Fiction: tyler and me

riley138 · 08-13-2010, 08:38 AM

ok this is a fictional story of me and a soccer bud, tyler. the first 3 paragraphes and any discriptions of what we are wearing are true. the rest is from my imagination. let me start with some background information.

i've know tylor since we were little rugrats playing soccer like a pack of legs everyone chasing the ball and kicking as far as you could. tyler just turned 13 and had a b-party and i was the only one envited from our team. i thought it was wierd that he only invited me cause even though i known him for so long we never really hung out.

he's a cute boy who happens to be indian, i mean native american. sorry if i offended anyone. he has long jet black hair, blue green eyes. hes the only blue eyed nat. am. i've ever seen and where i live i've met many. he stands about 5ft. 7, 90 lbs. i dont know how to convert for any eurpean guys so i hope u can figure it out or if you would so kind tell me the conversion and i'll edit it.

anyway, i was suprised for the invite and i knew he had a 360 so i got him my favorite game, fable. well i just gave him a card with like 3 dollars in it and gave him the game later cause its mature rated and dont know what his mom would say. i got my copy from an older cousin who knows i like this type of game and knows my mom wouldn't buy it for me.on with the story

its been about a week since his party and i get a call on my cell from a number i didnt know. normally, i'd just ignore it but i decided to pick up.
"um hello you anyone i know?"
"its me tylor whats going on."
"what up bud, you like the game i gotcha?" i say
"it's fricken insane, how did you know i'd like it?"
"lucky guess, so what's up?"
"what you doing tonight?"
"nodda thing why?"
he asks "you wanna sleepover?"
"im sure mom will say yea but i gotta ask. how about i text you later, this your cell."
"coolness"
"how'd get my number?"
"oh from derik"
"just wondering, what time do you want me there?"
"as soon as you can get here" he says.
"ok i text you before i leave."
i talk with mom and she's cool with it cause kyle, my littlebrother is sleeping over with his friends. so i shower, change into a pair of satin boxer briefs and put on a pair of boardshorts and a a-shirt and vans shoes. hes never invited me to a sleepover i just find it wierd. then i get to thinking does he want me. i guess i'll find out soon......

i hope you like the first installment please comment

nuditydudity · 08-13-2010, 08:24 PM

I think that this could be a good story. Keep it up, but I think a little bit more punctuation/spell check would make it much easier to read.
But keep writing!

Nick · 08-13-2010, 09:31 PM

Agreed, good start and has a lot of potential once it really gets going. Just a few errors, not too bad. But please use capital letters for proper names and the beginning if sentences!

nuddydudedares · 08-18-2010, 04:17 PM

Hey! Nice story. Loving it so far. keep it up!

08-13-2010, 08:38 AM	#1
riley138 Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: in a city Posts: 68 Blog Entries: 3	tyler and me ok this is a fictional story of me and a soccer bud, tyler. the first 3 paragraphes and any discriptions of what we are wearing are true. the rest is from my imagination. let me start with some background information. i've know tylor since we were little rugrats playing soccer like a pack of legs everyone chasing the ball and kicking as far as you could. tyler just turned 13 and had a b-party and i was the only one envited from our team. i thought it was wierd that he only invited me cause even though i known him for so long we never really hung out. he's a cute boy who happens to be indian, i mean native american. sorry if i offended anyone. he has long jet black hair, blue green eyes. hes the only blue eyed nat. am. i've ever seen and where i live i've met many. he stands about 5ft. 7, 90 lbs. i dont know how to convert for any eurpean guys so i hope u can figure it out or if you would so kind tell me the conversion and i'll edit it. anyway, i was suprised for the invite and i knew he had a 360 so i got him my favorite game, fable. well i just gave him a card with like 3 dollars in it and gave him the game later cause its mature rated and dont know what his mom would say. i got my copy from an older cousin who knows i like this type of game and knows my mom wouldn't buy it for me.on with the story its been about a week since his party and i get a call on my cell from a number i didnt know. normally, i'd just ignore it but i decided to pick up. "um hello you anyone i know?" "its me tylor whats going on." "what up bud, you like the game i gotcha?" i say "it's fricken insane, how did you know i'd like it?" "lucky guess, so what's up?" "what you doing tonight?" "nodda thing why?" he asks "you wanna sleepover?" "im sure mom will say yea but i gotta ask. how about i text you later, this your cell." "coolness" "how'd get my number?" "oh from derik" "just wondering, what time do you want me there?" "as soon as you can get here" he says. "ok i text you before i leave." i talk with mom and she's cool with it cause kyle, my littlebrother is sleeping over with his friends. so i shower, change into a pair of satin boxer briefs and put on a pair of boardshorts and a a-shirt and vans shoes. hes never invited me to a sleepover i just find it wierd. then i get to thinking does he want me. i guess i'll find out soon...... i hope you like the first installment please comment __________________ likes nudity, wanking, butt, little pain, edging, gay dislikes pee, tied up, limits poo, drinking pee, extreme pain,

08-13-2010, 08:24 PM	#2
nuditydudity Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: USA Posts: 573	I think that this could be a good story. Keep it up, but I think a little bit more punctuation/spell check would make it much easier to read. But keep writing! __________________ 9 Years on getDare!! Sing like you know the lyrics Dance like no one is watching Live like you were dying Love like you've never been hurt before

08-13-2010, 09:31 PM	#3
Nick Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Ohio Posts: 834	Agreed, good start and has a lot of potential once it really gets going. Just a few errors, not too bad. But please use capital letters for proper names and the beginning if sentences! __________________ 27/ Male/ US/ Switch Likes: Underwear, Jockstrap, Embarrassing, Webcam or Pics, Naked, Semi-public, slight risk, strip games, dice dares, wedgies, clothing/cum control, anal, light humiliation Dislikes: Piss, Body Writing, messy Limits:Really public, family, friends, scat, gross, pain. *Impossible:* Crossdressing. I own NO girls clothes. kik: nick.undies Skype: nick.undies SnapChat: SnapNickR

08-18-2010, 04:17 PM	#4
nuddydudedares Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Great Britain Posts: 8	Hey! Nice story. Loving it so far. keep it up!