Fiction: Natalie's Big Day Out - Page 6

redtiger · 09-02-2013, 04:50 AM

Interesting twist but you messed up on the character names in the dialogue. You interchange May & Natalie several times. Very confusing.

thefunman · 09-02-2013, 09:13 AM

I like the Idea of number #2....but any of the choice would be good even going to the store or meet friends.

kmacroxs · 09-02-2013, 11:54 AM

I'm going to go with option #1. No reason.

Dareholic · 09-02-2013, 12:16 PM

I think I am going to pick 2 this time.

09-02-2013, 11:54 AM	#78
kmacroxs Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: USA Posts: 625	I'm going to go with option #1. No reason. __________________ "I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death" - Patrick Henry - March 23, 1775 Justin Bieber sucks (not what I really wanted to say). Spoiler: Justin Bieber's voice -> my ears get raped Spoiler: me: "make it stop, make it stop, please make it stop"

09-02-2013, 12:16 PM	#79
Dareholic getDare Addict Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: 3rd Rock from Sun Posts: 2,329 Blog Entries: 37	I think I am going to pick 2 this time. __________________ Brian (布莱恩) - Bi-Male (双男性) - Edge Master (边缘大师) RETIRED: THANKS getDare, I HAD FUN. OH, JUST REMEMBER: "Life is not fun, unless you are having fun." - Dareholic "Adam was but human - this explains it all. He did not want the apple for the apple's sake, he wanted it only because it was forbidden. The mistake was not forbidding the serpent; then he would have eaten the serpent." - Mark Twain Yamask

09-02-2013, 04:50 AM	#76
redtiger Member Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: Earth Posts: 57	Interesting twist but you messed up on the character names in the dialogue. You interchange May & Natalie several times. Very confusing.

09-02-2013, 09:13 AM	#77
thefunman getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Florida, USA Posts: 1,766	I like the Idea of number #2....but any of the choice would be good even going to the store or meet friends.