[Fiction] Slave Island

[Thank you rachie]

This is my first story here! Please tell me how you like it and make sure to send me all of your comments and suggestions! This first part is pretty long, but the chapters will be shorter in the future. Hope you like it!


Part 1: The Beginning

“Woo hoo!” Nick cheered as his favorite basketball team scored the game-winning goal. It was a typical Monday afternoon for Nick. Unlike most men his age who were working at 2:00 on a Monday, Nick had never worked a day in his life. His father, a wealthy businessman, had recently died, leaving Nick with the family penthouse in New York and enough money to last him a lifetime. Now, Nick spent most of his time doing whatever he wanted. This was usually playing video games alone. However, Nick actually had something to do today. He was going to play poker with his friends Sam, Jessica, and Mark later today.

Nick’s poker games were usually pretty intense. Sam, Nick, Jessica, and Mark had been best friends since they were kids, and nothing was off-limits at their poker games. The group had done everything from strip poker, to sexual truth or dare. The group was so close that Nick, Sam, and Mark had all dated Jessica at one point or another in the last 10 years. Currently, Sam and Jessica were together.

At about 4:15, Nick left his house to go to the game. The location of the poker games rotated from house to house, and this game was supposed to be at Mark’s place. Since Mark only lived a few blocks away, Nick was happy walking instead of getting his limo to pick him up.

When Nick arrived a few minutes later, everyone else was already there. He walked into the large apartment smiling, and he noticed that everyone had been in a whispered conversation before he walked in. They all looked happy, but deep in thought.

“Hey guys! What were you talking about?” Nick asked.

“Oh, nothing really. Just talking about how we wanted to play some sexy truth or dare instead of poker tonight.” Sam responded quickly.

“Oh. Sounds good.” Nick responded, even though he really didn’t believe them. He knew these people well enough to know when they were up to something.

“You’re late!” Jessica yelled, changing the subject. Nick looked at the clock on the wall. 4:32.

“I’m just two minutes late. Calm down.” Nick replied, smiling. “You guys ready to play?”

“You know it!” said Mark, “Since it is my house, I get to go first. Um...truth or dare Sam?”

“I’ll start slowly, I guess. Truth”

“Well I’ll start with a big one. When was the last time you and Jess had sex?” Mark asked, grinning.

“That’s not hard! Last night at my place.” Sam smiled.

“It’s the truth!” Jessica added.

“Ok. Very nice.” Mark said, “It’s your turn, Sam.”

“Jess truth or dare?” Sam asked his girlfriend.

“Truth.”

“Have you had sex with everyone at this table before?”

“Yes, I have had sex with all of you at least once. I lost my virginity to Nick when I was 16 actually.” Jess replied confidently.

“I remember that night very well actually.” Nick said.

“That was fun!” Said Jessica, “Ok, my turn! Nick, truth or dare?”

“I will go with truth.”

“Um... that last girl you dated. Wasn't her name Isabella or something? Anyway, who was better in bed? Me or her?” Jessica asked.

“You definitely!” Replied Nick, grinning. This was already turning out to be one great night so far.

[vafancoulo13]

I like the start! keep it up!

[Demonking]

Looks to have great potential! Can't Waite for the island part

[Thank you rachie]

Thank you all for your comments and suggestions! I have recieved a ton of PMs and they are awsome! Please keep them coming! Here is Part 2! (Please note that I won't usually come out with new parts this quickly. My goal is to post a new part every week.)

Part 2: The Game Continues

“All right. My turn!” Nick smiled. “Truth or dare Jess?”

“Me again? Fine. Truth I guess.”

“Ok. Out of Mark, Sam, and I, who has the biggest dick and who is the best in bed?” Nick asked.

“That’s two truths.” Mark said.

“It’s fine. I’ll answer both.” Jess smilied. “Fuck. Well Nick, you have the biggest dick, and I guess you’re the best in bed too.”

“Really? No!” Mark and Sam shouted at the same time. They had both seen Nick naked many times and they knew that his 10 inch dick was slightly bigger than both of theirs, but they were shocked that Jess thought that he was the best in bed.

“Come on Jess!” Sam said, “We’re dating.”

“I’m sorry Sam, but it’s true. Nick’s pretty damn good.”

“Haha. I knew it guys!” Nick exclaimed happily. “And thank you Jess.”

“No problem Nick! Well, I guess it’s my turn. Truth or dare Sam?” Jessica asked.

“Well, I’ll be brave and choose dare.” Sam grumbled, still mad that his girlfriend had chosen Nick over him.

“Nice! Give me a strip tease right now.” Jess said.

“Easy!” Sam finally smiled as he began taking off his clothes for Jess. For the next five minutes, Nick and Mark watched as Sam began stripping for Jessica. Soon, Sam was fully naked, and his 8 inch package was fully hard.

“That was awesome!” Said Jess, kissing the now naked Sam.

“My turn!” Exclaimed Sam, “Truth or Dare Nick?”

“Oh gosh. Are you still mad at me?” Nick asked, “Well I’ll just choose truth then.”

“Boring! I think, after this, we all have to choose dare.” Mark said.

“ Agreed” Sam said, looking at Nick, “Ok, here is your truth, Nick. Have you ever jerked off or had in a public place before? If so, where?”

“When I was in middle and high school, I used to jerk off in the bathrooms all the time.” Replied Nick, “And I’ve fucked people in restaurant bathrooms before. And one time I had sex in a park. I guess that’s about it.”

“Wow, that’s a lot.” Jess said.

“Yeah. My turn! Mark, your turn for a dare!” Nick said smiling, “Ok. Sam already stripped, now it’s your turn. Give him a strip tease.”

“Seriously?!?! Gross man!” Both Nick and Sam replied.

“This should be fun!” Laughed Jess. Eager to get it over with, Mark quickly stripped for Sam, while Jess and Nick cheered. He was soon naked and his 9 inch dick was exposed.

“Very nice.” Nick joked.

“I’ll get you back for that Nick. Ok Jess, stand on the table and strip for us.”

“I’ve been waiting for this!” Jess laughed while climbing up onto the table. For the next 10 minutes, all three men at the table got to watch as Jessica revealed her gorgeous 34 D Tits and her wet pussy. Jess had a hot body and all of the men were very hard by the time she got done.

“Wow.” Nick said quietly.

“You’ve all seen me naked before guys, there’s no need to stare!” Said Jess jokingly. “My turn! Nick, I think you need to give Mark over there some attention. Strip for him!”

“Very original.” Said Nick.

“Haha! Payback!” Laughed Sam, “Thanks Jess!”

“Just get this over with.” said Mark. Soon, the last clothed member of the group was stripping for his best friend.

“Ok now that that’s over, it’s my turn!” Said Nick, returning to his seat naked, “I have a question for all of you. What were you really talking about when I walked in?” Jess, Sam, and Mark looked at each other, not sure if they should answer the question.

“Well I guess we can tell you.” Sam finally spoke up. “We aren’t really supposed to tell anyone about this, but -

To Be Continued!

Coming soon - Part 3: Answers

“Well I guess we can tell you.” Sam finally spoke up. “We aren’t really supposed to tell anyone about this, but there is this island.”

For the next 20 minutes, the group told Nick about a mysterious vacation spot they had found somewhere in the Pacific Ocean. The very different thing about this island was that it is full of slaves!

So that is a little sneak preview of part 3! As you can see, the whole slave thing starts soon! What did you guys think of part 2?

[Demonking]

Great addition looking forward to reading the next chapter

[Thank you rachie]

Please keep the PMs with suggestions and comments coming! It really inspires me to continue! Just to warn you guys, I have a really busy week so it may be a while before Part 4 comes out. So here is part 3!

Part 3: Answers

“Well I guess we can tell you.” Sam finally spoke up. “We aren’t really supposed to tell anyone about this, but there is this island.”

“Continue” Said Nick impatiently.

For the next 20 minutes, the group told Nick about a mysterious vacation spot they had found somewhere in the Pacific Ocean. It was very private, and only a few hundred people outside of the island knew about it.

The very different thing about this island was that it is full of slaves. For a few million dollars, you could buy a membership to this island and come whenever you want. The island was basically a resort where you could get a slave anytime you wanted. Everyone pretty much was nude the whole time and people had sex everywhere. The resort also had a ton of sexual activities and games for you to do.

“Um. Wow.” Nick said slowly. He was still confused and slightly shocked by what he had just heard. “Are you serious?”

“Yeah.” Jess replied.

“Remember when we were all supposed to go on vacation together, but you got sick and couldn’t come? That’s when we found this island.” Mark added.

“So there’s pretty much all of these slaves that you can do anything you want with?” Nick asked.

“Pretty much. You can rape them, beat them, fuck them, anything. They are trained to please you as much as possible.” Sam said. “What do you think?”

Nick paused for a moment before a huge grin broke out on his face. “When can I go?” Jessica, Mark, and Sam all laughed and the group quickly made plans to go next week. They would fly out on Nick’s private plane and stay for two weeks.

“So... anyone want to continue our game?” Mark asked after the group was done planning.

“Definitely! It was just getting good!” Replied Sam.

“Whose turn is it? Nick asked his question to everybody.” Jessica asked the group. Everybody just shook their heads. “Well I’ll go then. I choose Mark! You can either suck on my toes for one minute or give Nick a blow job!”

“Easy decision!” Laughed Mark while climbing under the table. “You know how much I hate toes, but it’s better than giving Nick a blow job!” For the next minute, Mark sucked on Jessica’s small toes while Nick and Sam watched and cheered. When the minute was up, Mark climbed out from under the table.

“My turn. I want to dare Nick.” Mark smiled. “I dare you to let Jess sit on your face. You have to clean out her ass with your tongue!”

“That’s not bad! Jess has a very hot ass!” Nick smiled. He laid down on the table and Jess soon climbed on his face. Nick quickly began to lick out his former girlfriend’s ass.

“When does he get to stop?” Jess asked, obviously enjoying what Nick was doing.

“When you say so.” Mark responded. After a few minutes of pleasure, Jess was finally satisfied and she climbed off of Nick.

“That was fun!”

“Ok, my turn! I think I will dare Sam. He hasn’t done anything in awhile!” Nick said with an evil grin on his face. “I dare you go downstairs naked and ask the front desk person for an extra towel.”

“WHAT?!?!” Sam screamed. He was not looking forward to doing something this public. Mark lived on the top floor of his apartment building and this dare would involve walking to the end off the hall, riding down 25 floors in the elevator, and walking through the busy lobby to talk to the desk person.

Both Mark and Jessica laughed hysterically. “At least its late at night and you probably won’t see anyone on your way down.” Mark laughed.

“Yeah, but I have to talk to the desk person!” Said Sam angrily. “I’ll be back soon.” Sam got up from the table glaring at Nick and walked to the front door. “If I’m not back in 15 minutes, come find me.”

“Good luck!” Yelled Jess as he was walking out the door.

[Demonking]

I feel like the part about the island was a bit too short but if that was your way of breezing the topic because of something down the line good job . Looking forward to next chapter keep upnthe great writing.

[Thank you rachie]

As always, thanks for the many PMs! They really encourage me to keep writing. I had this next part written yesterday, but I have a really busy week coming up. I wasn't sure if I should post it tonight or wait until I have time to write more. I decided that I should just post it tonight and get it over with. Hope you enjoy!

Part 4:

5 minutes later, Sam ran through the door naked, carrying the towel he had just received. At this sight, Nick, Mark, and Jess all cracked up.

“Nice hard on there Sam.” Jess teased. “How was it?”

“I will get you for that Nick!” Yelled Sam, still out of breath, “That was the most embarrassing thing I have ever done!”

“Good!” Replied Nick with a grin on his face, “That’s exactly what I wanted. Did anyone see you besides the desk person?”

“Yes!” Sam yelled, “A mother and her two children! They opened the elevator door while I was in it. The mother screamed and covered her children's’ eyes!” At this, Nick, Mark, and Jess burst out laughing again. “It’s not funny guys! Fuck! Well now it’s my turn and I plan on getting revenge!”

“Nope!” Nick finally stopped laughing. “Rules say that you can’t dare the person who just dared you! That means you can’t get your revenge!”

“Fuck. I forgot about that rule! Fine then. I just dare Mark.” Sam said, “I dare you to drink my piss straight from my cock.”
“Seriously??” Mark exclaimed, “That’s nasty Sam!”

“Open wide!” Laughed Sam who was already climbing on his chair. Mark finally gave in and opened his mouth. Sam stuck his dick in and began pissing. As soon as Sam’s warm piss hit Mark’s mouth, his face turned sour. After 5 seconds, Mark was already gagging and he looked like he was about to throw up. Finally, Sam was done and he sat back down. Mark swallowed all of the piss.

“That was the nastiest shit I’ve ever done!” Mark yelled.

“I think you secretly liked it” Sam teased.

“Fuck! My mouth still tastes nasty! Can I go get a drink?”

“Not until your next turn!” Sam said.

“Ok my turn!” The game continued for the next 4 hours, until Nick was ready to go.

“Ok. I think I need to get going.” Nick said quietly. Jess had just been tied up by her boyfriend in a dare.

“What?!?” She yelled. Her ball gag had just been removed. “It’s only 10:30, you pussy!”

“I know, I know.” Nick replied calmly. “I just want to be rested for our vacation tomorrow.”

“Fine!” She yelled. “See you tomorrow!” Nick, Sam, Jess, and Mark said their goodbyes and Nick departed. It was going to be a long, exciting day tomorrow.

Coming soon:

When he stepped off the plane, he saw the sexiest thing he had ever seen. Hundreds of naked slaves all serving their masters. This was going to be one amazing trip.

Ok! There it is! As you can see, the island part really comes in the next part! You will have to wait to see what happens! Now, I feel that the interest level for this story has kind of died down so I am going to make a deal with you all. When I get at least 1 reply on the thread and 5 PMs, I will post part 5. Please know that even if I do get the requirements early, the next part won't be out until at least Thursday of next week (10/18). See how quickly you can do it! Thanks!

[Thank you rachie]

I have received a ton of comments and suggestions this week and I would like to thank everybody who sent me something. You guys help me so much! So, here is part 8 (my favorite part so far!)

Part 8: Submission

Nick picked up the phone beside his bed and quickly pressed the Front Desk key. A desk person answered, “Hello sir. What can I do for you today?”

“Yes, I would like a Low Slave sent to my condo.”

“Certainly. Any requests for specific slaves or just specific features?”

“Um... I don’t have a specific slave, but I would like a blonde girl with big tits, and a shaved pussy.”

“Of course.” The front desk lady replied, “She should be there shortly.” About five minutes later, Nick heard his doorbell ring. He ran downstairs and opened the door. A naked girl who looked to be about 25, was on her hands and knees. She looked just like Nick had requested. She had obviously dyed blonde hair, fairly big tits (Nick wasn’t really the best judge of boob sizes, but they looked to be about 34 c cups), and a beautiful, wet, shaved pussy.

“Get upstairs now!” He yelled. At first, his harsh, commanding tone surprised him. He was really getting into this whole master thing. The girl scampered up the stairs as fast as she could and waited obediently at the top. Nick joined her and led her to his bedroom. “Get on my bed and start rubbing your pussy.” The girl did as she was told, and she soon reached down and started rubbing her pussy quickly. She looked very sexy and she was moaning loudly. Nick started to take off his clothes to fuck her, but then an idea came to him. There was a punishment room in his house, right? Well, maybe we could do a little bondage. Nick had never tried BDSM before and the idea had always excited him.

“Stop,” Nick commanded. As soon as he said this, his slave dropped her hands to her side. “Get in my punishment room now!” The slave tried to hide her emotions, but Nick detected a sense of disappointment when he said this. She was probably punished all of the time and she thought she was going to get a break today. The girl was obviously very familiar with these types of condos, and she knew where the punishment room was. Like a good little slut, she climbed off the bed and crawled out of the bedroom, her tits swinging lightly.

When the couple reached the punishment room, Nick took a look around. The room was smaller, but perfect for one slave. One one wall, there were several chains and locks for hanging. On the other three walls, there were various sex tools and pieces of punishment equipment. In the center of the room, there was a wooden table with straps and chains hooked to every corner. Nick quickly decided that he wanted to have his slave hanging. With his slut stationary on the floor, he moved the table off to one side of the room. Then, he dragged his slave over to the hanging wall. He hooked her hands to the top chains and her feet down at the bottom, facing toward the center of the room. He was ready to begin the BDSM.

What do you guys think?

[shola]

ooo, Just found the story and love it!
Any idea when the next installment will be out?

[Thank you rachie]

I'm glad you like the story! I have a pretty busy week but I will try to get the next part up sometime this week!

[Demonking]

Great addition looking forward to more. Can't Waite to see wha he does with the slave.

[Qevor]

Was this thread forgotten? :P

[Thank you rachie]

Please keep the name ideas coming! For anyone who missed it, I am looking for a first name for a female character in the story. Please PM me any ideas. I will use the winner's name and mention their username in the post. I need entries by tomorrow night! Thanks, and remember to keep posting on here! All comments and suggestions are appreciated!

[shola]

Love the story, and would love more even more! Why must you make the edge of my seat crack beneath all my weight being concentrated on it? why?