Ye Olde TorD

seth18 · 08-13-2009, 10:51 PM

GREAT START! This is an amazing start, I cannot see any grammar errors, YET, and I'm dieing to read more! Of course it has notthing to do with TorD, YET, I'm sure it will in the next installment and is still an amazing start!

Problematique · 08-13-2009, 11:04 PM

It's certainly not the classic truth or dare story, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Very original for this site. I don't believe I've seen anything like this yet, and I look forward to reading the next installments.

Jally · 08-14-2009, 10:08 AM

It was nice, but I think you should check spelling and grammer before posting.

Otherwise I liked it

MasFresco · 08-14-2009, 11:07 AM

Thank you for your supportive comments. The Truth or Dare is soon to come. In the next installment or so. I didn't want to put the game in right away as I thought it would be boring.

nuditydudity · 08-14-2009, 02:22 PM

Wow. This is an excellent start. I hope that you continue to write it. Bravo for creating something new and fresh and creative, that doesn't have the same-old classic plot where everyone has sex in the first part or so. (Which I'm guilty of myself...hmm...)

Thank you for an incredible beginning to a fantastic(al) story!

08-13-2009, 10:51 PM	#1
seth18 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Google Posts: 196	GREAT START! This is an amazing start, I cannot see any grammar errors, YET, and I'm dieing to read more! Of course it has notthing to do with TorD, YET, I'm sure it will in the next installment and is still an amazing start! __________________ Here we go; Cool people use a ;; Duh! Likes: Candy. Dislikes: You. Limits: 'You have to cause I say so'

08-14-2009, 11:07 AM	#4
MasFresco Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: In your closet. BOO! Posts: 45	Thank you for your supportive comments. The Truth or Dare is soon to come. In the next installment or so. I didn't want to put the game in right away as I thought it would be boring. __________________ Pen mightier than the sword eh? Well, here's your pen, wait here and I'll go get my sword. Limits: Anything. I don't do dares. I only enjoy reading creative ideas. Last edited by MasFresco; 08-14-2009 at 11:33 AM.

08-14-2009, 02:22 PM	#5
nuditydudity Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: USA Posts: 573	Wow. This is an excellent start. I hope that you continue to write it. Bravo for creating something new and fresh and creative, that doesn't have the same-old classic plot where everyone has sex in the first part or so. (Which I'm guilty of myself...hmm...) Thank you for an incredible beginning to a fantastic(al) story! __________________ 9 Years on getDare!! Sing like you know the lyrics Dance like no one is watching Live like you were dying Love like you've never been hurt before

08-13-2009, 11:04 PM	#2
Problematique Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 6	It's certainly not the classic truth or dare story, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Very original for this site. I don't believe I've seen anything like this yet, and I look forward to reading the next installments.

08-14-2009, 10:08 AM	#3
Jally Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 10	It was nice, but I think you should check spelling and grammer before posting. Otherwise I liked it