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05-10-2012, 09:18 PM | #1 |
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It's Worth Sacrificing Your Happiness, For the Happiness of the One You Love?
Hey everyone.
Last time I wrote a story, it didn't work out because it was way too personal for me to continue. I'm trying again, but this time made up characters, based on real events that have happened, and is happening in my life. Let me know what ya think. Thank you. xox Catherine<3 Main Characters: Caty: Burnette sholder length wavey hair, golden green eyes, white/caucasian, 5"4, average, and 50c. Patryck: Blond bold cut hair, blue eyes, white/caucasian, 5"7, and slim/muscular. Cammoren Black bold cut hair, brown eyes, Indie, 5"9, and very slim/muscular. Peater: Brown short cut hair (above his ears), blue eyes, white/caucasian, and slim. Danneal: Brown short shaggy/wavey hair, green blue eyes, white/caucasian, and slim. Shawn: Black short hair, golden green eyes, white/caucasian, and slim. Thomas: Short orange hair, brown green eyes, white/caucasian/ and average. Last edited by Catherine; 05-10-2012 at 10:51 PM. |
05-10-2012, 09:26 PM | #2 |
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Introduction
Hi my name is Caty, and I'm a slave.
I don't want to be,but from what I've been told, "I have no choice". If I dare runaway, I will be banished from my love forever. I honestly have tried breaking up with him times before, but it just broke my heart to let him go. I couldn't, for some reason something keeps on making me stay. I guess I'm willing to risk my life to keep the one whom I love and care for happy. My Master's name is Patryk. We both meet in one of those slave/master online in a chat room. I addmit that I was a bit intrestead in being trained as a Sub. So Patryk agreed that he would help give me some experiences. After we talked for about a month we officially met in real life. Last edited by Catherine; 05-10-2012 at 10:13 PM. |
05-10-2012, 09:41 PM | #3 |
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First Date
I remember it as if it was just yesterday.
It was Summer of last year, on June3rd. We met at the mall. I remember when I first saw him. 5"7, short blond hair, and perfect crystal blue eyes. It felt like love at fist sight. I was wearing blue jeans, and a green shirt. Patryk wore tan shorts, and a white shirt with rock 'n roll designs in it. Starting the conversation I said, "I like your shirt." Patryk replied smiling,"Thanks." "I like your smile." His comment made me smile even bigger than I already was, and I couldn't help but blush, "Thanks" We walked through the mall, making small talk, and getting to know each other better. "Would you like to hangout at my place for awhile?" Patryk ask. "Yeah, sure." I answer Patryk and I leave the mall, and takes me to his place. We're now inside his apartment. His Mom, just got re-married,so she and his step-Dad were also there settling things in the office. He introduces me to them, and his cat. Then takes me to his bed room, and locks the door behinde him. Too busy studying his room, I didn't care to notice that he locked the door. The walls were painted white, tan carpet, and a full size bed laying up against a wall, in the middle of the room. I sit down on his bed, and he comes and sits next to me. "So,ready for some experience?" Patryk ask. I'm nervouse, and stutter out "I...guess." Patryk puts his arm around me "Just relax." "Okay." I sit still, and he leans in kissing me. The kiss felt amazing, as if sparks flew. I kissed him back. He takes his shirt off, and unzips his pants. "Can you suck me?" I knodd yes, and he takes out his cock. It was the biggest I've ever seen. About 8 or 9inches long, and 2 or 3 inches wide. I willingly start to kiss and lick his cock. We then get intruptted by the alarm on his phone, so I stop. He gets up to turn it off, and has a frown on his face. "Time to take you home" I look at my phone, and he was right. I had to be home by 7pm, and it was 5:30pm. "Ok." I lived an hour away from him, so we had to leave before 6pm to beat traffic in order to get there right at 7pm. He wanted to make a good impression to my parents in having their daughter home on time, so he can have their trust in taking care of me. He drove me home, walked me to my door, and we kissed our goodbyes. |
05-13-2012, 10:00 AM | #4 |
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I like it. It sounds intriguing. Please continue.
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I am the author of "A Hidden Voice" and "Immoral Teaching". Thank you for everyone's comments on my writing. And my stories do not continue without comments. That means *no new parts till there are new comments* |
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