Fiction: I. Slave

Dr Penguin321 · 11-22-2014, 02:26 PM

I am going to start writing a story on this thread. It will include:
Truth or dare,
Slavery (f dom),
Femdom,
Humiliation,
Some sexual content,
Forced feminisation.

The main character, from whom the point of view will be from, is called jake. He is a 16 year old boy, average size, blonde with blue eyes. I will introduce other characters when they come in.

I will inform you beforehand the slavery won't start straight away but they'll allways be some sort of action going on. I know what I will be writing but I will leave it a bit before posting the story to give chance for you to tell me anything else you would like in the story or any other suggestions or changes!

Master Rayne · 11-22-2014, 03:50 PM

my first suggestion is to avoid having an underaged teen as the main character of a story such as yours. you don't want to pass for a pedophile, dontcha?

Dr Penguin321 · 11-23-2014, 07:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Master Rayne

my first suggestion is to avoid having an underaged teen as the main character of a story such as yours. you don't want to pass for a pedophile, dontcha?

Ok. I have changed the ages. Any more suggestions? I will write this later this evening.
Btw how quickly would you like this story to go?

Master Rayne · 11-23-2014, 07:38 AM

well maybe 1 chapter each week... sounds fair to me

Dr Penguin321 · 11-23-2014, 09:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Master Rayne

well maybe 1 chapter each week... sounds fair to me

Well I'm thinking about doing around 2-3 chapters a week, but slightly smaller chapters. But after every chapter I will wait until someone had replied before posting the next one so I know you're reading.

But if its ok with you lot I'm going to make sure i don't go to quickly, like having public nudity in the first scene, im instead going at a more detailed, interesting pace.

Dr Penguin321 · 11-23-2014, 11:15 AM

I tripped over his foot and landed face first on the floor, winding myself. I knew what was coming. I felt a sharp, painful feeling around my groin. I was lifted up by my boxers and hung on a coat hanger - the bullies walked of laughing.

I wouldn't say I was a nerd, really unpopular, or a kid that was constantly getting picked on. But in my school, Jefersville High, you were either really popular, or unpopular. There was no inbetween!

SNAP!

My boxers ripped and I, again, fell face first on the floor.
'Jake' I heard my mate shout. Yep that's me, Jake, Jake Jefferson (JJ as my close friends commonly called me). Blonde hair, dark blue eyes. Not built-up and muscly like the bullies if just encounter, but not fat either. I guess I had an average body for a 16 year old boy.
'JJ!' My friend Matt shouted again. I looked up:
Matt had been my best mate since infant school. He was taller and thinner than me. And he wasn't as unpopular as me. He has dark brown hair and intelligent green eyes, which suited his personality - he was like a human encyclopaedia. For a while I've wondered whether he was homosexual, but I'd never asked him.
'Jake are you alright?' His mum was Irish so he had a bit of accent.
'Yeah I'm fine Matt' I reply. 'Lets go to maths'

So this was my life, but it was all about to change...

slaveboy 95 · 11-22-2014, 03:50 PM

Sounds good I look forward to it

11-22-2014, 02:26 PM	#1
Dr Penguin321 Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 51	I. Slave I am going to start writing a story on this thread. It will include: Truth or dare, Slavery (f dom), Femdom, Humiliation, Some sexual content, Forced feminisation. The main character, from whom the point of view will be from, is called jake. He is a 16 year old boy, average size, blonde with blue eyes. I will introduce other characters when they come in. I will inform you beforehand the slavery won't start straight away but they'll allways be some sort of action going on. I know what I will be writing but I will leave it a bit before posting the story to give chance for you to tell me anything else you would like in the story or any other suggestions or changes! Last edited by Dr Penguin321; 11-23-2014 at 07:09 AM.

11-22-2014, 03:50 PM	#2
Master Rayne Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Location: I'm Canadian. If you have a problem with that, GET LOST! Posts: 170	my first suggestion is to avoid having an underaged teen as the main character of a story such as yours. you don't want to pass for a pedophile, dontcha? __________________ I am the Master of my own Universe. Sophitia and Katt are my slaves. Tira is our pet. They only live, breath and exist for me. everything else is emptiness. NEVER send them messages stating you want to own them! If you do, you're in for trouble! I mean it. Seriously. They are mine. No Kidding. Allowed: I dom my slaves and my pet in any ways I see fit. Forbidden: Scat, piss, blood, illegal, zoophilia, public, extreme, interracial.

11-23-2014, 07:38 AM	#4
Master Rayne Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2014 Location: I'm Canadian. If you have a problem with that, GET LOST! Posts: 170	well maybe 1 chapter each week... sounds fair to me __________________ I am the Master of my own Universe. Sophitia and Katt are my slaves. Tira is our pet. They only live, breath and exist for me. everything else is emptiness. NEVER send them messages stating you want to own them! If you do, you're in for trouble! I mean it. Seriously. They are mine. No Kidding. Allowed: I dom my slaves and my pet in any ways I see fit. Forbidden: Scat, piss, blood, illegal, zoophilia, public, extreme, interracial.

11-23-2014, 11:15 AM	#6
Dr Penguin321 Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 51	Chapter 1: My Life I tripped over his foot and landed face first on the floor, winding myself. I knew what was coming. I felt a sharp, painful feeling around my groin. I was lifted up by my boxers and hung on a coat hanger - the bullies walked of laughing. I wouldn't say I was a nerd, really unpopular, or a kid that was constantly getting picked on. But in my school, Jefersville High, you were either really popular, or unpopular. There was no inbetween! SNAP! My boxers ripped and I, again, fell face first on the floor. 'Jake' I heard my mate shout. Yep that's me, Jake, Jake Jefferson (JJ as my close friends commonly called me). Blonde hair, dark blue eyes. Not built-up and muscly like the bullies if just encounter, but not fat either. I guess I had an average body for a 16 year old boy. 'JJ!' My friend Matt shouted again. I looked up: Matt had been my best mate since infant school. He was taller and thinner than me. And he wasn't as unpopular as me. He has dark brown hair and intelligent green eyes, which suited his personality - he was like a human encyclopaedia. For a while I've wondered whether he was homosexual, but I'd never asked him. 'Jake are you alright?' His mum was Irish so he had a bit of accent. 'Yeah I'm fine Matt' I reply. 'Lets go to maths' So this was my life, but it was all about to change...

11-22-2014, 03:50 PM	#7
slaveboy 95 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 156	Sounds good I look forward to it __________________ likes: wedgies, friends, kik, chat dislikes: piss, cum, 6th form, humiliation, long, semi public & picture limits: public, poop,messie,illegal, lots of pain & blood http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...29#post2356529