Swimming Pool - Page 2

ShinyDemon · 07-25-2009, 11:07 AM

Really good story, and the second part is a vast improvement with the inclusion of paragraphs !!

Keep it up !!!

seth18 · 07-26-2009, 02:35 PM

Great story, a few unbelieveable areas, but that's okay.

222jkt · 11-21-2009, 04:08 PM

you should CONTINUE!!!!

OhSoFine · 01-20-2010, 06:25 PM

MOREEE PLZ! THis is a great story PLEASE ADD TO IT

hex killer8 · 01-21-2010, 10:02 PM

keep it up your doing good i like part 2 the most right now.

truth · 01-21-2010, 10:44 PM

very sexy lucky guy

07-26-2009, 02:35 PM	#17
seth18 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Google Posts: 196	Great story, a few unbelieveable areas, but that's okay. __________________ Here we go; Cool people use a ;; Duh! Likes: Candy. Dislikes: You. Limits: 'You have to cause I say so'

11-21-2009, 04:08 PM	#18
222jkt Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Cali USA Posts: 117	you should CONTINUE!!!! __________________ 3-in-1 16/F/USA x2 ; 15/M/USA LIKES: Crossdressing, semi-public, car-involved, nakedness, at night, siblings ; Crossdressing, semi-public, car-involved, nudity, siblings DISLIKES: Ilegial, messy, permanet, Ilegial, messy, permanent,

01-20-2010, 06:25 PM	#19
OhSoFine Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 17	More! MOREEE PLZ! THis is a great story PLEASE ADD TO IT

01-21-2010, 10:02 PM	#20
hex killer8 Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 11 Blog Entries: 1	love it keep it up your doing good i like part 2 the most right now.

07-25-2009, 11:07 AM	#16
ShinyDemon getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 277	Really good story, and the second part is a vast improvement with the inclusion of paragraphs !! Keep it up !!!

01-21-2010, 10:44 PM	#21
truth Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 76	very sexy lucky guy