♥ Strip Poker with a Twist ♥ - Page 18

Kisune Karnon · 10-18-2010, 11:41 AM

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Originally Posted by 12356416514a

a trophy for the best storie on getDare.com

Actually ShinyDemon has the best ones. This one is second to it.

12356416514a · 10-18-2010, 11:44 AM

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Originally Posted by Kisunesoldier

Actually ShinyDemon has the best ones. This one is second to it.

ok but this is my favorite one

ShinyDemon has also some great stories.

Xrider · 10-18-2010, 11:48 AM

Very interesting story, but your chapter ends are killing me ^^

firenight · 10-18-2010, 12:26 PM

go on can't wait for more

Rachie · 10-19-2010, 12:43 AM

I have never been trying to compete with any of the 3 fantastic stories written by Shiny Demon’s (Sisters Sleepover).

May I say that if it wasn’t for these stories, this would never have been written, I was looking for dares for group and found his story of google. Read fully and later was asked where got dare idea from, was also told to join as another dare. Since that time have made many friends and started to write story. Therefore in my opinion Shiny Demon has the great talent and has written the best most thrilling stories I have ever read.

I am only glad that people are starting to compare my stories with his.

I am Dyslexic caused by unfortunate hospital incidents earlier in life (of which some viewers are aware of) if there are errors I apologies.

I would like to thank everyone that has made STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST such a great success. Special thanks to Shavedrachel for her 50th post (lol)

Thanks to everyone that has viewed the story making it now the most viewed R18 Mature Story on getdare (55,000 viewers in 6 weeks, 3 days) approx 1200 per day.

Thanks to everyone that has replied and left comments / feedback on the story , making it now the most replied to R18 Mature Story on getDare.

Also for the 15 people that have left thanks and to the 19 people who have rated the story 5 stars and have made it the highest rated story on getDare.

I would also like to thank ShinyDemon (the best story writer there is on getdare) for his support and for the encouragement that helped the story in the beginning chapters.

60 different people have left positive comments this has fuelled me on to write more chapters/parts.

I would also like to thank
Boyslave89
Timetoshine
Stormwalker
RedaDare
Archie
TheBoyHotWonder
These are the 6 people that have all left more than 10 comments and been reading almost since the start, (hopefully there will soon be more)

I would also like to welcome Xrider, Kisunesoldier, 2 of the latest new readers. (apologies if have forgotten anyone)

Also Thanks to Kisunesoldier and 12356416514a for their debate (lol, I hope I have answered it)

Sorry wasn’t on last night I had a special game, hope to write about it soon, (the plan worked) But what was it? Keep reading STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST to find out

Anyway shortly will be the next chapter / part 42. Please read and enjoy – (be displayed within 15 hours)

THANK YOU
LOVE ME

Stormwalker22 · 10-19-2010, 01:29 AM

I love it all Rach I cant wait to find out what Dani is looking for an what she wants to do to David.

Stormwalker22 · 10-19-2010, 01:36 AM

Thanks for the special thanks Rachie but your the one that deserves the thanks for doing such an amazing Job. Your story writing has been getting better the more you have been writing. Your writing has been so inspiring to people including me and I cant wait to read more of your story. I also wanna add as one last note is that your an amazing friend an very talented writer.

stats2001 · 10-19-2010, 02:39 AM

Rachel, many thanks again for the great stories, and as usual, I can't wait for the next installment!!!

We all seem to have a hidden past, with certain things that only a few ppl know about, but thats what makes us who we are i suppose (does that make sense??)

Keep up the great work, and keep the stories flowing!!!!!!

Mark.

boyslave89 · 10-19-2010, 03:21 AM

These chapters are just getting better and better! It's not hard to stick with this story, it's so easy to read and so interesting also! Keep it up - I want to see what happens next!

Rachie · 10-19-2010, 11:23 AM

Thank you for comments, here is the next chapter / Part 42 as promised

Part 42 (STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST)
Dani was on the internet looking for idea’s to try out on her slave. After a couple of minutes of viewing several sites, Dani ordered David to come and lay over his knee. She pulled his trousers down followed by the same grey briefs that he had been wearing the previous day. David was laid across Dani’s lap with his face near the floor and legs in the air. David was expecting Dani to give him a good spanking and decided he would try to relax and take it as a man when suddenly Dani grabbed a sharp needle off her computer desk and pricked it gently onto David’s ass cheeks. David let out a loud squeal from the pain that he felt. “SSSSSSHHHH........ ugar” he said trying not to swear

“Shut it” ordered Dani who was feeling pleased with herself. She then gave David another Prick of the razor Sharpe thin needle. David was nearly in tears from the pain he was receiving, his 6 ½ cock was growing slowly and Dani was aching to touch it. She thought back to her brief conversation with David after part 25 of the strip poker game (Part 13, of STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST)

QUOTE
“Is this the first time that your gorgeous cock has ever been seen by a female” she continued asking. “Yes blushed David” “Don’t be shy, it looks wonderful, can I feel it” “Maybe later” said David

Owwww, maybe now is the time she thought feeling his cock through the short skirt she was wearing. However first she would have some fun. She ordered David again to stand in the corner facing the wall, this time however without any trouser or underwear. Dani sat there staring at David’s ass with his 2 balls dangling partly in view.

Dani took her dressing gown strap and tied David’s hands behind his back. She now rummaged through her stationary draws eventually finding what she was looking for. A pack of 50 rubber bands, opening the packet she got 1 rubber band wrapped in a figure of 8 and lopped it twice over David’s cock. This made such an erotic sight David stood there with no trouser or underwear on hands tied behind his back and a rubber band making his cock look longer and thinner than it actually was. David’s knob was throbbing slowly and each throb caused him immense pain. “How does that feel, slave” asked Dani. “It hurts so much when it throbs” replied David. “Well you will have to just control it”

“You are not allowed to ejaculate your slave juice, unless I tell you” said Dani. “And if you do, there will be server punishment, and you don’t want that, do you” she continued. “No” answered David.

“NO, WHAT” Dani barked, slapping David hard on the ass and causing him more pain. “No Mistress,… Sorry Mistress” “Ouch” said David again as his cock again twitched. After a couple of minutes he seemed to have his twitchy cock under control when…………….

TO BE CONTINUED……………

When what?
Keep reading Strip Poker With A Twist to find out!

firenight · 10-19-2010, 01:09 PM

sweet i like it hope theres more

Stormwalker22 · 10-19-2010, 02:35 PM

When what? omg I wanna know now! LOL

the doc · 10-19-2010, 03:35 PM

Ok rachie you know that in the start i was thinking like, maybe this isn't the right story for me. but you asked me to at least give you a chance, i did and i certainly dont regret. i love ur story and probavly always will Xx Thx for your story Xx

TheHotBoyWonder · 10-19-2010, 04:19 PM

Great work still and will follow you beginning to the end
But as for my cliff hanger your going to have to give me more incentive
Before I tell you whether I do or not .....

teddy 532 · 10-19-2010, 05:08 PM

GreAt as always.

10-19-2010, 12:43 AM	#260
Rachie I am the cutest butterfly ever Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: In my Bed, Posts: 6,606 Blog Entries: 2	Thanks / debates / more more more I have never been trying to compete with any of the 3 fantastic stories written by Shiny Demon’s (Sisters Sleepover). May I say that if it wasn’t for these stories, this would never have been written, I was looking for dares for group and found his story of google. Read fully and later was asked where got dare idea from, was also told to join as another dare. Since that time have made many friends and started to write story. Therefore in my opinion Shiny Demon has the great talent and has written the best most thrilling stories I have ever read. I am only glad that people are starting to compare my stories with his. I am Dyslexic caused by unfortunate hospital incidents earlier in life (of which some viewers are aware of) if there are errors I apologies. I would like to thank everyone that has made STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST such a great success. Special thanks to Shavedrachel for her 50th post (lol) Thanks to everyone that has viewed the story making it now the most viewed R18 Mature Story on getdare (55,000 viewers in 6 weeks, 3 days) approx 1200 per day. Thanks to everyone that has replied and left comments / feedback on the story , making it now the most replied to R18 Mature Story on getDare. Also for the 15 people that have left thanks and to the 19 people who have rated the story 5 stars and have made it the highest rated story on getDare. I would also like to thank ShinyDemon (the best story writer there is on getdare) for his support and for the encouragement that helped the story in the beginning chapters. 60 different people have left positive comments this has fuelled me on to write more chapters/parts. I would also like to thank Boyslave89 Timetoshine Stormwalker RedaDare Archie TheBoyHotWonder These are the 6 people that have all left more than 10 comments and been reading almost since the start, (hopefully there will soon be more) I would also like to welcome Xrider, Kisunesoldier, 2 of the latest new readers. (apologies if have forgotten anyone) Also Thanks to Kisunesoldier and 12356416514a for their debate (lol, I hope I have answered it) Sorry wasn’t on last night I had a special game, hope to write about it soon, (the plan worked) But what was it? Keep reading STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST to find out Anyway shortly will be the next chapter / part 42. Please read and enjoy – (be displayed within 15 hours) THANK YOU LOVE ME __________________ RACHIE'S GETDARE USER GUIDE / MANUAL STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST (Story) BED HABITS LOLA.FOX WISHES SHE WAS MY FAVORITE USER <3

10-19-2010, 11:23 AM	#265
Rachie I am the cutest butterfly ever Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: In my Bed, Posts: 6,606 Blog Entries: 2	Part 42 (STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST) Thank you for comments, here is the next chapter / Part 42 as promised Part 42 (STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST) Dani was on the internet looking for idea’s to try out on her slave. After a couple of minutes of viewing several sites, Dani ordered David to come and lay over his knee. She pulled his trousers down followed by the same grey briefs that he had been wearing the previous day. David was laid across Dani’s lap with his face near the floor and legs in the air. David was expecting Dani to give him a good spanking and decided he would try to relax and take it as a man when suddenly Dani grabbed a sharp needle off her computer desk and pricked it gently onto David’s ass cheeks. David let out a loud squeal from the pain that he felt. “SSSSSSHHHH........ ugar” he said trying not to swear “Shut it” ordered Dani who was feeling pleased with herself. She then gave David another Prick of the razor Sharpe thin needle. David was nearly in tears from the pain he was receiving, his 6 ½ cock was growing slowly and Dani was aching to touch it. She thought back to her brief conversation with David after part 25 of the strip poker game (Part 13, of STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST) QUOTE “Is this the first time that your gorgeous cock has ever been seen by a female” she continued asking. “Yes blushed David” “Don’t be shy, it looks wonderful, can I feel it” “Maybe later” said David Owwww, maybe now is the time she thought feeling his cock through the short skirt she was wearing. However first she would have some fun. She ordered David again to stand in the corner facing the wall, this time however without any trouser or underwear. Dani sat there staring at David’s ass with his 2 balls dangling partly in view. Dani took her dressing gown strap and tied David’s hands behind his back. She now rummaged through her stationary draws eventually finding what she was looking for. A pack of 50 rubber bands, opening the packet she got 1 rubber band wrapped in a figure of 8 and lopped it twice over David’s cock. This made such an erotic sight David stood there with no trouser or underwear on hands tied behind his back and a rubber band making his cock look longer and thinner than it actually was. David’s knob was throbbing slowly and each throb caused him immense pain. “How does that feel, slave” asked Dani. “It hurts so much when it throbs” replied David. “Well you will have to just control it” “You are not allowed to ejaculate your slave juice, unless I tell you” said Dani. “And if you do, there will be server punishment, and you don’t want that, do you” she continued. “No” answered David. “NO, WHAT” Dani barked, slapping David hard on the ass and causing him more pain. “No Mistress,… Sorry Mistress” “Ouch” said David again as his cock again twitched. After a couple of minutes he seemed to have his twitchy cock under control when……………. TO BE CONTINUED…………… When what? Keep reading Strip Poker With A Twist to find out! __________________ RACHIE'S GETDARE USER GUIDE / MANUAL STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST (Story) BED HABITS LOLA.FOX WISHES SHE WAS MY FAVORITE USER <3 Last edited by Rachie; 10-19-2010 at 12:00 PM.

10-19-2010, 03:35 PM	#268
the doc Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 242	Ok rachie you know that in the start i was thinking like, maybe this isn't the right story for me. but you asked me to at least give you a chance, i did and i certainly dont regret. i love ur story and probavly always will Xx Thx for your story Xx __________________ Entei ftw

10-19-2010, 04:19 PM	#269
TheHotBoyWonder getDare Devil Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: essex uk Posts: 1,309 Blog Entries: 10	Great work still and will follow you beginning to the end But as for my cliff hanger your going to have to give me more incentive Before I tell you whether I do or not ..... __________________ Switch M/25 Need help to win a vote http://www.strawpoll.me/13117873 Vote for TheHotBoyWonder Likes: To give out the dares than ask for them Likes if i get a dare: Wedgie, anal, rope, games, 1 vs 1, random, detailed, ice, shower, bondage, hidden public , predicament bondage Dislikes: Pain, public, piss denial, edging, cbt Limits: Poo, Faimly, Friends, extreme pain, diapers

10-18-2010, 11:48 AM	#258
Xrider Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 155	Very interesting story, but your chapter ends are killing me ^^

10-18-2010, 12:26 PM	#259
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	go on can't wait for more

10-19-2010, 01:29 AM	#261
Stormwalker22 Distinguished Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: CA Posts: 503	I love it all Rach I cant wait to find out what Dani is looking for an what she wants to do to David.

10-19-2010, 01:36 AM	#262
Stormwalker22 Distinguished Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: CA Posts: 503	Thanks for the special thanks Rachie but your the one that deserves the thanks for doing such an amazing Job. Your story writing has been getting better the more you have been writing. Your writing has been so inspiring to people including me and I cant wait to read more of your story. I also wanna add as one last note is that your an amazing friend an very talented writer.

10-19-2010, 02:39 AM	#263
stats2001 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Sydney Australia Posts: 172	Rachel, many thanks again for the great stories, and as usual, I can't wait for the next installment!!! We all seem to have a hidden past, with certain things that only a few ppl know about, but thats what makes us who we are i suppose (does that make sense??) Keep up the great work, and keep the stories flowing!!!!!! Mark.

10-19-2010, 03:21 AM	#264
boyslave89 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 118	These chapters are just getting better and better! It's not hard to stick with this story, it's so easy to read and so interesting also! Keep it up - I want to see what happens next!

10-19-2010, 01:09 PM	#266
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	sweet i like it hope theres more

10-19-2010, 02:35 PM	#267
Stormwalker22 Distinguished Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: CA Posts: 503	When what? omg I wanna know now! LOL

10-19-2010, 05:08 PM	#270
teddy 532 Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: U.S.A Posts: 24	GreAt as always.