[Fiction] 2058: New earth

[Caliboy]

Grammar was much, much better that time. A few runon sentences near the end, but much better. You have a good story here, and it didnt take me forever to read it. Keep it up.

[Odiefrom]

This is interesting. I'm glad that the sex and all that haven't come up yet, because you are using this time to build a setting. The grammer that's been pointed out above does seem to be improving, especially from your first post to your last. I like how you seem to be putting these parts out at a smooth pace, too. I'm going to keep on reading this.

[urlilslave080]

Chapter 4

Time to get my results back. I had been waiting for this all weekend. I walked into class and took my sat at the back.

"Jack Arloom, your results" Miss Henderson said. I walked up to her, grabbed my paper and took my seat again. I slowly opened the seal pulling out the results page.

Knowledge: 91%, Straight A

Area of Work: Government and military

Title: Head of Department of War Tactics and Defence

Training Needed: Yes

Trainer: Tactics specialist Tom Martins

Colony: Town of Seaside being transferred to New Georgia Town

Training Location: 1 month training in Town of Seaside till departure, 11
months in New Georgia Town over internet.

Other Minor Training: Full military training

Licences Needed: Gun Licence
Military Vehicle Licence

Payment: Ownership of fully furnished house
Ownership of Vehicle
Food and drink supply
Energy Supply
Phone line
Allowance - Government will give me anything at their expense

Wow this was all really big news. I was to Become the head of Military Defence and Tactics. I would own a house and a car and would never have to worry about food or anything because i would be supplied with it. Today it was hard to come by a lifestyle like this as i said there was no money so normally you would trade for things. I could not wait to get home and tell Mum and Dad.

One of the weird things about today is most of everything we use comes from Old Earth. Most things were not destroyed in fact down around this area which didn't see much of the war most things are still the same except a lot less people. There are a lot of things that Old Earth used to have which we no longer do, money for example. I have always wondered what it would be like to live on old earth, but no one that was born before the war will talk about it.


Ok this brings us to the end of chapter 4, just so you know this is hopefully going to be a relatively long story, if your getting bored hopefully it will start to interest you soon. Thanks for all the comments and help if you do give me help i will take it in to the best of my ability.

Please keep commenting it feels great when i see someone has posted a comment even if it is to correct me on something.

[Odiefrom]

Very good post, although it was a little short. It's pretty cool seeing this updated almost every day, keep it up!

[Caliboy]

Dont worry about the way you are doing it. You are doing a great job setting up this story.

[Atelo]

I'm so glad you started capitalizing I's in the 4th chapter.

[urlilslave080]

Chapter 5

It was the night of my birthday which meant major party. I was finally 18, I was finally free. Most people from the senior years of my school came. My dad supplied all the alcohol for the night.

"All right son we are going now but remember you have to clean up before we get back, we will be back in a week. Also whatever is broken you will be fixing" My dad yelled from the front door.

My Mum and dad got called out on some government meeting off in another colony. The best thing was that our house was a good 200 m away from everyone else so we didn't have to worry about being to loud. My Best mates Mark and Gaje were here and everyone was set to arrive in half an hour. We thought we would start slightly earlier then everyone else. We cranked the tunes and started drinking having a chat about our plans for the night.

"I am going to root Penelope tonight." Gaje said.
"You got protection?" I threw back at him

He just smiled and pulled three packets of condoms out of his pockets handed one to me and one to Mark. Mark and I laughed simultaneously. We were all planning to lose our virginity tonight and we all had picked the girl of our choice.

DING DONG

People had started to arrive, I opened the door and motioned them out to the back by the table. Within half and hour we had about 40 people there which was all that was coming. We had enough alcohol to last us all night and we planned on going as long as possible. After the first hour and a half everyone had hit the stage where the were lose, we were all just having a great time now, not worrying about anything in the world. Some people were dancing others out the back talking shit, a few decided my pool was the place to be. It did not matter where you were, everyone was having a blast. Gaje had followed Penelope to the pool. Mark was sitting at the table talking to Marisa, the girl he wanted. I was inside dancing with Natalie, the girl I wanted.

I must admit that Old Earth had some great bands, there are no new bands around these days. If there are they just stay to their local colony. After a good 20 minutes of dancing Natalie suggested we hit the pool to cool off, I agreed and followed her. When she got in the gate I couldn't help but to eye her off as she stripped into her bra and undies. I think she noticed and I think she liked it. I removed my shirt and put my condoms underneath it on the floor. She dived in and I stood there admiring her beautiful body. She had shoulder length dirty blonde hair, innocent light blue eyes, she stood at around 5'6 or 5'7. Her boobs were around a C cup and her ass was nice and firm.

"Hey, Are you going to come in or just stay out there like a chicken all night?" She yelled out to me, I gave it a second, smiled then jumped in. I think now I know what B.E.P was talking about when they said "tonight's gunna be a good night" that was one of my favourite songs, I cannot believe it came out almost 50 years ago. We mucked around for a bit, I loved feeling her soft skin when she swept against mine. Was this just innocent fun or would it turn into something? I hoped for the second of the two. After a good half an hour of swim we got out and I grabbed us both towels from the cupboard near the seat of the pool. She took a seat and I grabbed us another drink each.

We sat by the pool and talked about the future. I must admit we were both scared of the unknown future.

"Well at least we have now." I said.

She just giggled. I thought it was now or never so I leaned in and kissed her on her lips, it was only a peck then I pulled back. She looked at me and kissed me back. We kissed for what felt like forever but it only turned out to be 5 minutes.

"Lets go back to the party, we can continue this later." she said

I nodded then watched her as she put her dry clothes over her damp underwear. Then I picked my t-shirt up and put it back on and put the condoms in my pocket which wasn't too wet. As I sat down at the table I noticed the grin mark gave me and gave him a big one back. Gaje and Marisa were quick to join us at the table.

I looked at my watch it was 11:00 o'clock and already someone had passed out. All 6 of us, Natalie, Penelope, Marisa, Mark, Gaje and I were sitting around the table all telling jokes whilst getting more and more drunk.

"Where is your sister?" Mark asked me.

"At her mates." I replied.

My clock had hit 12 o'clock, some of the kids had gone home there must have only been 20 people left. We still had around half of the alcohol we started with.

"This is my song." I yelled.

B.E.P I gotta feeling came on.

It wasn't well known around the colony, actually i think Mark, Gaje and I were the only ones that had heard it. I pulled Natalie to her feet and we started dancing, the others followed. It got to the verse and we all started jumping around and Mark, Gaje and I were singing as loudly as we could while all the girls just jumped around and laughed. The girls quickly got the lyrics and we played the song again this time we all sang. Moving slow to the slow parts and jumping around to the quick parts. Everyone else was also loving the song, people inside were dancing, people in the pool were yelling the parts of the lyrics they had just learned. It was awesome we were all having the best night of our lives so far. After the song we all collapsed back into out chair and laughed the next 5 minutes.

"I think I am ready to pick up where we left off." Natalie whispered into my ear. We both stood up and I followed her inside throwing a wink to my mates as I entered. We got to my room where I put on some soft guitar music that just suited the situation. We slowly started kissing, I was starting to get an erection. She took off my top so I slowly took off hers admiring every piece of skin. I unclipped her bra and softly caressed her boobs in my hands. I took off my pants and twirled her finger around my waist. I took off her skirt and softly pushed my fingers down rubbing the bottom of where here pubic hairs were before she shaved. I took off her underwear exposing her vagina, i stared at her beauty. I removed my boxers, opened up a condom packet and rolled it on my now fully erect penis. I lay on top of her kissing her, rubbing my hands over her beautiful stomach slowly pushing my penis into her vagina. After two minutes in heaven it was over, for both of us it was our first time and we both exploded with ecstasy then we were finished. I took the condom off, tied it up then threw it in the bin. We lay their, side by side naked. I have never felt anything better.

"We better go out, they may start worrying about us." Natalie said.
"Ok." I said, giving off a little laugh

We both got dresses and walked out to the table, everyone else was dancing inside but I noticed that Mark, Penelope, Gaje and Marisa were missing. I grabbed Natalie and I a drink and sat down at the back with her. We sat there talking when Gaje and Marisa walked out then 2 minutes later Mark and Penelope followed. I looked at my clock it was 1:15, another group of people left there would have been 15 or 16 people left including us 6. The others came out to the back and started talking with us and before we knew it the sun was coming up, we had completely drunk and chatted the night away. A few people had passed out, 2 girls were out the back passed out from when they had spewed. Out of the 9 of us left we decided to keep drinking. After a few drinks and more chat it was 8 o'clock and we decided to finally go to bed.


Ok that is the end of that one folks hope you all liked it, hopefully the next one will be up within 24 hours then there may be a few days gap as i am going to Brisbane for a Halloween weekend party.

[Caliboy]

Awesome chapter. This is turning into an amazing story. I really like the descriptions you used, and the writing format was near flawless.

[urlilslave080]

The next week was probably the greatest of my weeks. Natalie, Gaje, Penelope, Mark and Marisa stayed at my house the whole week. We partied the week away pretty much.

It was my first day to start training. I met with Tom Martins on the beach to do fitness. We ran up the beach and back a few times, i was fit as i love my sport but nothing compared to Tom. After a few hours of fitness we headed back to the base on top of the hill near the gate into town. I was taken to the nurse to get an examination and some tests done to see if i was healthy.
"I will be in my office, Nurse Madison will bring you back to me when she is done with you." Tom said.
I nodded and walked though the door.

As i walked through the door Madison was on the computer. She stood up and greeted me. Her skirt went down to her mid thighs and her shirt showed over an inch of cleavage she didn't even look as if she were 30. She started taking my measurements, height, weight Ect. Every measurement she took she documented on her computer. I was now a profile in the military.
"Drop Your pants." She said.
I just looked at her. There was no way i was this lucky.
"Hurry up i need to make sure you haven't got any S.T.I's" She said as she grabbed some disposable gloves from her cupboard.

I dropped my pants then my boxers. She pulled a chair over sat down and started stroking my penis. Maybe i was this lucky. As soon as i was fully erect she stopped and started examining my knob for any signs of infections. As i said no way i was this lucky. After a few minutes of her examining my dick and balls and jotting stuff onto a note pad she grabbed a jar from behind her and started stroking my dick again.
"Tell me when you are going to cum, i need to get as much of it in this jar for tests." She said.
I nodded as she kept stroking getting faster and faster.
"I'm gunna Cum" I moaned.
She put the jar in front of my knob and got faster and harder. It all shot out into the jar. She ringed my penis to get as much cum into the jar as possible then shut the lid back onto it. She handed me some tissues to clean up while she wrote my name onto the cap of the jar.

I went to pull my pants up.
"Your not finished yet." she said. She walked over to my and put a little bag around my knob which sealed itself to my knob. She wheeled a table in front of me.
"Just relax Jack this will feel weird at the start but you will get used to it, now bend over and lean on the table." She said. I turned my head but she pushed me onto the table. Something ice cold and about half an inch in diameter entered my asshole. I moaned and groaned. I could feel the lubricant. The pole slid easily into my ass. She pushed a little further and i let the biggest moan out and came again. I thought i was done but then i felt a smaller tube enter my ass and my filled with water. It was the weirdest feeling in my life. She pulled it out and all the water came out with it after.
"Now your done." She said as she pulled the bag off of my penis and wiped my penis down.

She walked me to Tom's office then left again.
"Hope she went easy on ya Jack." he said to me with a smirk.
I just ignored and listened to what he had to say.
"That's all for today, we will meet same time same place tomorrow." He said to me.

[Caliboy]

Keep it up man, this is a great story.

[urlilslave080]

Chapter 7.

A month had passed. I had finished my training here and tomorrow the military would escort me to New Georgia. It was going to be a 12 hour drive out to middle of the country. I sat there packing thinking of my parents and my sister I wouldn't be able to see them when ever I wanted now. I was sad to leave the only thing that made me slightly happy was that all of my mates were moving to the same town and as I would have my own house I could let them stay with me.
"Jack, go to bed you have an early rise tomorrow you have to leave here at 3." Mum said peeping her head through the door.
"Ok mum." I replied.
"ill wake you up at 2:30." She said, turning the lights off.

Shit, I thought as I jumped out of bed. Mum forgot to wake me. I ran to my watch sitting on the drawer top. 2:21. The relief hit me like a hammer. I silently walked down stairs. Taking my last bag with me. Most of my stuff had already been taken to New Georgia. In fact I was the last graduate still left in The Town of Seaside. Everyone had been taken in busses last week but I still had training. It was good it meant I had my own private vehicle taking me. I ate me breakfast as I heard mum coming down the stairs.
"Morning." she said following a big yawn.
I just grunted, I was too tired to say anything.

I looked at my watch 2:55. There was a knock at the door. I opened the door letting the darkness in.
"Jack Arloom, My name is Steve I'll be your driver today. Are you ready to leave?" He asked.
I turned and hugged my mum. I turned back to Steve and nodded, picking up my bag. I got into the back of the car and noticed the back seat was down so I could sleep through the trip.

I woke up and looked at my watch. It read 12:00. Steve noticed me sitting up.
"Are you hungry Jack?" He asked.
"Yea, what's for lunch"
He pulled the car over and handed me a tin of Spaghetti and a fork.
"Sorry i haven't got anything better. We should be able to get you a good feast in town. You'll be there in just under 3 hours." He said.
"It's all good." I said.
I watched the scenery as i ate. I have never seen anything so beautiful. There were mountains everywhere. It was all nice and green. I had never expected it would be like this. I thought it would be like a wasteland. My old teacher told me about old beautiful countries that are now classed as wastelands. We drove up through the winding mountains and I could now see for miles. These beautiful images would now stay in my brain forever. I could not believe what I had missed out on my whole life.

After a few hours we came to the other sides of the mountains and in a big gully I could see a small city at least 3 times bigger then The Town of Seaside. It was barricaded by a 5 metre concrete wall that circled around the whole city.
"12 years she has been in the making." Steve stated proudly.
I didn't answer back. I took every detail in. This city was my new life.
We pulled up at the main gate. Steve showed an officer something and he let us through.

After driving for a good 10 minutes we reached a small suburban part of the city. The houses were big two storey houses. They were not cluttered together. In fact they were separated by 20 metres on each side. We pulled up to a nice cream coloured house.
"This is your new house." Steve said as he opened my door.
Once again I was speechless. He handed me a key ring with 1 key on it.
"This is your house key. Everything you need to know is on your table. And that is all for me." He said getting back into his car. I waved him good bye.

That is the end of this chapter. Sorry for taking so long to post it up, I have been extremely busy. Any way hope you al enjoy it. Might post the next section up within a couple of hours if not then maybe tomorrow.

[urlilslave080]

So i have decided that i should finish this story so over the next week or so ill be finishing this story hopefully. Sorry for taking SOOO long i will try to make it better with these upcoming chapters.

CHAPTER 8

I held my key in my hand staring at the dark wooden front door. This was now mine. I mean i thought it was going to be big but not this big. I took the leap of faith and opened the door, my heart was pumping so fast it could've easily jumped out of my chest. I opened the door and stepped into a fully furnished two storey house. It was amazing. I looked around the bottom storey. Everything was fully set up. I had a kitchen, office, lounge room, bathroom and and eating area which was connected to the kitchen. The kitchen and eating are was one big room with a TV, dvd player and surround sound setup so i could watch TV while eating. On the kitchen bench i noticed an envelope with 3 keys and a letter inside them. I pulled out the letter and started reading.

Dear Mr Jack Arloom.
My name is Mr John Lee, I am mayor of New Georgia. This letter is to welcome you into your new home. You will notice 3 keys. One is to your work car, another is to your personal car, and the last is to your safe in your master bedroom. Everything in the house is now yours you are free to do with it what you wish. For you convenience we have hired a maid who will live with you. We have also hired a gardener, pool cleaner, car cleaner and a cleaner who will clean the outside of your house and your windows for you. These hired men and women will come every Thursday. Your maid should arrive tomorrow. Your maid will have her own car. We will pay your maid and the hired workman for you, but you may tip them. You are free to have other people live with you but you must fill out a form. You can always pop into the mayors office to collect these forms. New Georgia now has a form of currency which you will receive a cash pay every week on the Tuesday. A book of laws will be delivered tomorrow, If you have any questions my number has been saved into your mobile which is in your room on charge.
The mayor.
P.S do not drive you work car outside of work, it could worry people.

Woah so much information at once. I tried my best to make sense of everything i must have read over the letter half a dozen times. Why did we have mobile service here but not at town of seaside. That was weird. I grabbed the keys and went up stairs. There were four bedrooms including my own and the maids room, it had a sign on the door saying maids room, I looked inside it. Nothing to fancy a tv, stereo system and dvd player, A bed, and wardrobes. I went through the wardrobes to find heaps of clothing. I went back into the corridor and looked through the other rooms, the were the same as the maids room minus the clothing. There was also a bathroom up stairs.

I walked into my room at the end of the corridor. It was huge at least twice the size of the other rooms. It had an en-suite. Massive TV, sound system, dvd player, ps3 and xbox 360. There was a balcony from my room which over looked the pool. I picked up my phone and put it into my pocket. I went into my walk in wardrobe which was 3-4 metres long to 2 metres wide and at the end stood a safe which was taller then me. I put the key in and turned i. A message came up on he screen "please set code, place your hand on the hand print to you right, then look directly into the camera above the screen. This will take your finger prints and also set a facial recognition for extreme security. After all the scans and i had entered a code the door opened. I opened the door to reveal two .50 desert eagles, a m16, a 50 cal heat vision sniper rifle, a manual for each of the guns, ammo for each gun, a big stack of money by the looks of it a couple thousands worth, a bullet proof vest and a two-way radio. Wow i wonder if everyone has them or just because im in the military.

I went back downstairs to see my cars. I walked into the garage and saw a military Humvee with a machine gun mounted to the top. "that must be my personal use car" i said to myself, giving a cackle after. On the other side was a metallic black dodge charger R/T. I unlocked it and sat down in the drivers seat. I started her up and listen to the purr. I noticed the garage remote on the seat next to me. Its time to take her for a spin. I pulled out of the garage. The engine screamed as i hooned up the road. I was beginning to like where i was. I new i would fit in real fast

[ledzep957]

I'm sorry but how old are you? Look I like the idea but the indroduction makes no sence. No offense but take this as constructive critisim. Next time do some research. Germany is very much allied with the US and they would never ever attack someone for anything related to WW2. Germany is to this day humiliated by the events surronding the rise of Adolf Hitler, the Nazi party, holocaust, and anything to do with WW2. Also Afghanistans gov. is aided heavily by the US and they would not just bomb us.

[ledzep957]

I also forgot to mention Presiden Karzi of Afghanistan came to power by the help of the US. Also Russia would more likely be against the US due to that thing called the Cold War. O and you cant just "blow up" a county. If you build a bomb that big it wouldnt mind borders and a bomb that big would most likely destroy all life on earth.

[urlilslave080]

Thank you for the criticism, i would like to say in my defence that is only a STORY non of it is true. Also i am 20 years old. Sorry if the story does not please you but i never forced you to read it. This story is based purely on my imagination.