Fiction: daughter will regret saying no - Page 2

daremaster 1 · 05-14-2011, 03:33 AM

please post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

trust-no-1 · 05-14-2011, 03:51 AM

Ohk, A few things:
1)SPELLING
2)Grammar, Speech marks, commas, fullstops and capatilaztion(I dont know how to spell it :P ) are just a few problems I found.
3)Ok, Honestly? Its a good idea, But honestly? Need I say more
4)Do you have MS Word? If not, get LibreOffice, It will make the spelling better.
5)Honestly?

Fix up these issues and I see a bit of potential.
Trust

05-14-2011, 03:51 AM	#17
trust-no-1 Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Adelaide Posts: 472 Blog Entries: 1	Ohk, A few things: 1)SPELLING 2)Grammar, Speech marks, commas, fullstops and capatilaztion(I dont know how to spell it :P ) are just a few problems I found. 3)Ok, Honestly? Its a good idea, But honestly? Need I say more 4)Do you have MS Word? If not, get LibreOffice, It will make the spelling better. 5)Honestly? Fix up these issues and I see a bit of potential. Trust __________________ 14\|Male\|Bi\|Australia Twitter Formspring Podcast Update The official getDare podcast Living life and loving it Horse.Chic-"f%&k this is gonna be awkward when we next have to make the next podcast " Ohk, You can stop asking now, Yes we do ride kangaroos in Australia

05-14-2011, 03:33 AM	#16
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	please post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!