After Hours (Fiction) - Page 4

tanner the slave · 06-29-2009, 11:00 PM

keep going it is awesome

darelova55 · 07-05-2009, 06:16 PM

is there going to be anymore to this story?

Coyote · 07-05-2009, 06:33 PM

yep its getting continued.

darelova55 · 07-19-2009, 05:33 PM

when will we get to see the next part?

Dylan xX · 07-20-2009, 06:49 PM

keep goin so far so good~!

paul19 · 08-01-2009, 04:04 PM

Do you still plan on continuing the story?

Coyote · 08-02-2009, 06:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by paul19

Do you still plan on continuing the story?

yes im working on it

Odiefrom · 08-02-2009, 08:54 PM

This story is very good so far and I look forward to the next parts!

seth18 · 08-02-2009, 09:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coyote

yes im working on it

Are you sure?
(This makes my message long enough to post.)

anonimousbob · 08-03-2009, 05:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by seth18

Are you sure?
(This makes my message long enough to post.)

This seems very rude, it's a great story and I'm sure he'll post the next part when he has a chance. People can't devote all their time to writing a story for a forum

25rob1985 · 08-03-2009, 01:22 PM

please do write more

Coyote · 08-03-2009, 06:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by seth18

Are you sure?
(This makes my message long enough to post.)

YES IM SURE!!! be pacient

seth18 · 08-05-2009, 01:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Coyote

YES IM SURE!!! be pacient

I am paitent, but alot of stories end up like this and then dissappear.

Coyote · 08-07-2009, 08:48 PM

"Damn" he said, and began burning. There were 3 lighters lying on the ground by the pit and he picked up the closest one to him. Looking at the bag, he pulled out the first article he touched, a pair of blue jeans. He lit them to flames and watched them die in the fire pit. After reaching into the bag a few more times, he came across a shirt that his mother had given him the previous year for his birthday. That was the last birthday she would be able to celebrate with him. He set that aside and continued placing clothes into the now-blazing fire.

He sat there and watched the fire die as the last of his clothes were reduced to ashes. The sun had begun to set so Gabriel decided to knock on the door. After a few moments Jessica came and opened it.

"All finished'?

"Yes Ma'am".

"Very good. Now get in here"

"Yes Ma'am" he said as he walked into his home.

Jessica walked down and plopped herself on the loveseat. "Gabby, How many items of clothing did you keep?"

"Six, ma'am"

"Well you will receive punishment for that soon. But in the meantime, make me some dinner"

"Yes ma'am" Gabriel walked into his kitchen, still nude. Peering into his cupboard he noticed Kraft Mac N' cheese. Simple and yummy he thought to himself. He quickly cooked the meal and brought it to his newfound mistress.

"Macaroni and Cheese? Is that all you think i am worth? There will be an an added punishment for this aswell. You have to get up nice and early for work tomorrow so you better get some sleep. Good night gabriella.

Gabriel sulked up to his room, only to notice that his mattress had been removed from his bed frame leaving only a wooden support board. Awestruck, he approached his "bed" on which he found a pink note lying on it. All it read... Sleep Tight.

In the morning he was awaken by a rush of cold water being poured over his nude body. "Ahhh" he gasped as he jumped out of bed.

"Stop whining and hurry up and take a shower. You will find clothes when you get out." Jess said as she walked out the door.
Gabe walked into the bathroom and ran the water. After waiting 4 or so minutes for the water to warm up he realized that his lovable mistress and saved no hot water for him. He stepped into the cold water and immediately shivered.

This was the first time he had ever taken a completely cold shower and he hated it. This really made him appreciate having indoor plumbing and hot water. That morning was probably the quickest shower that he had ever taken. He dried off and reached into his cabinet for deodorant and noticed that it had been replaced with women's degree deodorant and a note that that says "Use it".

Not wanting to disobey his mistress he applied it and immediately noticed the feminine, fruity smell. He walked into his bedroom which had not dried remotely from the morning's rude awakening, he saw hanging from the bedpost a set of clothes. Gabe picked up the one of the articles and out of it fell a orange rubber dildo. He reached down and picked it up. Taped to it was yet another note that said "Insert". He took off the note and started to shove it up his ass. Havinver experienced anal before, this was a painful task that took well over 3 minutes. Once the dildo was in place, he reached for the other clothing, looking for underwear of some kind. On the bottom of the pile was a pair of rubber panties which took atleast 6 minutes to slide up his manly legs. The remaining clothing was normal items that he would wear to work on many occasions, a pair of dark blue dress pants, a white button up shirt, and a black tie with black dress shoes.

Gabriel walked down stairs feeling pretty good about himself besides the dildo up his ass that caused him mild irritation every step. As he took the last step Jessica tossed him the keys and told him to get in the car...He was driving.

seth18 · 08-07-2009, 09:10 PM

Another great installment, keep it up.

06-29-2009, 11:00 PM	#46
tanner the slave Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: nowwhere Posts: 63	keep going it is awesome __________________ limits Limits: sexual, anal, too painful or messy or poop or pee, toothpaste prefere some crossdressing will do some, embarrising i like kinda but private nothing parents will find out

07-05-2009, 06:16 PM	#47
darelova55 Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: newzealand Posts: 77	is there going to be anymore to this story? __________________ wana b mi mistress? i love crossdressing dares no any or wana play tord pm me

07-19-2009, 05:33 PM	#49
darelova55 Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: newzealand Posts: 77	when will we get to see the next part? __________________ wana b mi mistress? i love crossdressing dares no any or wana play tord pm me

07-20-2009, 06:49 PM	#50
Dylan xX Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: U.S.A Posts: 934 Blog Entries: 7	keep goin so far so good~! __________________ Gone

08-02-2009, 08:54 PM	#53
Odiefrom getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: USA Posts: 366 Blog Entries: 13	Very good This story is very good so far and I look forward to the next parts! __________________ PM and IM me! Nonsense, TorD, s/m, anything really!

07-05-2009, 06:33 PM	#48
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	yep its getting continued.

08-01-2009, 04:04 PM	#51
paul19 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: USA Posts: 116	Do you still plan on continuing the story?

08-03-2009, 01:22 PM	#56
25rob1985 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 265	please do write more __________________ Everytime I receive a PM saying "PINCH" I will pinch and hold on to both my nipples for 5 mins Everytime I receive a PM saying "RED" I will spank my ass until both cheeks are red Everytime I receive a PM saying "FLICK" I will flick my balls 10 times. Everytime I receive a PM saying "ABOVE" I will post in the first person above dare thread in the person above section. Everytime I receive a PM saying "QUICK STRIP" I have 30 seconds to strip of all my clothes

08-07-2009, 08:48 PM	#59
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	Newest update "Damn" he said, and began burning. There were 3 lighters lying on the ground by the pit and he picked up the closest one to him. Looking at the bag, he pulled out the first article he touched, a pair of blue jeans. He lit them to flames and watched them die in the fire pit. After reaching into the bag a few more times, he came across a shirt that his mother had given him the previous year for his birthday. That was the last birthday she would be able to celebrate with him. He set that aside and continued placing clothes into the now-blazing fire. He sat there and watched the fire die as the last of his clothes were reduced to ashes. The sun had begun to set so Gabriel decided to knock on the door. After a few moments Jessica came and opened it. "All finished'? "Yes Ma'am". "Very good. Now get in here" "Yes Ma'am" he said as he walked into his home. Jessica walked down and plopped herself on the loveseat. "Gabby, How many items of clothing did you keep?" "Six, ma'am" "Well you will receive punishment for that soon. But in the meantime, make me some dinner" "Yes ma'am" Gabriel walked into his kitchen, still nude. Peering into his cupboard he noticed Kraft Mac N' cheese. Simple and yummy he thought to himself. He quickly cooked the meal and brought it to his newfound mistress. "Macaroni and Cheese? Is that all you think i am worth? There will be an an added punishment for this aswell. You have to get up nice and early for work tomorrow so you better get some sleep. Good night gabriella. Gabriel sulked up to his room, only to notice that his mattress had been removed from his bed frame leaving only a wooden support board. Awestruck, he approached his "bed" on which he found a pink note lying on it. All it read... Sleep Tight. In the morning he was awaken by a rush of cold water being poured over his nude body. "Ahhh" he gasped as he jumped out of bed. "Stop whining and hurry up and take a shower. You will find clothes when you get out." Jess said as she walked out the door. Gabe walked into the bathroom and ran the water. After waiting 4 or so minutes for the water to warm up he realized that his lovable mistress and saved no hot water for him. He stepped into the cold water and immediately shivered. This was the first time he had ever taken a completely cold shower and he hated it. This really made him appreciate having indoor plumbing and hot water. That morning was probably the quickest shower that he had ever taken. He dried off and reached into his cabinet for deodorant and noticed that it had been replaced with women's degree deodorant and a note that that says "Use it". Not wanting to disobey his mistress he applied it and immediately noticed the feminine, fruity smell. He walked into his bedroom which had not dried remotely from the morning's rude awakening, he saw hanging from the bedpost a set of clothes. Gabe picked up the one of the articles and out of it fell a orange rubber dildo. He reached down and picked it up. Taped to it was yet another note that said "Insert". He took off the note and started to shove it up his ass. Havinver experienced anal before, this was a painful task that took well over 3 minutes. Once the dildo was in place, he reached for the other clothing, looking for underwear of some kind. On the bottom of the pile was a pair of rubber panties which took atleast 6 minutes to slide up his manly legs. The remaining clothing was normal items that he would wear to work on many occasions, a pair of dark blue dress pants, a white button up shirt, and a black tie with black dress shoes. Gabriel walked down stairs feeling pretty good about himself besides the dildo up his ass that caused him mild irritation every step. As he took the last step Jessica tossed him the keys and told him to get in the car...He was driving.

08-07-2009, 09:10 PM	#60
seth18 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Google Posts: 196	Another great installment, keep it up. __________________ Here we go; Cool people use a ;; Duh! Likes: Candy. Dislikes: You. Limits: 'You have to cause I say so'