Fiction: Dear Journal Big Brother is now my Daddy

hy22 · 01-26-2014, 09:04 PM

Greetings all,
This is my first story so any help is welcome.
Okay so the characters in the story is:
1)Ryan age 18. (Our new"daddy")
2) Rachael age 13 (Ryan's sister a young girl who is in need)

Dear journal, Today something wonderful happened. Ryan touched me. He was helping me get ready for school and as he was buttoning my jeans his hand slipped. His hand rubbed against it. It made me so dizzy. I'm not sure if h noticed but I ant him too so tomorrow morning I'm going to try to make it happen again. Okay well signing out until tomorrow. Signed Princess

hy22 · 01-26-2014, 10:23 PM

Dear Journal Success!!! It happened again today. Today I'm sure he noticed his effect on me but he looked scared not happy

I have to find some way to show him that I want to be his. I've been so lonely since dad left. He used to play with me all the time. He'd come to tea parties and call me his princess. But mommy says that he left because there was another princess that he played with and that's why the men in blue came. Now mommies always working in the office during the day and she has a nighttime job down the street doing something but i dont kow what. so Ryan's the only one around and he dresses me and sends me to school but besides that he's always on his laptop with his door closed. He says he's studying but there's always weird noises from his room. Maybee if I find out what he studies I can do something for him. Then maybee me and Ryan can ply okay report done for now journal princess out

kmacroxs · 01-27-2014, 01:41 AM

So far, so good. Please continue writing.

JosephDaftPunk · 01-27-2014, 01:36 PM

This is quite good so far! I'd advise you to continue writing!

hy22 · 01-27-2014, 02:33 PM

Dear journal. I just got back in bed. I've made a Huge find. On brothers computer I found pictures and videos of girls that look like me. Does this mean that Ryan likes princesses? The only thing is some of the girls didn't have clothing on. I'm going to confront him in the morning. For now I need to think. Signed princess rachael

jklivin · 01-27-2014, 07:59 PM

Good story waiting on the morning confrontation now!

hy22 · 01-28-2014, 05:37 AM

Dear journal I did it. I confronted him about his secret he got so mad and scared. I told him that I'd keep the secret as long as he played with me like daddy used to. Then he said that if he did that I'd have to call him daddy and I couldn't tell anyone. I said I'd keep the secret so now time to play

. Bye. Princess

iceman713 · 01-28-2014, 12:15 PM

Its good just make your post longer and more detailed. You have an awesome idea going here.

JosephDaftPunk · 01-28-2014, 02:33 PM

You need to make your journal entries a bit longer and more detailed! Otherwise its quite good.

01-26-2014, 09:04 PM	#1
hy22 Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: wouldnt you like to know Posts: 37	Dear Journal Big Brother is now my Daddy Greetings all, This is my first story so any help is welcome. Okay so the characters in the story is: 1)Ryan age 18. (Our new"daddy") 2) Rachael age 13 (Ryan's sister a young girl who is in need) Dear journal, Today something wonderful happened. Ryan touched me. He was helping me get ready for school and as he was buttoning my jeans his hand slipped. His hand rubbed against it. It made me so dizzy. I'm not sure if h noticed but I ant him too so tomorrow morning I'm going to try to make it happen again. Okay well signing out until tomorrow. Signed Princess

01-26-2014, 10:23 PM	#2
hy22 Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: wouldnt you like to know Posts: 37	Entry two Dear Journal Success!!! It happened again today. Today I'm sure he noticed his effect on me but he looked scared not happy I have to find some way to show him that I want to be his. I've been so lonely since dad left. He used to play with me all the time. He'd come to tea parties and call me his princess. But mommy says that he left because there was another princess that he played with and that's why the men in blue came. Now mommies always working in the office during the day and she has a nighttime job down the street doing something but i dont kow what. so Ryan's the only one around and he dresses me and sends me to school but besides that he's always on his laptop with his door closed. He says he's studying but there's always weird noises from his room. Maybee if I find out what he studies I can do something for him. Then maybee me and Ryan can ply okay report done for now journal princess out

01-27-2014, 01:41 AM	#3
kmacroxs Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: USA Posts: 625	So far, so good. Please continue writing. __________________ "I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death" - Patrick Henry - March 23, 1775 Justin Bieber sucks (not what I really wanted to say). Spoiler: Justin Bieber's voice -> my ears get raped Spoiler: me: "make it stop, make it stop, please make it stop"

01-27-2014, 01:36 PM	#4
JosephDaftPunk Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Dubai Posts: 175 Blog Entries: 13	This is quite good so far! I'd advise you to continue writing! __________________ 20 / Male / Slave / Gay / Dubai LIKES / DISLIKES / LIMITS I'M BACK EVERYONE! I am that little bitch that you've been looking for. PM Dares Kik: jsdpunk99 Skype: jsdpunk19

01-28-2014, 12:15 PM	#8
iceman713 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 262	Its good just make your post longer and more detailed. You have an awesome idea going here. __________________ Likes: masterbation, cross dressing, risky, driving dares, nudity, bondage Limits: small anal, shallowing myself, public, friends NO - NOs : illegal, family, pain, poop, pee, perment damage, death

01-27-2014, 02:33 PM	#5
hy22 Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: wouldnt you like to know Posts: 37	Dear journal. I just got back in bed. I've made a Huge find. On brothers computer I found pictures and videos of girls that look like me. Does this mean that Ryan likes princesses? The only thing is some of the girls didn't have clothing on. I'm going to confront him in the morning. For now I need to think. Signed princess rachael

01-27-2014, 07:59 PM	#6
jklivin getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2012 Location: Indiana Posts: 450	Good story waiting on the morning confrontation now!

01-28-2014, 05:37 AM	#7
hy22 Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: wouldnt you like to know Posts: 37	Dear journal I did it. I confronted him about his secret he got so mad and scared. I told him that I'd keep the secret as long as he played with me like daddy used to. Then he said that if he did that I'd have to call him daddy and I couldn't tell anyone. I said I'd keep the secret so now time to play . Bye. Princess

01-28-2014, 02:33 PM	#9
JosephDaftPunk Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Dubai Posts: 175 Blog Entries: 13	You need to make your journal entries a bit longer and more detailed! Otherwise its quite good. __________________ 20 / Male / Slave / Gay / Dubai LIKES / DISLIKES / LIMITS I'M BACK EVERYONE! I am that little bitch that you've been looking for. PM Dares Kik: jsdpunk99 Skype: jsdpunk19