Christina: From slut to slave[NON-FICTION with elements of FICTION] - Page 2

Cobra1987 · 07-23-2008, 01:52 AM

great story so far props

Fiendish · 07-23-2008, 08:32 AM

I'm glad you people like it

I got on this morning to four rep points, two of which had no name or message.

Oh, and I love the new avatar Dani.

Fiendish · 08-12-2008, 11:20 AM

Alright, it's time for the next bit... and time to start playing find the fiction

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Rules... many think rules are a simple thing, that one set of rules covers all bases. That is not the case, rules must be tuned for each individual. Sometimes a slave needs to be micromanaged, every little detail of her life controlled. Sometimes that isn't needed, and I believe this to be a case of it not being needed- a good general outline should suffice.

It was getting good, watching the two of them. Kiara was completely naked now, having Christina suck one of her nipples. Kiara was also pinching, twisting, and pulling on Christina's nipples, and it was obvious she was enjoying this more than she thought she would. After a few minutes of that, Kiara turned Christina around and into the corner.

"You're a naughty girl, aren't you?" Kiara asked in her sexy voice.
"Yes," Christina said, obviously a little embarassed.
"Yes what?"
"Yes I am a naughty girl."
"And what happens to naughty girls, Christina?"
"They're punished," she said, "naughty girls are punished."
"Depends on what kind of naughty she's been," Kiara said, "naughty as in breaking the rules, you're right. But naughty can also be a good thing... acting like the slut you are, doing sexual things much of society sees as taboo... those get you rewarded, at least with this Sir."
"So," I said, "which kind of naughty have you been?"
"The good kind of naughty, Sir," Christina said.
"Kiara, you know what to do now."

Again turning Christina around, Kiara then brought her very close. And kissed her. Very passionately. Christina took a second to realize this was indeed happening, but once she did, she began returning as well. Such a nice thing to watch, especially when Kiara slid her arm down Christina's body, between the two of them, and then between her legs. I almost hated to break it up, but it had to be done. I waited until Christina was right on the edge.

"Stop," I said, "that's enough.While I'm loving this, I really am, we have details to hammer out before we give this whole thing a go. Besides, I can't let Kiara have all the fun."

Both of them looked disappointed, but Christina looked particularly frustrated. She'd have to get used to that.

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TO BE CONTINUED...

I don't feel like typing more today, so you'll have to wait till next time for the details...

shadoweater · 08-12-2008, 12:24 PM

I was afraid this story was dead, and I'm glad to see it's not. Keep it up!

As for guessing at fiction, I betting you at least exaggerated the girl-on-girl scene.

Fiendish · 08-12-2008, 12:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shadoweater

I was afraid this story was dead, and I'm glad to see it's not. Keep it up!

As for guessing at fiction, I betting you at least exaggerated the girl-on-girl scene.

To what extent, though... to what extent...

Hampers · 08-12-2008, 05:34 PM

My bet is this section:

"Kiara, you know what to do now."

Again turning Christina around, Kiara then brought her very close. And kissed her. Very passionately. Christina took a second to realize this was indeed happening, but once she did, she began returning as well. Such a nice thing to watch, especially when Kiara slid her arm down Christina's body, between the two of them, and then between her legs. I almost hated to break it up, but it had to be done. I waited until Christina was right on the edge.

"Stop,"

fred8171984 · 09-29-2008, 04:23 PM

it's really great so far keep it up

SpikyToad · 10-02-2008, 08:32 PM

Write More Please

doomed_soul89 · 11-03-2008, 06:25 PM

Don't stop now keep writing

Officelover · 11-04-2008, 06:19 PM

I agree, it is very good.

07-23-2008, 01:52 AM	#16
Cobra1987 Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 16	wow great great story so far props

07-23-2008, 08:32 AM	#17
Fiendish getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: The 9th Level of Hell Posts: 339 Blog Entries: 12	I'm glad you people like it I got on this morning to four rep points, two of which had no name or message. Oh, and I love the new avatar Dani. __________________ I have no signature!

08-12-2008, 11:20 AM	#18
Fiendish getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: The 9th Level of Hell Posts: 339 Blog Entries: 12	Alright, it's time for the next bit... and time to start playing find the fiction : Rules... many think rules are a simple thing, that one set of rules covers all bases. That is not the case, rules must be tuned for each individual. Sometimes a slave needs to be micromanaged, every little detail of her life controlled. Sometimes that isn't needed, and I believe this to be a case of it not being needed- a good general outline should suffice. It was getting good, watching the two of them. Kiara was completely naked now, having Christina suck one of her nipples. Kiara was also pinching, twisting, and pulling on Christina's nipples, and it was obvious she was enjoying this more than she thought she would. After a few minutes of that, Kiara turned Christina around and into the corner. "You're a naughty girl, aren't you?" Kiara asked in her sexy voice. "Yes," Christina said, obviously a little embarassed. "Yes what?" "Yes I am a naughty girl." "And what happens to naughty girls, Christina?" "They're punished," she said, "naughty girls are punished." "Depends on what kind of naughty she's been," Kiara said, "naughty as in breaking the rules, you're right. But naughty can also be a good thing... acting like the slut you are, doing sexual things much of society sees as taboo... those get you rewarded, at least with this Sir." "So," I said, "which kind of naughty have you been?" "The good kind of naughty, Sir," Christina said. "Kiara, you know what to do now." Again turning Christina around, Kiara then brought her very close. And kissed her. Very passionately. Christina took a second to realize this was indeed happening, but once she did, she began returning as well. Such a nice thing to watch, especially when Kiara slid her arm down Christina's body, between the two of them, and then between her legs. I almost hated to break it up, but it had to be done. I waited until Christina was right on the edge. "Stop," I said, "that's enough.While I'm loving this, I really am, we have details to hammer out before we give this whole thing a go. Besides, I can't let Kiara have all the fun." Both of them looked disappointed, but Christina looked particularly frustrated. She'd have to get used to that. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- TO BE CONTINUED... I don't feel like typing more today, so you'll have to wait till next time for the details... __________________ I have no signature!

08-12-2008, 12:24 PM	#19
shadoweater Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: USA West Coast Posts: 144	I was afraid this story was dead, and I'm glad to see it's not. Keep it up! As for guessing at fiction, I betting you at least exaggerated the girl-on-girl scene. __________________ 34/m/USA west coast (as of 2024, in case I forget to update)

08-12-2008, 05:34 PM	#21
Hampers Kiss Kiss FIRE! Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Suitcase Posts: 1,798 Blog Entries: 24	My bet is this section: "Kiara, you know what to do now." Again turning Christina around, Kiara then brought her very close. And kissed her. Very passionately. Christina took a second to realize this was indeed happening, but once she did, she began returning as well. Such a nice thing to watch, especially when Kiara slid her arm down Christina's body, between the two of them, and then between her legs. I almost hated to break it up, but it had to be done. I waited until Christina was right on the edge. "Stop," __________________ ...Tubas in the Moonlight...

09-29-2008, 04:23 PM	#22
fred8171984 Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 2	great so far it's really great so far keep it up

10-02-2008, 08:32 PM	#23
SpikyToad Account Banned Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 27	Write More Please

11-03-2008, 06:25 PM	#24
doomed_soul89 Account Banned Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: bc canada Posts: 438	Don't stop now keep writing

11-04-2008, 06:19 PM	#25
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	Write more I agree, it is very good. __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails