Fiction: ★ Charlotte's School Trip - Page 9

cheesey923 · 05-01-2009, 10:53 PM

wow great story i cant wait for the next installment

BettyBoop · 05-08-2009, 10:20 AM

Chapter 15

We spent the few remaining minutes we had left turning all our room upside down in search of clothes. We tried looking everywhere; it left us still in our pathetic rock climbing outfits with the added strain of being out of breath.
‘Well, at least I’m more covered than I was before’ I contemplated noting my pussy was no longer on view and I had a bra, thinking about it, this was better. If we didn’t have to climb a huge rock.
‘Maybe we can just say we don’t want to do it, they can’t make us, right?’ Sasha said, looking unsure, her cleavage standing out considerably.
‘Let’s just hope not’ I sighed, tugging my skirt, trying to make it longer.
Then my phone vibrated on the small table by my bed, I jumped and scooped it up before it fell off.
It was a message from Lucas

‘We got some jeans and T-shirts left out for us,
We’re going kayaking so I won’t get any messages until I get back.
Have a good day
Lucas x’

‘Oh great, the boys got their clothes back!’ I said angry and frustrated.
‘Just let it go, speaking of which, we have to go’ Rose said getting up from the bed and stretching her arms up and groaning, I could see the edge of her nipple peeking out, I opened my mouth to say something, when Sasha looked at me and grinned.
Then she put a finger to her lips and stood trying not to laugh. I giggled quietly to myself.
‘Yeah, you’re right Rose, we better go’ I grinned as I began toward the door.
We began our walk to the rock climbing area.
Rose skipped as she went ahead, kicking dust into our faces.
‘Gosh, she’s annoying’ Sasha mumbled
‘Tell me about it’ I laughed quietly
‘Hurry up you guys!’ Rose squealed from in front of us.
I looked at Sasha the same time she looked at me as we noticed Rose’s nipple in full view. She rolled her eyes and went on her way.
‘She must notice that’ I said puzzled
‘I wouldn’t doubt that she does and she doesn’t care’ Sasha shook her head.
We made it to the rock climbing group and we were separated. We were grouped with another cabin, a group of younger boys; I noticed one of them was the one from the shower earlier.
He went red all over again and looked scared, I smiled and winked at him. In my head I had no idea what I was doing, but for some reason I enjoyed his attention.
‘Aww, how cute are they? They’d be cuter if they weren’t blatantly eyeing us up though’ Rose giggled
‘They might just be wondering why we are wearing clothes like this, for that’ Sasha said pointing in the direction of the rock face.
Rose sauntered over toward a little red headed boy with freckles and thick rimmed glasses
‘Hiya, what’s your name kid?’ She asked him leaning forward.
His eyes nearly popped out of his head when he noticed her nipple, he looked from it to her face.
She followed his gaze then faked a shocked look and giggled
‘EW’ Sasha whispered to me.
‘I’m Dylan, and I’m not a kid, I’m eleven’ He said confidently, in a surprisingly deep voice.
‘Well hello Dylan’ Rose squeaked, in her annoying flirty voice. Laying her hand on Dylan’s shoulder and smiling at him again, she really was shameless.
‘Um, hi, my names Stacey and I’m like, your um, rock climbing teacher’ Said a young dark haired girl with a fringe reaching halfway down her eyes, she obviously wasn’t paying any attention as she was texting as she spoke.
She half heartedly explained the harnesses, and went to hold the ropes for us.
‘Great, we get the stupid teenage girl, she hasn’t looked up from her phone once’ Sasha said grimacing at Stacey.
‘Well, at least this way she won’t notice what we’re wearing’ I shrugged.
She handed us harnesses and straps and other confusing equipment, we strapped on helmets and looked to her for guidance. She put a harness on herself, showing us how it was done, and then she went to sit on the grass, looking back to her phone once more.
Rose skipped off, asking to go first, she secured her harness, doing the clips and giggling annoyingly at nothing.
‘You guys have to do this by the way, it gets put on the record you get, you win points for what you do’ Stacey piped up sounding bored.
‘Oh I heard about that, you win points for extra things, camp fires, parties, games, stuff like that’ I mumbled, remembering a leaflet I’d read.
Rose had begun climbing the rock face, clawing at the parts the jutted out, she purposely stuck her butt out, looking down occasionally to see the boys staring at her. I had to admit, she was better at climbing then I thought she’d be, she hopped up to another ledge, her top catching on a rock, it tore a little but nothing drastic. Eventually she made it to the top, she stood at the top, jumping and clapping for herself, her braless boobs bouncing obviously.
‘Way to seek attention’ I mumbled.
Stacey glances up once and shouted ‘Next!’ before returning to whatever it was she was doing.
One of the younger boys made his way up, clearing it quickly, and next the last scared-looking two looked toward me and Sasha, willing us to go forward.

CoolGamrSms · 05-08-2009, 01:42 PM

This story is absolutely amazing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

fire · 05-10-2009, 01:19 PM

I love this story, it is amazing!!! I cant wait for the next chapter

peaceloverocknroll · 05-12-2009, 10:14 AM

omg i just read everything u wrote and u r extremely taleneted, gd luck with ur gcse's and plz keep writing, it is amazing and im absolutely gripped

slaveboy6969 · 05-12-2009, 01:38 PM

great story pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LastLine · 05-12-2009, 03:09 PM

Agreed - looking forward to more.

LilDevil · 05-12-2009, 04:48 PM

i just started reading today..and im already finished! even though i dont usually like reading that much..

lol so just in short...really good story

Warlock · 05-12-2009, 07:05 PM

Um, I think I missed something ... when did their cases get unlocked?

hoodison · 05-19-2009, 03:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Warlock

Um, I think I missed something ... when did their cases get unlocked?

wow... um, who cares?

doesnt affect the story imo.

Warlock · 05-24-2009, 02:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hoodison

wow... um, who cares?

doesnt affect the story imo.

I care, it's called narrative consistency. It's the first break I've noticed, so I was curious if it's a mistake or not.

BettyBoop · 05-24-2009, 02:38 PM

To be perfectly honest, I thought I'd explained, guess I didn't.
Sorry I'm not 'consistent'

overlord · 05-25-2009, 09:11 AM

Dont worry i dint notice. its great keep goin

QuoterBuff · 05-25-2009, 03:05 PM

This story is AWESOME

!

Warlock · 05-25-2009, 07:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BettyBoop

To be perfectly honest, I thought I'd explained, guess I didn't.
Sorry I'm not 'consistent'

Hun, I only noticed cause I'm a perfectionist

Seriously, this is one of the best pieces of writing I've read in a while, which is why I asked ... I wouldn't have asked if it was lost in a sea of mistakes

And besides, it is quite possible that you -have- explained it, and I've just missed it, which is why I'm curious :P

So now I wait to hang upon your every word as I read the next riveting part

05-01-2009, 10:53 PM	#121
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05-08-2009, 10:20 AM	#122
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	Chapter 15 We spent the few remaining minutes we had left turning all our room upside down in search of clothes. We tried looking everywhere; it left us still in our pathetic rock climbing outfits with the added strain of being out of breath. ‘Well, at least I’m more covered than I was before’ I contemplated noting my pussy was no longer on view and I had a bra, thinking about it, this was better. If we didn’t have to climb a huge rock. ‘Maybe we can just say we don’t want to do it, they can’t make us, right?’ Sasha said, looking unsure, her cleavage standing out considerably. ‘Let’s just hope not’ I sighed, tugging my skirt, trying to make it longer. Then my phone vibrated on the small table by my bed, I jumped and scooped it up before it fell off. It was a message from Lucas ‘We got some jeans and T-shirts left out for us, We’re going kayaking so I won’t get any messages until I get back. Have a good day Lucas x’ ‘Oh great, the boys got their clothes back!’ I said angry and frustrated. ‘Just let it go, speaking of which, we have to go’ Rose said getting up from the bed and stretching her arms up and groaning, I could see the edge of her nipple peeking out, I opened my mouth to say something, when Sasha looked at me and grinned. Then she put a finger to her lips and stood trying not to laugh. I giggled quietly to myself. ‘Yeah, you’re right Rose, we better go’ I grinned as I began toward the door. We began our walk to the rock climbing area. Rose skipped as she went ahead, kicking dust into our faces. ‘Gosh, she’s annoying’ Sasha mumbled ‘Tell me about it’ I laughed quietly ‘Hurry up you guys!’ Rose squealed from in front of us. I looked at Sasha the same time she looked at me as we noticed Rose’s nipple in full view. She rolled her eyes and went on her way. ‘She must notice that’ I said puzzled ‘I wouldn’t doubt that she does and she doesn’t care’ Sasha shook her head. We made it to the rock climbing group and we were separated. We were grouped with another cabin, a group of younger boys; I noticed one of them was the one from the shower earlier. He went red all over again and looked scared, I smiled and winked at him. In my head I had no idea what I was doing, but for some reason I enjoyed his attention. ‘Aww, how cute are they? They’d be cuter if they weren’t blatantly eyeing us up though’ Rose giggled ‘They might just be wondering why we are wearing clothes like this, for that’ Sasha said pointing in the direction of the rock face. Rose sauntered over toward a little red headed boy with freckles and thick rimmed glasses ‘Hiya, what’s your name kid?’ She asked him leaning forward. His eyes nearly popped out of his head when he noticed her nipple, he looked from it to her face. She followed his gaze then faked a shocked look and giggled ‘EW’ Sasha whispered to me. ‘I’m Dylan, and I’m not a kid, I’m eleven’ He said confidently, in a surprisingly deep voice. ‘Well hello Dylan’ Rose squeaked, in her annoying flirty voice. Laying her hand on Dylan’s shoulder and smiling at him again, she really was shameless. ‘Um, hi, my names Stacey and I’m like, your um, rock climbing teacher’ Said a young dark haired girl with a fringe reaching halfway down her eyes, she obviously wasn’t paying any attention as she was texting as she spoke. She half heartedly explained the harnesses, and went to hold the ropes for us. ‘Great, we get the stupid teenage girl, she hasn’t looked up from her phone once’ Sasha said grimacing at Stacey. ‘Well, at least this way she won’t notice what we’re wearing’ I shrugged. She handed us harnesses and straps and other confusing equipment, we strapped on helmets and looked to her for guidance. She put a harness on herself, showing us how it was done, and then she went to sit on the grass, looking back to her phone once more. Rose skipped off, asking to go first, she secured her harness, doing the clips and giggling annoyingly at nothing. ‘You guys have to do this by the way, it gets put on the record you get, you win points for what you do’ Stacey piped up sounding bored. ‘Oh I heard about that, you win points for extra things, camp fires, parties, games, stuff like that’ I mumbled, remembering a leaflet I’d read. Rose had begun climbing the rock face, clawing at the parts the jutted out, she purposely stuck her butt out, looking down occasionally to see the boys staring at her. I had to admit, she was better at climbing then I thought she’d be, she hopped up to another ledge, her top catching on a rock, it tore a little but nothing drastic. Eventually she made it to the top, she stood at the top, jumping and clapping for herself, her braless boobs bouncing obviously. ‘Way to seek attention’ I mumbled. Stacey glances up once and shouted ‘Next!’ before returning to whatever it was she was doing. One of the younger boys made his way up, clearing it quickly, and next the last scared-looking two looked toward me and Sasha, willing us to go forward. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼

05-08-2009, 01:42 PM	#123
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05-10-2009, 01:19 PM	#124
fire Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 151	I love this story, it is amazing!!! I cant wait for the next chapter __________________ Likes: Humiliation, slight pain, anal, orgasm denial, general (strict) control. Dislikes: Long-term Limits: Public, family/friends, poo/pee, cum eating, webcam/pictures.

05-12-2009, 03:09 PM	#127
LastLine Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: UK Posts: 167	Agreed - looking forward to more. __________________ 24/m/uk Likes: Nudity, risk of being caught, voyeurism, exhibitionism, tight clothing Dislikes: Involving others explicitly, lots of pain pain, mess

05-12-2009, 10:14 AM	#125
peaceloverocknroll Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 57	omg i just read everything u wrote and u r extremely taleneted, gd luck with ur gcse's and plz keep writing, it is amazing and im absolutely gripped

05-12-2009, 01:38 PM	#126
slaveboy6969 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 8	great story pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

05-12-2009, 04:48 PM	#128
LilDevil Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: under your bed x] Posts: 225	i just started reading today..and im already finished! even though i dont usually like reading that much.. lol so just in short...really good story

05-12-2009, 07:05 PM	#129
Warlock Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 40	Um, I think I missed something ... when did their cases get unlocked?

05-24-2009, 02:38 PM	#132
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	To be perfectly honest, I thought I'd explained, guess I didn't. Sorry I'm not 'consistent' __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼ Last edited by BettyBoop; 11-21-2010 at 05:13 AM.

05-25-2009, 09:11 AM	#133
overlord Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 233	Dont worry i dint notice. its great keep goin

05-25-2009, 03:05 PM	#134
QuoterBuff Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 76	This story is AWESOME!