03-26-2013, 09:55 AM | #121 |
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Yes, they will see won't they?
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03-26-2013, 11:47 AM | #122 |
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I love it keep doing the good work.
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03-27-2013, 06:04 AM | #123 |
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great story
I love this story. I can't wait for the next part
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03-28-2013, 05:37 AM | #124 |
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Thanks for all the feedback, keep it coming.
It was just before 9 and we arrived at the club. The abandoned warehouse stood before us without the showing of the secrets it held within. We approached the entrance. Nerves were shooting through me mixed with the excitement. For the last 3 years I'd wanted to become a member of this club and now I was almost certain it was about to happen. We walked in and we were back in the reception area, the purple backdrop and decorations, the red fur carpet and the gleaming red furniture. Its amazing how much the expression 'Don't judge a book by its cover' applied here. Everything was modern, spotless and sexy and hidden within such a run down building. There was noone at the reception and the door to the left was locked. However there was a buzzer on the desk which looked a lot like a doorbell. I pressed it and within seconds someone appeared. It wasn't Rachel this time, it was a guy. 'Hi there, you must be the girls everyone is talking about, the ones who supplied tonight's entertainment. I'm Adam, Rachel's bf and co president of this society. Nice to meet you.' Adam was about 6 foot, slim but not muscular, short black hair, and although he wasn't ridiculously powerful he somehow gave off quite a dominating appearance. I introduced myself as everyone else did along the line. 'Well, come on in then, and make yourself comfortable. Everyone inside is currently a pledge apart from me, Gary, Kev, Rosy and Rachel.' He keyed in a code behind the desk and the door swung open. As I walked in I was struck with awe. Near the entrance was a massive social area, The black leather sofas with purple drapes over them with the red fur carpet. There was currently 10 other people in the room, 6 guys and 4 girls. A small bar was in the corner which was being served by a large fit guy, clearly worked out and about 6"4. He must have been Gary, the guy Adam had mentioned earlier. Me and Lisa went up to the bar and ordered a bottle of white wine with 5 glasses. 'That's £5 for you two beautiful ladies.' I blushed lightly while handing over the money. I went back to the group who were talking to two of the lads. 'Hey, James, Rob, this is Sarah and Lisa.' We said hello and sat down next to them. Rob was quite a small guy but glowed in confidence. He was probably only about 5 foot 8 but was slim and athletic. His long blonde hair flowed down to his shoulders and his smile seemed to just light up the atmosphere. James on the other hand was physically well built, about 6 foot with brown hair spiked slightly at the front. However unlike Rob he seemed very shy and intimidated. Yet he still would of had to complete 2 tasks to have gotten here. I drifted out of the conversation. I took a better look at the surroundings, outside and past the social area and bar there was a large space, it had some tables, and horses but mostly it was fairly empty except for a few hooks and rings spread out and hanging from the ceiling. The carpet stopped before the section and was replaced with smooth tiled floor with some mats. I guess it was just far easier to clean. Across on one wall was a massive pornography section, there was magazines, videos ranging through every different possible fetish. Along from that was a toy section. It was full of dildos, vibes, cuffs, rope, paddles, whips, chains, strapons, plugs and pretty much anything you could have wanted. On the opposite walls there was more bondage stuff, there was a cross at one point and even different sized and designed cages. Also a small circular metal staircase ran up to a few rooms upstairs which I guessed is where they kept all the formal stuff to do with the club such as paperwork. There was also a lot of small rooms towards the back wall which almost looked like prison cells. They had a metal door and a small pull back window to look into it. I guessed these were for private tasks and sessions. At that point as I was staring over Rachel walked out of one of the rooms. She quickly saw us and came over. 'Hello my new beautiful women. You did a fantastic job, they came around a few hours ago and we've just about managed to calm them down. We've already told them we'll let them out and drop them off wherever they'd like before midnight. We shouldn't take longer than that.' 'What are we actually planning to do with them.' I asked, slightly worried, hoping it wasn't too extreme as I was basically responsible for whatever happened to them. 'Well, you're about to find out. But it won't be their greatest experience. I know you're probably a bit guilty but over the years you will come to see that this is a fairly common and understood arrangement within the societies. Don't worry about it and just try to enjoy the night. And think whatever you choose to do, they wouldn't give a second thought about doing it if its the other way round. Just try to relax and enjoy it.' Amazingly despite Rachel just telling me that we were going to put them through an ordeal, I did somehow feel better about it. I'm not sure if it was just Rachel's soothing commanding voice or the realization that this was common occurrence. Rachel stepped into the center of the room. And attached a small microphone to the top of her shirt. 'OK, who is ready for tonight's entertainment?' Her voice boomed across the room. 'Today we have 15 new pledges joining the society.' A big cheer came from everyone. 'Each of you has managed to do what 63 pledges could not, you have each completed 2 tasks and are now moments away from becoming one of us.' Wow, 63 people had failed to make it this far. Rachel continued 'Now you are just one minor step away from being one of us. It is time for the INITIATION CEREMONY.' Rachel screamed the last two words and they echoed around the room. At that moment two of the doors at the back flew open....... What was the initiation ceremony? 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03-28-2013, 01:29 PM | #125 |
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What or who is coming?
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03-31-2013, 04:12 PM | #126 |
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Need more please
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04-01-2013, 02:18 AM | #127 |
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Wow, great writing. Please continue.
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04-01-2013, 02:10 PM | #128 |
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Very nice chapter can't wait for the next. Keep up the great work.
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04-02-2013, 05:03 AM | #129 |
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At that moment two of the doors at the back flew open. A guy and girl appeared out of the door, these must have been Kev and Rosy. Rosy was a small girl with long brown hair but seemed full of confidence and her figure was slender and sexy. Kev was slightly overweight with short blond hair. They were each holding a lead and as they stepped to the side I saw that the other end of the leads were attached to a collar, around the neck of two naked girls, the girls we'd captured earlier. Both were on all fours, gagged with their hands cuffed together. 'On the left side we have Miranda.' Rachel started talking and indicated the larger girl to her left. 'And on the right side we have Kimberly. These two are both new members of the BDSM society.' Light boos and hisses spread through the room. 'But thanks to 5 of our own fantastic new pledges they are the entertainment and activity for your initiation ceremony. To my left there is a dish full of small envelopes.' Rachel indicated a small glass bowl on the table to her right, which I could of sworn was not there a minute ago. 'To join our society all you have to do is take one of the envelopes at random, pick one of our two volunteers,' A small laugh echoed around the room, 'and perform whats written inside. Simple enough. Do we have a volunteer to go first?' A few hands shot up to the air. Rachel pointed to one of the girls. 'Tell everyone your name and then take an envelope, read it aloud and perform the task on one of our two lovely guests.' 'Hi, I'm Sophie.' Sophie picked up an envelope out of the pile, slowly opened it and read aloud. 'Take any of our toys off the shelf and use it to spank one of our guests 20 times.' Only now did I actually appreciate, these weren't hard tasks for us, we'd completed our main tasks, these were to make an example of our rival society and a way of accepting us into the club. Sophie walked over to where all the toys were and started looking at the whips and paddles. She eventually settled on a paddle with a cut out heart shaped hole on it. She walked over to the two girls and decided to choose Kimberly. She stood behind her and then with a tremendous crack the paddle collided with Kimberly's ass. One after another the paddle came crashing back down with everyone cheering and Kimberly shouting into a gag as Miranda looked away. Finally after 20 hits everyone cheered as Sophie returned the paddle and took her seat back with everyone else. 'Well done Sophie.' Rachel spoke into the mic again. 'You are now officially a member of the club. Turn around Kim so we can all see her work.' Unwillingly Kim eventually turned around to reveal her bright red ass with some small white hearts dotted across it. 'So who's next up?' Pretty much everyone in the room offered but Rachel picked one of the guys we were sat with. 'So whats your name?' 'My name's Rob.' He selected another envelope and read aloud. 'Spit 3 times in the face of one of the guests.' A few people laughed. Rob decided to choose Miranda who looked disappointed to be chosen. Rob knelt in front of Miranda and then three times in a row spat directly in the face of Miranda who unsuccessfully tried to turn away as her face was covered in saliva. 'Congratulations Rob. You are now one of us.' Everyone cheered again. Rachel selected another girl from the remaining pledges who then stepped forward. 'Say your name and then take an envelope.' 'I'm Dani, nice to meet everyone.' She took an envelope out of the bowl, opened it and then read aloud like the two before. 'Attach nipple clamps to one of our guests for the remainder of the ceremony.' Everyone cheered again as Dani took some nipple clamps with connecting chain from the selection of toys and bondage equipment. Dani also chose Miranda out of the two girls and attached the clamps ruthlessly to the unprepared nipples of Miranda who screamed into her gag as everybody laughed. 'Well done Dani, welcome to the club.' Slowly one after another Rachel selected individuals out of the 15. Tasks varied from a tickling session which James gave to Kimberly to the insertion of a giant butt-plug which a girl called Sally forced into Miranda's ass. Eventually only 5 people remained and I doubted that it was a coincidence but it was the 5 of us. 'Now, only 5 people remain. And these 5 girls are the girls that delivered our guests to this party. They've done a fantastic job so I am willing to give them the option, they do not have to choose an envelope. For delivering Kim and Miranda here we are willing to let you skip initiation. However if you still want to then we still will allow you to choose an envelope. It's your decision girls. Do you want to humiliate our rivals any further?' What will the 5 of us do? What's left in the envelopes? How will the week of slavery continue? Keep reading to find out |
04-02-2013, 05:40 AM | #130 |
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i have a feeling that there are going to be more envolopes and even more dildos butpugs and whips for the rivles
i put it all in to word and look http://speedcap.net/sharing/screen.p...362e8a4ede.png
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04-02-2013, 05:51 AM | #131 |
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wow, 38 pages and 20,000 already and not even half way through.
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04-02-2013, 06:00 AM | #132 |
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Fantastic story! Keep it up!
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04-02-2013, 12:11 PM | #133 |
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Excellent job, and such a cliffhanger.
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04-02-2013, 07:29 PM | #134 |
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YEAH!! More fuel for my addiction...
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04-03-2013, 05:45 AM | #135 |
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OMG I love this story sooooo much
Hope the pledges do pick the envelopes and they regret their actions now they're facing payback. After all, revenge is a dish best served cold...
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