Non-Fiction: Male hotel locker room - Page 2

bradsmallory · 03-06-2011, 06:32 AM

well please hurry i would like to know what happens next

nuditydudity · 03-06-2011, 02:57 PM

Big improvement. Keep writing (hopefully not such a big gap between chapters next time) but keep in mind PUNCTUATION. It can really make or break a story.
Keep it up, and looking forward to reading more!

glue · 03-06-2011, 03:44 PM

I agree an improvement from your first few posts however, as much as people say to rush, dont. as its great as it is

6/10

xeldin · 03-07-2011, 06:59 AM

omg i can't wait for the next chapter !!! XDDD keep up the good work :P

iheartbriefs · 04-07-2011, 09:17 AM

Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please write more soon!!!!!!!

bradsmallory · 04-14-2011, 04:42 AM

hey when you going to be finished with the next part this is a real good story i would love to find out what happens next

wedgie_man · 04-15-2011, 09:50 PM

I'll be starting it soon everyone!

code1001 · 05-05-2011, 05:39 PM

come on man hurry up with the story the suspense is killing me.

daremaster 1 · 05-05-2011, 05:58 PM

dude i love it best chapter! I can not believe this is true!

lovaboitoy · 05-26-2011, 10:11 AM

this is really a great story!

bradsmallory · 06-11-2011, 04:08 AM

when will you continue the story i rilly like it. its off to a great start

daresundevil · 06-11-2011, 11:56 PM

can u hurry up man

wedgie_man · 06-13-2011, 10:34 PM

CHAPTER FOUR!!!!!!!!!!**********

Sorry it took so long to reply i haven't been on in a while. ok so here we go!!

************************************************** ***************

So i was standing there with the little kids underwear on, which i thought that my dick was going to explode in them. they had little characters on them. so the little kid got dressed and i said thanks and he replied ya no prob but they dont look like they fit. and then he left, so the guys were like laughing so hard at me while this was all being video taped. then they gave me a sock and i was like what come on guys and they said that it is a new rule that i only get one pice of clothing back at a time. so i was ok now what do i have to do. and they said ok they next person that walks in you have to ask them if they will take a shower with you, and i was like they will think that i am fucking gay. then they said ok i guess we are keeping everything. i was like ok ok so the next person who walked in was some queer teen who looked like he was about me age. he was just coming back from swimming so i asked him, "by chance do you want to take a shower with me" and he looked at me really fucking weird and said well i guess cause i was going to take one anyway but sounds like fun if i have company. so he started to get undressed and he said what do you want me to help you take off your power ranger underwear to. and i was like oh ya i forgot i was wearing them and then one of the guys controlling me was like yes you must take them off for him or let him keep them on because he is under control from me. so the teen was like oh i get it is this like a slave type thing and i was like ya i guess you could call it that.

so we started to walk over by the showers both in our underwear. and the teen informed me that he was gay and his name was brett. i was like oh thats cool nice to meet you. and he said oh its my pleasure! so we both walked over there and he said ok well since you are there slave i will also control you, ok i want you to get down and take off my underwear for me. so i got down and noticed that he had a boner. so i started to slip down his briefs and then his dick like slapped me, and he asked me to put his underwear somewhere dry. so then he said i think you should get wet in those power ranger undies first. so he told me that he will start with freezing water and if i obey him then he will turn it a little warmer each time. he said ok to start off i want you to put loads of soap down the front of your undies. so i just kept pressing the soap dispenser and my undies were so full but none got out because they were so type to my body. then he said ok stand under the water, and holy shit was i fucking cold. and he noticed because my boner went down so fucking fast. and he said ok while under the water i want you to keep your hands down your pants. so i did then he said in order to put the temp a little higher i will have to complete the following task. the task was to stand under the water with hands down pants and jack off until i feel like i will cum, but he told me not to cum, he just wants my boner back, he said the water will not turn up until my boner comes back. and let me remind you this is still being recorded. so i was jacking off with all the soap and cold water but it just wasnt really working. so i kept going and finally i started to get a boner, then he just turned it up a little so i was still cold just not as cold. then he said ok with your soapy hand i want you to jack me off but dont make me cum. so i grabbed his about 6 inch dick and went at it, then he was moaning and groaning and i stopped and he said great timing. then he wanted me to do different kinds of tasks and i did them all and the last one was to take off undies and jack off to the person who walks through the door. so we just kind of messed around for a little bit then we heard the door open and we waited then i started to jack off and then i looked to see who it was and the person was about like 10 or 11 and he just stared at me and asked me what i was doing. and i just said showering. i felt so bad for this cause brett told me i had to cum.

so the little boy said he was going to shower and had never seen anyone shower like i was. and i just said oh ya its fun bud. so he stood next to me naked and kept staring at my dick. then i was just about to cum and i saw the little kid try it himself and i said oh i dont think you want to do that. then he said why not i said it was fun so he was getting a tiny little boner and he said um what is going on. and i just laughed a little and the boy kept going and then he looked over and i cummed everywhere and it landed right next to his foot, and he asked me why my pee was white and not yellow. and i just laughed and walked back to my locker.

so when i got back the guys were like ok i think that you have been through enough torture, you can have your clothes back and i said ok thanks! and they said they got everything on tape! and i hated that but i just got dressed and i walked out. then i thought about it again and i made a decision that i might stop by jim tonight.

wedgie_man · 06-29-2011, 02:25 AM

so did u guys like it?!?!?!?! comments please

myswagga · 06-29-2011, 04:23 AM

Yea it's great please continue. If only stuff like this could actually happen to me

03-06-2011, 02:57 PM	#17
nuditydudity Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: USA Posts: 573	Big improvement. Keep writing (hopefully not such a big gap between chapters next time) but keep in mind PUNCTUATION. It can really make or break a story. Keep it up, and looking forward to reading more! __________________ 9 Years on getDare!! Sing like you know the lyrics Dance like no one is watching Live like you were dying Love like you've never been hurt before

03-06-2011, 03:44 PM	#18
glue Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 735 Blog Entries: 6	I agree an improvement from your first few posts however, as much as people say to rush, dont. as its great as it is 6/10 __________________ WATCH OUT FOR A GLUE RATING OUT OF TEN glue would like to tell everyone reading this to stay sticky as life is to short to become unstuck I'm the Simon Cowell of GetDare Please add me at: Skype: Glue101 8 Years On Getdare!!!!!!

03-07-2011, 06:59 AM	#19
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04-07-2011, 09:17 AM	#20
iheartbriefs Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 94	Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please write more soon!!!!!!! __________________ My interests: Underwear (esp. tighty-whities, rarely boxers): briefs, jocks, etc.; diapors; humiliation (both private and public); locker rooms; showers; small penises/average penises; late bloomers (starting puberty later than everyone else); older guys who appear younger in certain areas; shaving; etc...

04-15-2011, 09:50 PM	#22
wedgie_man Senior Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 160 Blog Entries: 1	I'll be starting it soon everyone! __________________ limits-poo,pee,messy,hard public,extreme pain, social suicide, family,permanent,cross dressing, prefer no face until I get to know you LIKES- humiliation, sph, dominated, edging, orgasm control, being called names, anything underwear!, cum control, dares, masturbating Kik: undielover19 Selling my used underwear!! Pm or kik for the link! Forced to add the following: Kik dares: https://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=94290

03-06-2011, 06:32 AM	#16
bradsmallory Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: susanville california northern california Posts: 84	well please hurry i would like to know what happens next

04-14-2011, 04:42 AM	#21
bradsmallory Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: susanville california northern california Posts: 84	hey when you going to be finished with the next part this is a real good story i would love to find out what happens next

05-05-2011, 05:39 PM	#23
code1001 Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 3	come on man hurry up with the story the suspense is killing me.

05-05-2011, 05:58 PM	#24
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	dude i love it best chapter! I can not believe this is true!

05-26-2011, 10:11 AM	#25
lovaboitoy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2011 Location: St Louis, MO United States Posts: 275 Blog Entries: 5	this is really a great story!

06-11-2011, 04:08 AM	#26
bradsmallory Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: susanville california northern california Posts: 84	when will you continue the story i rilly like it. its off to a great start

06-11-2011, 11:56 PM	#27
daresundevil Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 100	can u hurry up man __________________ limits: no public, no family, no shaving, nothing that will permanently hurt my chance of having children Likes: types of masturbation, [email protected]

06-13-2011, 10:34 PM	#28
wedgie_man Senior Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 160 Blog Entries: 1	Chap 4 CHAPTER FOUR!!!!!!!!!!******** Sorry it took so long to reply i haven't been on in a while. ok so here we go!! ********************************************** ************* So i was standing there with the little kids underwear on, which i thought that my dick was going to explode in them. they had little characters on them. so the little kid got dressed and i said thanks and he replied ya no prob but they dont look like they fit. and then he left, so the guys were like laughing so hard at me while this was all being video taped. then they gave me a sock and i was like what come on guys and they said that it is a new rule that i only get one pice of clothing back at a time. so i was ok now what do i have to do. and they said ok they next person that walks in you have to ask them if they will take a shower with you, and i was like they will think that i am fucking gay. then they said ok i guess we are keeping everything. i was like ok ok so the next person who walked in was some queer teen who looked like he was about me age. he was just coming back from swimming so i asked him, "by chance do you want to take a shower with me" and he looked at me really fucking weird and said well i guess cause i was going to take one anyway but sounds like fun if i have company. so he started to get undressed and he said what do you want me to help you take off your power ranger underwear to. and i was like oh ya i forgot i was wearing them and then one of the guys controlling me was like yes you must take them off for him or let him keep them on because he is under control from me. so the teen was like oh i get it is this like a slave type thing and i was like ya i guess you could call it that. so we started to walk over by the showers both in our underwear. and the teen informed me that he was gay and his name was brett. i was like oh thats cool nice to meet you. and he said oh its my pleasure! so we both walked over there and he said ok well since you are there slave i will also control you, ok i want you to get down and take off my underwear for me. so i got down and noticed that he had a boner. so i started to slip down his briefs and then his dick like slapped me, and he asked me to put his underwear somewhere dry. so then he said i think you should get wet in those power ranger undies first. so he told me that he will start with freezing water and if i obey him then he will turn it a little warmer each time. he said ok to start off i want you to put loads of soap down the front of your undies. so i just kept pressing the soap dispenser and my undies were so full but none got out because they were so type to my body. then he said ok stand under the water, and holy shit was i fucking cold. and he noticed because my boner went down so fucking fast. and he said ok while under the water i want you to keep your hands down your pants. so i did then he said in order to put the temp a little higher i will have to complete the following task. the task was to stand under the water with hands down pants and jack off until i feel like i will cum, but he told me not to cum, he just wants my boner back, he said the water will not turn up until my boner comes back. and let me remind you this is still being recorded. so i was jacking off with all the soap and cold water but it just wasnt really working. so i kept going and finally i started to get a boner, then he just turned it up a little so i was still cold just not as cold. then he said ok with your soapy hand i want you to jack me off but dont make me cum. so i grabbed his about 6 inch dick and went at it, then he was moaning and groaning and i stopped and he said great timing. then he wanted me to do different kinds of tasks and i did them all and the last one was to take off undies and jack off to the person who walks through the door. so we just kind of messed around for a little bit then we heard the door open and we waited then i started to jack off and then i looked to see who it was and the person was about like 10 or 11 and he just stared at me and asked me what i was doing. and i just said showering. i felt so bad for this cause brett told me i had to cum. so the little boy said he was going to shower and had never seen anyone shower like i was. and i just said oh ya its fun bud. so he stood next to me naked and kept staring at my dick. then i was just about to cum and i saw the little kid try it himself and i said oh i dont think you want to do that. then he said why not i said it was fun so he was getting a tiny little boner and he said um what is going on. and i just laughed a little and the boy kept going and then he looked over and i cummed everywhere and it landed right next to his foot, and he asked me why my pee was white and not yellow. and i just laughed and walked back to my locker. so when i got back the guys were like ok i think that you have been through enough torture, you can have your clothes back and i said ok thanks! and they said they got everything on tape! and i hated that but i just got dressed and i walked out. then i thought about it again and i made a decision that i might stop by jim tonight. __________________ limits-poo,pee,messy,hard public,extreme pain, social suicide, family,permanent,cross dressing, prefer no face until I get to know you LIKES- humiliation, sph, dominated, edging, orgasm control, being called names, anything underwear!, cum control, dares, masturbating Kik: undielover19 Selling my used underwear!! Pm or kik for the link! Forced to add the following: Kik dares: https://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=94290

06-29-2011, 02:25 AM	#29
wedgie_man Senior Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 160 Blog Entries: 1	so did u guys like it?!?!?!?! comments please __________________ limits-poo,pee,messy,hard public,extreme pain, social suicide, family,permanent,cross dressing, prefer no face until I get to know you LIKES- humiliation, sph, dominated, edging, orgasm control, being called names, anything underwear!, cum control, dares, masturbating Kik: undielover19 Selling my used underwear!! Pm or kik for the link! Forced to add the following: Kik dares: https://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=94290

06-29-2011, 04:23 AM	#30
myswagga Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: usa Posts: 92	Yea it's great please continue. If only stuff like this could actually happen to me __________________ Male USA