Prisoners of war(fiction)

jakc333 · 05-20-2008, 01:36 PM

Ethan sat on a tree branch starring down onto the field that had been full with people just hours ago, now there was just splatters from paintballs, grass that had been kicked up by the people running through it, and the occasional scrap of clothing. This had been a losing battle for the boys, the girls had come around from behind and stole some of their artillery's thankfully his friend John had used a few paintball grenades for a distraction and no one had been captured. Though a girl had shot him in the nuts. Although people bitched about their minor injuries no one regretted them, for this was the traditional summer long war between the boys and girls of Goldbridge University. Ethan was an artist he could make amazing sketches, even his professors couldn't object when he did a nude sketch of a girl named Katherine. It was amazingly accurate and she was beatufill. Tall maybe six foot, with long legs, she had brown hair hanging to her mid back perfectly straight,and that ass, what a wonderful ass perfectly curved not to small. Ethan was a person who regretted much but he wished he had grabbed it. As Ethan sat thinking about Katherine and sketching the battle field a transmition came in from his walkie talkie, "Hello," he said polity.

"Get the fuck back to our base, we got a problem!" John shouted, and the line went dead.

sexylegs · 05-20-2008, 01:39 PM

i like it, i cant wait to hear more!

Looking4somename · 05-20-2008, 02:06 PM

Seems interesting. Keep it up.

jakc333 · 05-21-2008, 02:50 PM

Ethan raced by to the base. As he dashed through the trees he wondered what could have happened. As the base came into view his worst fears were confirmed, a full scale battle between them and the girls. The girls had come down the hillside and had a huge artillery advantage. Ethan ducked into the bushes as a paintball whizzed past his ear. Ethan studied the hillside nervously, the girls had a huge advantage on the guys but there was a perfect close combat point about 80 yards from him, the girls had their backs to him and he could probably break up the attack long enough for the guys to push them back. Ethan muttered a quick prayer and loaded his airsoft pistol. He quickly ran up on the point using as much cover as he could. Once at the point he lay down in the tall grass crawling closer until he was about 10 yards from the girls. He started firing his pistol at the enemy. He hit about four of them before they started firing back. Ethan kept firing blindly even after getting hit twice in the chest. As he ducked down to reload a large shadow started to block out the light. He looked up and saw Katherine's towering figure over him, her airsoft pistol pointed at him. Ethan slowly dropped his gun and put his hands behind his head. She picked him up by his collar and whacked him across the face with her pistol. Ethan woke up a few hours later to complete darkness.

TheFloss · 05-22-2008, 06:36 AM

Haha, awesome! Keep it up, man!

jjjj · 05-23-2008, 04:35 PM

seems a bit drastic for calling it POW and her hitting him with a airsoft pistol but still its a good story.

jakc333 · 05-25-2008, 04:21 PM

the name is more of a name and the pistol thing well you will find out why as soon as i write the next chapter (i thought of the reason a few days ago lol)

anonimousbob · 05-26-2008, 02:48 AM

When I read it and thought of the title, I found it more of a statement that it is an airsoft/paintball war, and he becomes a prisoner, and that the story will follow what happens while he is a prisoner. I guess you could pretend they were in a real war if it make you feel better lol

jakc333 · 05-26-2008, 07:19 AM

John lay on a mattress his friend Martin putting a gauze on his knee. "You really didn't need to jump from the trees to surprise them did you?" Martin asked him a look of amusement on his face.

John sipped his beer thoughtfully, "No I suppose I didn't, but it worked didn't it? They ran away right?"

"That wasn't you genius, that was Ethan. You jumped on their backup. I suppose that did help a lot though otherwise Ethan's plan might not have worked," Martin explained.

"Where is he anyway?"

A grim look came over Martin's face, "They got him." With that comment Martin left.

John sat up and wiped some paint splatter of his aviator sunglasses. The girls kept leading the assault, even though Ethan was not much of a fighter in conventional fighting he had proved he knew how to fight, true it was in his own way, but it worked. They needed a chance to get Ethan back, and to do that they needed to bring the fight to the girls.

superman17 · 05-27-2008, 04:17 PM

Loving this story keep it up!

Insanity · 05-27-2008, 07:43 PM

Yes, I much like where this is going. Nice work. Continue please =)

molten man · 06-01-2008, 09:27 PM

Nice story!! Please continue!!

jjjj · 06-04-2008, 10:29 AM

hope im not bumping but when are you gonna keep going any way please keep us informed on how close you are to finishing the next part.

jakc333 · 06-04-2008, 02:14 PM

will post soon, just to tell you this one is from the perspective of a girl,

jakc333 · 07-26-2008, 04:59 PM

as for all get dare stuff i am only back as a writer nothing else, not dares or slave master or w.e. i have had alot of ideas for the story and been lazy with it so i decided to post it.
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Katherine smirked at the unconscious body infront of her. Ethan...had ruined there entire assault, plus the air soft pellet he shot at her had gone up her ass. And now here he was, tied to a post bellow her cabin. She flicked on the light and to her surprise he was not unconscious but wide awake and staring at her.

"Hello Katherine," He said, smiling at the surprise on her face.

"Hello Ethan," she responded trying to hide her anger at his smugness.

"Next time your gona pistol whip someone...just dont it hurts like fuck."

"Don't worry that isn't your biggest problem."

Ethan stared at her for a moment then laughed, "So are you going to threaten me for information, torture me for it, or just torture me for your amusement?"

"Well technically the second one but that doesn't me I wont enjoy it."

"In that case bring it on bitch," Ethan said smugly and spat at her.

05-20-2008, 01:36 PM	#1
jakc333 Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 75	Prisoners of war(fiction) Ethan sat on a tree branch starring down onto the field that had been full with people just hours ago, now there was just splatters from paintballs, grass that had been kicked up by the people running through it, and the occasional scrap of clothing. This had been a losing battle for the boys, the girls had come around from behind and stole some of their artillery's thankfully his friend John had used a few paintball grenades for a distraction and no one had been captured. Though a girl had shot him in the nuts. Although people bitched about their minor injuries no one regretted them, for this was the traditional summer long war between the boys and girls of Goldbridge University. Ethan was an artist he could make amazing sketches, even his professors couldn't object when he did a nude sketch of a girl named Katherine. It was amazingly accurate and she was beatufill. Tall maybe six foot, with long legs, she had brown hair hanging to her mid back perfectly straight,and that ass, what a wonderful ass perfectly curved not to small. Ethan was a person who regretted much but he wished he had grabbed it. As Ethan sat thinking about Katherine and sketching the battle field a transmition came in from his walkie talkie, "Hello," he said polity. "Get the fuck back to our base, we got a problem!" John shouted, and the line went dead. __________________ I'm expecting the unexpected-New slave i am not saying you're a ducebag, I am saying you are a bag of duce.

05-20-2008, 02:06 PM	#3
Looking4somename getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2007 Location: Right behind you. Posts: 275 Blog Entries: 3	Seems interesting. Keep it up. __________________ Some of them want to use you... "You know, these clothes do not fancy you at all. It should be a dress or nothing... I happen to have no dress in my cabin." (Captain Jack Sparrow) ...Some of the want to get used by you

05-21-2008, 02:50 PM	#4
jakc333 Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 75	Ethan raced by to the base. As he dashed through the trees he wondered what could have happened. As the base came into view his worst fears were confirmed, a full scale battle between them and the girls. The girls had come down the hillside and had a huge artillery advantage. Ethan ducked into the bushes as a paintball whizzed past his ear. Ethan studied the hillside nervously, the girls had a huge advantage on the guys but there was a perfect close combat point about 80 yards from him, the girls had their backs to him and he could probably break up the attack long enough for the guys to push them back. Ethan muttered a quick prayer and loaded his airsoft pistol. He quickly ran up on the point using as much cover as he could. Once at the point he lay down in the tall grass crawling closer until he was about 10 yards from the girls. He started firing his pistol at the enemy. He hit about four of them before they started firing back. Ethan kept firing blindly even after getting hit twice in the chest. As he ducked down to reload a large shadow started to block out the light. He looked up and saw Katherine's towering figure over him, her airsoft pistol pointed at him. Ethan slowly dropped his gun and put his hands behind his head. She picked him up by his collar and whacked him across the face with her pistol. Ethan woke up a few hours later to complete darkness. __________________ I'm expecting the unexpected-New slave i am not saying you're a ducebag, I am saying you are a bag of duce.

05-25-2008, 04:21 PM	#7
jakc333 Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 75	the name is more of a name and the pistol thing well you will find out why as soon as i write the next chapter (i thought of the reason a few days ago lol) __________________ I'm expecting the unexpected-New slave i am not saying you're a ducebag, I am saying you are a bag of duce.

05-26-2008, 02:48 AM	#8
anonimousbob Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: UK Posts: 918 Blog Entries: 5	When I read it and thought of the title, I found it more of a statement that it is an airsoft/paintball war, and he becomes a prisoner, and that the story will follow what happens while he is a prisoner. I guess you could pretend they were in a real war if it make you feel better lol __________________ 27/M/GMT Ask me anything http://anonimousbob.tumblr.com/ask yes: secluded public, crossdressing,, chastity sexual, anal (including enemas if you want), slight pain, anything else not on the above list I can't think of right now no: openly public/involving others, bodily waste, extreme pain Add me at [email protected] Check out my profile and album on Kinktalk I am looking for a mistress to serve right now

05-20-2008, 01:39 PM	#2
sexylegs Junior Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 2	i like it, i cant wait to hear more!

05-22-2008, 06:36 AM	#5
TheFloss Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 106	Haha, awesome! Keep it up, man!

05-23-2008, 04:35 PM	#6
jjjj Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: California,Aromas Posts: 134	seems a bit drastic for calling it POW and her hitting him with a airsoft pistol but still its a good story.

05-26-2008, 07:19 AM	#9
jakc333 Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 75	John lay on a mattress his friend Martin putting a gauze on his knee. "You really didn't need to jump from the trees to surprise them did you?" Martin asked him a look of amusement on his face. John sipped his beer thoughtfully, "No I suppose I didn't, but it worked didn't it? They ran away right?" "That wasn't you genius, that was Ethan. You jumped on their backup. I suppose that did help a lot though otherwise Ethan's plan might not have worked," Martin explained. "Where is he anyway?" A grim look came over Martin's face, "They got him." With that comment Martin left. John sat up and wiped some paint splatter of his aviator sunglasses. The girls kept leading the assault, even though Ethan was not much of a fighter in conventional fighting he had proved he knew how to fight, true it was in his own way, but it worked. They needed a chance to get Ethan back, and to do that they needed to bring the fight to the girls. __________________ I'm expecting the unexpected-New slave i am not saying you're a ducebag, I am saying you are a bag of duce.

05-27-2008, 04:17 PM	#10
superman17 Junior Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 6	Loving this story keep it up!

05-27-2008, 07:43 PM	#11
Insanity Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 31	Yes, I much like where this is going. Nice work. Continue please =)

06-01-2008, 09:27 PM	#12
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Nice story!! Please continue!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

06-04-2008, 10:29 AM	#13
jjjj Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: California,Aromas Posts: 134	hope im not bumping but when are you gonna keep going any way please keep us informed on how close you are to finishing the next part. __________________ we shall ravage their numbers crush their spirit and drive them back to hell!!!......(stomach rumbles)After i eat some lunch. P.S. look at my profile!!! also im always looking for a mistress not too strict i don't have a web cam and i won't eat shit,drink piss or do something public or too much pain nothing too messy either but i do like wedgie,piss and shit dares and things

06-04-2008, 02:14 PM	#14
jakc333 Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 75	will post soon, just to tell you this one is from the perspective of a girl, __________________ I'm expecting the unexpected-New slave i am not saying you're a ducebag, I am saying you are a bag of duce.

07-26-2008, 04:59 PM	#15
jakc333 Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 75	IM BACK! (sorta...) as for all get dare stuff i am only back as a writer nothing else, not dares or slave master or w.e. i have had alot of ideas for the story and been lazy with it so i decided to post it. 00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 00000000000000 Katherine smirked at the unconscious body infront of her. Ethan...had ruined there entire assault, plus the air soft pellet he shot at her had gone up her ass. And now here he was, tied to a post bellow her cabin. She flicked on the light and to her surprise he was not unconscious but wide awake and staring at her. "Hello Katherine," He said, smiling at the surprise on her face. "Hello Ethan," she responded trying to hide her anger at his smugness. "Next time your gona pistol whip someone...just dont it hurts like fuck." "Don't worry that isn't your biggest problem." Ethan stared at her for a moment then laughed, "So are you going to threaten me for information, torture me for it, or just torture me for your amusement?" "Well technically the second one but that doesn't me I wont enjoy it." "In that case bring it on bitch," Ethan said smugly and spat at her. __________________ I'm expecting the unexpected-New slave i am not saying you're a ducebag, I am saying you are a bag of duce.