The Nudity Trap Series

TwelveTallPoles · 11-28-2010, 04:30 PM

In this thread I will post a series of descriptions of various mechanical traps, in the style of Saw. The difference between these ones and the ones in the Saw films is that these traps don't kill, and don't involve pain or mutilation in any way. They are simply mechanical devices that will strip the person that is stuck in it completely naked, in front of a large audience jeering at them, unless they perform certain (impossible) tasks to free themselves before the traps activate and they are exposed to hundreds of pairs of eyes glaring at them.

First trap, coming soon!

TwelveTallPoles · 11-28-2010, 05:32 PM

Trap #1
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20-year-old Tom didn’t know where he was. He had no idea what had happened to him. The last thing he could remember was someone in a balaclava suddenly appearing in front of him, before his memory stops.

He slowly opened his eyes. He was standing in an empty room with wooden floor, walls and ceiling. He was hoisted up by cables that were on his wrists that attached to the ceiling, and his feet were cuffed to the floor. Horrified, he began to scream and attempt to wrench his feet from the ground.

Suddenly, to his left, a small TV that he didn’t see before switched on by itself. On it, a distorted video was playing. It featured a very creepy-looking puppet with red spirals painted on its cheeks. The puppet opened its mouth and began to speak in a very hoarse voice:

“Hello, Tom. I want to play a game. All your life you have been dishonest. You have stolen many things, including money, from other people. Your apartment and your car were paid for with illegal money. You thought you could continue living your life in such dishonesty. Now we will see just how much you’re willing to save yourself from the inevitable. Your feet are cuffed to the floor. Attached to you are twelve cables which will retract into walls and ceiling. They are attached to what you are wearing, a prison jumpsuit, by combination lock. The jumpsuit has been modified so it is held together with Velcro. If the cables retract, they will tear your jumpsuit off your body and you will be left naked. In order to remove the cables, you must find the combination to each lock within ten minutes of the end of this video. Good luck, Tom.”

Tom was terrified. He had no idea where he was, or who had kidnapped him, and here he was in danger of being stripped naked, unable to move from his position on the floor. He had never felt this vulnerable.

After the static at the end of the video, a bombshell dropped. One of the walls of the room, which didn’t have any cables coming out of it, began to rise. It rose above the level of the ceiling and out of sight. Behind it was a patchy red curtain. It parted, revealing an audience of around 300 seedy-looking people.

Tom began to panic. He started to cry. He didn’t want to be here. He wanted to be at home in his bed, away from all the evils of the world, but he couldn’t. This was his reality. He was trapped, and he was close to getting stripped naked in front of a large crowd of undesirables.

He knew then he had to try his best to get out of it. He turned his attention to the first lock. It had three digits on it, which meant there were 1000 possible combinations. He wasted no time and started trying to unlock it: 0-0-0, 0-0-1, 0-0-2, 0-0-3... It seemed endless, but Tom was determined.

Finally, after around a minute and a half, he got the lock off. The combination was 1-2-6. Without any further delay he moved on to the next one, but it was becoming all the more apparent that he would not be successful. He even thought he missed some combinations in his haste. He came ever closer and closer to breaking down entirely, and giving up, but he continued his attempts to remove them.

He finally got the second one off, but this one took him a lot longer. The combination was 8-8-4, so he had very little time left. He looked down at himself, and he saw that there were still ten more to remove. Were it not for the cuffs on his feet and the cables holding him up, he’d have collapsed in a crying heap on the ground. He sobbed profusely.

The audience was chuckling. One particularly filthy-looking man was laughing uproariously. Tom looked up at them pleadingly, imploring them with his eyes to help him, but no one budged. They wanted to see him stripped and humiliated. This is why they accepted the offer to be in the audience in the first place. How could they pass up the opportunity to see a luscious, young 20-year-old stripped entirely naked and humiliated beyond words?

Tom stood up and closed his eyes. He was resigned to his fate. He silently waited for the ten minutes to be over.

Then, suddenly, without warning, the cables snapped back into the wall with such force that Tom didn’t even realize what had happened. He turned his head, alarmed, at the source of the snapping sound in the walls, before realizing what had happened. He looked down at himself and saw his naked body exposed to the dim stage lights.

The crowd began to applaud him, and a spotlight came out of nowhere, illuminating him with great brightness. His entire body was on show, and he couldn’t even use his hands to cover himself, as those cables had tautened up and his arms were pointing directly up at the ceiling.

Tom kept his eyes clenched shut. He couldn’t gather the courage to open them, and with his eyes closed, he could pretend the people weren’t there.

He was stretched out nude in front of 300 creepy-looking people, because he had lived a life of dishonesty.

Honesteyes · 11-28-2010, 06:46 PM

I really love the idea and liked the first trap, so I hope you update soon! Can't wait to see what you come up with.

However, I think it could've been slightly improved if there was more of a chance of him actually escaping from the trap, to keep the suspense alive. This would also prolong the journey in the guy's mindset from desperately trying to escape to being forced to just bear the intense humiliation, so we get a more visceral sense of his fear and desperation - and then when he finally is stripped, it would be all the more horrific. Just a suggestion :P

Either way, this is great so bring on trap number 2!

will9022 · 11-28-2010, 07:30 PM

This story is really interesting and unique. I loved the first part and can't wait for more. Although I agree with Honesteyes that maybe you can try to make it more suspenseful, or find a way to make it more humiliating by having the audience be more interactive. Just a suggestion. But still, can't wait for the next trap!

DoctorWorm · 11-30-2010, 12:33 PM

Potentially interesting, though I would like to see more complex traps. Also, rather that a physical challenge, maybe make the victim choose between two unpleasant options.

emmah100 · 12-01-2010, 07:19 PM

I really like the idea! Can't wait for the next one!

Hunterman36 · 12-03-2010, 12:19 AM

Oh my god I love this story. I can't wait for the next trap

Slenderman - Doctor · 12-09-2010, 12:24 PM

I'd love more of these! One is not enough

rhode64 · 12-09-2010, 01:40 PM

When is the next one coming been a while

TwelveTallPoles · 12-17-2010, 04:29 AM

Trap #2
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19-year-old Michael awoke. Dazed, he didn’t at first realize he wasn’t in his bed. Thinking he was lying down, he tried to roll over, but found that he couldn’t.

He wrenched his tired eyes completely open and almost couldn’t keep from screaming.

He wasn’t lying down; he was sitting, and not on a chair, but on an exercise bike. His hands were cuffed to the handle bars and his feet were cuffed to the pedals. Horrified, he tried to free himself of his restraints, but to no avail; he was stuck.

He was in some kind of cabin. There were several grimy windows, but he couldn’t see outside.

He looked down at himself. He was dressed in some kind of weird silk gown, with a very large, open collar. It was almost like a dress, and with nothing on underneath. The back collar of the gown had a chain attached to it that was connected to a pulley the ceiling, and the chain came around and was attached to the front of the bike. He wondered what kind of sick freak had done this to him.

To his right, a small TV screen flicked on and a creepy-looking puppet on the screen began to speak.

“Hello, Michael. I want to play a game. Throughout your teenage years you have neglected to treat your body right. You have never gone out to exercise, and your food is always of the unhealthy variety. You have countered this with the use of heroin, which has kept you skinny, but far from healthy. Now we will see if your body is at the standard it should be. Your hands and feet are cuffed to an exercise bike, and your gown is connected by a chain to a pulley in the ceiling, which also connects to the wheel of the bike. At the end of this video, the wheel will begin to rotate, pulling on the chain. You will need to withstand this rotation with your feet, or else the gown will be lifted up off your body and you will be left naked. You have fifteen minutes to withstand the wheel’s rotation. Good luck, Michael.”

Suddenly, the cabin door opened and people started to walk in. Michael was humiliated. He was faced with the possibility of being seen naked by all these people if he failed the task imposed on him.

Around 100 people in total entered the cabin and sat and stood around the perimeter of the room. They were mainly men, but some women too, all aged in their 50s and 60s. They had come to see a show.

The wheel slowly began to rotate. Michael reacted immediately and began to withstand the rotation of the pedals with his legs. It was easier than he thought. His confidence began to grow as he prevented the wheel from taking away his dignity.

Some of the men around the edges of the room were growing impatient. They had paid good money for this show and they intended to get their money’s worth.

One of them stood up and began to approach Michael and his predicament. Michael glared at him apprehensively.

The old man came right up to him and put his face merely inches away from Michael’s. “You’re making me very unhappy, boy.”

Michael began to weep. He wanted to be home in his bedroom, covered with all manner of clothes and bed covers.

The old man moved so that he was standing behind Michael. He stretched his hands out and started to caress Michael’s back and sides.

Michael was not prepared for this and almost lost control of the wheel, but he kept it from moving.

The man was sliding his hands up and down Michael’s sides, until eventually he started to tickle him.

Again Michael did not anticipate this, and came even closer to losing control of the wheel, but once again managed to keep it still. He had noticed that the force required to keep the wheel from moving had grown somewhat.

Still displeased with the result, the old man then slapped Michael across the head with such force that he felt as if he had clobbered with a hammer. The others around the walls cheered and clapped, and the old man returned to his original place on the floor.

This time, Michael wasn’t able to keep control of the wheel, and it made a half-rotation. The gown was yanked upwards by a small amount, so that his legs were now uncovered.

The sudden movement of the gown terrified him. He knew just how close he came to having it pulled off him entirely, and he vowed to keep control of the wheel until the fifteen minutes were over.

A couple more minutes passed and his legs had started to cramp and shake. He was growing more and more uncomfortable and tired. His desire to retain his modesty sustained him, but he realized he could not hold out much longer.

He slumped his head against the handlebars. The people around him inched closer to see what would happen.

Michael took one last breath as he lost the remaining energy he had.

The pedals started pedaling backwards, dragging Michael’s legs around with them. He tried to resist, but he was far too spent.

The gown lifted slowly off him, up over his knees, across his thighs, until eventually it was lifted up and off.

The crowd erupted into applause, the ones sitting on the floor leaping to their feet in joy.

Michael tried to cover his privates, but his hands were bound in front of him, and he couldn’t even et his elbows near his lap. His feet were still moving around on the pedals, the wheel now moving freely, the gown getting tangled and torn in the pulley overhead.

He was naked in a dirty cabin, surrounded by dirty old men and women, unable to hide his shame, all because he had neglected to properly care for his body.

yermawsface · 12-19-2010, 06:50 AM

Like the idea you have here

Would be good if it had a little more sexual themes rather than just being naked

If you dont do somthing in x mins... You will be stripped naked and wanked off by a naked man!

nuditydudity · 12-21-2010, 06:33 PM

Interesting story idea! I like it a lot, and keep it up. It's nice to have some originality in the story. I don't think that you need to make it sexual, as there are undertones of it in the audience, but if you want to it might make a nice twist, but it's whatever you want.
Nicely done, looking forward to reading more.
Nudity

boyslave89 · 12-22-2010, 03:50 AM

very interesting story! please post #3!

lovaboitoy · 10-18-2011, 06:11 PM

Please continue I love this I think would be hot with description of what they look like....door an athlete at school next time

DumbBrunette · 10-19-2011, 02:16 PM

I like it just as it is, dont add anything sexual cus it will change it too much

Could you try a female next time??

12-09-2010, 01:40 PM	#9
rhode64 getDare Patriot Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: England south coast Posts: 3,043 Blog Entries: 3	when When is the next one coming been a while

12-17-2010, 04:29 AM	#10
TwelveTallPoles Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 72	Trap #2 Trap #2 __________________________________________________ ________________________ 19-year-old Michael awoke. Dazed, he didn’t at first realize he wasn’t in his bed. Thinking he was lying down, he tried to roll over, but found that he couldn’t. He wrenched his tired eyes completely open and almost couldn’t keep from screaming. He wasn’t lying down; he was sitting, and not on a chair, but on an exercise bike. His hands were cuffed to the handle bars and his feet were cuffed to the pedals. Horrified, he tried to free himself of his restraints, but to no avail; he was stuck. He was in some kind of cabin. There were several grimy windows, but he couldn’t see outside. He looked down at himself. He was dressed in some kind of weird silk gown, with a very large, open collar. It was almost like a dress, and with nothing on underneath. The back collar of the gown had a chain attached to it that was connected to a pulley the ceiling, and the chain came around and was attached to the front of the bike. He wondered what kind of sick freak had done this to him. To his right, a small TV screen flicked on and a creepy-looking puppet on the screen began to speak. “Hello, Michael. I want to play a game. Throughout your teenage years you have neglected to treat your body right. You have never gone out to exercise, and your food is always of the unhealthy variety. You have countered this with the use of heroin, which has kept you skinny, but far from healthy. Now we will see if your body is at the standard it should be. Your hands and feet are cuffed to an exercise bike, and your gown is connected by a chain to a pulley in the ceiling, which also connects to the wheel of the bike. At the end of this video, the wheel will begin to rotate, pulling on the chain. You will need to withstand this rotation with your feet, or else the gown will be lifted up off your body and you will be left naked. You have fifteen minutes to withstand the wheel’s rotation. Good luck, Michael.” Suddenly, the cabin door opened and people started to walk in. Michael was humiliated. He was faced with the possibility of being seen naked by all these people if he failed the task imposed on him. Around 100 people in total entered the cabin and sat and stood around the perimeter of the room. They were mainly men, but some women too, all aged in their 50s and 60s. They had come to see a show. The wheel slowly began to rotate. Michael reacted immediately and began to withstand the rotation of the pedals with his legs. It was easier than he thought. His confidence began to grow as he prevented the wheel from taking away his dignity. Some of the men around the edges of the room were growing impatient. They had paid good money for this show and they intended to get their money’s worth. One of them stood up and began to approach Michael and his predicament. Michael glared at him apprehensively. The old man came right up to him and put his face merely inches away from Michael’s. “You’re making me very unhappy, boy.” Michael began to weep. He wanted to be home in his bedroom, covered with all manner of clothes and bed covers. The old man moved so that he was standing behind Michael. He stretched his hands out and started to caress Michael’s back and sides. Michael was not prepared for this and almost lost control of the wheel, but he kept it from moving. The man was sliding his hands up and down Michael’s sides, until eventually he started to tickle him. Again Michael did not anticipate this, and came even closer to losing control of the wheel, but once again managed to keep it still. He had noticed that the force required to keep the wheel from moving had grown somewhat. Still displeased with the result, the old man then slapped Michael across the head with such force that he felt as if he had clobbered with a hammer. The others around the walls cheered and clapped, and the old man returned to his original place on the floor. This time, Michael wasn’t able to keep control of the wheel, and it made a half-rotation. The gown was yanked upwards by a small amount, so that his legs were now uncovered. The sudden movement of the gown terrified him. He knew just how close he came to having it pulled off him entirely, and he vowed to keep control of the wheel until the fifteen minutes were over. A couple more minutes passed and his legs had started to cramp and shake. He was growing more and more uncomfortable and tired. His desire to retain his modesty sustained him, but he realized he could not hold out much longer. He slumped his head against the handlebars. The people around him inched closer to see what would happen. Michael took one last breath as he lost the remaining energy he had. The pedals started pedaling backwards, dragging Michael’s legs around with them. He tried to resist, but he was far too spent. The gown lifted slowly off him, up over his knees, across his thighs, until eventually it was lifted up and off. The crowd erupted into applause, the ones sitting on the floor leaping to their feet in joy. Michael tried to cover his privates, but his hands were bound in front of him, and he couldn’t even et his elbows near his lap. His feet were still moving around on the pedals, the wheel now moving freely, the gown getting tangled and torn in the pulley overhead. *He was naked in a dirty cabin, surrounded by dirty old men and women, unable to hide his shame, all because he had neglected to properly care for his body.*

12-19-2010, 06:50 AM	#11
yermawsface Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Scotland Posts: 86	Like the idea you have here Would be good if it had a little more sexual themes rather than just being naked If you dont do somthing in x mins... You will be stripped naked and wanked off by a naked man! __________________ Keep Your Underwear Dare Keep Your Underwear AGAIN Dare ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Limits: No Messy, No Public Likes: Anal, bondage, tease and denial Owns: Butt plug, cock ring, ball gag

12-21-2010, 06:33 PM	#12
nuditydudity Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: USA Posts: 573	Interesting story idea! I like it a lot, and keep it up. It's nice to have some originality in the story. I don't think that you need to make it sexual, as there are undertones of it in the audience, but if you want to it might make a nice twist, but it's whatever you want. Nicely done, looking forward to reading more. Nudity __________________ 9 Years on getDare!! Sing like you know the lyrics Dance like no one is watching Live like you were dying Love like you've never been hurt before

11-28-2010, 04:30 PM	#1
TwelveTallPoles Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 72	The Nudity Trap Series In this thread I will post a series of descriptions of various mechanical traps, in the style of Saw. The difference between these ones and the ones in the Saw films is that these traps don't kill, and don't involve pain or mutilation in any way. They are simply mechanical devices that will strip the person that is stuck in it completely naked, in front of a large audience jeering at them, unless they perform certain (impossible) tasks to free themselves before the traps activate and they are exposed to hundreds of pairs of eyes glaring at them. First trap, coming soon!

11-28-2010, 05:32 PM	#2
TwelveTallPoles Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 72	Trap #1 __________________________________________________ ________________________ 20-year-old Tom didn’t know where he was. He had no idea what had happened to him. The last thing he could remember was someone in a balaclava suddenly appearing in front of him, before his memory stops. He slowly opened his eyes. He was standing in an empty room with wooden floor, walls and ceiling. He was hoisted up by cables that were on his wrists that attached to the ceiling, and his feet were cuffed to the floor. Horrified, he began to scream and attempt to wrench his feet from the ground. Suddenly, to his left, a small TV that he didn’t see before switched on by itself. On it, a distorted video was playing. It featured a very creepy-looking puppet with red spirals painted on its cheeks. The puppet opened its mouth and began to speak in a very hoarse voice: “Hello, Tom. I want to play a game. All your life you have been dishonest. You have stolen many things, including money, from other people. Your apartment and your car were paid for with illegal money. You thought you could continue living your life in such dishonesty. Now we will see just how much you’re willing to save yourself from the inevitable. Your feet are cuffed to the floor. Attached to you are twelve cables which will retract into walls and ceiling. They are attached to what you are wearing, a prison jumpsuit, by combination lock. The jumpsuit has been modified so it is held together with Velcro. If the cables retract, they will tear your jumpsuit off your body and you will be left naked. In order to remove the cables, you must find the combination to each lock within ten minutes of the end of this video. Good luck, Tom.” Tom was terrified. He had no idea where he was, or who had kidnapped him, and here he was in danger of being stripped naked, unable to move from his position on the floor. He had never felt this vulnerable. After the static at the end of the video, a bombshell dropped. One of the walls of the room, which didn’t have any cables coming out of it, began to rise. It rose above the level of the ceiling and out of sight. Behind it was a patchy red curtain. It parted, revealing an audience of around 300 seedy-looking people. Tom began to panic. He started to cry. He didn’t want to be here. He wanted to be at home in his bed, away from all the evils of the world, but he couldn’t. This was his reality. He was trapped, and he was close to getting stripped naked in front of a large crowd of undesirables. He knew then he had to try his best to get out of it. He turned his attention to the first lock. It had three digits on it, which meant there were 1000 possible combinations. He wasted no time and started trying to unlock it: 0-0-0, 0-0-1, 0-0-2, 0-0-3... It seemed endless, but Tom was determined. Finally, after around a minute and a half, he got the lock off. The combination was 1-2-6. Without any further delay he moved on to the next one, but it was becoming all the more apparent that he would not be successful. He even thought he missed some combinations in his haste. He came ever closer and closer to breaking down entirely, and giving up, but he continued his attempts to remove them. He finally got the second one off, but this one took him a lot longer. The combination was 8-8-4, so he had very little time left. He looked down at himself, and he saw that there were still ten more to remove. Were it not for the cuffs on his feet and the cables holding him up, he’d have collapsed in a crying heap on the ground. He sobbed profusely. The audience was chuckling. One particularly filthy-looking man was laughing uproariously. Tom looked up at them pleadingly, imploring them with his eyes to help him, but no one budged. They wanted to see him stripped and humiliated. This is why they accepted the offer to be in the audience in the first place. How could they pass up the opportunity to see a luscious, young 20-year-old stripped entirely naked and humiliated beyond words? Tom stood up and closed his eyes. He was resigned to his fate. He silently waited for the ten minutes to be over. Then, suddenly, without warning, the cables snapped back into the wall with such force that Tom didn’t even realize what had happened. He turned his head, alarmed, at the source of the snapping sound in the walls, before realizing what had happened. He looked down at himself and saw his naked body exposed to the dim stage lights. The crowd began to applaud him, and a spotlight came out of nowhere, illuminating him with great brightness. His entire body was on show, and he couldn’t even use his hands to cover himself, as those cables had tautened up and his arms were pointing directly up at the ceiling. Tom kept his eyes clenched shut. He couldn’t gather the courage to open them, and with his eyes closed, he could pretend the people weren’t there. *He was stretched out nude in front of 300 creepy-looking people, because he had lived a life of dishonesty.*

11-28-2010, 06:46 PM	#3
Honesteyes Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Engaalaaaaand Posts: 102	I really love the idea and liked the first trap, so I hope you update soon! Can't wait to see what you come up with. However, I think it could've been slightly improved if there was more of a chance of him actually escaping from the trap, to keep the suspense alive. This would also prolong the journey in the guy's mindset from desperately trying to escape to being forced to just bear the intense humiliation, so we get a more visceral sense of his fear and desperation - and then when he finally is stripped, it would be all the more horrific. Just a suggestion :P Either way, this is great so bring on trap number 2!

11-28-2010, 07:30 PM	#4
will9022 Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New York, USA Posts: 156	This story is really interesting and unique. I loved the first part and can't wait for more. Although I agree with Honesteyes that maybe you can try to make it more suspenseful, or find a way to make it more humiliating by having the audience be more interactive. Just a suggestion. But still, can't wait for the next trap!

11-30-2010, 12:33 PM	#5
DoctorWorm getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: It's a magical place. Posts: 307	Potentially interesting, though I would like to see more complex traps. Also, rather that a physical challenge, maybe make the victim choose between two unpleasant options.

12-01-2010, 07:19 PM	#6
emmah100 Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: USA Posts: 43	I really like the idea! Can't wait for the next one!

12-03-2010, 12:19 AM	#7
Hunterman36 Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: the moon Europa Posts: 646 Blog Entries: 2	Oh my god I love this story. I can't wait for the next trap

12-09-2010, 12:24 PM	#8
Slenderman - Doctor Truth or Dare Zealot Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6,760	I'd love more of these! One is not enough

12-22-2010, 03:50 AM	#13
boyslave89 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 118	very interesting story! please post #3!

10-18-2011, 06:11 PM	#14
lovaboitoy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2011 Location: St Louis, MO United States Posts: 275 Blog Entries: 5	Please continue I love this I think would be hot with description of what they look like....door an athlete at school next time

10-19-2011, 02:16 PM	#15
DumbBrunette Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 11	I like it just as it is, dont add anything sexual cus it will change it too much Could you try a female next time??