Fiction: Natalie's Big Day Out

Paradigm · 06-21-2013, 09:54 PM

I was reading Jappio's new story (I'm a big fan

) and I wanted to write my own choose your own adventure, so here it is! I hope you enjoy.

Natalie is my name. I am a sixteen year old girl with D cup breasts and a height of 5"8'. My straight blonde hair reaches my shoulders. This is my story. It started when I was

A) In the woods
B) At school
C) Home alone

mikey555 · 06-21-2013, 10:01 PM

i will go with c

Paradigm · 06-21-2013, 11:58 PM

I will close the voting after two or three days, so I'll leave it open for many people

onix · 06-22-2013, 02:30 AM

I will vote A

(2-3 days is a bit long to wait)

Paradigm · 06-22-2013, 03:55 AM

What about one day?

kmacroxs · 06-22-2013, 05:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paradigm

What about one day?

It's a bit too short. Try closing the voting on 6/23 at 4 PM GMT. Or give a day and a half for voting.

Just to go against myself, I will choose C.

Paradigm · 06-22-2013, 03:14 PM

Okay. 1.5 days it is. I'll change it to two days if there aren't enough votes, but I trust you guys that 1.5 is enough.

Paradigm · 06-23-2013, 11:09 PM

2)
I was wearing a dressing gown over my sky blue bra and matching blue panties. I had just had a shower and was lounging around in front of the television, glad to not be at school. Then I heard a knock at the front door. I opened it, to see
1) The mail woman.
2) My best friend.
3) Nobody.

(Sorry, the chapters will get longer. I promise)

mikey555 · 06-24-2013, 12:07 AM

i pick the number 1 good sir

Memories for Life · 06-24-2013, 07:22 AM

You've haven't posted a "chapter" yet! If you're only going to write 3 or 4 sentence paragraphs then voting needs to max out at 24 hours!

If you are a big "fan" of Jappio, it would be best to ask his opinion of what you've "written" so far!

thefunman · 06-24-2013, 07:27 AM

at school is my choice

onix · 06-24-2013, 09:02 AM

I like the sound of c

Paradigm · 06-24-2013, 03:12 PM

As I've already said Memories for Life, the first few parts are more about setting the scene. They get a lot longer. These were the first couple posts and I wanted as many readers as I could before continuing, but I'll shorten the voting time frame if that's what you want. Also, I have already posted the second part thefunman, it's already been voted c for the first one. You have to choose out of a new set of options.

P.S. This is my first story here, so forgive me if I make mistakes with my writing.

Moonksy · 06-25-2013, 05:41 AM

2) My best friend.

Please continue!

axman_3760 · 06-27-2013, 03:17 PM

i choose 2 and i woulda picked at school

06-21-2013, 09:54 PM	#1
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	Natalie's Big Day Out I was reading Jappio's new story (I'm a big fan) and I wanted to write my own choose your own adventure, so here it is! I hope you enjoy. Natalie is my name. I am a sixteen year old girl with D cup breasts and a height of 5"8'. My straight blonde hair reaches my shoulders. This is my story. It started when I was A) In the woods B) At school C) Home alone Last edited by Paradigm; 06-22-2013 at 03:18 PM. Reason: Sorry, I made a mistake

06-21-2013, 10:01 PM	#2
mikey555 Account Banned Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 18	vote for the story i will go with c

06-24-2013, 12:07 AM	#9
mikey555 Account Banned Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 18	Vote for story i pick the number 1 good sir

06-25-2013, 05:41 AM	#14
Moonksy Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: Essex, UK Posts: 55	2) My best friend. Please continue! __________________ Nothing is foolproof to a sufficiently talented fool.

06-21-2013, 11:58 PM	#3
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	I will close the voting after two or three days, so I'll leave it open for many people

06-22-2013, 02:30 AM	#4
onix Member Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: UK Posts: 31	I will vote A (2-3 days is a bit long to wait)

06-22-2013, 03:55 AM	#5
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	What about one day?

06-22-2013, 03:14 PM	#7
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	Okay. 1.5 days it is. I'll change it to two days if there aren't enough votes, but I trust you guys that 1.5 is enough.

06-23-2013, 11:09 PM	#8
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	2) I was wearing a dressing gown over my sky blue bra and matching blue panties. I had just had a shower and was lounging around in front of the television, glad to not be at school. Then I heard a knock at the front door. I opened it, to see 1) The mail woman. 2) My best friend. 3) Nobody. (Sorry, the chapters will get longer. I promise)

06-24-2013, 07:22 AM	#10
Memories for Life getDare Devil Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Jacksonville, FL Posts: 1,012	You've haven't posted a "chapter" yet! If you're only going to write 3 or 4 sentence paragraphs then voting needs to max out at 24 hours! If you are a big "fan" of Jappio, it would be best to ask his opinion of what you've "written" so far!

06-24-2013, 07:27 AM	#11
thefunman getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Florida, USA Posts: 1,766	at school is my choice

06-24-2013, 09:02 AM	#12
onix Member Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: UK Posts: 31	I like the sound of c

06-24-2013, 03:12 PM	#13
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	As I've already said Memories for Life, the first few parts are more about setting the scene. They get a lot longer. These were the first couple posts and I wanted as many readers as I could before continuing, but I'll shorten the voting time frame if that's what you want. Also, I have already posted the second part thefunman, it's already been voted c for the first one. You have to choose out of a new set of options. P.S. This is my first story here, so forgive me if I make mistakes with my writing.

06-27-2013, 03:17 PM	#15
axman_3760 Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 69	i choose 2 and i woulda picked at school