[Non-Fiction] The Neighbor

[KjblankenshipKevin]

Great story so far, I like the way you tell it.

[daremaster 1]

Really good story, love it.

[HiI'mPaul]

Attention

Okay so I didn't realize this story was still getting views and completely stopped writing it. However I saw the new comments and now the story has over 2,300 views so I think I will continue.

The thing is, I can't remember anything honestly. I think I have a lot more memories of this kind of thing but they just aren't coming to me. So will everyone be okay if I turn this into a believable fiction story?

I hate to advertise, but check out my new fiction story called "Fear and Loathing In a Hotel." I think it is pretty good and I hope you will too!

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[daremaster 1]

I dont mine how its wrighten as long as its wrighten!

[HiI'mPaul]

For the record, I actually remembered one more memory of exhibitionism between Anthony and I, but this might be the last interesting one. Enjoy
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(NONFICTION)

"You daydream so much." whispered the girl sitting beside Paul. "Wha-uhm, yeah I guess I do. I get bored really easily so I just start thinking." explained Paul to the girl. He had a complete hard on going on at the moment but he dealt with being excited in school every day. His imagination could not help but take him to the places of naked women, sex, and Anthony. It would soon return there as Paul put the weight of his head on his hand and stared off into space until he had arrived...

Paul couldn't quite remember how it had happened but a little shooting around in his backyard had led to he and Anthony running around naked. His mind was stuttering, trying to put back the pieces of the puzzle that would reveal the full story of that night. It faltered again and again, but Paul eventually was able to remember the outline of the night and he especially remembered when it got really interesting. The night started out quite normally, some shooting of the basketball in gym shorts and tees. Anthony had taken off his shirt which was nothing unusual, Paul kept his on because he felt a little cold. Anthony soon found that running in circles helped breath wind into his body, (symbolically of course) and he convinced Paul to try it. It really did feel amazing to have the wind blowing against the bare skin of your body, they both loved the sensation. Anthony and Paul somehow mutually brought out the idea of doing it naked, even though Paul was still a bit shy. They both loved the idea, so Paul went and grabbed towels so they could change in semi-secrecy. They wrapped them around their waists and took off both their shorts and underwear, and just like that they were naked again.

They held the upper hand corners of the towels and began running, the towels slightly blew back revealing the bare ass of the person who was currently in front of the other. Paul was extremely excited and he could tell as he could see and feel his 5 inch boner throb in front of him. He could also tell Anthony was excited as every once in a while, he would take a sharp turn and get a glimpse of the front of Anthony whose penis was also extremely hard. Paul's small dog ran out in the backyard, and the two coaxed her over to them. Anthony joked that he was going to have sex with the dog, he pulled her close and dropped his towel, acting like he was going to stick his penis in her butt. Paul never got tired of seeing that butt, it was perfectly round, tanned, and fit. They continued running for at least an hour, every once in a while one of the two would 'accidentally' drop their towel, revealing their butt to the other. The fun had to end eventually and it did when Anthony's father went out on his deck and whistled for him to come home, they both worried that he had seen them naked but he had not. They both took positions to get changed, Paul looked away from Anthony whom he could've suspected was looking at him. As Paul was pulling up his underwear and shorts together his towel dropped revealing his butt once again, he pretended not to notice and looked behind him. There Anthony was, standing there looking at his butt smiling, Paul loved it especially since Anthony had not pulled up his pants the whole way either...

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I hope you enjoyed this chapter. New one will probably come out tomorrow.


FEEDBACK

[daremaster 1]

Love it, can't wait to see what happenes next. Really good.

[HiI'mPaul]

I really appreciate your feedback all the time DareMaster. I was wondering how this story could get to the top of the new TorD stories again. Is that possible?

[daremaster 1]

Originally Posted by HiI'mPaul

I really appreciate your feedback all the time DareMaster. I was wondering how this story could get to the top of the new TorD stories again. Is that possible?

Just need 15 thanks and its on the best of getdare. But its harder then you thank....

[HiI'mPaul]

I only have one, darn. I hope people will continue reading it anyway. Thanks

[daremaster 1]

No, now you go 2!

[J.M.N]

Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Just need 15 thanks and its on the best of getdare. But its harder then you thank....

I.....don't know where you got that from but i'm not sure it is right o.o

But anyways, it's a great story and people will keep reading it as long as it is well written, and people are enjoying it, which i am

[daremaster 1]

Originally Posted by J.M.N

I.....don't know where you got that from but i'm not sure it is right o.o

But anyways, it's a great story and people will keep reading it as long as it is well written, and people are enjoying it, which i am

Im pretty sure it is, I thank Rachie told me that. But I could be wrong.

[J.M.N]

Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Im pretty sure it is, I thank Rachie told me that. But I could be wrong.

Well her story has 32 thanks and it's not on the best of getdare o.o

But yeah HiI'mPaul LIKE I SAID BEFORE there are loads of brilliant fiction stories on here where loads of people comment and views however you shouldn't really write just for the comments and stuff (in my opinion), just do it because you enjoy it or something

Looking forward to your next update

[HiI'mPaul]

I love writing I really do, but I am one of those people that loves feedback. I really take pride in my work and when someone says that they like it, it means a lot.

[daremaster 1]

Originally Posted by HiI'mPaul

I love writing I really do, but I am one of those people that loves feedback. I really take pride in my work and when someone says that they like it, it means a lot.

Trust me, people are reading it. They just dont like giving feedback. The more you wright, the more interesting it gets, the more interesting it gets the more people will read it, the more people that read it the more feedback. It will happen in time. But they dont like people asking for it.