What Happened the Night She Was Blackmailed... [FICTION]

Chantale · 11-12-2007, 09:06 PM

THis ios my first try at a story it will be pretty 18+ so I'm going to put it here if you don't think it should go here please fell free to move it.

She was 16 years old he was 30. She doesn't remeber how she met him but she fell in love. She ran away form home, thinking this guy could be the one. She never knew what was in store for her.

They met on an online dating service and he seemed kind and freindly like someone she could talk to. She didn't care about the age she just thought he was much better than the jerks at her school. One day he asked her to meet him at his house. She was a bit worried but trusted him so she said sure. He only lived 1 hour away and the bus was going by in about 30 minutes. She packed some clothes. She got all ready to go. She was dressed in a short mini skirt with a thong, a halter top and some flats. She looked beautifull in what she was wearing. She was only a lottle girl for her age 5"2 and weight 110 pounds she was petite and it suited her perfect with her nice long blonde hair. She wrote a note to her parents saying that she was spending the week at sarah's house. She kissed them goodbye and they dave her the 8$ to cover the bus fee. She got on the bus. She sat at the back. Half way to the guy's house a creepy man came on the bus and sat with her. He looked pretty creepy but he was fine. She finally made it to let's call him Jim's house. She got in the house and Jim tied her and handcuffed her hands. Took her picture and said:

If you leave or tell anyone I'll show everyone the pictures I'm going to take from our fun week were going to have so you better shut your mouth or you will be in trouble my little slave. The girl (valerie) was in complete shock. She disn't think Jim would be like this but boy was she wrong. He set the rules perfectly clearly for her:

-no contact with anyone unless neccessayr to cover this up
-if you tell anyone I will kill you
-if you run I will find you and don't forget about the pictures of you coming here and dissobeying your parents.
-you will call me master Jim
-Youre name will be now slave
-You have no limits I can do what I want to you and if you wont you will be severely punished

The first thing he did was untie and un cuff her and stripped her down. She was nervous and was squirming but Jim hit her on her face and it turned purple instantly. She started to weep but master Jim said shut up if you don't be quiet I will hit you 10 times as hard bitch. She stopped. He finally stripped her all down and took many photos. He then shaved off all of her pubic hair. She was in so much pain she almost passed out. He then gagged her amd cuffed her to the wall. He made her jack him off and suck him. She agreed and was scared so she was willing to do everythign he said. Oh why was I so stupid into coming here.

He then cummed all of her face and made her clean his penis off. He then rapped her. He put his penis in to her pussy and rammed it into her. She was in so much pain. He then hit her breats untill they turned black and blue. She was now crying and the tears were just pouring down. He uncuffed her and she fell lifelessly onto the ground. She didn't know how long it was but then 5 more guys came. They were all big and strong like master Jim. Oh what was she in for now.

They then put her on jim's bed. She was made to suck all of them and they all had sex with her annaly and in her pussy. She was so sore and covered in cum. She couldn't take it anymore and fell asleep. When she woke up she on the floor in a little dog cage. MAster Jim heard her move and took her out for some punishment for sleep while guests were there.

Her punishment was to be a call girl for the night he had 10 of his buddies come and for 100$ they could have her for 1 hour each. They all willingly agreed. She didn't know what to do but knew she was forced to she had no choice but to agree.

the first guy made her sleep with him and suck him and have sex with him. She made her shave him and then fed her dog food. He beat her all over untill she was covered in bruised. His time was up.

Now it was time for the second guy. He filmed her having sex with his dog and jacking off his dog. he then made her watch porn while havning sex with him. Finally his time was up.

the next guy wasn't too nice and was much harsher. He paid 500$ to have her for a full 5 hours. He took her and drove away. She took her to his club and tied her up on his pool table naked in a room full of guys. there was no way he wasn't going to loose his 500. he thought it he lets guys pay him to play witrh her he'd be rich. 15 guys took turns rapping her and doing awfull things to her. After that he had made 1000$. He went to the sex shop and bought a whip, a gag, a dildo, soem cuffs and whipped cream. He took her ot his apartment and cuffed her to his bed on her knees. he put a dildo in her pussy and ass. She was in such pain. He covered his penis in whipped cream and made her suck him dry. When she finally completed the task ehr put whipped cream in her pussy and licked her clean. He cummed on her and pissed and spit on her. His time was now up so he brought her back to Jim's house satisfied with what he had accoimplished.

Valeirie couldn't belevie she still had 6 days here and 2 more guys to go through. Oh whatever would she do..

this is my first story so please tell me if you liekit and should continue.

saintcmj13 · 11-12-2007, 09:39 PM

Seems really rushed...good stories are ones by writers who slow down, use correct grammar and spelling, and develop their characters. No offense but I didn't like the story much because it was too quick and made very little sense at most points. Just my opinion.

Pikachu · 11-12-2007, 10:24 PM

i personally think its good very different from most the stories on this site
and whatever people do don't turn it down keep it serious

Fiendish · 11-12-2007, 10:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mercyou

i personally think its good very different from most the stories on this site
and whatever people do don't turn it down keep it serious

It's not so much "turning it down"... it's character development, STORY development, details... spelling...

Good idea, horrible story(right now... it can be better)

Glutgod · 11-15-2007, 06:27 PM

Its a pretty good story.

molten man · 11-20-2007, 09:52 PM

Awesome story, though a little too quick!!

Playstation · 01-18-2008, 04:45 PM

Please Continue!

Vaginasucker101 · 01-18-2013, 05:12 PM

Its really good Continue please

11-12-2007, 09:06 PM	#1
Chantale Member Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 31	What Happened the Night She Was Blackmailed... [FICTION] THis ios my first try at a story it will be pretty 18+ so I'm going to put it here if you don't think it should go here please fell free to move it. She was 16 years old he was 30. She doesn't remeber how she met him but she fell in love. She ran away form home, thinking this guy could be the one. She never knew what was in store for her. They met on an online dating service and he seemed kind and freindly like someone she could talk to. She didn't care about the age she just thought he was much better than the jerks at her school. One day he asked her to meet him at his house. She was a bit worried but trusted him so she said sure. He only lived 1 hour away and the bus was going by in about 30 minutes. She packed some clothes. She got all ready to go. She was dressed in a short mini skirt with a thong, a halter top and some flats. She looked beautifull in what she was wearing. She was only a lottle girl for her age 5"2 and weight 110 pounds she was petite and it suited her perfect with her nice long blonde hair. She wrote a note to her parents saying that she was spending the week at sarah's house. She kissed them goodbye and they dave her the 8$ to cover the bus fee. She got on the bus. She sat at the back. Half way to the guy's house a creepy man came on the bus and sat with her. He looked pretty creepy but he was fine. She finally made it to let's call him Jim's house. She got in the house and Jim tied her and handcuffed her hands. Took her picture and said: If you leave or tell anyone I'll show everyone the pictures I'm going to take from our fun week were going to have so you better shut your mouth or you will be in trouble my little slave. The girl (valerie) was in complete shock. She disn't think Jim would be like this but boy was she wrong. He set the rules perfectly clearly for her: -no contact with anyone unless neccessayr to cover this up -if you tell anyone I will kill you -if you run I will find you and don't forget about the pictures of you coming here and dissobeying your parents. -you will call me master Jim -Youre name will be now slave -You have no limits I can do what I want to you and if you wont you will be severely punished The first thing he did was untie and un cuff her and stripped her down. She was nervous and was squirming but Jim hit her on her face and it turned purple instantly. She started to weep but master Jim said shut up if you don't be quiet I will hit you 10 times as hard bitch. She stopped. He finally stripped her all down and took many photos. He then shaved off all of her pubic hair. She was in so much pain she almost passed out. He then gagged her amd cuffed her to the wall. He made her jack him off and suck him. She agreed and was scared so she was willing to do everythign he said. Oh why was I so stupid into coming here. He then cummed all of her face and made her clean his penis off. He then rapped her. He put his penis in to her pussy and rammed it into her. She was in so much pain. He then hit her breats untill they turned black and blue. She was now crying and the tears were just pouring down. He uncuffed her and she fell lifelessly onto the ground. She didn't know how long it was but then 5 more guys came. They were all big and strong like master Jim. Oh what was she in for now. They then put her on jim's bed. She was made to suck all of them and they all had sex with her annaly and in her pussy. She was so sore and covered in cum. She couldn't take it anymore and fell asleep. When she woke up she on the floor in a little dog cage. MAster Jim heard her move and took her out for some punishment for sleep while guests were there. Her punishment was to be a call girl for the night he had 10 of his buddies come and for 100$ they could have her for 1 hour each. They all willingly agreed. She didn't know what to do but knew she was forced to she had no choice but to agree. the first guy made her sleep with him and suck him and have sex with him. She made her shave him and then fed her dog food. He beat her all over untill she was covered in bruised. His time was up. Now it was time for the second guy. He filmed her having sex with his dog and jacking off his dog. he then made her watch porn while havning sex with him. Finally his time was up. the next guy wasn't too nice and was much harsher. He paid 500$ to have her for a full 5 hours. He took her and drove away. She took her to his club and tied her up on his pool table naked in a room full of guys. there was no way he wasn't going to loose his 500. he thought it he lets guys pay him to play witrh her he'd be rich. 15 guys took turns rapping her and doing awfull things to her. After that he had made 1000$. He went to the sex shop and bought a whip, a gag, a dildo, soem cuffs and whipped cream. He took her ot his apartment and cuffed her to his bed on her knees. he put a dildo in her pussy and ass. She was in such pain. He covered his penis in whipped cream and made her suck him dry. When she finally completed the task ehr put whipped cream in her pussy and licked her clean. He cummed on her and pissed and spit on her. His time was now up so he brought her back to Jim's house satisfied with what he had accoimplished. Valeirie couldn't belevie she still had 6 days here and 2 more guys to go through. Oh whatever would she do.. this is my first story so please tell me if you liekit and should continue.

11-12-2007, 10:24 PM	#3
Pikachu Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Australia Posts: 897 Blog Entries: 4	keep it up i personally think its good very different from most the stories on this site and whatever people do don't turn it down keep it serious __________________

11-15-2007, 06:27 PM	#5
Glutgod getDare Devil Join Date: May 2006 Location: In your pants Posts: 1,403	Its a pretty good story. __________________ For us, the storm has passed. The war is over. And let us never forget those who journeyed into the howling dark, and did not return. For their decision required courage beyond measure. Sacrifice, an unshakeable conviction that their fight... our fight... was elsewhere. As we start to rebuild, this hillside will remain barren, a memorial to heroes fallen. They enobled all of us, and they shall not be forgotten

11-20-2007, 09:52 PM	#6
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Awesome story, though a little too quick!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

01-18-2008, 04:45 PM	#7
Playstation Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 224	Please Continue! __________________

11-12-2007, 09:39 PM	#2
saintcmj13 Member Join Date: May 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 83 Blog Entries: 1	Seems really rushed...good stories are ones by writers who slow down, use correct grammar and spelling, and develop their characters. No offense but I didn't like the story much because it was too quick and made very little sense at most points. Just my opinion.

01-18-2013, 05:12 PM	#8
Vaginasucker101 Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12	Good Its really good Continue please