Lucky Horshoe Love

[darebunny22]

Thanks for the feedback I have given you a longer chapter now... Enjoy
I arrived outside of collage, this time I wasn't late, clutching my art portfolio and my bag slung over my shoulder. As I got into the building I heard the usual uniform rant off the teachers, "Top button, tie to the top, tuck in your shirt!" "Nathalie Tanner, roll your skirt down NOW!" shouted my form tutor Mrs. Markley. Oh damn I thought, my uniform better be perfect or Mrs. Markley would give me a detention, now it wasn't detention I hated (Boring but Bearable) but detention with Mrs. Markley, now that is worse than torture! I sat there in perfect uniform, waiting for the bell to ring for art. As I escaped (sorry left) from the form room, I rolled up my skirt (for people who dont know what this is, it is folding up the top of the skirt and hiding the fold under your shirt, school skirts are ridiculously long these days *sigh*!)

When I got to art I saw my favourite teacher Miss. Lee. I showed her the sketch of the horse I did. We chatted for a while, talking about the features of a horse, she totally agreed with me on the proportion of the eyes e.t.c and she showed me some of her own sketches and paintings, I was amazed at how 3D and realistic they looked. I went over to my desk, only to find...
To be continued!
What did she find?
Did Miss. Lee have anything else to say?
Find out in the next instalment of Lucky Horseshoe Love!

[zac]

is it drawn by alex?! :O x

[darebunny22]

aha its a secret

[darebunny22]

Hi thanks again for being supportive if you like this chapter please comment just got moved down in my my english study group so i hope my writings still up to scratch!
to find someone in my place, I glared at them at first then realised that his hair was blonde and ruffled my annoyance turned into a heart frenzy, he was chatting to a kid called Mikey, a "baby boy cute" person with large blue eyes and a blonde Bieber cut (thats what turned me off him, a BIEBER CUT... SERIOULSY?!.) My friend Chantelle was gazing at Mikey dreamily, every now and then she'd flutter her hazel eyes, swish her long-ish brown hair and giggle at everything he said. Ahhhh, so its not Justme crushing on someone! I thought. Then Charli came up, "Hey Charli" me, Chantelle and Mikey said... Charli is just about the sweetest person in the school. "Is there room for one more?" she asked politely, "Sure sit here" I said motioning at the gap between me and the edge of the table, which gave me a chance to be closer too Alex. All the time Charli was sitting down Mikey was gazing at her Emma Watson like features Oh-oh slight problem there I thought looking between Chantelle, Mikey and Charli. I scooted up "Hey Alex" I said as calmly as possible "Hey, it was nice seeing you the other day" he said. Chantelle and Vinnie raised their eyebrows at each other across the table. "NO,no,no!" I giggled, "We just...
To be continued
What did they do?
Did the friends belive it?
Find out in the next instalment of Lucky Horseshoe Love

[darebunny22]

If you like Justin Bieber I wasn't trying to offend him OR you so please dont go crazy on me, the character just doesn't like him (and neither do I to be fair) thanks

[daredevil2]

love the story u r very talented keep going

[darebunny22]

THANKYOU FOR THE COMMENTS CARRY ON COMMENTING PLEASEE
"We just met for homework and a coffee!" I said still giggling.
"Ahhh Homework?!" Chantelle said unbelievingly,
"We did, didnt we Alex?"
"Huh..." Alex said, I sighed
"The weekend..."
"Oh yeah that was hot" Alex said turning back to Mikey. Chantelle and Charli giggled,
"Nooooo, the temperature was hot, not what we were doing!" I said exasperatedly, I realised I was fighting a losing battle, so I just had to shut up and get on with my work.
[B]WHAT HAPPENED NEXT???
Apology's for the short chapter the next chapter will be soon and it will be the "Hottest" one yet B]

[tomthedarer]

nice storys by the way, i havent read all of them but i might. you should make a book with like a hundred of them and publish it (i would buy it =]) also though they are complex they are a pleasure to read

[darebunny22]

Thankyou for the comments it really helps the story. So more constructive criticism please

[daredevil2]

i second tomthedarer u should make it a book pls keep going

[darebunny22]

Again a short chapter but I hope you like it!

I undid a button on his shirt tickling his abs, him having been just out in the rain he had little droplets of water nestled in his eyelashes like tears. I nuzzled my head into his warm neck, one more button was open, I just wanted to rip the shirt off him but I told myself "Nice and slowly, Nathalie". His hair was softer than a rabbit, I ruffled my fingers through it just as...

To be continued

Next chapter out soon

P.S I like the idea of a book and comment pleasseee!!!

[darebunny22]

OMG ive got over 1000 views, I know its nothing compared to people who have like a million views But THANKYOU SO MUCH xxx Please Comment On The Story

[fitsexyguy]

Fantastic story so far. It jumps around a bit but it's still interesting. Love that it's short segments and the way you write them is so well done it makes me want to read the next to see what happens. Needs more though, I want to read on :P

[Memories for Life]

This had to be said before you went back to "collage"!

"A collage (From the French: coller, to glue) is a work of formal art, primarily in the visual arts, made from an assemblage of different forms, thus creating a new whole." en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Collage

"A college (Latin: collegium) is an educational institution or a constituent part of an educational institution." en.wikipedia.org/wiki/College

This was bugging me every time you put the word in!

[darebunny22]

Originally Posted by Memories for Life

This had to be said before you went back to "collage"!

OMG how did I not notice this Thank you Memories for Life for pointing this out i'll edit all the posts later