Sister's Sleepover T or D [FICTION]

Bebe_Gurl · 05-16-2008, 09:22 PM

This will be intristing! This is a really good start to a story...but be carful not to rush yourself! And I'm no longer confused. That was just me having a moment...

Robot · 05-17-2008, 12:17 AM

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Originally Posted by Bebe_Gurl

This will be intristing! This is a really good start to a story...but be carful not to rush yourself! And I'm no longer confused. That was just me having a moment...

We agree with Bebe, don't rush, build it up like you're doing now.
Keep up the good work.

anonimousbob · 05-17-2008, 02:44 AM

This is getting good, I can't wait to read more but as people havbe said, don't rush it

dared to perfection · 05-17-2008, 07:23 AM

your writing style is fine continue doing as you are

you have fans already lol

rejected · 05-17-2008, 07:59 AM

Great story!!! Also fun to read because of the good spelling, grammar and punctuation.

daremedaremenow · 05-17-2008, 08:27 AM

hey you should publish this! lol

Keep going!

janeywestwood · 05-17-2008, 08:40 AM

Whoa, thats really good, please write more...

05-16-2008, 09:22 PM	#1
Bebe_Gurl Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: On my knees Posts: 670 Blog Entries: 9	This will be intristing! This is a really good start to a story...but be carful not to rush yourself! And I'm no longer confused. That was just me having a moment... __________________ 23/ girll Likes: Make me feel like a slut. PUBLIC!! Speech/ Clothing control, humiliation, bimbofication, rules, Pee control, creative dares... surprise me Exploring: Diapers and food in diapers Limits: Family, Permenent, EXTREEME pain ( I can take a little) I have to b able 2 clean it up easly...oh and nothing illegal Have: Large butt plug, small butt plug, medium butt plug, diapers, twist ties for my sensitive lil nipples

05-17-2008, 02:44 AM	#3
anonimousbob Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: UK Posts: 918 Blog Entries: 5	This is getting good, I can't wait to read more but as people havbe said, don't rush it __________________ 27/M/GMT Ask me anything http://anonimousbob.tumblr.com/ask yes: secluded public, crossdressing,, chastity sexual, anal (including enemas if you want), slight pain, anything else not on the above list I can't think of right now no: openly public/involving others, bodily waste, extreme pain Add me at [email protected] Check out my profile and album on Kinktalk I am looking for a mistress to serve right now

05-17-2008, 07:23 AM	#4
dared to perfection getDare Devil Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: the best parts of the UK Posts: 1,090 Blog Entries: 1	your writing style is fine continue doing as you are you have fans already lol __________________ If I receive a PM saying 'frustrate' I will wear my chastity belt for a duration of their choice. OR if no duration is stated, just for the remainder of that day. I'm on FetLife too - ask and I will tell!

05-17-2008, 07:59 AM	#5
rejected Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Belgium Posts: 30	Great story!!! Also fun to read because of the good spelling, grammar and punctuation. __________________ 27/M living in Belgium Absolute limits: no open public, no eating or drinking, no family, no scat, no video or photo, nothing permanent. Dislikes: extreme messy, extreme pain Likes: wedgies, mild to moderate pain, secluded public (backyard, woods,...), and probably everything else not mentioned above.

05-17-2008, 08:27 AM	#6
daremedaremenow Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 3	Woop hey you should publish this! lol Keep going!

05-17-2008, 08:40 AM	#7
janeywestwood Junior Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 20	Whoa, thats really good, please write more... __________________ I welcome all dare suggestions but will NOT give out any personal info or pics. I am owned but will do any sensible dares or play tord, PM me if you are intrested (I have Yahoo messenger) Limits: Extreme Pain, Public, xdressing,freinds, family, bondage, permanent, dangrous, lots of pee/poo. Likes: Rules, anything within limits