After School [FICTION]

Rob · 04-11-2007, 12:59 PM

Julio Hernandez was new to Central Valley High School from Guatemala. His family recently immigrated to the states legally. Now he is living in Indiana. On his first day of school, Julio was accepted well, especially by the other Hispanic students. On the second day of school, while in math class, one person, Billy passed Julio a note. Billy was the strongest person in the school, a state champion wrestler, and he was a junior.

Julio read the scribbled note by Billy. It said "Cum sea me afthur skool iz ower beehive the gim." Though Billy was a junior in school, he was in a freshman math class. He said it was so he could stay longer and wrestle more, but by this note, Julio could easily see why he was still in high school.

Julio was interested in why Billy wanted to see him after school, so he met Billy where the note specified: behind the gym. Billy and Julio were not alone behind the gym. In fact, Billy was smoking cigarettes with the quarterback, lineback, and another wrestler.

"Tell you what, Mexican" said Billy, "give us ten bucks and we'll give you a cig. What da ya say?"
"No, no me need cigarette." Said Julio, a smart boy, only new to English.
"Fine, then we'll do some things, some... things that would bring anyone great honor in Mexico."

The whole group surrounded the puny freshman. The boy was punched once by each boy. Then, the kicker for the football team came.
"Hey, Billy, I brought you those jock straps you asked for."
"Thanks, Pike." Billy called everyone by their last name.
Then, the five boys stripped Julio bare naked and pulled two jock straps on to the boy. These were the jock straps that people left in the locker room. The other jock straps Pike brought were shoved in Julio's mouth, put over Julio's head, and pulled over Julio's arms. One jock strap was used to tie Julio's hands together. Another entangled Julio's feet.

Then, the boys gave Julio the biggest wedgie ever, and pulled the boy's legs back into the leg holes, using a zip tie to fasten the jock strap tying the feet and the jock strap Julio was wearing together. Then, using a rope, the gang used a tree as a pulley to hang Julio by the tree at the zip tie.

The rope was then fastened to the ground. It was near the end of winter, and still bitingly cold, and Julio was naked, save a few jock straps.

TrekBoy008 · 04-11-2007, 02:47 PM

Very good story. Are you planning on continuing it or is this a standalone?

evanekid · 04-11-2007, 02:51 PM

ths was a gd read

Tessdog · 04-11-2007, 08:09 PM

I am sorry, to much voilence. I know you have other stuff.....

Rob · 04-12-2007, 12:42 PM

This is a stand-alone. I'm thinking about new and different plot & story ideas.

JohnC15 · 05-02-2007, 08:05 PM

Great Story Now Please Finish It Please!!!!!!!!!

JohnC15 · 06-07-2007, 03:31 PM

What happened to Julio?

04-11-2007, 12:59 PM	#1
Rob Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Georgia Posts: 230	After School [FICTION] Julio Hernandez was new to Central Valley High School from Guatemala. His family recently immigrated to the states legally. Now he is living in Indiana. On his first day of school, Julio was accepted well, especially by the other Hispanic students. On the second day of school, while in math class, one person, Billy passed Julio a note. Billy was the strongest person in the school, a state champion wrestler, and he was a junior. Julio read the scribbled note by Billy. It said "Cum sea me afthur skool iz ower beehive the gim." Though Billy was a junior in school, he was in a freshman math class. He said it was so he could stay longer and wrestle more, but by this note, Julio could easily see why he was still in high school. Julio was interested in why Billy wanted to see him after school, so he met Billy where the note specified: behind the gym. Billy and Julio were not alone behind the gym. In fact, Billy was smoking cigarettes with the quarterback, lineback, and another wrestler. "Tell you what, Mexican" said Billy, "give us ten bucks and we'll give you a cig. What da ya say?" "No, no me need cigarette." Said Julio, a smart boy, only new to English. "Fine, then we'll do some things, some... things that would bring anyone great honor in Mexico." The whole group surrounded the puny freshman. The boy was punched once by each boy. Then, the kicker for the football team came. "Hey, Billy, I brought you those jock straps you asked for." "Thanks, Pike." Billy called everyone by their last name. Then, the five boys stripped Julio bare naked and pulled two jock straps on to the boy. These were the jock straps that people left in the locker room. The other jock straps Pike brought were shoved in Julio's mouth, put over Julio's head, and pulled over Julio's arms. One jock strap was used to tie Julio's hands together. Another entangled Julio's feet. Then, the boys gave Julio the biggest wedgie ever, and pulled the boy's legs back into the leg holes, using a zip tie to fasten the jock strap tying the feet and the jock strap Julio was wearing together. Then, using a rope, the gang used a tree as a pulley to hang Julio by the tree at the zip tie. The rope was then fastened to the ground. It was near the end of winter, and still bitingly cold, and Julio was naked, save a few jock straps.

04-11-2007, 02:47 PM	#2
TrekBoy008 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Greater Boston Area Posts: 310	Very good story. Are you planning on continuing it or is this a standalone? __________________ "Words are, in my not so humble opinion, our most inexhaustible source of magic, capable of both inflicting injury and remedying it." ~ Albus Dumbledore (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows)

04-11-2007, 02:51 PM	#3
evanekid Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: England Posts: 77	ths was a gd read __________________ 20 year old male looking for friends or a master/miss. Up for a chat or something more then send a message or add me on msn [email protected]

05-02-2007, 08:05 PM	#6
JohnC15 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 127	Great Story Now Please Finish It Please!!!!!!!!! __________________ http://www.lost.eu/50ed2 Vote on my poll please: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=2923 100 posts and counting!!!!! YEEAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!

06-07-2007, 03:31 PM	#7
JohnC15 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 127	What happened to Julio? __________________ http://www.lost.eu/50ed2 Vote on my poll please: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=2923 100 posts and counting!!!!! YEEAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!

04-11-2007, 08:09 PM	#4
Tessdog Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 118	I am sorry, to much voilence. I know you have other stuff.....

04-12-2007, 12:42 PM	#5
Rob Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Georgia Posts: 230	This is a stand-alone. I'm thinking about new and different plot & story ideas.