Fiction: It All Started With An E-mail - Page 2

PerfectlyImperfect · 06-20-2012, 07:36 PM

I didn't want to cheat you, just saying also excited, then we got those too short of posts un-allowed, so I have to write something else as well, Anyway, as of so far I really do like your story, it has a good base, and oo with a new twist already on its way. lol. sweetness. Glad you decided to write this. Peace and Respect. Knowledge should be free, Fuck the Police, I like drugs. And, Under the light with my hope of rebirth and salvation I bless you, With true happiness and a long life. Cause I am that good.

slutpup · 06-21-2012, 12:11 AM

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Originally Posted by PerfectlyImperfect

I didn't want to cheat you, just saying also excited, then we got those too short of posts un-allowed, so I have to write something else as well, Anyway, as of so far I really do like your story, it has a good base, and oo with a new twist already on its way. lol. sweetness. Glad you decided to write this. Peace and Respect. Knowledge should be free, Fuck the Police, I like drugs. And, Under the light with my hope of rebirth and salvation I bless you, With true happiness and a long life. Cause I am that good.

Thanks!! Yes, there's already a twist. And a good one too. The next part should be up by tomorrow night at the latest. And yes, knowledge should be free! I like drugs too so your right. Fuck the damn police. I don't care! Thanks for the long life and happiness! You are that good! Lol

kmacroxs · 06-21-2012, 08:30 AM

This is great. Looking forward to part 3.

slutpup · 06-21-2012, 06:24 PM

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This is great. Looking forward to part 3.

Thanks!

Part 3 should be up in the next few minutes!

PerfectlyImperfect · 06-21-2012, 06:35 PM

anticipation! Snaps More invisible words! You have no idea how often I do this, rofl.

slutpup · 06-21-2012, 06:57 PM

Many thanks to Komodo Jones for doing the editing!

Thanks Jake_NN_Bake, PerfectlyImperfect, zeke, and kmacroxs for your feedback on Part 2!

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It All Started With An E-mail
Part 3: The Note

Little did she know that Justin, Sarah's most hated enemy, got everything on camera.

Everything went on like a first day of school usually would. Sarah and John had five classes together: Advanced English 9, Band, P.E., Family and Consumer Science (I'll call it FACS from now on) 9, and Chemistry. Sarah also made a new friend, Emily. Emily and Sarah had every class together so they would see each other every day. All of them had the same lunch period, including Justin to Sarah's disappointment. Sarah introduced John to Emily and they became friends too. The whole day was awesome except for the last period, Chemistry. Emily, John, and Sarah got seats right next to each other, with John in the middle and Sarah to the left of John and Emily to the right of John. The class was boring until the last 15 minutes of class when Justin, who was sitting next to Sarah, passed her a note. It read,

Hello Sarah.

I thought that it would be a very good idea for you to be really nice to me, considering I have a very embarrassing video of you. Let's just say that my locker is C-58, right next to yours. Let's also say that I saw you put something very interesting in locker C-56, or John's locker. Now, if you don't listen to every one of my demands, I will show everyone that video. Now I know that it's not that embarrassing, but I think a lot of people would really like to know why you would put your underwear in John's locker. At least I want to know. Here are my demands:

1) Tell me why you put your underwear in John's locker.

2) Tell me why you're not wearing any underwear right now.

3) Tell me why you chose to wear a dress and no underwear.

Oh and if I find out that you are lying, you will get punished.

Love, Justin

Sarah couldn't believe this. "What if Justin wants to be my Master too?" she asks herself. First John, now Justin. Could this get any worse? "Yes it could. They could find out about each other. They could join forces and use teamwork to make my life a living hell," she told herself. "I guess I will comply with whatever Justin and John want, so I don't completely lose control," she thought to herself. She started writing the note. After reading it over, changing a few things here and there, she handed it to Justin. It read,

Dear Justin,

I really don't know how you caught me doing that. I made sure that nobody was around. At least, I thought nobody was around. Anyway, I will listen to your demands.

1) I was told by my Master to put my underwear in locker C-56.

2) My Master told me to take the underwear, that I was wearing, off and put it in locker C-56.

3) Again, my Master told me to wear a dress or skirt today.

I promise you that I'm not lying and I can even show you the e-mail I got from him.

Love, Sarah

Sarah saw Justin read the note then laugh quietly to himself. Then he started writing a reply back to her. *Ring, Ring, Ring* The bell rang signaling the end of class. Sarah packed up her stuff and was about to leave when she heard her name being called.

"Sarah! Wait!" Justin yelled to her.

"What Justin? I have to catch a bus." Sarah told him, annoyed.

"I know. So do I. We ride the same bus. Remember?" Justin told her, smirking.

"Oh yeah. Well what do you want?" Sarah asked him.

"I wanted to give you this," Justin said as he handed Sarah a note.

"What is it?" Sarah asked him, confused.

"Just read it," Justin said as he walked away.

"Okay. Whatever." Sarah said aloud. Sarah got to her locker and made it on the bus just in time. She stared in horror as she saw the only available seat was the one next to Justin. She sat down and pulled out the note. It read,

Dear Sarah,

You have another Master? Well this is going to be fun because now you're gonna have two. The first thing I want you to do is..........

TO BE CONTINUED.........
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What is Sarah's first task from Justin?
Will Sarah ever find out who her first Master is?
Keep reading 'It All Started With An E-mail' to find out!

~So it doesn't get confusing with the notes/e-mails, red is from Sarah, blue is from Justin, and green is from Sarah's first Master (yet to be revealed)~

PerfectlyImperfect · 06-21-2012, 07:20 PM

and green is from Sarah's first Master (yet to be revealed)~

I see no green chat?

But either way so far so good, now in even more anticipation for the next chapter, lolz. keep up the good work bro.

wedgiegirl290 · 06-21-2012, 09:13 PM

This is a very good story, you are a truly talented writer. I hope you continue this story till the end.
P.S. pleasewrite more

slutpup · 06-21-2012, 09:39 PM

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Originally Posted by PerfectlyImperfect

anticipation! Snaps More invisible words! You have no idea how often I do this, rofl.

I hope you liked it!

Hehe. I didn't even know you did that until I quoted you and I saw things written that were not there before. lmao

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Originally Posted by PerfectlyImperfect

and green is from Sarah's first Master (yet to be revealed)~

I see no green chat?

But either way so far so good, now in even more anticipation for the next chapter, lolz. keep up the good work bro.

The green is for future parts when all 3 of them will be talking at once. And thanks. I'm so glad you like it!!!

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Originally Posted by wedgiegirl290

This is a very good story, you are a truly talented writer. I hope you continue this story till the end.
P.S. pleasewrite more

Thank you!! I will. The next part should be up no later than Saturday.

Maleslave21 · 06-21-2012, 10:49 PM

Great story and great writing one of my new fav stories now

slutjuice · 06-22-2012, 06:47 AM

now this will be interesting! enemy master and best friend master! i hope John finds out about Justin!

em52388 · 06-22-2012, 09:16 AM

I suspect that it's all Justin. I'll keep my reasons to myself for the time being. But if I'm right we will know in due time.

PerfectlyImperfect · 06-22-2012, 10:40 AM

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Originally Posted by em52388

I suspect that it's all Justin. I'll keep my reasons to myself for the time being. But if I'm right we will know in due time.

I agree with you, John just seems so oblivious. If it's not all Justin though, I doubt John has anything to do with it.

em52388 · 06-22-2012, 10:07 PM

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Originally Posted by PerfectlyImperfect

I agree with you, John just seems so oblivious. If it's not all Justin though, I doubt John has anything to do with it.

I have evidence from the story so far that supports my suspicion I just don't want to bring it to light because I don't want to create any spoilers if I'm right.

On a note to the author this is a great story, and no matter what direction it takes I'm sure you will keep the excellent quality. Keep up the good work.

slutpup · 06-22-2012, 10:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Maleslave21

Great story and great writing one of my new fav stories now

Thanks!

I'm glad to hear it's your favorite!

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Originally Posted by slutjuice

now this will be interesting! enemy master and best friend master! i hope John finds out about Justin!

You'll just have to wait and see. Lol

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Originally Posted by em52388

I suspect that it's all Justin. I'll keep my reasons to myself for the time being. But if I'm right we will know in due time.

Yes, we will know if you're right. It could possibly be the next part. Or it could be the part after that. Lol

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Originally Posted by PerfectlyImperfect

I agree with you, John just seems so oblivious. If it's not all Justin though, I doubt John has anything to do with it.

John does SEEM oblivous but don't you think that could be an act?

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Originally Posted by em52388

I have evidence from the story so far that supports my suspicion I just don't want to bring it to light because I don't want to create any spoilers if I'm right.

On a note to the author this is a great story, and no matter what direction it takes I'm sure you will keep the excellent quality. Keep up the good work.

Thanks!

06-20-2012, 07:36 PM	#16
PerfectlyImperfect Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: In the mountains, Above the clouds. Posts: 623	I didn't want to cheat you, just saying also excited, then we got those too short of posts un-allowed, so I have to write something else as well, Anyway, as of so far I really do like your story, it has a good base, and oo with a new twist already on its way. lol. sweetness. Glad you decided to write this. Peace and Respect. Knowledge should be free, Fuck the Police, I like drugs. And, Under the light with my hope of rebirth and salvation I bless you, With true happiness and a long life. Cause I am that good. __________________ 27/M/ -8 hrs Limits: Family/Friends, Permanent, Blood, Public, Too painful, vomit, scat, pee, too messy, male, Hand Writing, Tooth Paste. I have Mad Respect for Ice20 The boy who came up with "Loser has to.." All other variations are Fake as all Hell. Ice20 I got your back. "Looking for a female to care about" http://bdsmtest.org/r/7551050

06-21-2012, 08:30 AM	#18
kmacroxs Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: USA Posts: 625	This is great. Looking forward to part 3. __________________ "I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death" - Patrick Henry - March 23, 1775 Justin Bieber sucks (not what I really wanted to say). Spoiler: Justin Bieber's voice -> my ears get raped Spoiler: me: "make it stop, make it stop, please make it stop"

06-21-2012, 06:35 PM	#20
PerfectlyImperfect Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: In the mountains, Above the clouds. Posts: 623	anticipation! Snaps More invisible words! You have no idea how often I do this, rofl. __________________ 27/M/ -8 hrs Limits: Family/Friends, Permanent, Blood, Public, Too painful, vomit, scat, pee, too messy, male, Hand Writing, Tooth Paste. I have Mad Respect for Ice20 The boy who came up with "Loser has to.." All other variations are Fake as all Hell. Ice20 I got your back. "Looking for a female to care about" http://bdsmtest.org/r/7551050

06-21-2012, 06:57 PM	#21
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	Part 3: The Note Many thanks to Komodo Jones for doing the editing! Thanks Jake_NN_Bake, PerfectlyImperfect, zeke, and kmacroxs for your feedback on Part 2! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It All Started With An E-mail Part 3: The Note Little did she know that Justin, Sarah's most hated enemy, got everything on camera. Everything went on like a first day of school usually would. Sarah and John had five classes together: Advanced English 9, Band, P.E., Family and Consumer Science (I'll call it FACS from now on) 9, and Chemistry. Sarah also made a new friend, Emily. Emily and Sarah had every class together so they would see each other every day. All of them had the same lunch period, including Justin to Sarah's disappointment. Sarah introduced John to Emily and they became friends too. The whole day was awesome except for the last period, Chemistry. Emily, John, and Sarah got seats right next to each other, with John in the middle and Sarah to the left of John and Emily to the right of John. The class was boring until the last 15 minutes of class when Justin, who was sitting next to Sarah, passed her a note. It read, Hello Sarah. I thought that it would be a very good idea for you to be really nice to me, considering I have a very embarrassing video of you. Let's just say that my locker is C-58, right next to yours. Let's also say that I saw you put something very interesting in locker C-56, or John's locker. Now, if you don't listen to every one of my demands, I will show everyone that video. Now I know that it's not that embarrassing, but I think a lot of people would really like to know why you would put your underwear in John's locker. At least I want to know. Here are my demands: 1) Tell me why you put your underwear in John's locker. 2) Tell me why you're not wearing any underwear right now. 3) Tell me why you chose to wear a dress and no underwear. Oh and if I find out that you are lying, you will get punished. Love, Justin Sarah couldn't believe this. "What if Justin wants to be my Master too?" she asks herself. First John, now Justin. Could this get any worse? "Yes it could. They could find out about each other. They could join forces and use teamwork to make my life a living hell," she told herself. "I guess I will comply with whatever Justin and John want, so I don't completely lose control," she thought to herself. She started writing the note. After reading it over, changing a few things here and there, she handed it to Justin. It read, Dear Justin, I really don't know how you caught me doing that. I made sure that nobody was around. At least, I thought nobody was around. Anyway, I will listen to your demands. 1) I was told by my Master to put my underwear in locker C-56. 2) My Master told me to take the underwear, that I was wearing, off and put it in locker C-56. 3) Again, my Master told me to wear a dress or skirt today. I promise you that I'm not lying and I can even show you the e-mail I got from him. Love, Sarah Sarah saw Justin read the note then laugh quietly to himself. Then he started writing a reply back to her. Ring, Ring, Ring The bell rang signaling the end of class. Sarah packed up her stuff and was about to leave when she heard her name being called. "Sarah! Wait!" Justin yelled to her. "What Justin? I have to catch a bus." Sarah told him, annoyed. "I know. So do I. We ride the same bus. Remember?" Justin told her, smirking. "Oh yeah. Well what do you want?" Sarah asked him. "I wanted to give you this," Justin said as he handed Sarah a note. "What is it?" Sarah asked him, confused. "Just read it," Justin said as he walked away. "Okay. Whatever." Sarah said aloud. Sarah got to her locker and made it on the bus just in time. She stared in horror as she saw the only available seat was the one next to Justin. She sat down and pulled out the note. It read, Dear Sarah, You have another Master? Well this is going to be fun because now you're gonna have two. The first thing I want you to do is.......... TO BE CONTINUED......... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ What is Sarah's first task from Justin? Will Sarah ever find out who her first Master is? Keep reading 'It All Started With An E-mail' to find out! ~So it doesn't get confusing with the notes/e-mails, red is from Sarah, blue is from Justin, and green is from Sarah's first Master (yet to be revealed)~ __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me. Last edited by slutpup; 06-21-2012 at 07:03 PM.

06-21-2012, 07:20 PM	#22
PerfectlyImperfect Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: In the mountains, Above the clouds. Posts: 623	and green is from Sarah's first Master (yet to be revealed)~ I see no green chat? But either way so far so good, now in even more anticipation for the next chapter, lolz. keep up the good work bro. __________________ 27/M/ -8 hrs Limits: Family/Friends, Permanent, Blood, Public, Too painful, vomit, scat, pee, too messy, male, Hand Writing, Tooth Paste. I have Mad Respect for Ice20 The boy who came up with "Loser has to.." All other variations are Fake as all Hell. Ice20 I got your back. "Looking for a female to care about" http://bdsmtest.org/r/7551050

06-21-2012, 09:13 PM	#23
wedgiegirl290 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 307	This is a very good story, you are a truly talented writer. I hope you continue this story till the end. P.S. pleasewrite more

06-21-2012, 10:49 PM	#25
Maleslave21 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 149	Great story and great writing one of my new fav stories now __________________ Like: wedgies, crossdressing, orgasm denial, bondage, anal, cum eating, public, hidden public, public humiliation and sleeping dares Limits: poop, permanent Items: panties, yoga pants, mini skirt, clothespins, ball gag, o ring gag with attached nipple clamps, pink collar, slut collar, dog bowl, handcuffs, anal beads, butt plug, small didldo, massive suction cup dildo and a remote controlled vibrating plug

06-22-2012, 06:47 AM	#26
slutjuice Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: USA Posts: 523	now this will be interesting! enemy master and best friend master! i hope John finds out about Justin! __________________ FAVORITE!: lesbian stuff (I have lovely female roommate to help) Likes: pain, friends, public, holding items, long term, ruined orgasms, bondage. Limits: illegal, some permanent, pics, cam. PM me anything you want me to write with sharpie on my body.

06-22-2012, 09:16 AM	#27
em52388 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Southern Illinois Posts: 172	I suspect that it's all Justin. I'll keep my reasons to myself for the time being. But if I'm right we will know in due time. __________________ Trust is important but if you aren't willing to get to know someone how will you ever know if you can trust them?