Fiction: Ryan's 'Little' Girls - Page 2

Raging Rob · 07-26-2009, 03:10 PM

Great story so far, just on suggestion is that, in my personal opinion, I'd rather see him so how get free and the game of Truth or Dare continues, rather than the story being about him being the girls' slave.

OHHYEAH16 · 07-30-2009, 01:25 PM

Its a great story. Keep it coming!

gamma526 · 08-10-2009, 06:38 AM

I'm liking it

can't wait For more

cameem · 08-10-2009, 07:14 AM

I like it! But, like a lkot of other people, I believe the ages should be moved up because the thought that TEN year olds are doing that is PRETTY disturbing!!

owned · 01-03-2010, 07:46 PM

yea if you moved the ages to like 14/15 for the girls and like 17 for him it would be alot better. i like the story but i find it quite disturbing knowing my little brother (who is 11) and the girls in his class.

jackfromnyc · 01-03-2010, 08:45 PM

yeah, i'm disturbed by the ages as well.

07-30-2009, 01:25 PM	#17
OHHYEAH16 Account Banned Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 9	Its a great story. Keep it coming! __________________ LETS HAVE FUN!!! Likes: Anything New! Suprise me =] Limits: Pee, Poo, Family, Illegal, and Public

08-10-2009, 06:38 AM	#18
gamma526 Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 43	I'm liking it can't wait For more __________________ "IT'S A TRAP"

07-26-2009, 03:10 PM	#16
Raging Rob Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 93	Great story so far, just on suggestion is that, in my personal opinion, I'd rather see him so how get free and the game of Truth or Dare continues, rather than the story being about him being the girls' slave.

08-10-2009, 07:14 AM	#19
cameem Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Texas Posts: 97	I like it! But, like a lkot of other people, I believe the ages should be moved up because the thought that TEN year olds are doing that is PRETTY disturbing!!

01-03-2010, 07:46 PM	#20
owned Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: usa Posts: 182 Blog Entries: 1	yea if you moved the ages to like 14/15 for the girls and like 17 for him it would be alot better. i like the story but i find it quite disturbing knowing my little brother (who is 11) and the girls in his class.

01-03-2010, 08:45 PM	#21
jackfromnyc Account Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 232	yeah, i'm disturbed by the ages as well.