Fiction: ✖✖ St. Krystal's School for Girls: The Fox & The Hedgehog ✖ (Incomplete) - Page 43

Dan_Master · 08-08-2012, 02:33 AM

Wow this story is incredible, great stuff add me to the PM please.

captainsatkins · 08-08-2012, 02:38 AM

Fantastic story, echo the poster who said a publisher would probably love this one.

Add me to the pm list please. :]

gieke · 08-17-2012, 12:51 PM

Will this story be continued? Please tell me Leopard is just on a holiday, and didn't forgot about this;

Joskes · 08-17-2012, 03:53 PM

Spam list please!

Leopard · 08-18-2012, 12:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by gieke

Will this story be continued? Please tell me Leopard is just on a holiday, and didn't forgot about this;

Yes, it will be continued, as soon as I stop meandering about writing evil hardcore bdsm snippets of stories xD

dare marine · 08-19-2012, 03:14 PM

WRIGHT MORE MAN! I haven't spent every night this week reading to not hear what happens with Emily's uniform! Please add me to the spam list

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P.s. I LOVE YOU LEO!

pokerchamp119 · 08-31-2012, 07:48 AM

Come on Leo, you've watched your gymnastics now :P

dickface · 08-31-2012, 10:37 PM

haha this is better than gymnastics in my opinion

revealed · 09-03-2012, 09:20 PM

So I stayed up half the night catching up on this story... It was amazing!!! The quality of it is something that should definitely be published... It kept me hooked more than any book I have read recently.. Can't wait for the next part! This story is brilliant, and you're a great author.

I would love to be added to the spam list thing please

JakD · 09-05-2012, 11:27 PM

1. Do you like the story? Why/Why not?
Yes. It is very well written, interesting and not repetitive, most importantly it is consistent!

2. Who is your favourite character? Why?
Nicole,she's the perfect little sub! I like how Evie is shaping up to have a dominant side which could suit Nicole perfectly.
I was hoping that Nicole was going to start refusing most people but Evie, or at the very least would stand up to Amy and not let her do anything.

3. Who is your least favourite character? Why?
Amy, she is just cruel, where everyone did things for the fun of the majority or for Nicoles benefit (getting her to do what she was to scared to ask for) where Amy just abused her submissiveness

4. What's your favourite scene?
Nicoles punishments with Alyssa

5. Were any bits really boring, or that you didn't understand?
Didn't quiet understand the part where Alyssa was filming Evie Nicole and Amy? But I guess that will be explained later?
I was slightly dissapointed that Nicole caved to Amy after she'd been implying that she genuinely disliked her

6. Are there any scenes that you'd like to see (more of)? i.e. Character romances/kinks/fetishes.
Romance between Nicole and Evie for sure :P
Kinks and fetishes are pretty much on par, personally I wouldn't mind the addition of nappies for a humiliation purpose :P

This is a fantastic story, one of the best I've read, probably the best I haven't paid for!
SPAM LIST PLEASE

Leopard · 09-08-2012, 03:29 AM

Hannah

The moment Emily and Evie closed the door behind them, Hannah started counting. One, two, three, the numbers echoed silently through her mind.

A safety count, she told herself, to make sure the coast is clear.

Hannah counted her way to two hundred. Then she decided that they'd probably gone to pee first, and counted another two hundred. No shortcuts this time, no using multiples of ten.

Make sure they aren't there. I can't face either of their faces right now.

As she counted, thoughts and images rose unbidden into Hannah's consciousness. Evie's face, her eyes closed as she kissed her. The warmth of her breasts, the undeniable thump of her heart. The way the redhead's body had cooled when she'd rejected Hannah. Emily's whispered words, while she'd been huddled beneath the blanket.

No, don't think about any of that now; just count.

She was still under the blanket now. Still naked. Still covered in Evie's sweat and cum. Two hundred came and went. Hannah continued counting. She thought about how daring she'd been to start touching Evie while she'd slept. Pushed the thought away.

Count higher. Find calm. It's here in my head somewhere.

Her body was shaking. It had shaken earlier, too, when Evie had been kissing and biting her way up and down her neck. When Evie had driven her fucking wild with desire. Hannah forced herself back to counting. Evie had had her fingers deep in her cunt, finger fucked her hard enough that she'd wanted to scream – even if Hannah hadn't already been desperate to scream from how hard Evie had been making her pinch her own nipples.

I can keep this up all day, Hannah told herself. Five hundred had come and gone. Just count, just breathe. Don't think about those thoughts; they aren't helping.

Six hundred. Hannah considered masturbating. Decided that it wouldn't help anything. She counted instead, systematically forcing all passion and emotion from her mind. She'd practiced this a lot, gotten real good at it. This time was harder. Six hundred and fifty. Her breathing was slowing on its own now. Good.

"It's okay," Emily had whispered. "You'll find someone else. Someone who's right for you. Maybe someone in your own year level."

A tear trickled down Hannah's cheek.

For a moment, everything was still.

'Fuck counting!' Hannah burst out, kicking out at the blanket.

She fought her way free from the cover, then rolled off the bed, grabbing her long sleeved top and pulling it angrily over her head. In no mood for dirty panties, Hannah tugged on her sweat pants, sweeping the rest of her clothing into her backpack. She couldn't be bothered with shoes, and so stuffed them in after her clothing. Deciding she was clothed enough to be able to return to her room, Hannah picked up her bag.

'Fuck counting, and fuck Evie, and fuck everything!' She shouted at the empty room. She wished her sister was there, so that she could tell her what a jerk she was.

But Emily had left many silently counted numbers ago. Hannah consoled herself by picking up Emily's pillows and tossing them across the room. They flomped into the far wall, then fell to rest together on the floor. Hannah stalked angrily after them, and threw one back across against the far wall.

Feeling somewhat mollified, Hannah wiped her spilt tears away, then stormed from the room, slamming the door behind her.

shola · 09-08-2012, 04:59 PM

Great chapter! Cant wait for the next part!

Daring nemder · 09-10-2012, 03:34 PM

please have more soon the wait kills me

Feudal · 09-12-2012, 09:29 AM

Brilliantly written as ever Leo. Thank you!

yorkboy · 09-14-2012, 04:07 AM

Incredibly written Leo, can you add me to the PM list please?

09-03-2012, 09:20 PM	#639
revealed getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 262	So I stayed up half the night catching up on this story... It was amazing!!! The quality of it is something that should definitely be published... It kept me hooked more than any book I have read recently.. Can't wait for the next part! This story is brilliant, and you're a great author. I would love to be added to the spam list thing please __________________ Likes Breast/ Nipple Torture Double Penetration Not too extreme Creativity, something unique and though about Ice Humiliation Mild hidden Public Bladder control Dislikes Scat, extreme anal, extreme pain, mouth soaping, corner time, rice Limits Public, Pics, Cam, Permanent, Stupidity, Impossible

09-05-2012, 11:27 PM	#640
JakD Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2012 Location: Australia Posts: 13	1. Do you like the story? Why/Why not? Yes. It is very well written, interesting and not repetitive, most importantly it is consistent! 2. Who is your favourite character? Why? Nicole,she's the perfect little sub! I like how Evie is shaping up to have a dominant side which could suit Nicole perfectly. I was hoping that Nicole was going to start refusing most people but Evie, or at the very least would stand up to Amy and not let her do anything. 3. Who is your least favourite character? Why? Amy, she is just cruel, where everyone did things for the fun of the majority or for Nicoles benefit (getting her to do what she was to scared to ask for) where Amy just abused her submissiveness 4. What's your favourite scene? Nicoles punishments with Alyssa 5. Were any bits really boring, or that you didn't understand? Didn't quiet understand the part where Alyssa was filming Evie Nicole and Amy? But I guess that will be explained later? I was slightly dissapointed that Nicole caved to Amy after she'd been implying that she genuinely disliked her 6. Are there any scenes that you'd like to see (more of)? i.e. Character romances/kinks/fetishes. Romance between Nicole and Evie for sure :P Kinks and fetishes are pretty much on par, personally I wouldn't mind the addition of nappies for a humiliation purpose :P This is a fantastic story, one of the best I've read, probably the best I haven't paid for! SPAM LIST PLEASE __________________ M/19/Straight

09-08-2012, 03:29 AM	#641
Leopard Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 2,522	64. The Sulk Hannah The moment Emily and Evie closed the door behind them, Hannah started counting. One, two, three, the numbers echoed silently through her mind. A safety count, she told herself, to make sure the coast is clear. Hannah counted her way to two hundred. Then she decided that they'd probably gone to pee first, and counted another two hundred. No shortcuts this time, no using multiples of ten. Make sure they aren't there. I can't face either of their faces right now. As she counted, thoughts and images rose unbidden into Hannah's consciousness. Evie's face, her eyes closed as she kissed her. The warmth of her breasts, the undeniable thump of her heart. The way the redhead's body had cooled when she'd rejected Hannah. Emily's whispered words, while she'd been huddled beneath the blanket. No, don't think about any of that now; just count. She was still under the blanket now. Still naked. Still covered in Evie's sweat and cum. Two hundred came and went. Hannah continued counting. She thought about how daring she'd been to start touching Evie while she'd slept. Pushed the thought away. Count higher. Find calm. It's here in my head somewhere. Her body was shaking. It had shaken earlier, too, when Evie had been kissing and biting her way up and down her neck. When Evie had driven her fucking wild with desire. Hannah forced herself back to counting. Evie had had her fingers deep in her cunt, finger fucked her hard enough that she'd wanted to scream – even if Hannah hadn't already been desperate to scream from how hard Evie had been making her pinch her own nipples. I can keep this up all day, Hannah told herself. Five hundred had come and gone. Just count, just breathe. Don't think about those thoughts; they aren't helping. Six hundred. Hannah considered masturbating. Decided that it wouldn't help anything. She counted instead, systematically forcing all passion and emotion from her mind. She'd practiced this a lot, gotten real good at it. This time was harder. Six hundred and fifty. Her breathing was slowing on its own now. Good. "It's okay," Emily had whispered. "You'll find someone else. Someone who's right for you. Maybe someone in your own year level." A tear trickled down Hannah's cheek. For a moment, everything was still. 'Fuck counting!' Hannah burst out, kicking out at the blanket. She fought her way free from the cover, then rolled off the bed, grabbing her long sleeved top and pulling it angrily over her head. In no mood for dirty panties, Hannah tugged on her sweat pants, sweeping the rest of her clothing into her backpack. She couldn't be bothered with shoes, and so stuffed them in after her clothing. Deciding she was clothed enough to be able to return to her room, Hannah picked up her bag. 'Fuck counting, and fuck Evie, and fuck everything!' She shouted at the empty room. She wished her sister was there, so that she could tell her what a jerk she was. But Emily had left many silently counted numbers ago. Hannah consoled herself by picking up Emily's pillows and tossing them across the room. They flomped into the far wall, then fell to rest together on the floor. Hannah stalked angrily after them, and threw one back across against the far wall. Feeling somewhat mollified, Hannah wiped her spilt tears away, then stormed from the room, slamming the door behind her.

09-12-2012, 09:29 AM	#644
Feudal Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: UK Posts: 129 Blog Entries: 3	Brilliantly written as ever Leo. Thank you! __________________ (D/s) - Manners, imagination, control, challenging taboos. - Rudeness & abuse of any kind. Feel free to PM me - IF you're interestING, not just if you're interestED. "There is no absolute."

09-14-2012, 04:07 AM	#645
yorkboy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2012 Posts: 367 Blog Entries: 2	Incredibly written Leo, can you add me to the PM list please? __________________ *You're not lying there any longer and I know that that's my fault, so I've been pounding on the floor and I've been crawling up the walls.* 24/Slut/4" Top Loves: Orgasm denial, Edging, Hypnotism Top Dislikes: Pain, Prolonged anal Top Limits: Social suicide, Illegal, Pictures Full Loves & Limits. My Toys. Property of Simonee.

08-08-2012, 02:33 AM	#631
Dan_Master Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2012 Location: England Posts: 4	Wow this story is incredible, great stuff add me to the PM please.

08-08-2012, 02:38 AM	#632
captainsatkins Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: Everywhere. Especially over there. Posts: 25	Fantastic story, echo the poster who said a publisher would probably love this one. Add me to the pm list please. :]

08-17-2012, 12:51 PM	#633
gieke Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 601	Will this story be continued? Please tell me Leopard is just on a holiday, and didn't forgot about this;

08-17-2012, 03:53 PM	#634
Joskes Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 3	Spam list please!

08-19-2012, 03:14 PM	#636
dare marine Member Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 44	WRIGHT MORE MAN! I haven't spent every night this week reading to not hear what happens with Emily's uniform! Please add me to the spam list . P.s. I LOVE YOU LEO!

08-31-2012, 07:48 AM	#637
pokerchamp119 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 20	Come on Leo, you've watched your gymnastics now :P

08-31-2012, 10:37 PM	#638
dickface Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2012 Posts: 226	haha this is better than gymnastics in my opinion

09-08-2012, 04:59 PM	#642
shola Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 207	Great chapter! Cant wait for the next part!

09-10-2012, 03:34 PM	#643
Daring nemder getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 478	please have more soon the wait kills me