Revenge 69 Style, Part I [FICTION]

Musty 21 · 03-11-2007, 10:00 AM

Well it all started on an early monday morning. It was raining hard and it was cold. P.E is my first class in the morning and we went out side in the mud. We were runing laps around the muddy feild. I got on to my 3rd lap then i feel my pants and underwear shoot to the ground. I bend over to pull them back up and then I got pushed down. My face hit the mud with my clothing at my feet. Then one guy picked up some mud and put it in the front of my underwear. Now that there was an impression of my cock and balls in the mud a got up and pulled my pants up. I didn't relize that there was mud in them so that was an un-welcome cold curprise. After we finish our laps our teacher came back out and asked why I was muddy, i said because i fell....... she saw nothing! After class was over I told the two guy I would get them back some how.

If you would like more please post and then i will make part II, if there isn't enough posts this is how it ends

depp=noob=lol · 03-11-2007, 10:07 AM

it is quite an interesting story, it is something that could really happen in daily life. Maybe it would be nice to write a part in the showers, always an interesting place in this kind of stories. I hope that you will continue your posting.

Whitestar1983 · 03-11-2007, 11:25 AM

This is a real good start, I can not wait till part 2

Dare861 · 03-11-2007, 11:26 AM

*thinks he already knows what happens next*

Keep going! It's a good story so far.

-Daredude

Powerstrip · 03-11-2007, 12:14 PM

MMmmm.....showers.....*looks embarrased* er....yeah you could take this anywhere you like really. This could go on for ages or be a couple of parts and ended.

Soraslight · 03-11-2007, 01:49 PM

Intruiging but to short at the moment to get a hook on me, write a longer next part.

cheesy dude · 03-11-2007, 02:49 PM

I like it, a bit short but definatly an intresting story. Cant wait for the next bit.

ye the showers would be a good place to set it. OR maybe in a different lesson maybe a cooking class? (oooo the possibliltys)

keep going mate

Musty 21 · 03-11-2007, 05:19 PM

seeing as a lot of people liked it i will do part two tomarrow.... showers, and lunch

Pokerboy · 03-11-2007, 05:48 PM

Cool, I like that story can't wait for part 2!

spat · 03-12-2007, 04:49 AM

Would prefer a little longer but doing alright lets see part II.

depp=noob=lol · 03-12-2007, 07:36 AM

i hope that it will be a bit longer because you re going to tell about two things, lunch and showers, so otherwise it would be really short.

Musty 21 · 03-12-2007, 07:32 PM

off to write part 2

03-11-2007, 10:00 AM	#1
Musty 21 getDare Devil Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Virgina Posts: 1,023 Blog Entries: 2	Revenge 69 Style, Part I [FICTION] Well it all started on an early monday morning. It was raining hard and it was cold. P.E is my first class in the morning and we went out side in the mud. We were runing laps around the muddy feild. I got on to my 3rd lap then i feel my pants and underwear shoot to the ground. I bend over to pull them back up and then I got pushed down. My face hit the mud with my clothing at my feet. Then one guy picked up some mud and put it in the front of my underwear. Now that there was an impression of my cock and balls in the mud a got up and pulled my pants up. I didn't relize that there was mud in them so that was an un-welcome cold curprise. After we finish our laps our teacher came back out and asked why I was muddy, i said because i fell....... she saw nothing! After class was over I told the two guy I would get them back some how. If you would like more please post and then i will make part II, if there isn't enough posts this is how it ends __________________ Sunday, Septermber 07, 2008 at 7:55p.m. Musty21 achieved 1,000 posts. Click here to see it!

03-11-2007, 10:07 AM	#2
depp=noob=lol Account Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Europe Posts: 594 Blog Entries: 4	it is quite an interesting story, it is something that could really happen in daily life. Maybe it would be nice to write a part in the showers, always an interesting place in this kind of stories. I hope that you will continue your posting. __________________ back in business [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

03-11-2007, 11:26 AM	#4
Dare861 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: United States, Tri-State area Posts: 315 Blog Entries: 4	thinks he already knows what happens next Keep going! It's a good story so far. -Daredude Last edited by Dare861; 03-11-2007 at 11:29 AM. Reason: Minor adjustments

03-11-2007, 12:14 PM	#5
Powerstrip Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 716 Blog Entries: 1	MMmmm.....showers.....looks embarrased er....yeah you could take this anywhere you like really. This could go on for ages or be a couple of parts and ended. __________________ I am looking for a mistress. Please PM me if interested

03-11-2007, 01:49 PM	#6
Soraslight Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 161	Intruiging but to short at the moment to get a hook on me, write a longer next part. __________________ 15/m No Painful, Anal, Crossdressing, GAY or messy dares. I Enjoy Sexual + Public Dares, Especially Webcam Dares.

03-11-2007, 11:25 AM	#3
Whitestar1983 Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 48	This is a real good start, I can not wait till part 2

03-11-2007, 02:49 PM	#7
cheesy dude Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: uk Posts: 981 Blog Entries: 1	I like it, a bit short but definatly an intresting story. Cant wait for the next bit. ye the showers would be a good place to set it. OR maybe in a different lesson maybe a cooking class? (oooo the possibliltys) keep going mate

03-11-2007, 05:19 PM	#8
Musty 21 getDare Devil Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Virgina Posts: 1,023 Blog Entries: 2	seeing as a lot of people liked it i will do part two tomarrow.... showers, and lunch __________________ Sunday, Septermber 07, 2008 at 7:55p.m. Musty21 achieved 1,000 posts. Click here to see it!

03-11-2007, 05:48 PM	#9
Pokerboy Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 114	Cool, I like that story can't wait for part 2!

03-12-2007, 04:49 AM	#10
spat Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: way south Posts: 174	Would prefer a little longer but doing alright lets see part II.

03-12-2007, 07:36 AM	#11
depp=noob=lol Account Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Europe Posts: 594 Blog Entries: 4	i hope that it will be a bit longer because you re going to tell about two things, lunch and showers, so otherwise it would be really short.

03-12-2007, 07:32 PM	#12
Musty 21 getDare Devil Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Virgina Posts: 1,023 Blog Entries: 2	off to write part 2 __________________ Sunday, Septermber 07, 2008 at 7:55p.m. Musty21 achieved 1,000 posts. Click here to see it!