Fiction: School Time

slaveboy 95 · 06-29-2017, 09:17 AM

Ok, so I wanna start by saying that this is my first attempt at writing a story so any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. I am currently writing this in my 6th form library this is half fiction half non-fiction, some bit are based on true events and have had plot devices added some are entirely true and some are completely made up. All of my characters are based on people I know (with their names changed) all their 'measurements' are correct as of when I am writing this, however, they may be larger than they were at the time in which this is set. The chapter names have a theme for a bit of fun and any questions feel free to PM me.

Character list
Name-Age-features
Niamh-16-36C
Emily-16-30B
Bethany-17-32C
carlee-15-28A
Ella-16-36C
Tom-16-6"
adam(me)-16-6.5"
matt-16-7"

06-29-2017, 09:17 AM	#1
slaveboy 95 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 156	School Time Ok, so I wanna start by saying that this is my first attempt at writing a story so any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. I am currently writing this in my 6th form library this is half fiction half non-fiction, some bit are based on true events and have had plot devices added some are entirely true and some are completely made up. All of my characters are based on people I know (with their names changed) all their 'measurements' are correct as of when I am writing this, however, they may be larger than they were at the time in which this is set. The chapter names have a theme for a bit of fun and any questions feel free to PM me. Character list Name-Age-features Niamh-16-36C Emily-16-30B Bethany-17-32C carlee-15-28A Ella-16-36C Tom-16-6" adam(me)-16-6.5" matt-16-7" __________________ likes: wedgies, friends, kik, chat dislikes: piss, cum, 6th form, humiliation, long, semi public & picture limits: public, poop,messie,illegal, lots of pain & blood http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...29#post2356529 Last edited by slaveboy 95; 06-29-2017 at 09:21 AM.