Stockholm Syndrome - Page 7

lilwetslave · 06-07-2010, 11:28 PM

I cant speak for the others
But I love it. And i shall deffinetly be on the look out for more of your wonderful stories.

surfergirl1989 · 06-08-2010, 12:29 PM

It was a very good story.

lang_men · 06-09-2010, 06:49 AM

That was great, really loved it!

Dicedarefan666 · 06-10-2010, 12:46 AM

garbage... complete and utter rubbish...

It was fantastic until the bit in italics. But then it's a Dexter ripoff, and I can't stand those...

So I'm gonna call that a lazy ending.

Had you just left out the italics it would have left the readers feeling that same sense of moral ambiguity that we feel when we watch the first season of Dexter, how does such a nice looking man, kill those people, and manage to have us root for him?

But as soon as you mention the stuff in italics it just loses so much of its originality, which is why I loved this story from the beginning.

The following paragraph is in spoiler tags because it does in fact contain spoilers. If you like the show Dexter and haven't seen season 4, watch that before reading the following paragraph if you don't want the ending ruined for you. So

-SPOILER ALERT- -SPOILER ALERT-

Spoiler:

On a related note, I'm going to assume that Dexter was in fact the show you were talking about, and mention, that it is in fact my favorite show as well. I'm looking forward to season 5 with a zeal that is difficult for me to put into words, which I do for most things quite easily. How will Dexter raise Harrison now that he's been born into blood like his father? What happens to Astor and Cody? How will Dexter satisfy his dark passenger now that he's a single father? These questions plague me.

timetoshine · 06-11-2010, 11:59 PM

I thought it was a great story, but it had so much more potential. you should have kept it going, or maybe write a prequel or a sequel.

molten man · 06-14-2010, 10:30 PM

It was good while it lasted, though i would have preferred it continuing.. The end was lame!!

ofthenorth · 06-15-2010, 12:46 AM

Seeing as some of you were quite disappointed in the ending of the story I am continuing it as a new story. Being as it takes a new approach to things, and no it's not gonna be a Dexter ripoff as it may have seemed by the ending, I figured a new story post would be appropriate. It'll be mostly first person telling of the story but with some flashes to other styles.

It'll probably start off fairly dark due to things going on personally and I write according to how I feel but it'll change over time. It'll include heavy sadism, some death, some sexual themes, suspense, cliffhangers of course (maybe literally at times), fast updates, and of course I'll incorporate some truth or dare into it to go along with the site. You all know my writing style, I never stick to one genre, so whether or not you like it from the beginning just tell me, politely, what you prefer and I'll see what I can do to accommodate your reading desires. The first chapter will be posted momentarily after this reply is posted. The title is "Resurfacing of Joshua O'Malley" hope you all enjoy.

molten man · 06-15-2010, 03:35 PM

Lets see how that one pans out!!

timetoshine · 06-16-2010, 05:56 PM

ill look forward to it.

Dicedarefan666 · 06-26-2010, 10:11 PM

yup, the new story has much sexiness, I'm a fan.

You have redeemed yourself Mr. North

fleetfeetclogger12 · 06-27-2011, 04:17 PM

mr north i have a message for you:

i love u.

you entertain me like no other.

u should really publish this.

i love you.

if i could see your face in person, i would kiss you and ride u for hours at a time.

Jonfron · 10-26-2011, 04:07 PM

I do not care what the others said. They are just upset because they think you are doing a rip off. You are a talented writer, and I enjoyed this story.

06-07-2010, 11:28 PM	#91
lilwetslave Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Canada Posts: 183	I cant speak for the others But I love it. And i shall deffinetly be on the look out for more of your wonderful stories. __________________ Likes : Humiliation, pain, breast and pussy torture, degration, orgasm control, day to day control Dislikes : Public, pee Limits : Perment, family/friends, poo, illegal. messy Toys : 2dildos g-spot vibrator bullet vib Hitatchi wand Anal vibrator collar with attached cuffs ankle and wrist cuffs with straps for under mattress Handcuffs Ball gag Blindfold Cloths pins 25/F/Canada No pics/cam Owned/Married

06-08-2010, 12:29 PM	#92
surfergirl1989 Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Where the waves are amazing! Posts: 31	It was a very good story. __________________ Surfing expresses ... a pure yearning for visceral, physical contact with the natural world. MATT WARSHAW One of the greatest things about the sport of surfing is that you need only three things: your body, a surf-board, and a wave. NAIMA GREEN

06-09-2010, 06:49 AM	#93
lang_men Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: England Posts: 25	That was great, really loved it! __________________ 18 year old male, looking for girls to cam with and dares to do. Likes: Most things, particularly love doing things on cam Limits: Extreme scat, extreme pain, messy, noisy, extreme public (apart from cam), parents, getting caught, other people irl. [email protected]

06-10-2010, 12:46 AM	#94
Dicedarefan666 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 403	Wow garbage... complete and utter rubbish... It was fantastic until the bit in italics. But then it's a Dexter ripoff, and I can't stand those... So I'm gonna call that a lazy ending. Had you just left out the italics it would have left the readers feeling that same sense of moral ambiguity that we feel when we watch the first season of Dexter, how does such a nice looking man, kill those people, and manage to have us root for him? But as soon as you mention the stuff in italics it just loses so much of its originality, which is why I loved this story from the beginning. The following paragraph is in spoiler tags because it does in fact contain spoilers. If you like the show Dexter and haven't seen season 4, watch that before reading the following paragraph if you don't want the ending ruined for you. So -SPOILER ALERT- -SPOILER ALERT- Spoiler: On a related note, I'm going to assume that Dexter was in fact the show you were talking about, and mention, that it is in fact my favorite show as well. I'm looking forward to season 5 with a zeal that is difficult for me to put into words, which I do for most things quite easily. How will Dexter raise Harrison now that he's been born into blood like his father? What happens to Astor and Cody? How will Dexter satisfy his dark passenger now that he's a single father? These questions plague me. __________________ Likes: Light to moderate pain - Giving dares - Asking questions Dislikes: Hard pain - Jacking off - Semi-public - Wedgies Hates: Extreme pain - Urine - Full Public - Involving other people Limits (Will never do these) Permanent damage - Involving Family - Scat - Involving Animals - Crossdressing - Eating Gross stuff

06-14-2010, 10:30 PM	#96
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	It was good while it lasted, though i would have preferred it continuing.. The end was lame!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

06-11-2010, 11:59 PM	#95
timetoshine Distinguished Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Canada Posts: 559	I thought it was a great story, but it had so much more potential. you should have kept it going, or maybe write a prequel or a sequel.

06-15-2010, 12:46 AM	#97
ofthenorth Account Banned Join Date: May 2008 Location: Midwest Posts: 656	Seeing as some of you were quite disappointed in the ending of the story I am continuing it as a new story. Being as it takes a new approach to things, and no it's not gonna be a Dexter ripoff as it may have seemed by the ending, I figured a new story post would be appropriate. It'll be mostly first person telling of the story but with some flashes to other styles. It'll probably start off fairly dark due to things going on personally and I write according to how I feel but it'll change over time. It'll include heavy sadism, some death, some sexual themes, suspense, cliffhangers of course (maybe literally at times), fast updates, and of course I'll incorporate some truth or dare into it to go along with the site. You all know my writing style, I never stick to one genre, so whether or not you like it from the beginning just tell me, politely, what you prefer and I'll see what I can do to accommodate your reading desires. The first chapter will be posted momentarily after this reply is posted. The title is "Resurfacing of Joshua O'Malley" hope you all enjoy. __________________ 27, Male, Dominant

06-15-2010, 03:35 PM	#98
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Lets see how that one pans out!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

06-16-2010, 05:56 PM	#99
timetoshine Distinguished Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Canada Posts: 559	ill look forward to it.

06-26-2010, 10:11 PM	#100
Dicedarefan666 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 403	yup, the new story has much sexiness, I'm a fan. You have redeemed yourself Mr. North __________________ Likes: Light to moderate pain - Giving dares - Asking questions Dislikes: Hard pain - Jacking off - Semi-public - Wedgies Hates: Extreme pain - Urine - Full Public - Involving other people Limits (Will never do these) Permanent damage - Involving Family - Scat - Involving Animals - Crossdressing - Eating Gross stuff

06-27-2011, 04:17 PM	#101
fleetfeetclogger12 Junior Member Join Date: May 2011 Location: O_O was i supposed to tell!? Posts: 27	mr north i have a message for you: i love u. you entertain me like no other. u should really publish this. i love you. if i could see your face in person, i would kiss you and ride u for hours at a time.

10-26-2011, 04:07 PM	#102
Jonfron getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 361 Blog Entries: 7	I do not care what the others said. They are just upset because they think you are doing a rip off. You are a talented writer, and I enjoyed this story. __________________ likes slight humiliation, pet play, slight pain, bondage limits: Family, friends, skat, permanent, social suicide Have I been good or naughty? You tell me. Are you enough to control me? Female/ bi curious/22/US height 5'3 weight 130lb bra size 36 C