Fiction: The Reign of the females - Page 3

juicy · 07-15-2010, 03:46 AM

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Originally Posted by dalbo94

"Now for cake.." she said with a giddy giggle. The cake was a medium size with chocolate frosting. Amanda then cut off 1 fourth of the cake. And slided the rest of it to Evan, gave him a fork and sat a glass pitcher full of milk on the able and put a cup next to it."This is me and Chrona's portion, you get the rest, what you don't eat goes in your underwear tonight as you sleep." said Amanda with a grin.. Evan grabbed the fork and began eating the cake. He hadn't used a fork in so long it was hard at first, but he eventually got the hang of it. He could here giggling as he struggled, it just made him even more nervous.

haha I didn't notice this for the first time... but it should be hear...

I'm loving this story, and the new writing style is much easier to follow (layout and all)
keep it up

dared to perfection · 07-15-2010, 07:05 AM

theres a part of me very deep down that is hoping this story is an accurate prediction of the future.. after 2 years until the machine is turned on i'll be 20 and then another 4 in dormant sleep i'll be 24! not too bad an age to spend the rest of my life as a toy

dalbo94 · 07-15-2010, 11:45 PM

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Originally Posted by dared to perfection

theres a part of me very deep down that is hoping this story is an accurate prediction of the future.. after 2 years until the machine is turned on i'll be 20 and then another 4 in dormant sleep i'll be 24! not too bad an age to spend the rest of my life as a toy

lol me and you too buddy =P

Uranium · 07-16-2010, 11:48 PM

Love this story! Can't wait for the next part. (:

dalbo94 · 07-18-2010, 12:38 AM

On the way to the event, Evan had to sit on Amanda's lap. No doubt a tactic made to humiliate him. As they pull up to the event Evan realizes it is kind of like a carnival, or a fair. He saw groups of women walking around enjoying all it had to offer. As they walked up to where their supposed Evan saw what seemed to be an obstacle course. There were 8 courses set up. It seemed to be like a race. The first obstacle was a wooden bench with 5 dildos on it. It looked like this.

(Im sorry my original illustration was messed up by this thread) Both ends were the smallest. The 2 inner 1's were slightly bigger, and the middle 1 was the biggest.

The next obstacle seemed to be foam counter like Amanda's, and next to it was a stand holding an enema bague. Then after that he saw what seem to be bathroom stalls. After he saw another bench that seemed to have cuffs, and through the cuffs you could press a button that activates a spanking machine of some sort. The longer you press the button the harder and faster it will spank, and went it reaches absolute maximum the machine will stop and the cuffs will stop.The last thing he saw was a table with lotion on it. He could guess what that was for.

Amanda:Heh this is the competition. Finish the course before the others do.
Evan:Y-yes Mommy..

Evan noticed flocks of women begin gather around the area. An announcer lady came on and started explaining everything. After she was done some slave girls dressed in nurse outfits stepped up covering the insertion part of the enema with coconut oil. Finally everybody got on their starting line.

Announcer:ON YOUR MARK..GET SET...GO!!!

Evan and the other contestants ran to the bench. Evan quickly sat on the first dildo. It was small so the insertion was easy. On the second dildo it was a little harder. He heard himself begin to moan, but he saw another slave already on the third dildo so he hurried and got to the 3rd dildo. He could hear himself moan loudly as he went down on it. He wanted to cum so bad, but if he did it before the final obstacle, he would be disqualified. He finally reached the bottom and he could see the guy next to him was already getting off it. The others were still on the second. He started getting off it as well, but it was a little hard.The last 2 were easy after the 3rd one. Him and the next to him ran to the enema bague where they were given their enemas while everyone else was still on the dildo bench. It would just be them. After the enema Evan waddled over to the the bathroom stall careful not to drop any water. They both entered the stalls at about the same time. The doors locked themselves shut. They wouldn't re open until the tank at the bottom is completely full. It took Evan a second to get it all out but he did. When he exited the stall he noticed that the guy next to him was still in the stall. He quickly ran to the spanking machine and he got cuffed in. The guy behind him rushed out of the stall as Evan began to push on the button. The machine began to slow and lightly paddle his ass.In about a minute or 2 it was on medium. Evan enjoyed the feeling, but tried not to enjoy it to much. He could tell his neck to neck competitor wasn't enjoying it one bit. The machine was near it's end. The other guy was close to tears, and Evan was close to orgasm.The Machines finally stop and the 2 neck to to neck competitors run to the desks with lotion. They both squirted it into their hands and began to stroke themselves, careful not to look at each other. Evan was still horny from the spanking machine, but it has been a long time since he's actually jacked off. In an attempt to cum he closed his eye's imagined himself having sex with christian. Her riding him. Him riding her. Making out with each other. The dream was amazing. Then..he came. He noticed it, and as quick as he could sprinted through the finish line. The large Groups of women began to cheer, not including the other competitor's mistresses. He won.

dalbo94 · 07-19-2010, 10:16 PM

no feedback? come on =O

Demon Thief · 07-19-2010, 10:28 PM

The competition seemed rushed, but it was still good.

fitsexyguy · 07-20-2010, 05:35 AM

Wow this is a great story so far :P I look forward to more!

Honestman · 07-20-2010, 10:24 AM

Wow. That is a good story. I loved the twist with the girlfriend. Please update. I have to admit, you are a very good writer. Keep going.

chalk · 07-20-2010, 10:00 PM

keep going! seriously, this stuff is good and I wanna keep reading it

bobg55 · 07-30-2010, 10:29 PM

this is a great story. i really want to see more.

Ozpossum · 08-08-2010, 12:45 PM

i like this pls write more

Honestman · 08-10-2010, 10:17 PM

Wow. This is some seriously good stuff here. Please continue!!!

Honestman · 08-21-2010, 10:16 PM

I wish an update would come soon. It's been like, two weeks. Maybe he has been kidnapped by ninjas and is being held prisoner in an underwater/underground (yes it it half in water and half in the dirt under the water) lair and they want the world to bow to them before they give him up,.... Or they want to trade him for spare socks. Oh well. Easy come, easily traded life for socks. That sucks. Great now I'm thinking of dirty socks. Can they please let him go so I can get this image out of my head. Please continue story or I will capture you and trade you for socks again. Argh, why am I thinking of socks? Oh well. :/

bobg55 · 09-07-2010, 09:22 PM

I love the story a really want it to continue!

07-16-2010, 11:48 PM	#34
Uranium Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: in your heart. Posts: 22	Love this story! Can't wait for the next part. (: __________________ the girl who still doesn't know and doesn't want to know how to reach orgasm. (:

07-18-2010, 12:38 AM	#35
dalbo94 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 118	Chapter 9 READY, SET GO!! On the way to the event, Evan had to sit on Amanda's lap. No doubt a tactic made to humiliate him. As they pull up to the event Evan realizes it is kind of like a carnival, or a fair. He saw groups of women walking around enjoying all it had to offer. As they walked up to where their supposed Evan saw what seemed to be an obstacle course. There were 8 courses set up. It seemed to be like a race. The first obstacle was a wooden bench with 5 dildos on it. It looked like this. (Im sorry my original illustration was messed up by this thread) Both ends were the smallest. The 2 inner 1's were slightly bigger, and the middle 1 was the biggest. The next obstacle seemed to be foam counter like Amanda's, and next to it was a stand holding an enema bague. Then after that he saw what seem to be bathroom stalls. After he saw another bench that seemed to have cuffs, and through the cuffs you could press a button that activates a spanking machine of some sort. The longer you press the button the harder and faster it will spank, and went it reaches absolute maximum the machine will stop and the cuffs will stop.The last thing he saw was a table with lotion on it. He could guess what that was for. Amanda:Heh this is the competition. Finish the course before the others do. Evan:Y-yes Mommy.. Evan noticed flocks of women begin gather around the area. An announcer lady came on and started explaining everything. After she was done some slave girls dressed in nurse outfits stepped up covering the insertion part of the enema with coconut oil. Finally everybody got on their starting line. Announcer:ON YOUR MARK..GET SET...GO!!! Evan and the other contestants ran to the bench. Evan quickly sat on the first dildo. It was small so the insertion was easy. On the second dildo it was a little harder. He heard himself begin to moan, but he saw another slave already on the third dildo so he hurried and got to the 3rd dildo. He could hear himself moan loudly as he went down on it. He wanted to cum so bad, but if he did it before the final obstacle, he would be disqualified. He finally reached the bottom and he could see the guy next to him was already getting off it. The others were still on the second. He started getting off it as well, but it was a little hard.The last 2 were easy after the 3rd one. Him and the next to him ran to the enema bague where they were given their enemas while everyone else was still on the dildo bench. It would just be them. After the enema Evan waddled over to the the bathroom stall careful not to drop any water. They both entered the stalls at about the same time. The doors locked themselves shut. They wouldn't re open until the tank at the bottom is completely full. It took Evan a second to get it all out but he did. When he exited the stall he noticed that the guy next to him was still in the stall. He quickly ran to the spanking machine and he got cuffed in. The guy behind him rushed out of the stall as Evan began to push on the button. The machine began to slow and lightly paddle his ass.In about a minute or 2 it was on medium. Evan enjoyed the feeling, but tried not to enjoy it to much. He could tell his neck to neck competitor wasn't enjoying it one bit. The machine was near it's end. The other guy was close to tears, and Evan was close to orgasm.The Machines finally stop and the 2 neck to to neck competitors run to the desks with lotion. They both squirted it into their hands and began to stroke themselves, careful not to look at each other. Evan was still horny from the spanking machine, but it has been a long time since he's actually jacked off. In an attempt to cum he closed his eye's imagined himself having sex with christian. Her riding him. Him riding her. Making out with each other. The dream was amazing. Then..he came. He noticed it, and as quick as he could sprinted through the finish line. The large Groups of women began to cheer, not including the other competitor's mistresses. He won. __________________ Limits:Public, feces, urine, family, extreme pain, diapers, and CBT likes:anal, nipple tease, spanking, crossdressing(panties under clothes only), candle wax, and babying(doesn't mean diapers, it means be treated like a little kid) Masochist for life Last edited by dalbo94; 07-18-2010 at 12:40 AM.

07-19-2010, 10:16 PM	#36
dalbo94 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 118	no feedback? come on =O __________________ Limits:Public, feces, urine, family, extreme pain, diapers, and CBT likes:anal, nipple tease, spanking, crossdressing(panties under clothes only), candle wax, and babying(doesn't mean diapers, it means be treated like a little kid) Masochist for life

07-19-2010, 10:28 PM	#37
Demon Thief getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In the US Posts: 1,012	The competition seemed rushed, but it was still good. __________________ "How many seconds in eternity?" And the shepherd's boy says, "this is a mountain of pure diamond. It takes an hour to climb it and an hour to go around it. Every hundred years a little bird comes and sharpens its beak on the diamond mountain. And when the entire mountain is chiseled away then the first second of eternity will have passed." You must think that's a hell of a long time. Personally, I think that's a hell of a bird. 14 years on GetDare!

07-20-2010, 05:35 AM	#38
fitsexyguy Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: N/A Posts: 543 Blog Entries: 4	Wow this is a great story so far :P I look forward to more! __________________ -

07-15-2010, 07:05 AM	#32
dared to perfection getDare Devil Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: the best parts of the UK Posts: 1,090 Blog Entries: 1	theres a part of me very deep down that is hoping this story is an accurate prediction of the future.. after 2 years until the machine is turned on i'll be 20 and then another 4 in dormant sleep i'll be 24! not too bad an age to spend the rest of my life as a toy

07-20-2010, 10:24 AM	#39
Honestman Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: In my house, in a town, In a state of the USA Posts: 51	Wow. That is a good story. I loved the twist with the girlfriend. Please update. I have to admit, you are a very good writer. Keep going.

07-20-2010, 10:00 PM	#40
chalk Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: the US Posts: 48 Blog Entries: 1	keep going! seriously, this stuff is good and I wanna keep reading it __________________ \|Male\|US\|16\| Loves maybe/dislikes Will not do

07-30-2010, 10:29 PM	#41
bobg55 Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 8	this is a great story. i really want to see more.

08-08-2010, 12:45 PM	#42
Ozpossum Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 130	i like this pls write more

08-10-2010, 10:17 PM	#43
Honestman Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: In my house, in a town, In a state of the USA Posts: 51	Wow. This is some seriously good stuff here. Please continue!!! __________________ EPIC FAIL!!!!!!

08-21-2010, 10:16 PM	#44
Honestman Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: In my house, in a town, In a state of the USA Posts: 51	I wish an update would come soon. It's been like, two weeks. Maybe he has been kidnapped by ninjas and is being held prisoner in an underwater/underground (yes it it half in water and half in the dirt under the water) lair and they want the world to bow to them before they give him up,.... Or they want to trade him for spare socks. Oh well. Easy come, easily traded life for socks. That sucks. Great now I'm thinking of dirty socks. Can they please let him go so I can get this image out of my head. Please continue story or I will capture you and trade you for socks again. Argh, why am I thinking of socks? Oh well. :/

09-07-2010, 09:22 PM	#45
bobg55 Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 8	I love the story a really want it to continue!