Fiction: 2 and 3 Nights of Camping in the Woods

BloodSugerSexMagic · 09-09-2010, 05:20 AM

Chapter 1
Rosa looked around at everyone and feeling nervose took her Pyjama Bottoms in both hands, and bracing her self
pulled them down to her ankles and removed them.

Kate was in her late teens when her friend Sara suggested the idea of a camp out with few friends in the fields.
It was a small village they lived in, quite, inland, and very far from just about anything else.
Needless to say they knew and liked most of the guys and girls their own age.
Kate and her friend Sara had often dared each other to do low risk dare like
wearing no underwear for a day and similar, but not much else.
Anyways
Later that day she call a few people asked her parents bought a few things from the shops. And by the time she layed her head on her soft pillow.She 2 girls and 3 guys were looking forward to tommorow for what they though would be a very good time.

Please post good things and bad so I can inprove
And tell me if you want to go on

Hunterman36 · 09-09-2010, 04:56 PM

Its a little short but it has a good start and leaves people curious for more

BloodSugerSexMagic · 09-10-2010, 02:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hunterman36

Its a little short but it has a good start and leaves people curious for more

thankyou

firenight · 09-10-2010, 08:40 AM

please go on whats next

09-09-2010, 05:20 AM	#1
BloodSugerSexMagic Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 4	2 and 3 Nights of Camping in the Woods Chapter 1 Rosa looked around at everyone and feeling nervose took her Pyjama Bottoms in both hands, and bracing her self pulled them down to her ankles and removed them. Kate was in her late teens when her friend Sara suggested the idea of a camp out with few friends in the fields. It was a small village they lived in, quite, inland, and very far from just about anything else. Needless to say they knew and liked most of the guys and girls their own age. Kate and her friend Sara had often dared each other to do low risk dare like wearing no underwear for a day and similar, but not much else. Anyways Later that day she call a few people asked her parents bought a few things from the shops. And by the time she layed her head on her soft pillow.She 2 girls and 3 guys were looking forward to tommorow for what they though would be a very good time. Please post good things and bad so I can inprove And tell me if you want to go on

09-09-2010, 04:56 PM	#2
Hunterman36 Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: the moon Europa Posts: 646 Blog Entries: 2	Its a little short but it has a good start and leaves people curious for more

09-10-2010, 08:40 AM	#4
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	please go on whats next