyes and evil grins. It took me a moment to realize what Brittany wanted me to do.

"Woof woof," I said reluctantly.

Brittany turned to the other girls, "Did you hear something?" The girls shook their heads and Sarah said, "No, I didn't."

I looked over both shoulders to make sure that I was still alone. As I realized that I was at the girls' mercy, my dick started to grow hard again. The feeling of helplessness; the fear of getting caught; the embarrassment of five beautiful girls watching me crawl around naked and bark like a dog. It all gave me a feeling of exhilaration. It made my heart race. My growing dick made me even more embarrassed and self-conscious, which in turn caused my dick to grow even faster. Before I knew it, I was kneeling outside that glass door with a throbbing erection; and the girls' wide eyes and evil grins had grown with my erection.

"Woof! Woof!" I shouted loudly, sounding more genuine this time.

"Oh look, it's Pat!" acted Brittany, "Do you want in boy?"

"WOOF!"

"Didn't you just put him out?" asked Rachel.

"You're right," answered Brittany, "maybe I should leave him out for a while."

I stared in with wide eyes and a slack jaw. My paws - er, hands - were resting on the glass. "How long will they let this go on?" I thought. "What can I do to make them let me in?"

I came up with an idea. The thought of it was embarrassing, but I was desperate. I stared in at the girls with sad puppy dog eyes and started to cry like a dog. The girls laughed at me for a minute, but eventually Brittany said, "Awww, I feel bad," and opened the door.

I forced the ball back into my my mouth and crawled inside. I crawled to Brittany's feet, sat back on my butt and looked up at her. In that position, I couldn't help but feel inferior and dominated. I actually felt like Brittany's pet for a few seconds and somehow it made me very horny. I wanted her, but even more than that, I wanted her validation.

Brittany took the ball from my mouth and patted my head. As she did, she patronized me with, "Oh, what a good boy!" For an instant, her praise made me feel a special kind of joy. I had "pleased my master" and it felt good.

Brittany picked up her phone to delete her copy of the photo. I had become so engrossed in this dare that it took me a moment to realize that it was over. When I did, I became overcome with a rush of embarrassment-fueled anger at what the girls had just put me through. I stood up and said, "You guys suck, you know that?"

The girls all laughed. Sarah pointed and joked, "Your penis seemed to like it."

I covered my penis with my hands and told her to "shut up."

From behind me, Rachel slapped my ass and said, "Don't get uptight now. You were great out there. I wish I had it on video!"

I responded, "Don't forget that I'm only doing this so you'll get rid of blackmail material."

"Yeah, I know," she said. "And you shouldn't forget that you aren't finished yet."

Dakota chimed in, "That's right. I'm up next."

jklivin · 01-27-2014, 02:30 PM

Great again, I'm so glad there will be more for a minute I thought this was the ending! Much happier now.

naked_lego · 01-27-2014, 06:47 PM

fantastic! This story is still the best

FLCL · 01-31-2014, 12:37 PM

Does anyone have a suggestion for what Dakota should make Pat do before she deletes her copy of the picture? I know what I want to happen after Dakota's task. I also have a couple of ideas for what Dakota wants Pat to do but I'm not in love with any of them.

If anyone has a good idea, please PM me or post it in this thread. Thank you.

jklivin · 01-31-2014, 04:04 PM

Not sure what you're leaning towards after Dakota's task but if it involves Lindsay then she could have Pat re-strip her. If she wants to humiliate Pat more then she could have Pat sneak Jerome out of his sisters room and clean it up.
But based on your previous chapters your writing ideas have kept this story fresh and the chapters relate to each other. Your thoughts may actually be better than you think and using someone else's ideas may throw the chemistry off.

phanmail · 01-31-2014, 08:58 PM

I like the idea of him doing something else with Lindsay, but thats just my opinion

Dareme101 · 02-01-2014, 08:44 PM

Great story keep it up! If your ever out if ideas pm me, I can help!

cornylad · 02-02-2014, 05:37 PM

Nice story so far

Maybe Dakota could use Pat as her toilet then get him to lick her clean and clean the asses of all the girls there.

Connor.smith · 02-02-2014, 09:17 PM

I like the one above me. But I want him to do it and than she dosent delete it and sends it to everyone in the group

Dareme101 · 02-13-2014, 09:32 AM

Can you please keep the story going? You have gotten some good ideas. We all just want the next part!

kuber2014-getdate · 02-20-2014, 06:35 AM

Nice story so far. Please post next part.

FLCL · 03-01-2014, 07:25 PM

Hey everyone. Thank you so much for responding. I don't think I'm going to use any of the suggestions from the thread. I'm thankful for the input, but I'm not into human toilet. I'm still not sure what Dakota's dare is going to be, but I promise to write a new chapter tomorrow. I'm drunk right now, so take that with a grain of salt.

Love you guys!

jklivin · 03-01-2014, 07:46 PM

I'm thankful you're not into human toilets, that would've killed the story. I do think you're underestimating your own talents and looking forward to your new update. As long as when you sober up your still against human toilets that is.

01-17-2014, 02:53 PM	#136
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01-17-2014, 11:43 PM	#137
anythin4u Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Location: Australia Posts: 113	keep going I love it __________________ Like: Person above dares, Spanking, Truths, Bondage, Some pain, Insertion (but not for extended periods of time). Limits: extreme pain, public, pics/vids, cam, messy, piss, shit, diaper play. Friends with Missygirl and Slutti and Whore-mnm in real life. PM me TRUTH and I will answer any question you ask me 19/F/Attracted to all genders/Sub

01-26-2014, 03:32 PM	#138
FLCL Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 81	Chapter 27 "Come on, let me in! Let me in!" I whispered through the door. "Hey! I already told you: Dogs can't talk!" Brittany shouted back. I knelt there naked on the patio, staring in at the five girls. They were looking back at me with wide eyes and evil grins. It took me a moment to realize what Brittany wanted me to do. "Woof woof," I said reluctantly. Brittany turned to the other girls, "Did you hear something?" The girls shook their heads and Sarah said, "No, I didn't." I looked over both shoulders to make sure that I was still alone. As I realized that I was at the girls' mercy, my dick started to grow hard again. The feeling of helplessness; the fear of getting caught; the embarrassment of five beautiful girls watching me crawl around naked and bark like a dog. It all gave me a feeling of exhilaration. It made my heart race. My growing dick made me even more embarrassed and self-conscious, which in turn caused my dick to grow even faster. Before I knew it, I was kneeling outside that glass door with a throbbing erection; and the girls' wide eyes and evil grins had grown with my erection. "Woof! Woof!" I shouted loudly, sounding more genuine this time. "Oh look, it's Pat!" acted Brittany, "Do you want in boy?" "WOOF!" "Didn't you just put him out?" asked Rachel. "You're right," answered Brittany, "maybe I should leave him out for a while." I stared in with wide eyes and a slack jaw. My paws - er, hands - were resting on the glass. "How long will they let this go on?" I thought. "What can I do to make them let me in?" I came up with an idea. The thought of it was embarrassing, but I was desperate. I stared in at the girls with sad puppy dog eyes and started to cry like a dog. The girls laughed at me for a minute, but eventually Brittany said, "Awww, I feel bad," and opened the door. I forced the ball back into my my mouth and crawled inside. I crawled to Brittany's feet, sat back on my butt and looked up at her. In that position, I couldn't help but feel inferior and dominated. I actually felt like Brittany's pet for a few seconds and somehow it made me very horny. I wanted her, but even more than that, I wanted her validation. Brittany took the ball from my mouth and patted my head. As she did, she patronized me with, "Oh, what a good boy!" For an instant, her praise made me feel a special kind of joy. I had "pleased my master" and it felt good. Brittany picked up her phone to delete her copy of the photo. I had become so engrossed in this dare that it took me a moment to realize that it was over. When I did, I became overcome with a rush of embarrassment-fueled anger at what the girls had just put me through. I stood up and said, "You guys suck, you know that?" The girls all laughed. Sarah pointed and joked, "Your penis seemed to like it." I covered my penis with my hands and told her to "shut up." From behind me, Rachel slapped my ass and said, "Don't get uptight now. You were great out there. I wish I had it on video!" I responded, "Don't forget that I'm only doing this so you'll get rid of blackmail material." "Yeah, I know," she said. "And you shouldn't forget that you aren't finished yet." Dakota chimed in, "That's right. I'm up next." __________________ Read my story: My Sister's Friends

01-27-2014, 06:47 PM	#140
naked_lego Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Bricksburg Posts: 784 Blog Entries: 29	fantastic! This story is still the best __________________ Trans■woman PM Tasks Likes: Photography, Body Writing/Art, Clothing Control, Edging, Denial, Diapers (wearing & wetting) Pee Holding, Butt Plugs, Semi-Public, Nudity, Bondage, Ice, mild spankings Limits: Permanent, Most Pain, Social Suicide, Family, Illegal, Body Waste, curse words Likes & Limits explained

01-31-2014, 12:37 PM	#141
FLCL Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 81	Does anyone have a suggestion for what Dakota should make Pat do before she deletes her copy of the picture? I know what I want to happen after Dakota's task. I also have a couple of ideas for what Dakota wants Pat to do but I'm not in love with any of them. If anyone has a good idea, please PM me or post it in this thread. Thank you. __________________ Read my story: My Sister's Friends

01-27-2014, 02:30 PM	#139
jklivin getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2012 Location: Indiana Posts: 450	Great again, I'm so glad there will be more for a minute I thought this was the ending! Much happier now.

01-31-2014, 04:04 PM	#142
jklivin getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2012 Location: Indiana Posts: 450	Not sure what you're leaning towards after Dakota's task but if it involves Lindsay then she could have Pat re-strip her. If she wants to humiliate Pat more then she could have Pat sneak Jerome out of his sisters room and clean it up. But based on your previous chapters your writing ideas have kept this story fresh and the chapters relate to each other. Your thoughts may actually be better than you think and using someone else's ideas may throw the chemistry off.

01-31-2014, 08:58 PM	#143
phanmail Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: In the depths of a bunker deep beneath the artic ice caps Posts: 819	I like the idea of him doing something else with Lindsay, but thats just my opinion

02-01-2014, 08:44 PM	#144
Dareme101 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 116	Great story keep it up! If your ever out if ideas pm me, I can help! __________________ Likes- wedgie, dares while showering, bathroom dares, sleeping, dice dares, light pain Mabeys- medium pain, semi public, pee, poo, pics Limits- webcam, poo/pee eating, family, permanent, ball bashing, anal Still working on my like/limits your dares will help

02-02-2014, 05:37 PM	#145
cornylad Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 178	Nice story so far Maybe Dakota could use Pat as her toilet then get him to lick her clean and clean the asses of all the girls there.

02-02-2014, 09:17 PM	#146
Connor.smith getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Texas Posts: 416 Blog Entries: 6	I like the one above me. But I want him to do it and than she dosent delete it and sends it to everyone in the group __________________ Likes Dislikes and Limits- http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=74237 Male/Hetroflexible Denied since: July 22nd 2021 Denied until: July 25th 2021 Edges:0/3 Strokes:0/200

02-13-2014, 09:32 AM	#147
Dareme101 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 116	Can you please keep the story going? You have gotten some good ideas. We all just want the next part! __________________ Likes- wedgie, dares while showering, bathroom dares, sleeping, dice dares, light pain Mabeys- medium pain, semi public, pee, poo, pics Limits- webcam, poo/pee eating, family, permanent, ball bashing, anal Still working on my like/limits your dares will help

02-20-2014, 06:35 AM	#148
kuber2014-getdate Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 13	Nice story so far. Please post next part.

03-01-2014, 07:25 PM	#149
FLCL Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 81	Hey everyone. Thank you so much for responding. I don't think I'm going to use any of the suggestions from the thread. I'm thankful for the input, but I'm not into human toilet. I'm still not sure what Dakota's dare is going to be, but I promise to write a new chapter tomorrow. I'm drunk right now, so take that with a grain of salt. Love you guys! __________________ Read my story: My Sister's Friends

03-01-2014, 07:46 PM	#150
jklivin getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2012 Location: Indiana Posts: 450	I'm thankful you're not into human toilets, that would've killed the story. I do think you're underestimating your own talents and looking forward to your new update. As long as when you sober up your still against human toilets that is.