Fiction: My Sister's Friends - Page 7

uzaho · 06-12-2013, 10:09 AM

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Originally Posted by FLCL

Hi everyone. I'm really sorry that I left this story in the state it is for so long. Things came up and I forgot about it. I love this story and really want to continue writing it, but I just haven't had time to do so. In the meantime, uzaho sent me a chapter and I really liked it. I'm including it as an official chapter of My Sister's Friends. Thanks to uzaho for keeping the dream alive!

Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

I tried to match your writing style as best I could!

MadEngineer · 06-13-2013, 10:13 PM

Awesome story so Far! Just a quick suggestion that I thought could make it REALLY good; From now on (If you haven't already), use an actual dice or random die generator online for everyone's roll! This would add some awesome realism to the story

kidinthong · 06-29-2013, 08:52 AM

This is a great story I wish it would continue

Ethan2cu · 07-02-2013, 03:09 PM

i just re-read this, as i had forgotten much of the plot, and i almost spontaneously came... i haven't been that aroused before... when will you continue?

Shadowice · 07-03-2013, 11:32 AM

Just caught this story very hot cant wait to see what happens next!

FLCL · 08-31-2013, 10:08 AM

Chapter 19

Lindsay knelt in front of me with my dick at eye level and grabbed ahold of my shaft. Sarah sat back and told Lindsay, "I'll let you take it from here." Lindsay stroked the length of my dick, her grip lubricated by her own juices. From the floor she looked up and watched my face as she worked her magic.

I could feel it coming, that whole body sensation that I had only ever given to myself in private. Only this time it was a hundred times stronger. I glanced around the room at all the girls, watching me come to orgasm. They were taking turns between watching my face and watching Lindsay's handiwork. My face burned red with embarrassment as it sank in that I was about to cum in front of everyone.

The sensation began to take over my body. My toes curled under my feet, my fingers splayed out, and my head rocked back and forth on my shoulders. "I'm ... cuh ... ming," I struggled to force the words out of my mouth. A second later, I heard the girls gasp with delight.

I looked down and Lindsay had her mouth open wide over of the tip of my dick. That was the final straw. A shot of cum blasted out of my dick like never before and rocked my whole body. When it hit the back of Lindsay's throat, she flinched, squealed, closed her mouth and eyes, and turned her head to the side. It was what you might call a "rookie mistake."

My dick quickly fired a second shot. This one splashed all over the side of Lindsay's face. As the other girls cried "OHHH!" in concert, Lindsay squealed in a higher pitch and leaned away from me, pulling down on my dick. My body bent forward as I continued to unload. Lindsay stared at the tip of my dick as stream after stream splashed on her stomach and between her tits.

It was easily the most cum I had ever released. Honestly, I don't know where it all came from. My epic orgasm went on for over a minute. When it finally stopped, Lindsay let go of my penis and I collapsed backwards onto the couch, sexually satisfied and completely exhausted. Lindsay laid flat on her back to keep the pile of cum from running down her body.

She glanced helplessly around the room and said, "Somebody get me a towel."

naked_lego · 08-31-2013, 11:22 AM

Fantastic! I know this gets said on every post people like but please PLEASE don't leave this story. YOU MUST FINISH IT!

molten man · 08-31-2013, 12:33 PM

Awesome story.. Keep it going..

FLCL · 08-31-2013, 12:40 PM

Chapter 20

I sat collapsed on the couch. The thought of that second stream of cum hitting Lindsay's face stuck in my mind. Rachel slipped the die into my hand and said, "It's your turn." Still slumped into the couch, I flicked my wrist toward the Monopoly board on the floor and rolled a 1.

"Uh, is anyone gonna help me out here?" Lindsay asked, still laying on the floor covered in my cum. Before anyone could respond to Lindsay, Rachel rolled a 5.

Rachel turned to me and said, "I dare you to lick the cum off of Lindsay."

"Ugh, no way," I responded. Lindsay added, "You are so fucked up, Rachel."

"You have to do it! It's a dare!" She commanded.

I looked at Lindsay on the floor covered in cum. "There is no way I am licking all of that up," I said.

Rachel revised her dare, "Well you have to take one big lick and then clean her off with paper towels."

I hesitated before conceding, "Fine." I got on my hands and knees, still completely naked, but now with a soft dick. Rachel slapped my exposed bare ass and said, "Get to it, loser!" The girls all laughed at me.

"Wow Pat, you look so pathetic right now," said Marie.

I remember the overwhelming feeling of shame in that moment. On my hands and knees, completely flaccid, "LOSER" written on my stomach, with my ass in the air exposed to all the girls, about to lick up my own cum.

I turned to Marie and said, "We'll see how you feel when it's time for Jerome to come out." The other girls heads turned towards Marie as she went red in the face.

I turned back to the dare at hand. I decided to get it over with quickly. One long lick across Lindsay's stomach. Lindsay shivered as I did it. The girls laughed as I made a bitter face and ran to the kitchen. "Now you know what it's like!" Sarah called after me.

I spent a minute cleaning out my mouth before returning to the living room with a roll of paper towels. I used five of them before Lindsay was dry. I felt my dick grow a little as I wiped my cum off of her tits. Lindsay smiled at me and said, "Thanks."

After that, Dakota rolled a 6 and made a rule. "I'm getting tired," she said, "So, when Marie removes Jerome, the game is over." We all looked around at one another, but no one protested Dakota's rule. "That should make for a good finale," offered Brittany.

archie21 · 08-31-2013, 01:09 PM

A neat story, nicely told I look forward to the final chapters...

molten man · 09-04-2013, 02:45 PM

Looking forward to the finale of this..

Silvercola · 09-07-2013, 08:27 PM

nice story haven't read a good one in a long time so, thank you.

Sissy-Ashley · 10-16-2013, 10:32 AM

i never read some text with this fun please make the last chapter

naked_lego · 10-18-2013, 03:03 PM

I am ready to read more! Give us an update please

cornylad · 11-02-2013, 02:45 PM

Looking forward to the next installment cnat wait

06-29-2013, 08:52 AM	#93
kidinthong Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 24	This is a great story I wish it would continue __________________ Likes: Wedgies, Pantie Wetting, Light Anal, Cross-dressing, Wearing panties, Slight Public, Humiliation, Being Called Names, Spanking, Bondage, Messy. Ehh: Body Writing, Hard Anal, Really Public and Embarrassing, CBT. Limits: Family, Scat, Getting Caught, To extreme CBT,

07-02-2013, 03:09 PM	#94
Ethan2cu Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: USA Posts: 708	i just re-read this, as i had forgotten much of the plot, and i almost spontaneously came... i haven't been that aroused before... when will you continue? __________________ Still working on these Feel free to KIK me if you are female KIK: ethan2cu Likes: masturbation, voyeurism, phonesex, sexual banter, Limits: anal, pain

07-03-2013, 11:32 AM	#95
Shadowice getDare Addict Join Date: Aug 2012 Location: USA Posts: 2,307 Blog Entries: 4	Just caught this story very hot cant wait to see what happens next! __________________ Curious to know about me? Visit my AMA Ladies if you are feeling brave please try my Hell Tease I love detailed reports

08-31-2013, 10:08 AM	#96
FLCL Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 81	Chapter 19 Lindsay knelt in front of me with my dick at eye level and grabbed ahold of my shaft. Sarah sat back and told Lindsay, "I'll let you take it from here." Lindsay stroked the length of my dick, her grip lubricated by her own juices. From the floor she looked up and watched my face as she worked her magic. I could feel it coming, that whole body sensation that I had only ever given to myself in private. Only this time it was a hundred times stronger. I glanced around the room at all the girls, watching me come to orgasm. They were taking turns between watching my face and watching Lindsay's handiwork. My face burned red with embarrassment as it sank in that I was about to cum in front of everyone. The sensation began to take over my body. My toes curled under my feet, my fingers splayed out, and my head rocked back and forth on my shoulders. "I'm ... cuh ... ming," I struggled to force the words out of my mouth. A second later, I heard the girls gasp with delight. I looked down and Lindsay had her mouth open wide over of the tip of my dick. That was the final straw. A shot of cum blasted out of my dick like never before and rocked my whole body. When it hit the back of Lindsay's throat, she flinched, squealed, closed her mouth and eyes, and turned her head to the side. It was what you might call a "rookie mistake." My dick quickly fired a second shot. This one splashed all over the side of Lindsay's face. As the other girls cried "OHHH!" in concert, Lindsay squealed in a higher pitch and leaned away from me, pulling down on my dick. My body bent forward as I continued to unload. Lindsay stared at the tip of my dick as stream after stream splashed on her stomach and between her tits. It was easily the most cum I had ever released. Honestly, I don't know where it all came from. My epic orgasm went on for over a minute. When it finally stopped, Lindsay let go of my penis and I collapsed backwards onto the couch, sexually satisfied and completely exhausted. Lindsay laid flat on her back to keep the pile of cum from running down her body. She glanced helplessly around the room and said, "Somebody get me a towel." __________________ Read my story: My Sister's Friends

08-31-2013, 11:22 AM	#97
naked_lego Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Bricksburg Posts: 784 Blog Entries: 29	Fantastic! I know this gets said on every post people like but please PLEASE don't leave this story. YOU MUST FINISH IT! __________________ Trans■woman PM Tasks Likes: Photography, Body Writing/Art, Clothing Control, Edging, Denial, Diapers (wearing & wetting) Pee Holding, Butt Plugs, Semi-Public, Nudity, Bondage, Ice, mild spankings Limits: Permanent, Most Pain, Social Suicide, Family, Illegal, Body Waste, curse words Likes & Limits explained

06-13-2013, 10:13 PM	#92
MadEngineer Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 2	Awesome story so Far! Just a quick suggestion that I thought could make it REALLY good; From now on (If you haven't already), use an actual dice or random die generator online for everyone's roll! This would add some awesome realism to the story

08-31-2013, 12:33 PM	#98
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Awesome story.. Keep it going.. __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

08-31-2013, 12:40 PM	#99
FLCL Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 81	Chapter 20 I sat collapsed on the couch. The thought of that second stream of cum hitting Lindsay's face stuck in my mind. Rachel slipped the die into my hand and said, "It's your turn." Still slumped into the couch, I flicked my wrist toward the Monopoly board on the floor and rolled a 1. "Uh, is anyone gonna help me out here?" Lindsay asked, still laying on the floor covered in my cum. Before anyone could respond to Lindsay, Rachel rolled a 5. Rachel turned to me and said, "I dare you to lick the cum off of Lindsay." "Ugh, no way," I responded. Lindsay added, "You are so fucked up, Rachel." "You have to do it! It's a dare!" She commanded. I looked at Lindsay on the floor covered in cum. "There is no way I am licking all of that up," I said. Rachel revised her dare, "Well you have to take one big lick and then clean her off with paper towels." I hesitated before conceding, "Fine." I got on my hands and knees, still completely naked, but now with a soft dick. Rachel slapped my exposed bare ass and said, "Get to it, loser!" The girls all laughed at me. "Wow Pat, you look so pathetic right now," said Marie. I remember the overwhelming feeling of shame in that moment. On my hands and knees, completely flaccid, "LOSER" written on my stomach, with my ass in the air exposed to all the girls, about to lick up my own cum. I turned to Marie and said, "We'll see how you feel when it's time for Jerome to come out." The other girls heads turned towards Marie as she went red in the face. I turned back to the dare at hand. I decided to get it over with quickly. One long lick across Lindsay's stomach. Lindsay shivered as I did it. The girls laughed as I made a bitter face and ran to the kitchen. "Now you know what it's like!" Sarah called after me. I spent a minute cleaning out my mouth before returning to the living room with a roll of paper towels. I used five of them before Lindsay was dry. I felt my dick grow a little as I wiped my cum off of her tits. Lindsay smiled at me and said, "Thanks." After that, Dakota rolled a 6 and made a rule. "I'm getting tired," she said, "So, when Marie removes Jerome, the game is over." We all looked around at one another, but no one protested Dakota's rule. "That should make for a good finale," offered Brittany. __________________ Read my story: My Sister's Friends Last edited by FLCL; 08-31-2013 at 07:42 PM.

08-31-2013, 01:09 PM	#100
archie21 getDare Succubus Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: uk Posts: 1,763	A neat story, nicely told I look forward to the final chapters... __________________ [COLOR=Magenta]You could say no but whats the point in being on a dare site if you say no all the time...... If you don't put up a limits list, expect to be pushed on everything.

09-04-2013, 02:45 PM	#101
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Looking forward to the finale of this.. __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

09-07-2013, 08:27 PM	#102
Silvercola Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 169	nice story haven't read a good one in a long time so, thank you.

10-16-2013, 10:32 AM	#103
Sissy-Ashley Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Netherlands Posts: 20	Wow i never read some text with this fun please make the last chapter __________________ _________________________________ (M) *Dare Me If You Want* _________________________________ Likes: Crossdressing, Bondage, Diaper, Dislikes: Family, Blood, Permanent, _________________________________

10-18-2013, 03:03 PM	#104
naked_lego Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Bricksburg Posts: 784 Blog Entries: 29	I am ready to read more! Give us an update please __________________ Trans■woman PM Tasks Likes: Photography, Body Writing/Art, Clothing Control, Edging, Denial, Diapers (wearing & wetting) Pee Holding, Butt Plugs, Semi-Public, Nudity, Bondage, Ice, mild spankings Limits: Permanent, Most Pain, Social Suicide, Family, Illegal, Body Waste, curse words Likes & Limits explained

11-02-2013, 02:45 PM	#105
cornylad Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 178	Next Installment? Looking forward to the next installment cnat wait __________________ Headmaster at FSOS http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...=168246&page=6