04-01-2008, 07:29 PM
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If you can't offer constructive critisism why offer critisism at all? And it is actually very very hard to write a story especially one as good as this. i have written one story (with alot of help from others) and i can't finish my second one so i am not posting it Why don't you try and write a story then slave456?
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04-03-2008, 03:05 AM
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04-03-2008, 06:15 AM
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if his usb smashed it has smashed no reason to crack it at him and if he has writers block well then lets jsut hope he gets through it for the sake of the story it is people such as yourself who constantly put down this wonderful site look at your reputation that is shocking you should reset your morals and such
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04-03-2008, 07:09 AM
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omg the reason my reputation is so bad is because weirdos like you give it out for no proper reasons!!! it never takes that long to put the next part on. Well yeah me and others will constantly keep putting the site down because its crap at times?! why give people bad reputation for saying the truth?? its the real world!!! get with it!!!!
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04-03-2008, 07:16 AM
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04-03-2008, 08:37 AM
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he fucking started it!!!!!!!!!!!
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04-03-2008, 02:31 PM
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because i said why take so long posting the next part!?? he got rather excited and wrote and essay about how he could be in hospital or how is internet proably isn working!!!!
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04-17-2008, 03:27 PM
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it is a rather good story if you could clarify on the part with the "alan Brice" that would really help me thank you... but all around good story
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09-21-2008, 03:54 PM
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I really quite liked the story - always like the 'darker' ones and this seems to fulfill that.
Like the others say though, more detail and descriptions would be good and would help slow it down and give you more time etc.
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09-21-2008, 09:10 PM
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Unfortunately, I will have to close this thread... jack's last activity here was of March 2008 (6 months ago) & I'm afraid that any continuation won't happen...
@jack1989: if you read this (which means you're back!) and want to follow with your story just give any GD staff member a PM & we will unlock your thread for you to follow 
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