09-21-2011, 12:43 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2011
Location: ohio
Posts: 244
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this story has gotten a bit weirder, but its still pretty good!
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09-30-2011, 02:14 PM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Dec 2010
Posts: 28
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When will there be more to this story?
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10-31-2011, 12:57 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Oct 2010
Posts: 3
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Your story is good but your Englush is poor. I am not saying you need to be perfect but at times it is so poor that it is unintelligible. This is not good because it makes your story difficult to read and even understand. Again, I'm not perfect in grammar either, but at times your wording is confusing and miss leading. Just trying to help.
Last edited by bamm11; 10-31-2011 at 12:59 AM. Reason: Typeo |
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11-02-2011, 01:18 PM
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Junior Member
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Germany
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omg...who banned him??
he needs to continue the story so badly !!!
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