03-11-2007, 10:00 AM | #1 |
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Revenge 69 Style, Part I [FICTION]
Well it all started on an early monday morning. It was raining hard and it was cold. P.E is my first class in the morning and we went out side in the mud. We were runing laps around the muddy feild. I got on to my 3rd lap then i feel my pants and underwear shoot to the ground. I bend over to pull them back up and then I got pushed down. My face hit the mud with my clothing at my feet. Then one guy picked up some mud and put it in the front of my underwear. Now that there was an impression of my cock and balls in the mud a got up and pulled my pants up. I didn't relize that there was mud in them so that was an un-welcome cold curprise. After we finish our laps our teacher came back out and asked why I was muddy, i said because i fell....... she saw nothing! After class was over I told the two guy I would get them back some how.
If you would like more please post and then i will make part II, if there isn't enough posts this is how it ends
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03-11-2007, 10:07 AM | #2 |
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it is quite an interesting story, it is something that could really happen in daily life. Maybe it would be nice to write a part in the showers, always an interesting place in this kind of stories. I hope that you will continue your posting.
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03-11-2007, 11:25 AM | #3 |
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This is a real good start, I can not wait till part 2
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03-11-2007, 12:14 PM | #5 |
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MMmmm.....showers.....*looks embarrased* er....yeah you could take this anywhere you like really. This could go on for ages or be a couple of parts and ended.
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03-11-2007, 01:49 PM | #6 |
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Intruiging but to short at the moment to get a hook on me, write a longer next part.
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03-11-2007, 02:49 PM | #7 |
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I like it, a bit short but definatly an intresting story. Cant wait for the next bit.
ye the showers would be a good place to set it. OR maybe in a different lesson maybe a cooking class? (oooo the possibliltys) keep going mate |
03-11-2007, 05:19 PM | #8 |
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seeing as a lot of people liked it i will do part two tomarrow.... showers, and lunch
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03-11-2007, 05:48 PM | #9 |
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Cool, I like that story can't wait for part 2!
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03-12-2007, 04:49 AM | #10 |
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Would prefer a little longer but doing alright lets see part II.
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03-12-2007, 07:32 PM | #12 |
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off to write part 2
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