An Exciting Trip To Germany

whoisit? · 03-29-2009, 10:15 AM

This first part of the story is very short, it is just a teaser, it won’t get exciting until at least Part III.

PART I

“This trip is going to be amazing!” Craig shouted as the Year 11 students jumped off of their coach into the blazing German Sun. Craig was just like any normal 16 year old, he enjoyed hanging out with his friends and was interested in girls.
“Craig, you’re in my room with Dan and Jack” Liam told his mate. They grabbed their room key and ran to the elevator and waited to go to Floor 5, they would be the only group from their school on this floor.
“We’re gunna stay up all night playing games right?” Jack asked his roommates.
“Well not all night we’ll need some sleep, but you are right about the games, we are going to have lots of fun,” Liam said to him. Liam was secretly bi-sexual, no body knew he was, but his plan was to have some fun sexual games with his friends on the trip.

10.00pm

“Up to your rooms now! Lights off at 11, ok?” Mr Carlin told the students, who all seemed rather pleased to be allowed to go to their rooms.

Daredevil999 · 03-29-2009, 02:54 PM

could be the basis of a good story
cant wait to see the next part!!

Smile · 03-29-2009, 03:52 PM

This could be good.

I doubt I will read more, but it could be good.

Well written, and lot's of future oppertunitys.

glue · 04-04-2009, 10:23 AM

well this could have been a good story just seems to have disapeared

2/10 but could be 9/10

03-29-2009, 10:15 AM	#1
whoisit? Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 2	An Exciting Trip To Germany This first part of the story is very short, it is just a teaser, it won’t get exciting until at least Part III. PART I “This trip is going to be amazing!” Craig shouted as the Year 11 students jumped off of their coach into the blazing German Sun. Craig was just like any normal 16 year old, he enjoyed hanging out with his friends and was interested in girls. “Craig, you’re in my room with Dan and Jack” Liam told his mate. They grabbed their room key and ran to the elevator and waited to go to Floor 5, they would be the only group from their school on this floor. “We’re gunna stay up all night playing games right?” Jack asked his roommates. “Well not all night we’ll need some sleep, but you are right about the games, we are going to have lots of fun,” Liam said to him. Liam was secretly bi-sexual, no body knew he was, but his plan was to have some fun sexual games with his friends on the trip. 10.00pm “Up to your rooms now! Lights off at 11, ok?” Mr Carlin told the students, who all seemed rather pleased to be allowed to go to their rooms.

03-29-2009, 03:52 PM	#3
Smile Account Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: "I just don't give a fuck" Posts: 1,402 Blog Entries: 6	This could be good. I doubt I will read more, but it could be good. Well written, and lot's of future oppertunitys. __________________ 4 Days Left. Note: If I use "" it is meant to be as a dazed daydream look, not an insult.

04-04-2009, 10:23 AM	#4
glue Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 735 Blog Entries: 6	well this could have been a good story just seems to have disapeared 2/10 but could be 9/10 __________________ WATCH OUT FOR A GLUE RATING OUT OF TEN glue would like to tell everyone reading this to stay sticky as life is to short to become unstuck I'm the Simon Cowell of GetDare Please add me at: Skype: Glue101 8 Years On Getdare!!!!!!

03-29-2009, 02:54 PM	#2
Daredevil999 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: UK Posts: 110	could be the basis of a good story cant wait to see the next part!!