Brat Acadamy - Page 4

sexyhoe · 10-24-2014, 07:02 PM

Great story! Keep going i am enjoying it.

issabella · 10-24-2014, 07:08 PM

another great addition thanks for the longer additions lol keep it going!!!!

LitDarkness · 10-24-2014, 07:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by greenmist13

another great addition thanks for the longer additions lol keep it going!!!!

Attchually it's the same length it always has been, just looks longer due to the spacing. They're the same length, the spacing just decieves the eyes.

issabella · 10-24-2014, 11:02 PM

ahhhhhh i seee i see xD

LitDarkness · 10-25-2014, 09:24 AM

Chapter 30:Not Real

I heard laughing. I was wondering what was so funny.

I told myself,"Ignore it." as I heard more laughter but I couldn't resist.

I walked towards the laughter into the teachers lounge. I hid behind furniture to avoid being seen, even though I knew a girl covered in duct tape wouldn't be hard to see.

I saw Mr.Varghese talking to another teacher, "Madonna, she thinks she knows better than the teacher."

The other teacher laughed,"So that's why you sent her here?"

He rubbed his hands together, "Yes, and all I had to do was change her grades to do it." I was wishing I had a recorder to record him.

The other teacher flipped through a wad of cash, "And we get payed more for more brats that are entered here."

Mr.Varghese stood up and turned around. I dunked as I was right behind him, "I could've swore I heard something." He walked towards me, I scooted back until my head was touching the wall.

He kicked the couch pushing it on me. I bit my cheeks in order not to scream.

He walked out of the room but dropped his cell phone.

I thought,"Yes." I quickly grabbed the cell phone and called the police.

At the end of the conversation they said they'd investigate the next day.

I couldn't wait for people to find out about this hell house.

LitDarkness · 10-25-2014, 10:02 AM

Chapter 31: Investigation
I snuck back to my room. Mr.Varghese was standing waiting for me. “Well, well, well, look who left her room. I knew you’d leave.” He clenched his teeth, “You will learn, Madonna!”
He lifted me over his shoulder and took my outside.

I shivered as he forced my back against the cold hard pole. He wrapped tape around my body. I tried to move but, there was no way I could even stretch.

He laughed, “Night Madonna.” He went inside the warm building. It was hard for me to sleep as I was only protected from the cold by two layers of tape.

When I finally fell asleep I was woke by sirens.

A police officer untied me, “Who tied you here ma’am.”

I trembled, if Mr.Varghese got away with this he was going to kill me. “I don’t know his first name but his last name is Varghese.”

He patted me on the back, “Ma’am we’re going to take you inside.” He escorted me inside.
Mr.Varghese was staring at me. He shook the police officers hand, “Hello officer my name is Turner Varghese. What brings you here today?” I hated that man and his charm. I knew I was going to be the one in major trouble at the end of this.

The police officer must have felt my unease because he patted me on the back, “Well, Mr.Varghese we need to investigate this school, so may I kindly ask you and everyone else to get out.”

His face dropped, “That may take a while as this school is big and the students are deep sleepers and disobedient.”

The police officer smiled, “That’s okay, I can investigate with people in here then, I’m negotiable.”

He glared at me, “I can get them out, you just may have to wait a while.”
The police officer ignored him and started scanning the school.

Mr.Varghese whispered in my ear, “You’ll be lucky to breath when I’m done with you, if anything happens.”

qt31415926 · 10-25-2014, 01:22 PM

Tension!! I like it.

issabella · 10-25-2014, 01:30 PM

ohhhhh i cant wait for the next edition keep it going!!!

silkysatin · 10-25-2014, 02:36 PM

This is awesome!!! I like your writing style!!! I also like shorter chapters and the suspense they create, making it hard to wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!!

silkysatin · 10-25-2014, 05:27 PM

This is awesome!!! I like your writing style!!! I also like shorter chapters and the suspense they create, making it hard to wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!!

LitDarkness · 10-26-2014, 08:30 PM

Chapter 31: Discovery

Mr.Varghese grabbed my ear and pulled me outside. He glared at me, "Listen and listen good, you are not funny, you are not clever, I will make your life a living hell for this."

I smiled,"Face it you know, you're going to get caught, so you're trying to scare me."

He hit me on the back causing me to shriek in pain. "I will kill you."

The police officer came out escorting teachers out, they were in handcuffs. He lead them outside. Other police cars parked at the school. Teachers were forced into the police cars.
The police officer looked at Mr.Varghese, "Records indicate you're the leader of this establishment, you are under arrest."

He protested,"I have a wife, and kids, you can't arrest me, what about them."

The police officer handcuffed him,"You should of thought of that before committing a crime."
He escorted Mr.Varghese to his police car. The police cars left except for that one officers police car.

He stayed and got all the students out of the building. He sat beside us until our parents came.

I was relieved when I got to go home.

LitDarkness · 10-26-2014, 08:39 PM

I hoped you guys liked the story. I know it was short but I tried to make it detailed and interesting as possible.

Any feedback and constructive criticism will be appreciated.

Rose_Angel · 10-26-2014, 08:44 PM

I suspected an end was coming.

It was great for what it was worth! Thanks!

chocolatedispenser · 10-26-2014, 08:51 PM

It was really cool!
you could make a second part (hint hint!)

ClaraAnne · 10-26-2014, 09:59 PM

I really liked it. Was the 'Academy' word purposely misspelled as 'Acadamy'? It was great you could update the story regularly. :-) Thanks for spending the time to write it.

10-24-2014, 07:08 PM	#47
issabella Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 103 Blog Entries: 1	another great addition thanks for the longer additions lol keep it going!!!! __________________ Loves: crossdressing, wedgie, light mess (food, hidden public Likes:short term blackmail, ssmi-hidden public, bandage, Dislikes: CBT, anal, Limits: permanent,blood, scat, family, full public, pics, hard anal Album of some of the clothes I have: https://www.getdare.com/bbs/album.php?albumid=16612 I AM A SLAVE TO ALL OF GETDARE AND ESPECIALLY TO MISTRESS BUBBLES

10-24-2014, 11:02 PM	#49
issabella Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 103 Blog Entries: 1	ahhhhhh i seee i see xD __________________ Loves: crossdressing, wedgie, light mess (food, hidden public Likes:short term blackmail, ssmi-hidden public, bandage, Dislikes: CBT, anal, Limits: permanent,blood, scat, family, full public, pics, hard anal Album of some of the clothes I have: https://www.getdare.com/bbs/album.php?albumid=16612 I AM A SLAVE TO ALL OF GETDARE AND ESPECIALLY TO MISTRESS BUBBLES

10-25-2014, 09:24 AM	#50
LitDarkness Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: May 2014 Location: Earth Posts: 6,116 Blog Entries: 289	Chapter 30:Not Real I heard laughing. I was wondering what was so funny. I told myself,"Ignore it." as I heard more laughter but I couldn't resist. I walked towards the laughter into the teachers lounge. I hid behind furniture to avoid being seen, even though I knew a girl covered in duct tape wouldn't be hard to see. I saw Mr.Varghese talking to another teacher, "Madonna, she thinks she knows better than the teacher." The other teacher laughed,"So that's why you sent her here?" He rubbed his hands together, "Yes, and all I had to do was change her grades to do it." I was wishing I had a recorder to record him. The other teacher flipped through a wad of cash, "And we get payed more for more brats that are entered here." Mr.Varghese stood up and turned around. I dunked as I was right behind him, "I could've swore I heard something." He walked towards me, I scooted back until my head was touching the wall. He kicked the couch pushing it on me. I bit my cheeks in order not to scream. He walked out of the room but dropped his cell phone. I thought,"Yes." I quickly grabbed the cell phone and called the police. At the end of the conversation they said they'd investigate the next day. I couldn't wait for people to find out about this hell house. __________________ M/Novisexual/24/sub Do have female parts. 30/1,603 edges+ 2 more days of denial after edges Make My Denial Harder Denial Diary 6,000th post tasks and reports Likes + Limits Stuff I Can Use for Dares BDSM Test Results PM DARES Stories & Poems Spelling or Grammar Mistake: Let Me Know Help Break My Cursing Habit Live with people and do not own toys. Keep in mind when daring me please. Not your bitch and calling me names or trying to Dom me is probitted. Violators will be declared as idiots.

10-25-2014, 10:02 AM	#51
LitDarkness Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: May 2014 Location: Earth Posts: 6,116 Blog Entries: 289	Chapter 31: Investigation I snuck back to my room. Mr.Varghese was standing waiting for me. “Well, well, well, look who left her room. I knew you’d leave.” He clenched his teeth, “You will learn, Madonna!” He lifted me over his shoulder and took my outside. I shivered as he forced my back against the cold hard pole. He wrapped tape around my body. I tried to move but, there was no way I could even stretch. He laughed, “Night Madonna.” He went inside the warm building. It was hard for me to sleep as I was only protected from the cold by two layers of tape. When I finally fell asleep I was woke by sirens. A police officer untied me, “Who tied you here ma’am.” I trembled, if Mr.Varghese got away with this he was going to kill me. “I don’t know his first name but his last name is Varghese.” He patted me on the back, “Ma’am we’re going to take you inside.” He escorted me inside. Mr.Varghese was staring at me. He shook the police officers hand, “Hello officer my name is Turner Varghese. What brings you here today?” I hated that man and his charm. I knew I was going to be the one in major trouble at the end of this. The police officer must have felt my unease because he patted me on the back, “Well, Mr.Varghese we need to investigate this school, so may I kindly ask you and everyone else to get out.” His face dropped, “That may take a while as this school is big and the students are deep sleepers and disobedient.” The police officer smiled, “That’s okay, I can investigate with people in here then, I’m negotiable.” He glared at me, “I can get them out, you just may have to wait a while.” The police officer ignored him and started scanning the school. Mr.Varghese whispered in my ear, “You’ll be lucky to breath when I’m done with you, if anything happens.” __________________ M/Novisexual/24/sub Do have female parts. 30/1,603 edges+ 2 more days of denial after edges Make My Denial Harder Denial Diary 6,000th post tasks and reports Likes + Limits Stuff I Can Use for Dares BDSM Test Results PM DARES Stories & Poems Spelling or Grammar Mistake: Let Me Know Help Break My Cursing Habit Live with people and do not own toys. Keep in mind when daring me please. Not your bitch and calling me names or trying to Dom me is probitted. Violators will be declared as idiots. Last edited by LitDarkness; 10-25-2014 at 10:20 AM.

10-25-2014, 01:22 PM	#52
qt31415926 Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: CST Posts: 661 Blog Entries: 2	Tension!! I like it. __________________ 50/M LIKES/LIMITS TORTURE ACADEMY GRADUATE Red team: RvB (4-0) Boys vs Girls (2-0) Holding games (2-0)

10-24-2014, 07:02 PM	#46
sexyhoe Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 34 Blog Entries: 4	Great story! Keep going i am enjoying it.

10-25-2014, 01:30 PM	#53
issabella Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 103 Blog Entries: 1	ohhhhh i cant wait for the next edition keep it going!!! __________________ Loves: crossdressing, wedgie, light mess (food, hidden public Likes:short term blackmail, ssmi-hidden public, bandage, Dislikes: CBT, anal, Limits: permanent,blood, scat, family, full public, pics, hard anal Album of some of the clothes I have: https://www.getdare.com/bbs/album.php?albumid=16612 I AM A SLAVE TO ALL OF GETDARE AND ESPECIALLY TO MISTRESS BUBBLES

10-25-2014, 02:36 PM	#54
silkysatin getDare Devil Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Detention Room Posts: 1,387 Blog Entries: 1	This is awesome!!! I like your writing style!!! I also like shorter chapters and the suspense they create, making it hard to wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!! __________________ Likes: line writing (by hand), corner time, handcuffs, spanking, gum on nose Dislikes (punishments): writing squares, writing essays, chains & padlocks, nose holding coin against wall, mouth duct taped, underwear gag, mouth soaping, counting rice Limits: Anything not in likes or dislikes is my decision Toys: gum, duct tape, handcuffs, chains & padlocks, bar soap, 3 paddles, wooden spoon KIK: silky.satin

10-25-2014, 05:27 PM	#55
silkysatin getDare Devil Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Detention Room Posts: 1,387 Blog Entries: 1	This is awesome!!! I like your writing style!!! I also like shorter chapters and the suspense they create, making it hard to wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!! __________________ Likes: line writing (by hand), corner time, handcuffs, spanking, gum on nose Dislikes (punishments): writing squares, writing essays, chains & padlocks, nose holding coin against wall, mouth duct taped, underwear gag, mouth soaping, counting rice Limits: Anything not in likes or dislikes is my decision Toys: gum, duct tape, handcuffs, chains & padlocks, bar soap, 3 paddles, wooden spoon KIK: silky.satin

10-26-2014, 08:30 PM	#56
LitDarkness Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: May 2014 Location: Earth Posts: 6,116 Blog Entries: 289	Chapter 31: Discovery Mr.Varghese grabbed my ear and pulled me outside. He glared at me, "Listen and listen good, you are not funny, you are not clever, I will make your life a living hell for this." I smiled,"Face it you know, you're going to get caught, so you're trying to scare me." He hit me on the back causing me to shriek in pain. "I will kill you." The police officer came out escorting teachers out, they were in handcuffs. He lead them outside. Other police cars parked at the school. Teachers were forced into the police cars. The police officer looked at Mr.Varghese, "Records indicate you're the leader of this establishment, you are under arrest." He protested,"I have a wife, and kids, you can't arrest me, what about them." The police officer handcuffed him,"You should of thought of that before committing a crime." He escorted Mr.Varghese to his police car. The police cars left except for that one officers police car. He stayed and got all the students out of the building. He sat beside us until our parents came. I was relieved when I got to go home. __________________ M/Novisexual/24/sub Do have female parts. 30/1,603 edges+ 2 more days of denial after edges Make My Denial Harder Denial Diary 6,000th post tasks and reports Likes + Limits Stuff I Can Use for Dares BDSM Test Results PM DARES Stories & Poems Spelling or Grammar Mistake: Let Me Know Help Break My Cursing Habit Live with people and do not own toys. Keep in mind when daring me please. Not your bitch and calling me names or trying to Dom me is probitted. Violators will be declared as idiots.

10-26-2014, 08:39 PM	#57
LitDarkness Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: May 2014 Location: Earth Posts: 6,116 Blog Entries: 289	I hoped you liked it. I hoped you guys liked the story. I know it was short but I tried to make it detailed and interesting as possible. Any feedback and constructive criticism will be appreciated. __________________ M/Novisexual/24/sub Do have female parts. 30/1,603 edges+ 2 more days of denial after edges Make My Denial Harder Denial Diary 6,000th post tasks and reports Likes + Limits Stuff I Can Use for Dares BDSM Test Results PM DARES Stories & Poems Spelling or Grammar Mistake: Let Me Know Help Break My Cursing Habit Live with people and do not own toys. Keep in mind when daring me please. Not your bitch and calling me names or trying to Dom me is probitted. Violators will be declared as idiots.

10-26-2014, 08:44 PM	#58
Rose_Angel Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: US Posts: 872 Blog Entries: 54	I suspected an end was coming. It was great for what it was worth! Thanks!

10-26-2014, 08:51 PM	#59
chocolatedispenser Member Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 31	It was really cool! you could make a second part (hint hint!)

10-26-2014, 09:59 PM	#60
ClaraAnne Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2014 Location: Somewhere in the wide, wide world Posts: 49 Blog Entries: 1	I really liked it. Was the 'Academy' word purposely misspelled as 'Acadamy'? It was great you could update the story regularly. :-) Thanks for spending the time to write it. __________________ My likes, dislikes and limits 170/100 marks at the Torture Academy as a cheerleader I am protected by Nawee, so beware!